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-->--The comic's [[JustForFun/XMeetsY description]] at its Website/{{Kickstarter}} [[https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/tripleta/nonpack-1-bark-and-bite page]]

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-->--The comic's [[JustForFun/XMeetsY description]] description at its Website/{{Kickstarter}} [[https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/tripleta/nonpack-1-bark-and-bite page]]
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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[Main/Pun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and figure out how to make the Satos their own thing rather than Marcel's [[Main/Pun lapdogs]], and there are numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port.

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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[Main/Pun [[{{Pun}} top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and figure out how to make the Satos their own thing rather than Marcel's [[Main/Pun [[{{Pun}} lapdogs]], and there are numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port.
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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and figure out how to make the Satos their own thing rather than Marcel's [[VisualPun lapdogs]], and there are numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port.

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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun [[Main/Pun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and figure out how to make the Satos their own thing rather than Marcel's [[VisualPun [[Main/Pun lapdogs]], and there are numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port.
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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and wrestle for control of the streets as Marcel will do whatever it takes to get rid of the Satos, and there are numerous other gangs hungering for power over Rich Port.

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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and wrestle for control of figure out how to make the streets as Marcel will do whatever it takes to get rid of the Satos, Satos their own thing rather than Marcel's [[VisualPun lapdogs]], and there are numerous other gangs hungering for power control over Rich Port.Port.
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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and wrestle for control of the streets as there are numerous other gangs hungering for power over Rich Port.

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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to watch her back and wrestle for control of the streets as Marcel will do whatever it takes to get rid of the Satos, and there are numerous other gangs hungering for power over Rich Port.
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I figured it would be a more fitting description; the other one had to do more with the author herself rather than the comic..


->''"Basically, just imagine this is ''Franchise/LooneyTunes'' + ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'' directed by a female, latina Creator/QuentinTarantino!"''

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->''"Basically, just imagine this ->''"Street-savvy Karen dreams of being Rich Port's top bad dog, but she will have to prove her bite is ''Franchise/LooneyTunes'' + ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'' directed by a female, latina Creator/QuentinTarantino!"''as good as her bark to lead the pack"''



The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite matches bark and fight off numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port.

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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to prove watch her bite matches bark back and fight off wrestle for control of the streets as there are numerous other gangs hungering for control power over Rich Port.
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I figured I'll keep the character out until she actually appears in the comic.


''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen and Rougee, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]).

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''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen and Rougee, Karen, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]).
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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark and fight numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port to lead the pack.

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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her matches bark and fight off numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port to lead the pack.Port.
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* ForgoneConclusion: Rougee, a yet-to-be introduced character whom is the daughter Karen will have at some point, will eventually become the next focal point of [=NonPack=].

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* ForgoneConclusion: ForegoneConclusion: Rougee, a yet-to-be introduced character whom is the daughter Karen will have at some point, will eventually become the next focal point of [=NonPack=].
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* ForgoneConclusion: Rougee, a yet-to-be introduced character whom is the daughter Karen will have at some point, will eventually become the next focal point of [=NonPack=].
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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark and fight numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port to lead the pac.

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The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark and fight numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port to lead the pac.pack.

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''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]). Karen dreams of being Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]], so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark and fight numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port to lead the pack and earn a seat at the boss’s table.

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''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen, Karen and Rougee, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]). Karen dreams of being

The first arc focuses on Karen; she aspires to be
Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]], dog]] in the criminal world, so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark and fight numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port to lead the pack and earn a seat at the boss’s table.pac.
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''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]). Karen dreams of being Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]], so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark to lead the pack and earn a seat at the boss’s table.

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''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]). Karen dreams of being Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]], so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark and fight numerous other gangs hungering for control over Rich Port to lead the pack and earn a seat at the boss’s table.
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''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]). Scrappy, street-savvy Karen dreams of being Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]], so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark to lead the pack and earn a seat at the boss’s table.

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''[=NonPack=]'' follows the life of Karen, a stray anthropomorphic dog who lives in a fictionalized version of UsefulNotes/PuertoRico called Rich Port. She leads a gang of criminals called “[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Los Satos]]”, or The Satos if you speak English (but ''never'' ''[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment The]]'' [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment Los Satos]]). Scrappy, street-savvy Karen dreams of being Rich Port's [[VisualPun top dog]], so to speak, but she'll have to prove her bite is as good as her bark to lead the pack and earn a seat at the boss’s table.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Honey is defeated but unfortunately with little fanfare after it's revealed Marcel had ''sent'' him after the Satos in the first place. They end up having to fight off Marcel from killing Shara, and while most of the Satos were able to get away, Yuki had to stay behind and potentially was killed to give the Satos their chance to become their own gang]]
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* PocketProtector: [[spoiler: Honey's brass knuckles in Karen's coat pocket catch a bullet.]]
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* BigBrotherInstinct: [[spoiler: The minute Marcel hold's Shara at gunpoint, Yuki doesn't hesitate to disarm him to save his little sister]].
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* HearingVoices: Played for laughs with Yuki, who clearly is insane but due to being with the Satos.

