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** "Science Fiction Weapons" has the narrator point out how nukes would be a much more useful alternative to the AwesomeButImpractical weapons sci-fi stories normally use.



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** One of the characters recommended in "Giant Monsters" is a high-ranking military officer who wants to skip straight to nukes after an initial attempt to stop the monster fails.
** "Science Fiction Weapons" has the narrator point out how nukes would be a much more usefull alternative to the AwesomeButImpractical weapons scifi stories normally use.

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NukeEm: One of the characters recommended in "Giant Monsters" is a high-ranking military officer who wants to skip straight to nukes after an initial attempt to stop the monster fails.
** "Science Fiction Weapons" has the narrator point out how nukes would be a much more usefull alternative to the AwesomeButImpractical weapons scifi stories normally use.
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* NukeEm: One of the characters recommended in "Giant Monsters" is a high-ranking military officer who wants to skip straight to nukes after an initial attempt to stop the monster fails.

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One of the characters recommended in "Giant Monsters" is a high-ranking military officer who wants to skip straight to nukes after an initial attempt to stop the monster fails.fails.
** "Science Fiction Weapons" has the narrator point out how nukes would be a much more usefull alternative to the AwesomeButImpractical weapons scifi stories normally use.
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* ShipToShipCombat: [[invoked]]Discussed at the end of ''War Stories'', when the narrator reminds his audience that no genre is save from the Love Triangle, and that fans take shipping as seriously as war.
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** On a similar note, in "Alien Ecosystems", he says that alien parasites should jump the species barrier to humans, even though human physiology is literally alien to them.

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** On a similar note, in "Alien Ecosystems", he says that alien parasites should jump the species barrier to humans, even though human physiology is literally alien to them. It also claims that humans should be able to visit alien planets without any sort of protective gear and not suffer any ill effects (besides, of course, getting infected by the previously mentioned parasites.

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: At the end of "Worldbuilding Cultures", JP wonders how a fictional culture should handle controversial topics like religion and gender roles. He then tells the audience they're on their own because he's not starting a FlameWar on Website/{{Youtube}}.

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At the end of "Worldbuilding Cultures", JP wonders how a fictional culture should handle controversial topics like religion and gender roles. He then tells the audience they're on their own because he's not starting a FlameWar on Website/{{Youtube}}.Website/{{Youtube}}.
** In "Revenge Plots", one of the the protaganist's companions realizes the protaganist is going to needlessly get everone killed, so he leaves.
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* WhamLine: Generally one at the end of every video revealing which villain has stolen the episode's sponsor now.
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** [[ParodiedTrope Parodied]] in "Isekai". The protagonists defeat Cthulhu with a trite friendship speech.

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* ShakyCam: Encouraged in the "War Stories" video, claiming it [[BlatantLies won't get on the audience's nerves]]. "Giant Monsters" also suggests constantly shaking the camera if you lack the budget to show the monster convincingly.

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"Giant Monsters" also suggests constantly shaking the camera if you lack the budget to show the monster convincingly.


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* SharkMan: In "avoiding scams", con artists are represented by anthropomorphic great white sharks in business suits.
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* SelfDisposingVillain: In "Revenge Plots", this should be used as a cop-out so your protagonist can have the moral high ground. The hero should refuse to kill to villain, only for the villain to try to kill the hero after being spared. This means that the hero can use self-defense to justify killing the villain.

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* SelfDisposingVillain: In "Revenge Plots", this should be used as a cop-out so your protagonist can have the moral high ground. The hero should refuse to kill to the villain, only for the villain them to try to and kill the hero after being spared. This means that the hero can use self-defense to justify killing the villain.
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** "Revenge Plots" should hammer home the message that revenge is bad, even though the protagonist's attempts at seeking revenge only improve things.


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* SelfDisposingVillain: In "Revenge Plots", this should be used as a cop-out so your protagonist can have the moral high ground. The hero should refuse to kill to villain, only for the villain to try to kill the hero after being spared. This means that the hero can use self-defense to justify killing the villain.


