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"Three dysfunctional adventurers - a shady psion, a rebellious pirate, and a distrustful con artist - are forced to work together when the new king tasks them to reclaim the castle town of Oganthir after a long and bloody civil war. Viewed as disposable by the powers that be, and each dealing with their own troubled history, cooperation is anything but easy. But with an entire city now counting on them for leadership, they'll have to figure out how to trust each other and face their demons if they want to survive."
-Description on the official website
The Broken Ones is webcomic of the Standard Fantasy Setting/Role-playing Game Verse bent by Kaetana that can be found on https://tapas.io/series/TheBrokenOnes
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!!The Broken Ones contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Bree is a more than capable fighter. Quoted directly from the character, “Ye think I’d never been in a bar brawl before? Feh.”
* AdventureFriendlyWorld: The world is still involved with the tail-end of a long war, and the protagonists are given a task by the new king to bring order to a hostile location.
* AnimalEyes: Raul’s eyes have slit pupils like a cat or snake.
* AttentionWhore: Regardless of the actions he takes, Raul thrives from the attention it gives him.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Azrael leads the attack for the final major conflict of the war fully armored and armed, and quickly promotes herself from General to King in a night.
* BadassBookworm: Rowan expresses knowledge of magical runes while observing them, which is outside of the purview of his wild talents.
* BarrierWarrior: Rowan uses his wild talent to shield him from harm with a force barrier.
* BerserkButton: At least with Raul, Bree often has a short fuse.
* ChaoticNeutral: Raul embodies this alignment trope with his indifference to the consequence of his actions for others (as well as himself) and his care-free annoyance of authority figures.
* ClothFu: [[spoiler: During the fight with the orc Chieftess, Raul uses his cloak to put her at an extreme disadvantage by blinding her with it.]]
* CompulsiveLiar: Raul constantly tells absurd lies that are blatantly untrue.
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackfromBehind: Bree stuns a golem with a lightning attack from behind before it can land a killing blow. Also, after Rowan and Bree are in grave danger, Raul literally leaps into the battle onto the enemies back.
* CoveredwithScars: Rowan’s arms are covered in scars.
* Dandere: Rowan is quiet and introverted, but Bree makes him smile by being polite and friendly.
* DressedtoPlunder: Bree is first introduced with a pirate themed outfit, complete with tricorn hat, thigh-high boots, sash belt, and a captain’s longcoat.
* DualWielding: Raul always uses twin daggers.
* Facepalm: Rowan does this when Bree and Raul start arguing again after the fight with the golem.
* FlashbackNightmare: The story begins with Rowan having a nightmare about when he was experimented on as a child by a mysterious figure.
* FunetikAksent: Bree’s accent is written out phonetically to convey it clearly. Quote from Bree, “It was gonna attack us nae matter what we did, you feckin’ idiot!”
* GlowingEyes: Rowan’s eyes do this whenever he uses his psionic powers.
* HeroicFantasy: High magic, strange technology, swords, daggers, psionics, elves, gnomes, orcs, and plenty of action.
* HungryWeapon: The sword one of the antagonists uses literally drinks from its victims, its veins glowing red with siphoned power.
* ImprobableUseofaWeapon: Raul uses his daggers as tools for disassembling a golem’s arm and eye while the other protagonists fight it.
* InstantDeathStab: Rowan is quick and lethal with his knife attacks during combat, targeting the head and neck of his opponents.
* TheLancer: Bree, a brash and energetic protagonist, is the first character to get Rowan, an introverted and shady character, to begin opening up socially, getting him to smile as well.
* LiteralSurveillanceBug: A mechanical spider acts as a surveillance device for an unknown entity.
* MisfitMobilizationMoment: Even though they don’t know each other, being sealed in a room with a golem trying to kill them forces the group to work together to take it down.
* MoodRingEyes: Bree’s eye color changes with her emotional state.
* NoPokerFace: Rowan is unable to lie when confronted about his wild talents, and becomes visibly flustered.
* OnlySaneMan: Unlike the main protagonists, Marjorie is calm and logical in all situations she is involved with, even and especially during an actual conversation with Raul.
* PirateGirl: Bree is Captain of her own ship, is first shown with her crew, and shows a liking for the expected fashion of a pirate/ship captain.
* PowerStereotypeFlip: Rowan’s wild talents are deadly, concussive, and dynamic while he is shy and introverted.
* PowerTrio: A shady psion, a rebellious pirate, and a distrustful con artist are the main protagonists.
* Privateer: Bree reveals in the story that she is in fact a legal privateer through Azrael.
* ReverseGrip: Rowan adopts both a normal and reverse grip with his knife, depending on what tactics are needed in combat.
* ScarfofAsskicking: Rowan always has his purple scarf that flows in the wind as he inflicts lethal blows to his enemies.
* ShockandAwe: Bree primarily uses lightning magic attacks on her foes.
* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: Rowan uses his psionic powers to guide his thrown dagger at enemies.
* WakeUpCall: After Raul finally sees consequences for his antagonistic behavior [[spoiler: when the rest of the party ditches him]], Marjorie challenges him that he'll need to reconsider his actions if he truly wants to become a Lord, encouraging him to give the party a reason to trust him.