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* HearingVoices: Played for laughs with Yuki, who clearly is insane but is not really viewed as a problem due to being with the Satos.Satos and still caring for Shara.
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* HearingVoices: Played for laughs with Yuki, who clearly is insane but due to being with the Satos.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Exaggerated; almost any character you'll see in the work past issue #1 has already become well known amongst the fans through the author's platforms in her drawings with the most notable being Benji, hinted to be a new member for the Satos and a ''[[WillTheyOrWontThey potential love interest]]'' of Karen.
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* OneNameOnly[=/=]OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Applies to the entire cast until the GivenNameReveal below.

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* OneNameOnly[=/=]OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: OnlyOneName[=/=]OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Applies to the entire cast until the GivenNameReveal below.
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* VillainProtagonist: Los Satos are a criminal gang of thieves and drug dealers. However, ALighterShadeOfBlack is in full effect; they care for each other like a FamilyOfChoice[[note]]and Yuki and Shara are literally brother and sister[[/note]], and the other crooks they deal with (such as Marcel and Honey) are much worse than they are.

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* VillainProtagonist: Los Satos are a criminal gang of thieves and drug dealers. However, ALighterShadeOfBlack is in full effect; effect for them; they care for each other like a FamilyOfChoice[[note]]and Yuki and Shara are literally brother and sister[[/note]], and the other crooks they deal with (such as Marcel and Honey) are much worse than they are.
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* VillainProtagonist: Los Satos are a criminal gang of thieves and drug dealers. However, ALighterShadOfBlack is in full effect; they care for each other like a FamilyOfChoice[[note]]and Yuki and Shara are literally brother and sister[[/note]], and the other crooks they deal with (such as Marcel and Honey) are much worse than they are.

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* VillainProtagonist: Los Satos are a criminal gang of thieves and drug dealers. However, ALighterShadOfBlack ALighterShadeOfBlack is in full effect; they care for each other like a FamilyOfChoice[[note]]and Yuki and Shara are literally brother and sister[[/note]], and the other crooks they deal with (such as Marcel and Honey) are much worse than they are.
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* VillainProtagonist: Los Satos are a criminal gang of thieves and drug dealers. However, they care for each other like a FamilyOfChoice[[note]]and Yuki and Shara are literally brother and sister[[/note]], and the other crooks they deal with (such as Marcel and Honey) are much worse than they are.

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* VillainProtagonist: Los Satos are a criminal gang of thieves and drug dealers. However, ALighterShadOfBlack is in full effect; they care for each other like a FamilyOfChoice[[note]]and Yuki and Shara are literally brother and sister[[/note]], and the other crooks they deal with (such as Marcel and Honey) are much worse than they are.
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* ItsAllThereInTheManual: Much of the backstory of the characters is revealed through drawings the author does on her social media platforms; justified in that it's probably to make sure the comic focuses on the "now" and that backstory doesn't halt the speed of the plot development.

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Additions and corrections. Removed Cool Old Guy because I don't think Doc is meant to be older than his teammates.


* CoolOldGuy: Doc combines this with OnlySaneMan, as he's older, smarter and more sensible than his gangmates.



* TheSmartGuy: Overlaps with OnlySaneMan, since Doc is more sensible than his teammates.



* GenreShift: Starts as a relatively realistic CrimeDrama, then adds a SciFiHorror element when [[spoiler:we're shown what the serum can do.]]

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* GenreShift: Starts as a relatively realistic CrimeDrama, then adds a SciFiHorror element when [[spoiler:we're shown what the serum can do.]]]] And then we get SupernaturalFiction when it's implied that [[spoiler:Goset has turned Karen into an even worse monster than Honey]].



** [[spoiler:Goset's intervention turns Karen into a demonic form of herself, complete with it's own language]].

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** [[spoiler:Goset's intervention turns Karen into a demonic form of herself, complete with it's its own language]].
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** Through flashbacks, Honey's real name is revealed to be [[spoiler:José]].

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** Through flashbacks, Honey's real name is revealed to be [[spoiler:José]].[[spoiler:José Ramirez]].
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previous edit done due to previous link being broken.
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->''"Basically, just imagine this is ''Franchise/LooneyTunes'' + ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'' directed by a female, latina Creator/QuentinTarantino!"''
-->--The comic's [[JustForFun/XMeetsY description]] at its Website/{{Kickstarter}} [[https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/tripleta/nonpack-1-bark-and-bite page]]

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