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* WhatMeasureIsAMook: In "Revenge Plots", the protagonist should take the moral high ground by not killing the villain they were seeking revenge against. The mooks the protagonist killed don't count as people, and thus he still has the moral high ground despite standing on a mountain of skulls.
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* {{Animesque}}: The "Isekai" episode has all the characters given big anime eyes.


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** The protagonist in the "Isekai" episode bears a resemblance to [[LightNovel/SwordArtOnline Kirito]].
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* IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim: "Revenge Plots" suggests this as a way to balance a nobmle protagonist's morality checkbooks, never mind the [[AMillionIsAStatistic number mooks he's mowed through across the plot.]]

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* IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim: "Revenge Plots" suggests this as a way to balance a nobmle noble protagonist's morality checkbooks, never mind the [[AMillionIsAStatistic number mooks he's mowed through across the plot.]]
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* IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim: "Revenge Plots" suggests this as a way to balance a nobmle protagonist's morality checkbooks, never mind the [[AMillionIsJustAStatistic number mooks he's mowed through across the plot.]]

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* IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim: "Revenge Plots" suggests this as a way to balance a nobmle protagonist's morality checkbooks, never mind the [[AMillionIsJustAStatistic [[AMillionIsAStatistic number mooks he's mowed through across the plot.]]

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* ISurrenderSuckers: Retaliating against one is suggested in "Revenge Plot" as a way to let the protagonist kill the villain without having any weight on their moral conscience, thereby letting the writer have their cake and eat it too.



* IfYouKillHimYouWillBeJustLikeHim: "Revenge Plots" suggests this as a way to balance a nobmle protagonist's morality checkbooks, never mind the [[AMillionIsJustAStatistic number mooks he's mowed through across the plot.]]



* PowerFantasy: "Spies" suggests turning the action thriller spy story into this.

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"Spies" suggests turning the action thriller spy story into this.



** "Revenge Plots" also takes a sarcastic potshot at the genre, implying the poorly done ones are "blind one-sided power fantasy edgefests".



* RRatedOpening: "Killing Off Characters" suggests using this to start your story, even if the tone doesn't match the rest of the story. This results in alienating huge chunks of your audience, as those interested in a light-hearted story will be turned off early on and assume the rest of the work will be just as dark, while those interested in a DarkerAndEdgier story will be pissed that the rest of the story doesn't fit the tone of the beginning.

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"Killing Off Characters" suggests using this to start your story, even if the tone doesn't match the rest of the story. This results in alienating huge chunks of your audience, as those interested in a light-hearted story will be turned off early on and assume the rest of the work will be just as dark, while those interested in a DarkerAndEdgier story will be pissed that the rest of the story doesn't fit the tone of the beginning.beginning.
** The same is suggested for "Revenge Plots" in order to deliver the desired shock value to establish the plot. Bonus points if the author can fetishize the scene by indulging in some of their more deviant personal tastes.


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* ShaggyDogStory: If blatantly hammering in the message that VengeanceFeelsEmpty isn't enough, "Revenge Plots" suggests just killing off most, if not all, of the main characters, through the quest for vengeance even if this is an anticlimactic end.


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* StuffedIntoTheFridge: Suggested as an easy way to establish a motive in "Revenge Plots". He also suggests using this to eliminate a love interest that the author is not interested in developing, checking off two objectives at one move.
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* RelaxOVision: "Revenge Plots" has JP show an image of a cute puppy while encouraging writers to use brutal grimdark violence in depicting the incident that sets off the revenge quest.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: In "Dungeon Master's Guide", JP tells it's important to keep the Hentai Guy player under control and prevent him to inject his fetishes in the game... not because it's making everyone else unconfortable, but because the Hentai Guy fetishes risk to overshadow the Dungeon Master's own fetishes already inserted in the campaign.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: In "Dungeon Master's Guide", JP tells it's important to keep the Hentai Guy player under control and prevent him to inject from injecting his fetishes in the game... not because it's making everyone else unconfortable, uncomfortable, but because the Hentai Guy Guy's fetishes risk to overshadow overshadowing the Dungeon Master's own fetishes already inserted in the campaign.



