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* AndIMustScream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]].]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
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* BloodyHorror: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, [[http://mspfa.com/?s=14456&p=20 she is a bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]].]] Made worse by the fact that she is only a child.
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* AmnesiacHero: Nino, in classic RPG-style.
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* AmnesiacHero: Nino, in classic typical RPG-style.
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* AmnesiacHero: Nino, in classic RPG-style.
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* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler:undo Five's Painful Transformation]].
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* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler:undo Five's Painful Transformation]].PainfulTransformation]].
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* GreatOffscreenWar: There is a mysterious war as part of the setting's backstory, in which Aria's mother died. [[spoiler:Nino's psychological reaction indicates that he has some dark connection to it.]]
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* OurMonstersAreDifferent: So far all monsters seen are fully human in appearance, except with [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and a single unicorn-like white horn.
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* OurMonstersAreDifferent: So far all monsters seen are fully human in appearance, except with [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and a [[HornedHumanoid single unicorn-like white horn.horn]].
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* VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]].
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* VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]].person]].
* VideogameCaringPotential: Due to the RPG-style nature of the webcomic, Nino [[spoiler:choosing to help Five]] is played as this InUniverse.
* VideogameCaringPotential: Due to the RPG-style nature of the webcomic, Nino [[spoiler:choosing to help Five]] is played as this InUniverse.
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* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to resolve everything without bloodshed.
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* BlatantLies: Nino and Aria trying to bluff their way past the town guard.
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* AndIMustScream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]].]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
* CombatDiplomacyStealth: These are the three battle menu options whenever Nino enters a [[RandomEncounters random encounter]].
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* PlayerParty: The comic tends to use many classic RPG tropes and mechanics, this is an obvious one.
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* PlayerParty: The comic tends EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to use many classic RPG tropes and mechanics, this resolve everything without bloodshed.
* HealingHands: Nino's ability isan obvious one.this. He uses it to [[spoiler:undo Five's Painful Transformation]].
* HealingHands: Nino's ability is
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* VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]].
* AndIMustScream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]].]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to resolve everything without bloodshed.
* AndIMustScream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]].]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
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* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler: undo Five's Painful Transformation]].
* CombatDiplomacyStealth: These are the three battle menu options whenever Nino enters a [[RandomEncounters random encounter]].
* CombatDiplomacyStealth: These are the three battle menu options whenever Nino enters a [[RandomEncounters random encounter]].
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* HealingHands: Nino's ability PlayerParty: The comic tends to use many classic RPG tropes and mechanics, this is this. He uses it to [[spoiler: undo Five's Painful Transformation]].
an obvious one.
*CombatDiplomacyStealth: These are the three battle menu options whenever Nino enters a [[RandomEncounters random encounter]].VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]].
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* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to [[Pacifist resolve everything without bloodshed]].
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* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pacifist resolve everything without bloodshed]].
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* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pacifist [[Pacifist resolve everything without bloodshed]].
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* VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]],
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* VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]], person]].
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* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler: undo Five's Painful Transformation.]]
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* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to [[Pacifist resolve everything without bloodshed]].
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* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to [[Pacifist [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pacifist resolve everything without bloodshed]].
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[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=1 Oceanfalls]] is a webcomic with many classic RPGElements. It follows the story of a lost human boy who awakens in an unfamiliar forest. Due to his [[AmnesiacHero amnesia]], he doesn't remember why he came to the forest, or what he is doing in it.
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[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=1 Oceanfalls]] is a webcomic with many classic RPGElements. It follows the story of a lost human boy named Nino, who awakens in an unfamiliar forest. Due to his [[AmnesiacHero amnesia]], he doesn't remember why he came to the forest, or what he is doing in it.
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Currently has an [[http://omegaupdate.freeforums.net/thread/276/oceanfalls Omegaupdate forums thread]] where command suggestions are submitted.
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Currently has an [[http://omegaupdate.freeforums.net/thread/276/oceanfalls Omegaupdate forums thread]] where user submitted command suggestions suggestions, used by the author to advance the story, are submitted.
collected after every update.
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* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler: undo Five's Painful Transformation.]]
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* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler: undo Five's Painful Transformation.]]]]
* CombatDiplomacyStealth: These are the three battle menu options whenever Nino enters a [[RandomEncounters random encounter]].
* CombatDiplomacyStealth: These are the three battle menu options whenever Nino enters a [[RandomEncounters random encounter]].
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* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to [[Pacifist resolve everything without bloodshed.bloodshed]].
* OurMonstersAreDifferent: So far all monsters seen are fully human in appearance, except with [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and a single unicorn-like white horn.
* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler: undo Five's Painful Transformation.]]
* OurMonstersAreDifferent: So far all monsters seen are fully human in appearance, except with [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and a single unicorn-like white horn.
