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You can read it [[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Vox_and_King_Beau here]].
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* ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight: At one point when Vox was a child, she had a monster in her closet.
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* ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight: At one point when Vox was a child, she had a monster in her closet.closet.
* YourCheatingHeart: At the beginning of the story, Beau helps Vox discover that her boyfriend is cheating on her.
* YourCheatingHeart: At the beginning of the story, Beau helps Vox discover that her boyfriend is cheating on her.
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* AnachronicOrder: The story switches between Vox relating current present-day updates, giving background on her and Beau's relationship when she was a child, and re-telling the stories that Beau told her about himself that happened long before any of that.
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* PetTheDog: The entire "Why the Stars Shine" chapter. It's one of the many BackStory chapters, showing a time when Vox had a nasty flu as a child and Beau stayed up with her telling her stories and patiently listening to her whine about feeling terrible. The last story he tells her before she falls asleep ends with him telling her that the stars love her.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: The final chapter seems to be setting up for a plotline where Vox goes on an adventure to save Beau... and then nothing was posted after that, save for a comment possibly made by Vox saying that [[spoiler: Beau is dead.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Vox gets one to Beau in "Vox Updates Again" where she goes up against Beau ([[HumanoidAbomination who could most definitely kill her]]) armed with only a possibly-iron nail and a salt shaker and calls him pathetic. As soon as she finishes, she thinks that he's going to kill her. [[spoiler: He just starts sadly laughing, and Vox slowly realizes that he's been trying to protect her from something.]]
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* AntiClimax: Vox posted an update that seemed to be setting things up for a second story arc in which she would get a chance to go on a journey to rescue Beau from whatever was after him... but there are no confirmed posts by her after that. A follow-up comment apparently made by Vox wraps things up by just saying that [[spoiler: Beau died, with no mention of whether or not she tried to help him as she talked about in her previous comment]]. As it was posted anonymously, it's unclear if the post was actually by her or not; making it unclear if this is a case of AntiClimax or NoEnding.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Vox has a brain tumor and Beau has been trying to warn her.]]
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''Vox and King Beau'' is a Creepypasta originally posted on /x/ that takes the format of a young woman named Vox who posts on /x/ looking for advice. Vox had been starting to hear things--particularly, occasional whispered voices and a deafening silence in her apartment every night. When Vox brought it up to her mother, her mother reminded her of a creepy childhood imaginary friend she had: King Beau, the King of the Quiet Place, whose trademark was causing the same stifling silences that Vox has been dealing with. Scared that either she's hallucinating or something genuinely supernatural is happening to her, she begins chronicling her story on /x/ hoping that someone can help her figure out what's going on.
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''Vox and King Beau'' is a Creepypasta originally posted on /x/ that takes the format of a young woman named Vox who posts on /x/ looking for advice. Vox had has been starting to hear things--particularly, things—particularly, occasional whispered voices and a deafening silence in her apartment every night. When Vox brought it finally brings the strange occurrences up to her mother, her mother reminded after it escalates to her seeing a man stand over her bed at night, her mother reminds her of a creepy childhood imaginary friend she had: King Beau, the King of the Quiet Place, whose trademark was causing the same stifling silences that Vox has been dealing with.with and whose description matches the man standing over Vox’s bed. Scared that either she's hallucinating or something genuinely supernatural is happening to her, she begins chronicling her story on /x/ hoping that someone can help her figure out what's going on.
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* ImpliedLoveInterest: Towards the end of the story, Vox is referred to as "the girl Beau loves". While the phrasing of "''the'' person you love" often carries romantic connotations, it's never stated exactly how he feels about her.
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* BeingWatched: At the beginning of the story, Vox's then-boyfriend complains of feeling like he's being watched around their house. When Vox moves out [[spoiler:after discovering that her boyfriend is cheating on her]], people who visit her in her new apartment have similar complaints.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Vox has a brain tumor (as was suspected), but (thanks to [[NotSoImaginaryFriend Beau]]) it gets caught in time to be surgically removed before it does any real harm, and Vox is expected to make a full recovery. However, Vox also says that she hasn't heard from Beau lately and she thinks that he's in serious trouble and needs her help—and unfortunately, she has no idea how to contact or find him. A later comment allegedly posted by Vox actually says that Beau ''died''; but, as the comment was anonymous, nobody is positive if it was actually her or not.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Vox has a brain tumor (as was suspected), but (thanks to [[NotSoImaginaryFriend Beau]]) it gets caught in time to be surgically removed before it does any real harm, and Vox is expected to make a full recovery. However, Vox also says that she hasn't heard from Beau lately and she thinks that he's in serious trouble and needs her help—and unfortunately, she has no idea how to contact or find him. A later comment allegedly posted by Vox actually says that Beau ''died''; but, as the comment was anonymous, nobody is positive if it was actually her or not.]]