** In "Zombie Apocalypse" he advises potential writers to decide early on if they have fast or slow zombies, no really, it's a wierdly contentious issue amoung fans.

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** In "Zombie Apocalypse" he advises potential writers to decide early on if they have fast or slow zombies, no really, it's a wierdly weirdly contentious issue amoung fans.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: At one point in "Comic Reliefs", the Chosen One extracts informations from a mook by threatening to make the Comic Relief tell his catchphrase to him over and over.

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* LogicalFallacies: "Propaganda" shows a wide array of fallacies that get employed in online discourse.



* LoveTriangle: Mercilessly mocked.

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* LoveTriangle: Mercilessly mocked.mocked, to the point of becoming a RunningGag in the series.



* MoneyDearBoy: An implied reason why bad writing practices are still being used today is because it drives sales figures for minimal effort.

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* MoneyDearBoy: An implied reason why bad writing practices are still being used today is because it drives up sales figures for minimal effort.
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** In "Isekai" he discusses adding depth to the VanillaProtagonist by having him contribute to slavery. He stumbles a bit, double-checks his script, and the written script does mention that, yes, HerosSlaveHarem is a recurring trope in the isekai genre.

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** In "Isekai" he discusses adding depth to the VanillaProtagonist protagonist by having him contribute to slavery. slavery, by making him look more sympathetic through buying a slave to add to his harem but treating her well rather than most slave owners. He stumbles a bit, [[WhoWritesThisCrap double-checks his script, script]], and the written script does mention that, yes, HerosSlaveHarem is a recurring trope in the isekai genre.

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** In "Zombie Apocalypse" he advises potenial writers to decide early on if they have fast or slow zombies, no really, it's a wierdly contentious issue amoung fans.

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** In "Zombie Apocalypse" he advises potenial potential writers to decide early on if they have fast or slow zombies, no really, it's a wierdly contentious issue amoung fans.fans.
** In "Isekai" he discusses adding depth to the VanillaProtagonist by having him contribute to slavery. He stumbles a bit, double-checks his script, and the written script does mention that, yes, HerosSlaveHarem is a recurring trope in the isekai genre.



** After adding as many "bad boy" features in "Alpha Heroes" for maximum AllGirlsWantBadBoys appeal, he realizes that the protagonist is so sociopathic that he's almost a villain in his own right.



** "Alpha Heroes" uses the trend of common boyfriend characterizations in romance novels to come to the conclusion that popular boyfriend material includes "domestic abuser with control issues", and that the overriding drive to possess and control his love interest verges on creepiness. Other morally questionable actions by the boyfriend are handwaved away because "it's okay because he's attractive", and there's even a NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer over this part of the video.

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** "Alpha Heroes" uses the trend of common boyfriend characterizations in romance novels to come to the conclusion that popular boyfriend material includes "domestic abuser with control issues", and that the overriding drive to possess and control his love interest verges on creepiness. Other morally questionable actions by the boyfriend are handwaved away because "it's "[[ScrewTheRulesImBeautiful it's okay because he's attractive", attractive]]", and there's even a NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer over this part of the video.



* UnsympatheticComedyProtagonist: J.P. himself, as lampshaded in "Characterization":#
--> After all, it`s not like over the course of ''many, many'' TWA episodes I have been characterized as petty, greedy, self-serving. short-sighted, insensitive, mean, ignorant, ruthless and all around about as trustworthy as a [[AcceptableProfessionalTargets used-car salesman]] trying to sell you timeshares on Neptune

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* UnsympatheticComedyProtagonist: J.P. himself, as lampshaded in "Characterization":#
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--> After all, it`s it's not like over the course of ''many, many'' TWA episodes I have been characterized as petty, greedy, self-serving. short-sighted, insensitive, mean, ignorant, ruthless and all around about as trustworthy as a [[AcceptableProfessionalTargets used-car salesman]] trying to sell you timeshares on Neptune

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* AllAnimeIsNaughtyTentacles: In "Dungeon Master's Guide", reading any edgy manga will cause an [[DarkerAndEdgier Edgelord]] to become "The {{Hentai}} Guy", who constantly makes the other players uncomfortable by injecting their fetishes at arkward places.