* HealingHands: Nino's ability is this. He uses it to [[spoiler: undo Five's Painful Transformation.]]
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[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=1 Oceanfalls]] is a webcomic with many classic RPGElements. It follows the story of a lost human boy who awakens in an unfamiliar forest. Due to his [[AmnesiacHero amnesia]], he doesn't remember why he came to the forest, or what he is doing in it. It's up to the readers to lead him on the correct path and make the right decisions to avoid the dangers around him, while [[QuestforIdentity uncovering the story behind how he ended up lost in the monster's world]].
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[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=1 Oceanfalls]] is a webcomic with many classic RPGElements. It follows the story of a lost human boy who awakens in an unfamiliar forest. Due to his [[AmnesiacHero amnesia]], he doesn't remember why he came to the forest, or what he is doing in it.
It's up to the readers to lead him on the correct path and make the right decisions to avoid the dangers around him, while [[QuestforIdentity uncovering the story behind how he ended up lost in the monster's world]].
It's up to the readers to lead him on the correct path and make the right decisions to avoid the dangers around him, while [[QuestforIdentity uncovering the story behind how he ended up lost in the monster's world]].
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* And I Must Scream: AndIMustScream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]].]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
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* And I Must Scream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]]. Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
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* And I Must Scream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off]]. ]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
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* And I Must Scream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to [[BodyHorror peel it off.]] off]]. Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.child.
* EverythingTryingtoKillYou: Yet somehow, so far Nino's managed to resolve everything without bloodshed.
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* HelloInsertNameHere: Nino gets assaulted by [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=5 all the wrong names entered]] by readers before he gets his actual name.
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* HelloInsertNameHere: Nino gets assaulted by [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=5 all the wrong names entered]] by readers before he gets his actual name.name.
* VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]],
* And I Must Scream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to peel it off.]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
* VerbalTic: [[spoiler:Five]] speaks slowly and with lots of pausing and hesitation. She also speaks in [[ThirdPersonPerson third person]],
* And I Must Scream: When Nino first finds [[spoiler:Five, she is a [[PainfulTransformation bloody mess]], described to be scratching her skin as if she's trying to peel it off.]] Made worse by the fact that [[spoiler:Five]] is only a child.
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* EasyAmnesia: At the very beginning, Nino seems to have forgotten everything just by falling down and hitting his head.
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* EasyAmnesia: At the very beginning, beginning. Nino seems to have forgotten everything just by falling down and hitting his head.
* PlayerParty: The comic tends to use many classic RPG tropes and mechanics, this is an obviousone.one.
* HelloInsertNameHere: Nino gets assaulted by [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=5 all the wrong names entered]] by readers before he gets his actual name.
* PlayerParty: The comic tends to use many classic RPG tropes and mechanics, this is an obvious
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* DejaVu: What seems to have happened when Nino used his healing hands on the yellow flowers. [[FlashbackFail But perhaps]] this is just a [[AmbiguousSituation mere haze]].
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* EasyAmnesia: At the very beginning, Nino seems to have forgotten everything just by falling down and hitting his head.
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* DejaVu: What seems to have happened when Nino [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=14456&p=82 used his healing hands on the yellow flowers.flowers]]. [[FlashbackFail But perhaps]] this is just a [[AmbiguousSituation mere haze]].
* EasyAmnesia: At the very beginning, Nino seems to have forgotten everything just by falling down and hitting hishead.head.
* PlayerParty: The comic tends to use many classic RPG tropes and mechanics, this is an obvious one.
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A human boy awakens in an unfamiliar forest. Due to his [[AmnesiacHero amnesia]], he doesn't remember why he came to the forest, or what he is doing in it. It's up to the readers to lead him on the correct path and make the right decisions to avoid the dangers around him, while uncovering the story behind how he ended up lost in the monster's world.
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A human boy awakens in an unfamiliar forest. Due to his [[AmnesiacHero amnesia]], he doesn't remember why he came to the forest, or what he is doing in it. It's up to the readers to lead him on the correct path and make the right decisions to avoid the dangers around him, while [[QuestforIdentity uncovering the story behind how he ended up lost in the monster's world.
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* DejaVu: What seems to have happened when Nino used his healing hands on the yellow flowers. But perhaps this is just a mere haze.
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* DejaVu: What seems to have happened when Nino used his healing hands on the yellow flowers. [[FlashbackFail But perhaps perhaps]] this is just a [[AmbiguousSituation mere haze.
haze]].
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A human boy awakens in an unfamiliar forest. He quickly finds out he's no longer in Due to his [[AmnesiacHero amnesia]], he doesn't remember why he came to the human world, but forest, or what he is instead trapped doing in the monster's world. t's it. It's up to the readers to lead him on the correct path.
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