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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: The reason Dae and Angel haven't escape already is because they want to take Mia with them and ensure no one will chase after her or them. [[spoiler: Their current plan involves ''killing'' her father to ensure this.]]
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* AttemptedSuicide: [[spoiler: Ref/Jason attempted to kill himself after his girlfriend left him for ''missing their wedding'' because of his obsessive work habits at the Arena.]]
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: The reason Dae and Angel haven't escape already is because they want to take Mia with them and ensure no one will chase after her or them. [[spoiler: Their current plan involves ''killing'' her father to ensure this.]]
* AttemptedSuicide: [[spoiler: Ref/Jason attempted to kill himself after his girlfriend left him for ''missing their wedding'' because of his obsessive work habits at the Arena.]]
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* BystanderSyndrome: Morris assaults an eight-year-old girl in the middle of a crowded ballroom. No one notices. [[spoiler: Then Angel slams his head into a table hard enough to break his nose. Nobody notices ''that'', either.]]
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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Dae's current plans include and revolve around finding a way to take Mia with them and out of her borderline abusive home.
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* TheDoorSlamsYou: Morris is holding a collar up, threatening Angel with it, when suddenly Ref slams the door open into Morris, sending him flying. [[CrowningMomentofFunny The next panel shows a tiny spray of blood covering the wall in the corner and Morris' soul raising out of his body.]]
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* ParentalSubstitute - Angel and Dae seem to have become this for Mia. Their current plans revolve around getting her safely away from her family and will [[spoiler: kill her father to do so.]]
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* ParentalSubstitute - Angel and Dae seem to have become this for Mia. Their current plans revolve around getting her safely away from her family and will [[spoiler: kill her father to do so.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Angel was suicidal by the start of the story and asked for Dae to kill her during their fight... She gets better.
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* MoralityPet: Mia for Dae and Angel.
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* CastFromLifespan: [[spoiler: The collars that allow fighters their superhuman abilities are powered by a near limitless source of energy... Which causes cancer from prolonged use and is threatening to kill Angel due to her having worn one her whole life.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast. Dae spent his entire childhood being beaten and battered by his own parents, adults and other kids to get stronger and eventually watched almost everyone he knew get massacred.
** Angel is effectively seen by society as ''cattle'', being breed, born and raised for the express purpose of fighting to the death in the arena. By the time of the story, she is heavily suicidal because of this and the treatment she receives from Morris.
** Angel is effectively seen by society as ''cattle'', being breed, born and raised for the express purpose of fighting to the death in the arena. By the time of the story, she is heavily suicidal because of this and the treatment she receives from Morris.
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** It is not in your [[{{Understatement best interest]] to harm Mia in front of Angel or Dae.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Morris will ''sucker punch children''.
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* NeverLearntToRead: The Upper class of society never bother to learn to read. Dae mocks the fact they create giant libraries and book collections despite the fact they can't make sense of anything in them.
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* BystanderSyndrome: Morris assaults an eight-year-old girl in the middle of a crowded ballroom. No one notices. [[spoiler: Then Angel slams his head into a table hard enough to break his nose. Nobody notices ''that'', either.]]
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Morris assaults an eight-year-old girl in the middle of a crowded ballroom. No one notices. [[spoiler: Then Angel slams his head into a table hard enough to break his nose. Nobody notices ''that'', either.]]
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An OELManga webcomic created by David Herbert and Tatiana Lepikhina, ''Domain Tnemrot'', or just ''Tnemrot'', is the story of a future (year not identified) where slaves are given special bands that allow them to become super powered, while losing all free movement to their masters, who control them remotely, as in a video game. The gladiator-style battles are set in the titular stadium.
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An OELManga webcomic created by David Herbert Creator/DavidHerbert and Tatiana Lepikhina, ''Domain Tnemrot'', or just ''Tnemrot'', is the story of a future (year not identified) where slaves are given special bands that allow them to become super powered, while losing all free movement to their masters, who control them remotely, as in a video game. The gladiator-style battles are set in the titular stadium.
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The comic features [[DecompressedComic decompressed storytelling]] but is very action based, with artwork inspired by ''{{Bleach}}''. It updates every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. You can [[http://www.tnemrot.com/ read it here]].
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The comic features [[DecompressedComic decompressed storytelling]] but is very action based, with artwork inspired by ''{{Bleach}}''.''Manga/{{Bleach}}''. It updates every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. You can [[http://www.tnemrot.com/ read it here]].
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* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode - The first few pages make it look like it's about Dae surviving in an apocalyptic wasteland TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture. Then he's captured and we see it's ''{{Pokemon}}'' with real people.
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* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode - The first few pages make it look like it's about Dae surviving in an apocalyptic wasteland TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture. Then he's captured and we see it's ''{{Pokemon}}'' ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' with real people.
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* [=~Screw the Rules, I Have Money!~=] - In chapter 2, Angel breaks a lot of Tnemrot's regulations while rescuing Dae, but it causes the crowd to spend so much that the ref actually praises them.
* [=~Screw the Rules, I'm Doing What's Right~=] - Angel in chapter 2.
