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''[[http://www.banishedonline.com/ Banished]]'' is a science fiction webcomic written by Creator/RyanSmith and illustrated by a variety of different artists, which had its first page on [[https://web.archive.org/web/20070717181054/http://www.banishedonline.com/d/20060116.html January 16th, 2006]].
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''[[http://www.banishedonline.com/ Banished]]'' Banished]]'', a.k.a ''Banished!'', is a science fiction webcomic written by Creator/RyanSmith and illustrated by a variety of different artists, which had its first page on [[https://web.archive.org/web/20070717181054/http://www.banishedonline.com/d/20060116.html January 16th, 2006]].
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''[[http://www.banishedonline.com/ Banished]]'' is a science fiction webcomic written by Ryan Smith and illustrated by a variety of different artists, which had its first page on [[https://web.archive.org/web/20070717181054/http://www.banishedonline.com/d/20060116.html January 16th, 2006]].
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''[[http://www.banishedonline.com/ Banished]]'' is a science fiction webcomic written by Ryan Smith Creator/RyanSmith and illustrated by a variety of different artists, which had its first page on [[https://web.archive.org/web/20070717181054/http://www.banishedonline.com/d/20060116.html January 16th, 2006]].
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''[[http://www.banishedonline.com/ Banished]]'' is a science fiction webcomic written by Ryan Smith and illustrated by a variety of different artists.
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''[[http://www.banishedonline.com/ Banished]]'' is a science fiction webcomic written by Ryan Smith and illustrated by a variety of different artists.
artists, which had its first page on [[https://web.archive.org/web/20070717181054/http://www.banishedonline.com/d/20060116.html January 16th, 2006]].
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renamed to Clone Angst
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* CloningBlues: The end of Book 1 reveals that [[spoiler:the Mammazons are all clones, which explains why they all look the same.]]
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* AndManGrewProud: [[spoiler: The case with the Mammazons.]]
* ApocalypseHow: A class 2 happened to the Mammazons in the past. [[spoiler: It's strongly implied that the society in question was ''ours''.]]
* BadBoss: Mut'la [[spoiler: tries to murder Noammi for not catching Rak and Timbo]].
* ApocalypseHow: A class 2 happened to the Mammazons in the past. [[spoiler: It's strongly implied that the society in question was ''ours''.]]
* BadBoss: Mut'la [[spoiler: tries to murder Noammi for not catching Rak and Timbo]].
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* ApocalypseHow: A class 2 happened to the Mammazons in the past.
* BadBoss: Mut'la
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* BoisterousBruiser: Sergeant Gavol.
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* CloningBlues: [[spoiler: The end of Book 1 reveals that the Mammazons are all clones, which explains why they all look the same.]]
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* CloningBlues: [[spoiler: The end of Book 1 reveals that the [[spoiler:the Mammazons are all clones, which explains why they all look the same.]]
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* TheDon: Mut'la is a rare female example.
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* TheDon: Mut'la is a rare female example.
*example. She's unafraid to kill those who fail her.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Mut'la acts like a friendly intellectual even as [[spoiler: she tries to blow up a hospital just to punish Noammi for not catching Timbo]].
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Mut'la acts like a friendly intellectual even as [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she tries to blow up a hospital just to punish Noammi for not catching Timbo]].Timbo.]]
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* TheHeavy: The Strix Empire.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Luger and to a lesser degree Rak.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Luger and to a lesser degree Rak.
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Rak tries to sell Timbo to get the mob off his back. Timbo actually takes this very well, much to Rak's annoyance.]]
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler: Rak tries to sell [[spoiler:sell Timbo to get the mob off his back. Timbo actually takes this very well, much to Rak's annoyance.]]
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* MythArc: Definitely has one but it's not exactly clear yet.
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* OrcusOnHisThrone: [[spoiler: The mysterious robots that seem to be behind everything more or less serve this role.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Admiral Hacos.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Admiral Hacos.
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* OrcusOnHisThrone: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The mysterious robots that seem to be behind everything everything]] more or less serve this role.]]