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* AllAnimeIsNaughtyTentacles: In "Dungeon Master's Guide", reading any edgy manga will cause an [[DarkerAndEdgier Edgelord]] to become "The {{Hentai}} Guy", who constantly makes the other players uncomfortable by injecting their fetishes at arkward awkward places.



* DisposableWoman: "Spies" defies the RunningGag of adding a LoveTriangle in the Power Fantasy variant of SpyFiction. Instead, it recommends a Love Black Hole, which kills off every LoveInterest to make way for a new one in each sequel.

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* DisposableWoman: "Spies" defies the RunningGag of adding a LoveTriangle in the Power Fantasy variant of SpyFiction. Instead, it recommends a [[UpToEleven Love Black Hole, Hole]], which kills off every LoveInterest to make way for a new one in each sequel.



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* FlatCharacter:FlatCharacter: A frequent suggestion is that even the most plot-central characters should have no depth or personality beyond what is needed for the story.



** In "Alpha Heroes" the lack of characterization for the protagonist is veiled in mystery, which gets exploited as the reader would just project whatever they want to fill in the gaps.



* FreudianExcuse: "Alpha Heroes" suggests giving the protagonist a tragic backstory to justify their obsessive behavior towards the heroine.

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* FreudianExcuse: "Alpha Heroes" suggests giving the protagonist a tragic backstory to justify their obsessive behavior towards the heroine. "Why explain behavior when we can excuse behavior?"



* LoveRedeems: "Alpha Heroes" suggests that no matter how sociopathic the protagonist can be, his relationship with the heroine will be able to correct these flaws, even those which would, in real life, require a lot of professional support. In fact, as the love interest as an embodiment of WishFulfillment is so special that she can induce a thorough behavioral change in even the most morally bankrupt of boyfriends.



* MomentKiller: "Love Interests" recommends using one of these to keep the UnresolvedSexualTension going.

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* MomentKiller: "Love Interests" recommends using one of these to avoid making a relationship official and keep the UnresolvedSexualTension going.going.
* MoneyDearBoy: An implied reason why bad writing practices are still being used today is because it drives sales figures for minimal effort.



* MrFanservice: Strongly advised in "Alpha Heroes", to the point that it's reccommended that their bare, well-muscled torso should take up the entire book cover.

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* MrFanservice: Strongly advised in "Alpha Heroes", to the point that it's reccommended that their [[FemaleGaze bare, well-muscled torso should take up the entire book cover.cover]].



** "Mary Sue" suggests that the protagonist should have as many traits as possible to make her special and justify her array of powers, ending up with a [[TooManyHalves half-dragon half-vampire half-angel half-elven and half-Vulcan]] princess.



* PurpleProse: "Alpha Heroes" goes into excessive detail about the protagonist's appearance.

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* PurpleProse: "Alpha Heroes" goes into suggests using excessive detail about for the protagonist's appearance.appearance to highlight his position in the story.



* RomanticPlotTumor: InUniverse. Beaubien points out many promising story ideas devolve into romance, especially the dreaded LoveTriangle.

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* RomanticPlotTumor: InUniverse. RomanticPlotTumor:
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Beaubien points out many promising story ideas devolve into romance, or at least shoehorn a romantic subplot somewhere, especially where the dreaded LoveTriangle.LoveTriangle is involved.
** In "Love Interests", one of his suggestions involves exploiting UnresolvedSexualTension to excess to prolong the romance, causing the focal couple to become StrangledByTheRedString in the process. The relationship is described as "an ivy that strangles everything around it as it takes over the story."



* StandardFemaleGrabArea: "Love Interests" claims that a simple arm grab can disable even the fiercest and most competent ActionGirl.