* [=~Screw the Rules, I'm Doing What's Right~=] - Angel in chapter 2.
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* [=~Screw the Rules, I Have Money!~=] ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney - In chapter 2, Angel breaks a lot of Tnemrot's regulations while rescuing Dae, but it causes the crowd to spend so much that the ref actually praises them.
*[=~Screw the Rules, I'm Doing What's Right~=] ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight - Angel in chapter 2.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotPolitical - Herbert insists that this [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=59 isn't a political commentary comic]].
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* LyingCreator - Some of Herbert's notes tend to be this, saying a character is dead when they're fine and such. But watch out, because sometimes he's telling the truth.
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* MagicFromScience: Referenced.
--> "Hooray for magical science. Or scientific magic. In any case, he’s all better now."
--> "Hooray for magical science. Or scientific magic. In any case, he’s all better now."
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* EnsembleDarkhorse - Tempest gained a large following on her [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=243 first page]].
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An OELManga webcomic created by David Herbert and Tatiana Lepikhina, ''Domain Tnemrot'', or just ''Tnemrot'', is the story of a future (year not identified) where slaves are given special bands that allow them to become super powered, while losing all free movement to their masters, who control them remotely, as in a video game. The gladiator-style battles are set in the titular stadium.
The story focuses on Dae, a former free man but now a slave, and his owner Mia, an 8-year-old girl who enters him in the gladiator games while not fully understanding the consequences of doing so. While preparing for the fight, Mia forgets to attach a special collar that would give her full control of Dae, allowing him free movement while in the ring. During his first fight, Dae's opponent, a girl named Angel, asks him to kill her, but Dae manages to free her without anyone realising what he has done. Angel becomes Mia's pet as well, but with a constant fear that her old master will find out she's still alive and come after her.
The comic features [[DecompressedComic decompressed storytelling]] but is very action based, with artwork inspired by ''{{Bleach}}''. It updates every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. You can [[http://www.tnemrot.com/ read it here]].
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This webcomic provides examples of:
* AbusiveParents - Chapter five's flashbacks show this was [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=147 how Dae lived growing up]].
* AllThereInTheManual - The About and FAQ sections provide info on the cast and the back story of the comic.
* BerserkButton - Watch out when [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=148 Dae's gets hit.]]
* BreadAndCircuses - The games are meant to distract people from the crippling poverty the slaves would be enduring if they were free.
* CryIntoChest - The end of [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=133 Chapter Four]]
* DeadlyGame
* DeadpanSnarker - Dae has exhibited this [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=58 once or twice]].
* DecompressedComic - According to Herbert, his original script for chapter 1 was 10 pages shorter. Also, all the pages tend to have each person's actions between panels where they're speaking.
* EnsembleDarkhorse - Tempest gained a large following on her [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=243 first page]].
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler - Angel becomes one of the main characters.
* FriendlessBackground - Dae was a homeless scavenger, Mia is shunned by her father and Angel was a slave.
* GeniusDitz - [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=254 Tempest.]] [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=271 Dear GOD, Tempest.]]
* GladiatorGames
* InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath - None of the gladiators has the free will to say no to the matches.
* LaResistance - Part of Dae's back story is he belonged to one that dissolved after a mass-scale attack.
* LonelyRichKid - Mia.
* LyingCreator - Some of Herbert's notes tend to be this, saying a character is dead when they're fine and such. But watch out, because sometimes he's telling the truth.
* MagicFromScience: Referenced.
--> "Hooray for magical science. Or scientific magic. In any case, he’s all better now."
* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode - The first few pages make it look like it's about Dae surviving in an apocalyptic wasteland TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture. Then he's captured and we see it's ''{{Pokemon}}'' with real people.
* ParentalNeglect - The only time we see Mia and her father interact, he gives Dae a glare and walks off while she's talking to him. He has yet to say a word on panel.
** [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=142 He came back recently]]. Douche.
** [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=170 And again.]] Seems he really doesn't want Mia talking to him.
* ParentalSubstitute - Angel and Dae seem to have become this for Mia.
* PunnyName - [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=157 Dae Shyn.]]
* RapeAsBackstory - While [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=44 implied]] for Angel, it is instead averted with WordOfGod confirming it never happened between Angel and Morris. [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=170 He is in fact a eunuch]]
* [=~Screw the Rules, I Have Money!~=] - In chapter 2, Angel breaks a lot of Tnemrot's regulations while rescuing Dae, but it causes the crowd to spend so much that the ref actually praises them.
* [=~Screw the Rules, I'm Doing What's Right~=] - Angel in chapter 2.
* SdrawkcabName - The title.
* SomebodyElsesProblem: Morris assaults an eight-year-old girl in the middle of a crowded ballroom. No one notices. [[spoiler: Then Angel slams his head into a table hard enough to break his nose. Nobody notices ''that'', either.]]
* SuicideIsPainless - Angel wanted Dae to kill her the first time they met.
* TrainingFromHell - Dae grew up with a trainer who believed that offering food to starving children, who the man was training, was a sign of weakness. Also, his parents starved him in an attempt to get him to read, or beat him bloody and insulted him while teaching him to fight. At that point, he was younger than Mia.