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* [[spoiler: UnroboticReveal: Timbo isn't exactly a [[http://www.banishedonline.com/index.php?date=2011-09-23 robot]]...]]
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* [[spoiler: UnroboticReveal: Timbo [[spoiler:Timbo isn't exactly a [[http://www.banishedonline.com/index.php?date=2011-09-23 robot]]...]]
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* VillainousRescue: [[spoiler: Fehr saves Timbo from being kidnapped by one of the Arctide gangsters.]]
* VillainTeamUp: At the end of Book 2, Chapter 2 [[spoiler: Luger and Noammi are working together to track down Rak and Timbo]].
* WhamShot: See the [[spoiler: UnroboticReveal]] example above.
* VillainTeamUp: At the end of Book 2, Chapter 2 [[spoiler: Luger and Noammi are working together to track down Rak and Timbo]].
* WhamShot: See the [[spoiler: UnroboticReveal]] example above.
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* VillainousRescue: [[spoiler: Fehr [[spoiler:Fehr saves Timbo Timbo]] from being kidnapped by one of the [[spoiler:the Arctide gangsters.]]
* VillainTeamUp: At the end of Book 2, Chapter 2 [[spoiler: Luger and Noammi are working together to track down Rak andTimbo]].
*Timbo.]]
%%* WhamShot: See the [[spoiler: UnroboticReveal]] example above.
* VillainTeamUp: At the end of Book 2, Chapter 2 [[spoiler: Luger and Noammi are working together to track down Rak and
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* YouHaveFailedMe: [[spoiler: Mut'la tries to have Noammi assassinated for failing to capture Timbo.]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: [[spoiler: Mut'la tries to have [[spoiler:have Noammi assassinated for failing to capture Timbo.]]
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* NoJustNoReaction: [[http://www.banishedonline.com/index.php?date=2011-03-18 Timbo]] has this reaction when he learns the specifics of the aphrodisiac black market Rak used to run: [[spoiler: Specifically that [[{{Squick}} he drained fluid from his kidneys and sold it as a drug]].]]
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* NoJustNoReaction: [[http://www.banishedonline.com/index.php?date=2011-03-18 Timbo]] has this reaction when he learns the specifics of the aphrodisiac black market Rak used to run: [[spoiler: Specifically that [[{{Squick}} he drained fluid from his kidneys bile through a catheter and sold it as a drug]].]]
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* BeastMan: The Strix resemble worms and the Boscis resemble birds. Averted with most of the other species of alien.
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* PettingZooPeople: The Strix resemble worms and the Boscis resemble birds. Averted with most of the other species of alien.
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The story focuses on Rak and Timbo, an alien and robot stuck on a backwater prison planet known as Strix 13. Rak, having been banished to Strix 13 for AccidentalMurder, is desperate to escape from the desolate world and enlists the aid of Timbo to help him. Along the way the duo encounter monsters, adventure, and strange occurances.
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The story focuses on Rak and Timbo, an alien and robot stuck on a backwater prison planet known as Strix 13. Rak, having been banished to Strix 13 for AccidentalMurder, is desperate to escape from the desolate world and enlists the aid of Timbo to help him. Along the way the duo encounter monsters, adventure, and strange occurances.
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* AndManGrewProud: [[spoiler: This case with the Mammazons.]]
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* AndManGrewProud: [[spoiler: This The case with the Mammazons.]]
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* NoJustNoReaction: [[http://www.banishedonline.com/index.php?date=2011-03-18 Timbo]] has this reaction when he learns the specifics of the aphrodasiac black market Rak used to run: [[spoiler: Specifically that [[{{Squick}} he drained fluid from his kidneys and sold it as a drug]].]]
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* NoJustNoReaction: [[http://www.banishedonline.com/index.php?date=2011-03-18 Timbo]] has this reaction when he learns the specifics of the aphrodasiac aphrodisiac black market Rak used to run: [[spoiler: Specifically that [[{{Squick}} he drained fluid from his kidneys and sold it as a drug]].]]