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* ForeignLanguageTirade: Often M.T. will slip into Polish cussing. This usually occurs when paperwork overflows, Seamus is hurt, or Slim exists.
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* ForeignLanguageTirade: Often M.T. will slip into Polish cussing.cussing (single words, though, and no declension). This usually occurs when paperwork overflows, Seamus is hurt, or Slim exists.
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* [[AlliterativeName Seamus O'Shae]] a Border Police Officer who was [[HazyFeelTurn once a refugee, now hunting refugees]]. Also happens to be a Werewolf.
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* [[AlliterativeName Seamus O'Shae]] O'Shea]] a Border Police Officer who was [[HazyFeelTurn once a refugee, now hunting refugees]]. Also happens to be a Werewolf.
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* ActionDuo: Seamus prefers to fight with his fists or beloved crowbar to the point where deadeye shot, Slim, is shocked to discover he can barely aim a gun.
* AfterActionPatchUp: Would be considered an AfterActionHealingDrama moment, if Seamus wasn't a Werewolf and therefore already healing his heavy wounds by the time he reaches HQ. M.T. still patches him up though, surely because she doesn't want him dripping blood over everything, [[CaptainOblivious right?]].
* AfterActionPatchUp: Would be considered an AfterActionHealingDrama moment, if Seamus wasn't a Werewolf and therefore already healing his heavy wounds by the time he reaches HQ. M.T. still patches him up though, surely because she doesn't want him dripping blood over everything, [[CaptainOblivious right?]].
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* ActionDuo: Seamus prefers to fight with his fists or beloved crowbar to the point where deadeye shot, Slim, crowbar. Deadeye shot Slim is shocked to discover he can barely aim a gun.
* AfterActionPatchUp: Would be considered an AfterActionHealingDrama moment, if Seamus wasn't a Werewolf andtherefore already healing his heavy wounds by the time he reaches HQ. M.T. still patches him up though, surely because she doesn't want him dripping blood over everything, [[CaptainOblivious right?]].
* AfterActionPatchUp: Would be considered an AfterActionHealingDrama moment, if Seamus wasn't a Werewolf and
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* BlatantLies: Often invoked by Slim on topics ranging from whether or not he stole evidence from a crime scene, to whether or not he's ever going to pretend to obey the law.
* CorruptBureaucrat: Hinted that many officials outside the Border Police may not be adverse to taking a few underhand deals.
* CorruptBureaucrat: Hinted that many officials outside the Border Police may not be adverse to taking a few underhand deals.
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* BlatantLies: Often invoked by Slim Slim, on topics ranging from whether or not he stole evidence from a crime scene, to whether or not he's ever going to pretend to obey the law.
* CorruptBureaucrat: Hinted that many officials outside the Border Police may not beadverse averse to taking a few underhand deals.
* CorruptBureaucrat: Hinted that many officials outside the Border Police may not be
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* {{Dystopia}}: Babylon may have started out as a safe haven for all magic users, but after the gates closed, no-one comes or goes. No-one aside from the smugglers and refugees, that is, and they're hunted to the death.
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* {{Dystopia}}: Babylon may have started out as a safe haven for all magic users, but after the gates closed, no-one no one comes or goes. No-one No one aside from the smugglers and refugees, that is, and they're hunted to the death.
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* ForeignLanguageTirade: Often M.T. will slip into Polish cussing, this usually occurs when paperwork overflows, Seamus is hurt, or Slim exists.
* FriendsRentControl: '''Subverted''': Seamus works full-time for the Border Police, and affords a small sized flat above a grocery store.
* FunctionalMagic: What else could you expect from a City populated exclusively by magical people?
* GovernmentAgencyOfFiction: The Border Police and all higher Departments in the Government.
* PoliceBrutality: More often than not, Refugees caught attempting to gain access to the City are killed. In fact, it's ''preferred'' that they're dead.
* FriendsRentControl: '''Subverted''': Seamus works full-time for the Border Police, and affords a small sized flat above a grocery store.
* FunctionalMagic: What else could you expect from a City populated exclusively by magical people?
* GovernmentAgencyOfFiction: The Border Police and all higher Departments in the Government.
* PoliceBrutality: More often than not, Refugees caught attempting to gain access to the City are killed. In fact, it's ''preferred'' that they're dead.
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* ForeignLanguageTirade: Often M.T. will slip into Polish cussing, this cussing. This usually occurs when paperwork overflows, Seamus is hurt, or Slim exists.
* FriendsRentControl: '''Subverted''': Seamus works full-time for the Border Police, and affords a smallsized flat above a grocery store.
* FunctionalMagic: What else could you expect from aCity city populated exclusively by magical people?
* GovernmentAgencyOfFiction: The Border Police and all higherDepartments departments in the Government.
government.
* PoliceBrutality: More often than not,Refugees refugees caught attempting to gain access to the City city are killed. In fact, it's ''preferred'' that they're dead.
* FriendsRentControl: '''Subverted''': Seamus works full-time for the Border Police, and affords a small
* FunctionalMagic: What else could you expect from a
* GovernmentAgencyOfFiction: The Border Police and all higher
* PoliceBrutality: More often than not,
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Seamus and Slim certainly count as this, a Type Two variety. Though it's entirely possible Seamus merely pretends to be oblivious to Slim's biting remarks, seeing it as the latter's quirk.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Seamus and Slim certainly count as this, a Type Two variety. Though it's It's entirely possible Seamus merely pretends to be oblivious to Slim's biting remarks, seeing it as the latter's quirk.