* TroubledProduction - The comic took a year and a half to get off the ground, and Tatiana wasn't the first artist on the project.
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture - It's stated how far into the future this place is, but a lot of things look very modern.
* TheUnFavourite - Mia to her father.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotPolitical - Herbert insists that this [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=59 isn't a political commentary comic]].
* WordOfGod - In the comments section of each page, Herbert sometimes gives us info on the comic. It's also the only way we know the people attacking Dae were his biological parents.
* ZettaiRyouiki - June.
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The story focuses on Dae, a former free man but now a slave, and his owner Mia, an 8-year-old girl who enters him in the gladiator games while not fully understanding the consequences of doing so. While preparing for the fight, Mia forgets to attach a special collar that would give her full control of Dae, allowing him free movement while in the ring. During his first fight, Dae's opponent, a girl named Angel, asks him to kill her, but Dae manages to free her without anyone realising what he has done. Angel becomes Mia's pet as well, but with a constant fear that her old master will find out she's still alive and come after her.
The comic features [[DecompressedComic decompressed storytelling]] but is very action based, with artwork inspired by ''{{Bleach}}''. It updates every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. You can [[http://www.tnemrot.com/ read it here]].
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This webcomic provides examples of:
* AbusiveParents - Chapter five's flashbacks show this was [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=147 how Dae lived growing up]].
* AllThereInTheManual - The About and FAQ sections provide info on the cast and the back story of the comic.
* BerserkButton - Watch out when [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=148 Dae's gets hit.]]
* BreadAndCircuses - The games are meant to distract people from the crippling poverty the slaves would be enduring if they were free.
* CryIntoChest - The end of [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=133 Chapter Four]]
* DeadlyGame
* DeadpanSnarker - Dae has exhibited this [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=58 once or twice]].
* DecompressedComic - According to Herbert, his original script for chapter 1 was 10 pages shorter. Also, all the pages tend to have each person's actions between panels where they're speaking.
* EnsembleDarkhorse - Tempest gained a large following on her [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=243 first page]].
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler - Angel becomes one of the main characters.
* FriendlessBackground - Dae was a homeless scavenger, Mia is shunned by her father and Angel was a slave.
* GeniusDitz - [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=254 Tempest.]] [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=271 Dear GOD, Tempest.]]
* GladiatorGames
* InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath - None of the gladiators has the free will to say no to the matches.
* LaResistance - Part of Dae's back story is he belonged to one that dissolved after a mass-scale attack.
* LonelyRichKid - Mia.
* LyingCreator - Some of Herbert's notes tend to be this, saying a character is dead when they're fine and such. But watch out, because sometimes he's telling the truth.
* MagicFromScience: Referenced.
--> "Hooray for magical science. Or scientific magic. In any case, he’s all better now."
* NonIndicativeFirstEpisode - The first few pages make it look like it's about Dae surviving in an apocalyptic wasteland TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture. Then he's captured and we see it's ''{{Pokemon}}'' with real people.
* ParentalNeglect - The only time we see Mia and her father interact, he gives Dae a glare and walks off while she's talking to him. He has yet to say a word on panel.
** [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=142 He came back recently]]. Douche.
** [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=170 And again.]] Seems he really doesn't want Mia talking to him.
* ParentalSubstitute - Angel and Dae seem to have become this for Mia.
* PunnyName - [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=157 Dae Shyn.]]
* RapeAsBackstory - While [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=44 implied]] for Angel, it is instead averted with WordOfGod confirming it never happened between Angel and Morris. [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=170 He is in fact a eunuch]]
* [=~Screw the Rules, I Have Money!~=] - In chapter 2, Angel breaks a lot of Tnemrot's regulations while rescuing Dae, but it causes the crowd to spend so much that the ref actually praises them.
* [=~Screw the Rules, I'm Doing What's Right~=] - Angel in chapter 2.
* SdrawkcabName - The title.
* SomebodyElsesProblem: Morris assaults an eight-year-old girl in the middle of a crowded ballroom. No one notices. [[spoiler: Then Angel slams his head into a table hard enough to break his nose. Nobody notices ''that'', either.]]
* SuicideIsPainless - Angel wanted Dae to kill her the first time they met.
* TrainingFromHell - Dae grew up with a trainer who believed that offering food to starving children, who the man was training, was a sign of weakness. Also, his parents starved him in an attempt to get him to read, or beat him bloody and insulted him while teaching him to fight. At that point, he was younger than Mia.
* TroubledProduction - The comic took a year and a half to get off the ground, and Tatiana wasn't the first artist on the project.
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture - It's stated how far into the future this place is, but a lot of things look very modern.
* TheUnFavourite - Mia to her father.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotPolitical - Herbert insists that this [[http://www.tnemrot.com/?p=59 isn't a political commentary comic]].
* WordOfGod - In the comments section of each page, Herbert sometimes gives us info on the comic. It's also the only way we know the people attacking Dae were his biological parents.
* ZettaiRyouiki - June.
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