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"Three dysfunctional adventurers - a shady psion, a rebellious pirate, and a distrustful con artist - are forced to work together when the new king tasks them to reclaim the castle town of Oganthir after a long and bloody civil war. Viewed as disposable by the powers that be, and each dealing with their own troubled history, cooperation is anything but easy. But with an entire city now counting on them for leadership, they'll have to figure out how to trust each other and face their demons if they want to survive."
-Description on the official website
The Broken Ones is webcomic of the Standard Fantasy Setting/Role-playing Game Verse bent by Kaetana that can be found on https://tapas.io/series/TheBrokenOnes
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!!The Broken Ones contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Bree is a more than capable fighter. Quoted directly from the character, “Ye think I’d never been in a bar brawl before? Feh.”
* AdventureFriendlyWorld: The world is still involved with the tail-end of a long war, and the protagonists are given a task by the new king to bring order to a hostile location.
* AnimalEyes: Raul’s eyes have slit pupils like a cat or snake.
* AttentionWhore: Regardless of the actions he takes, Raul thrives from the attention it gives him.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Azrael leads the attack for the final major conflict of the war fully armored and armed, and quickly promotes herself from General to King in a night.
* BadassBookworm: Rowan expresses knowledge of magical runes while observing them, which is outside of the purview of his wild talents.
* BarrierWarrior: Rowan uses his wild talent to shield him from harm with a force barrier.
* BerserkButton: At least with Raul, Bree often has a short fuse.
* ChaoticNeutral: Raul embodies this alignment trope with his indifference to the consequence of his actions for others (as well as himself) and his care-free annoyance of authority figures.
* ClothFu: [[spoiler: During the fight with the orc Chieftess, Raul uses his cloak to put her at an extreme disadvantage by blinding her with it.]]
* CompulsiveLiar: Raul constantly tells absurd lies that are blatantly untrue.
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackfromBehind: Bree stuns a golem with a lightning attack from behind before it can land a killing blow. Also, after Rowan and Bree are in grave danger, Raul literally leaps into the battle onto the enemies back.
* CoveredwithScars: Rowan’s arms are covered in scars.
* Dandere: Rowan is quiet and introverted, but Bree makes him smile by being polite and friendly.
* DressedtoPlunder: Bree is first introduced with a pirate themed outfit, complete with tricorn hat, thigh-high boots, sash belt, and a captain’s longcoat.
* DualWielding: Raul always uses twin daggers.
* Facepalm: Rowan does this when Bree and Raul start arguing again after the fight with the golem.
* FlashbackNightmare: The story begins with Rowan having a nightmare about when he was experimented on as a child by a mysterious figure.
* FunetikAksent: Bree’s accent is written out phonetically to convey it clearly. Quote from Bree, “It was gonna attack us nae matter what we did, you feckin’ idiot!”
* GlowingEyes: Rowan’s eyes do this whenever he uses his psionic powers.
* HeroicFantasy: High magic, strange technology, swords, daggers, psionics, elves, gnomes, orcs, and plenty of action.
* HungryWeapon: The sword one of the antagonists uses literally drinks from its victims, its veins glowing red with siphoned power.
* ImprobableUseofaWeapon: Raul uses his daggers as tools for disassembling a golem’s arm and eye while the other protagonists fight it.
* InstantDeathStab: Rowan is quick and lethal with his knife attacks during combat, targeting the head and neck of his opponents.
* TheLancer: Bree, a brash and energetic protagonist, is the first character to get Rowan, an introverted and shady character, to begin opening up socially, getting him to smile as well.
* LiteralSurveillanceBug: A mechanical spider acts as a surveillance device for an unknown entity.
* MisfitMobilizationMoment: Even though they don’t know each other, being sealed in a room with a golem trying to kill them forces the group to work together to take it down.
* MoodRingEyes: Bree’s eye color changes with her emotional state.
* NoPokerFace: Rowan is unable to lie when confronted about his wild talents, and becomes visibly flustered.
* OnlySaneMan: Unlike the main protagonists, Marjorie is calm and logical in all situations she is involved with, even and especially during an actual conversation with Raul.
* PirateGirl: Bree is Captain of her own ship, is first shown with her crew, and shows a liking for the expected fashion of a pirate/ship captain.
* PowerStereotypeFlip: Rowan’s wild talents are deadly, concussive, and dynamic while he is shy and introverted.
* PowerTrio: A shady psion, a rebellious pirate, and a distrustful con artist are the main protagonists.
* Privateer: Bree reveals in the story that she is in fact a legal privateer through Azrael.
* ReverseGrip: Rowan adopts both a normal and reverse grip with his knife, depending on what tactics are needed in combat.
* ScarfofAsskicking: Rowan always has his purple scarf that flows in the wind as he inflicts lethal blows to his enemies.
* ShockandAwe: Bree primarily uses lightning magic attacks on her foes.
* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: Rowan uses his psionic powers to guide his thrown dagger at enemies.
* WakeUpCall: After Raul finally sees consequences for his antagonistic behavior [[spoiler: when the rest of the party ditches him]], Marjorie challenges him that he'll need to reconsider his actions if he truly wants to become a Lord, encouraging him to give the party a reason to trust him.
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