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* BeingWatched: At the beginning of the story, Vox's then-boyfriend complains of feeling like he's being watched around their house. When Vox moves out [[spoiler:after discovering that into her boyfriend is cheating on her]], own apartment, people who visit her in her new apartment have similar complaints.
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Vox has a braintumor (as was suspected), tumor, but (thanks to [[NotSoImaginaryFriend Beau]]) it gets caught in time appears to be surgically removed before it does any real harm, and Vox is expected to make making a full recovery. However, the last update is Vox also says saying that she hasn't heard from Beau lately and she thinks that he's Beau is in serious trouble and needs her help—and unfortunately, she has no idea how something is out to contact or find get him. A later comment allegedly posted by Vox actually says that Beau ''died''; but, but as the comment it was anonymous, nobody is positive if it was actually her or not.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Vox has a brain
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The story starts off this way, with Vox not sure if anything she's seeing is actually happening or if she's just hallucinating it. [[spoiler:The end of the story seems to support the "magic" theory, as Vox continues to see and hear things even after the removal of her brain tumor and people around her begin to notice the mysterious events, too.]]
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The story starts off this way, with Vox not sure entirely unsure if anything she's seeing experiencing is actually happening real or if she's just hallucinating it. [[spoiler:The end of the story seems to support the "magic" theory, as Vox continues to see and hear things even after the removal of her brain tumor and people around her begin to notice the mysterious events, too.]]hallucinating.
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* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: Beau is described as having a several rows of sharp crocodile-like teeth and a smile wider than any human's.
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* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: Beau is described as having a several rows of sharp crocodile-like teeth and paired with a smile wider than any human's.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Vox has a brain tumor, but appears to be making a full recovery. However, the last update is Vox saying that she thinks that Beau is in trouble and something is out to get him. A later comment allegedly posted by Vox actually says that Beau ''died''; but as it was anonymous, nobody is positive if it was actually her or not.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Vox has a brain tumor, tumor (as was suspected), but appears (thanks to [[NotSoImaginaryFriend Beau]]) it gets caught in time to be making surgically removed before it does any real harm, and Vox is expected to make a full recovery. However, the last update is Vox saying also says that she hasn't heard from Beau lately and she thinks that Beau is he's in serious trouble and something is out needs her help—and unfortunately, she has no idea how to get contact or find him. A later comment allegedly posted by Vox actually says that Beau ''died''; but but, as it the comment was anonymous, nobody is positive if it was actually her or not.]]
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* AdultFear: Vox gets two: finding out that your partner is cheating on you, and [[spoiler:finding out that you have a tumor that could kill you if treatment doesn't go right.]]
** Additionally, in the "Beau and the Child Snatchers" section: having your child stolen away in the middle of the night and either eaten or turned into a monster.
** Additionally, in the "Beau and the Child Snatchers" section: having your child stolen away in the middle of the night and either eaten or turned into a monster.
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* AdultFear: Vox gets two: finding out that your partner is cheating on you, and [[spoiler:finding finding out that [[spoiler:that you have a tumor that could kill you if treatment doesn't go right.]]
**]] Additionally, in the "Beau and the Child Snatchers" section: having your child stolen chapter has a woman who steals children away in the middle of the night and either eaten eats them or turned turns them into a monster. monsters.
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* AlwaysNight: Implied with the Quiet Place, which is always described as dark and unlit.
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* BodyHorror: In the "Beau and the Child Snatchers" section, Beau encounters a (presumably) once-human child who has been kidnapped by a woman who lives in his realm. The child is described as not only missing his jaw,
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* BodyHorror: In the "Beau and the Child Snatchers" section, Beau encounters a (presumably) once-human child who has been kidnapped by a woman who lives in his realm. The child is described as not only missing his jaw, but being starved and malnourished with visible ribs, "pus-filled sacs", and "bony growths".