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* StandardFemaleGrabArea: "Love Interests" claims that a simple arm grab can disable even the fiercest and most competent ActionGirl.ActionGirl to allow the villain to interrupt a relationship's development.



** "Alpha Heroes" uses the trend of common boyfriend characterizations in romance novels to come to the conclusion that popular boyfriend material includes "domestic abuser with control issues", and that the overriding drive to possess and control his love interest verges on creepiness. Other morally questionable actions by the boyfriend are handwaved away because "it's okay because he's attractive", and there's even a NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer over this part of the video.



** "Cosmic Horror' also discusses how for as critically acclaimed the writings of Creator/HPLovecraft are, he was also extremely racist and xenophobic and it's shown in some of his writing, and [[EveryoneHasStandards even in-character JP says that this is the one Lovecraftian trope you should avoid at all costs]].

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** "Cosmic Horror' Horror" also discusses how for as critically acclaimed the writings of Creator/HPLovecraft are, he was also extremely racist and xenophobic and it's shown in some of his writing, and [[EveryoneHasStandards even in-character JP says that this is the one Lovecraftian trope you should avoid at all costs]].

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* AppliedPhlebotinum: Any fantastical material or energy source that can defy physics to make the setting's technology work in the name of RuleOfCool qualifies. JP calls this convenient material "Contrivium".



* SquareCubeLaw: "Alien Ecosystems" recommends flat-out ignoring it.

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* SquareCubeLaw: "Alien Ecosystems" recommends flat-out ignoring Whenever the topic at hand involves something big, like a giant alien organism or giant robot, he runs into this law, and frequently comes up with a way to HandWave it, or just advises the viewer to outright ignore it.
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* HerosSlaveHarem: DiscussedTrope in the "Isekai" episode, when he discusses harems. He breaks character in shock when he reads that this is a popular trope in his script, and then lampshades the creepiness of the protagonist supporting slavery instead of heroically ending it.
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* LegionOfDoom: The Dark Lord, the Emperor, and the Baron all form one in the episode about villains. They are primarily lead by the Baron.
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** That Guy: A filthy, dumb, and obnoxious nerd whose RP behavior is basically the combination of all the drawbacks of the previous ones without their saving graces. Their typical character is a overweight man dressed like JP, with a neckbeard and a fedora, standing on top of a mountain of Cheetos while raising a sword toward the sky. This character doesn't reappear latter. In Tabletop RPG terminology, "That Guy" refers to a player whose behavior (both in the game itself, and their non-RP interaction with the rest of the group) ruins the fun of the other players. Here, in true ''Terrible Writing Advice'' fashion, JP describes That Guy as the most desirable player profile.

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** That Guy: A filthy, dumb, and obnoxious nerd whose RP behavior is basically the combination of all the drawbacks of the previous ones without their saving graces. Their typical character is a overweight man dressed like JP, with a neckbeard and a fedora, standing on top of a mountain of Cheetos while raising a sword toward the sky. This character doesn't reappear latter. In Tabletop RPG terminology, "That Guy" refers to a player whose behavior (both in the game itself, and their non-RP interaction with the rest of the group) ruins the fun of the other players. Here, in true ''Terrible Writing Advice'' fashion, JP describes That Guy as the most desirable player profile.
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* SlowLaser: Laser guns are discussed in "Science Fiction Weapons", which says they're easy to dodge despite moving at the speed reof light and very inaccurate despite having laser-precision shot grouping.

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* SlowLaser: Laser guns are discussed in "Science Fiction Weapons", which says they're easy to dodge despite moving at the speed reof of light and very inaccurate despite having laser-precision shot grouping.

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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: The "Grimdark" episode notes that the fantasy genre is perfect for a grimdark tone as any criticism towards the story can be ignored by saying the grimdark setting is historically accurate, ignoring the fact that a fantasy world would be a ConstructedWorld and how even the historical accuracy claim can be questionable at times.

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The "Grimdark" episode notes that the fantasy genre is perfect for a grimdark tone as any criticism towards the story can be ignored by saying the grimdark setting is historically accurate, ignoring the fact that a fantasy world would be a ConstructedWorld and how even the historical accuracy claim can be questionable at times.times.
** Defied in "Isekai", as JP advises you to ignore this. A writer could use the modern values of the protagonist and have them clash with the values of the fantasy world they've been transported to, such as the existence of slavery. However, that distracts from the power fantasy and harem aspects of the plot.



** At the end of "Isekai", JP tries to [[LightNovel/InAnotherWorldWithMySmartphone use his cell phone to get ahead in another world]]. However, he gets no signal because there's no infrastructure to support cell phones in this world.



* SlowLaser: Laser guns are discussed in "Science Fiction Weapons", which says they're easy to dodge despite moving at the speed of light and very inaccurate despite having laser-precision shot grouping.

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* SlowLaser: Laser guns are discussed in "Science Fiction Weapons", which says they're easy to dodge despite moving at the speed of reof light and very inaccurate despite having laser-precision shot grouping.



** In "Isekai", JP points out that a writer who isn't Japanese might have trouble writing a Japanese protagonist. However, he then points out that Isekai protagonists are so generic that their nationality and culture are interchangeable.



* VillainHasAPoint: {{Defied}} in his "Environmentalism" video, since giving the villains a reasonable argument would undermine the protagonist's own arguments. Instead, he suggests making sure no one in the evil corporation is smart enough to realize that they need resources to make products, which allows them to employ people and grow the economy.

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{{Defied}} in his "Environmentalism" video, since giving the villains a reasonable argument would undermine the protagonist's own arguments. Instead, he suggests making sure no one in the evil corporation is smart enough to realize that they need resources to make products, which allows them to employ people and grow the economy.economy.
** In "Isekai", the stock baron entices the Isekai protagonist to join his kingdom by giving him a harem of his own, pointing out that he can actually sleep with the girls in this harem. They also won't smack him for any AccidentalPervert moments like the girls in his current harem.
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** "Alpha Heroes" goes into detail about where the concept of AlphaAndBetaWolves originates, and mentions how people still believe in this idea despite it being [[ScienceMarchesOn dated science]]. It's mentioned that the pack of wolves that expressed this dynamic were captive wolves, and that wild packs have very different dynamics, more akin to a family. He even mentions how L. David Mech, the scientist responsible for this idea, is frustrated that his research popularized the idea of the alpha male, especially as further research over the years have proven him wrong.

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** "Alpha Heroes" goes into detail about where the concept of AlphaAndBetaWolves originates, and mentions how people still believe in this idea despite it being [[ScienceMarchesOn dated outdated science]]. It's mentioned that the pack of wolves that expressed this dynamic were captive wolves, and that wild packs have very different dynamics, more akin to a family. He even mentions how L. David Mech, the scientist responsible for this idea, is frustrated that his research popularized the idea of the alpha male, especially as further research over the years have proven him wrong.wrong.
** In the comments section of the "Antiheroes" video, JP pinned a comment from himself saying why he made the stock antihero resemble Guts, the protagonist of Manga/{{Berserk}}. His stock antihero is what he figured would happen if someone made a Guts {{expy}}, but only focused on the surface level elements of his character and ignored the deeper themes of Berserk.



*** Subverted in "Antiheroes". Despite the AntiHero character bearing a strong resemblance to [[{{Manga/Berserk}} Guts]], Beaubien mentioned in the comments section that it was intended as a homage and not as a potshot.

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*** ** Subverted in "Antiheroes". Despite the AntiHero character bearing a strong resemblance to [[{{Manga/Berserk}} Guts]], Beaubien mentioned in the comments section that it was intended as a homage and not as a potshot.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The focus of "Noble Houses".

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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Recommends this in "Killing Off Characters", bringing up how things will be really be awkward if the redeemed villian stays alive.
-->'''Dark Lord:''' Hey guys! Remember that time I burned down your hometown and slaughtered all of your friends and family? Good times!

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