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The story starts off this way, with Vox not sure if anything she's seeing is actually happening or if she's just hallucinating it. [[spoiler:The end of the story seems to support the "magic" theory, as Vox continues to see and hear things even after the removal of her brain tumor and people around her begin to notice the mysterious events, too.]]
*MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: Beau is described as having a several rows of sharp crocodile-like teeth.
*NotSoImaginaryFriend: Beau to Vox.
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The story starts off this way, with Vox not sure if anything she's seeing is actually happening or if she's just hallucinating it. [[spoiler:The end of the story seems to support the "magic" theory, as Vox continues to see and hear things even after the removal of her brain tumor and people around her begin to notice the mysterious events, too.]]
*MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: Beau is described as having a several rows of sharp crocodile-like teeth.
*NotSoImaginaryFriend: Beau to Vox.
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** Additionally, in the "Beau and the Child-Snatchers" section: having your child stolen away in the middle of the night and either eaten or turned into a monster.
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* AdultFear: Vox gets two: finding out your partner is cheating on you, and [[spoiler:finding out that you have a tumor that could kill you if treatment doesn't go right.]]
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** AdultFear: Vox gets two: finding out your partner is cheating on you, and [[spoiler:finding out that you have a tumor that could kill you if treatment doesn't go right.]]
**Additionally, in the "Beau and the Child-Snatchers" section: having your child stolen away in the middle of the night and either eaten or turned into a monster.
* AnonymousAuthor: The author of the story writes it entirely in first person and goes only by Vox.
* AudienceParticipation: All of the segments of the story were originally posted on /x/ as Vox presenting what was happening in her life and asking for help, with comments from readers being actively encouraged and responded to.
* BeingWatched: At the beginning of the story, Vox's then-boyfriend complains of feeling like he's being watched around their house. When Vox moves out [[spoiler:after discovering that her boyfriend is cheating on her]], people who visit her in her new apartment have similar complaints.
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**Additionally, in the "Beau and the Child-Snatchers" section: having your child stolen away in the middle of the night and either eaten or turned into a monster.
* AnonymousAuthor: The author of the story writes it entirely in first person and goes only by Vox.
* AudienceParticipation: All of the segments of the story were originally posted on /x/ as Vox presenting what was happening in her life and asking for help, with comments from readers being actively encouraged and responded to.
* BeingWatched: At the beginning of the story, Vox's then-boyfriend complains of feeling like he's being watched around their house. When Vox moves out [[spoiler:after discovering that her boyfriend is cheating on her]], people who visit her in her new apartment have similar complaints.
* BittersweetEnding:
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-> ''I think I might be going insane. Either that or something really, really strange is happening.''
''Vox and King Beau'' is a Creepypasta originally posted on /x/ that takes the format of a young woman named Vox who posts on /x/ looking for advice. Vox had been starting to hear things--particularly, occasional whispered voices and a deafening silence in her apartment every night. When Vox brought it up to her mother, her mother reminded her of a creepy childhood imaginary friend she had: King Beau, the King of the Quiet Place, whose trademark was causing the same stifling silences that Vox has been dealing with. Scared that either she's hallucinating or something genuinely supernatural is happening to her, she begins chronicling her story on /x/ hoping that someone can help her figure out what's going on.
Over the next several months, Vox continuously updated /x/ with new developments in her story as well as stories about King Beau that he had told her in her youth. At its conclusion, the story takes up a whopping 48 pages in Microsoft Word and comes in at over 31,000 words.
You can read it [[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Vox_and_King_Beau here]].
''Vox and King Beau'' is a Creepypasta originally posted on /x/ that takes the format of a young woman named Vox who posts on /x/ looking for advice. Vox had been starting to hear things--particularly, occasional whispered voices and a deafening silence in her apartment every night. When Vox brought it up to her mother, her mother reminded her of a creepy childhood imaginary friend she had: King Beau, the King of the Quiet Place, whose trademark was causing the same stifling silences that Vox has been dealing with. Scared that either she's hallucinating or something genuinely supernatural is happening to her, she begins chronicling her story on /x/ hoping that someone can help her figure out what's going on.
Over the next several months, Vox continuously updated /x/ with new developments in her story as well as stories about King Beau that he had told her in her youth. At its conclusion, the story takes up a whopping 48 pages in Microsoft Word and comes in at over 31,000 words.
You can read it [[http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Vox_and_King_Beau here]].
