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Because this makes more sense than the above. If the humans and Keidran can actually crossbreed with each other, it becomes a whole lot easier for them to see each other as "people" and not "animals". At the very least, it means some remnants of the Keidran race will survive, through their half-breed offspring, if the worst comes to the worst.
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Because this makes more sense than the above. If the humans and Keidran can actually crossbreed with each other, it becomes a whole lot easier for them to see each other as "people" and not "animals". At the very least, it means some remnants of the Keidran race will survive, through their half-breed offspring, if the worst comes to the worst.
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* The only of the masks the comic has given any real information about is Neutral. Since Neutral is the god mask in charge of Keidrans, and is most likely not involved with human and Basitan issues, so whether there was were ''ever'' a similar prohibition for humans and Basitans is doubtful.
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[[WMG: related to above. Overuse of Dark Manna will turn Trace into an {{undead}} monster.]]
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[[WMG: related to above. Overuse of Dark Manna will turn Trace into an {{undead}} [[TheUndead undead]] monster.]]
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[[WMG: Trace developing his Evil Smoke Hallucination is actually a ''good'' thing]]
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** Not if he DID manage to perfect that anti-aging magic he wanted to make for Flora
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** Not if he DID manage to perfect that anti-aging magic he wanted to make for Flora
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[[WMG: Overuse of Black Mana will turn Trace into a Keidran]]
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*** Jossed, jossed, and jossed. Turned out that the whole chapter was to show Eric's GoodIsNotNice side and [[spoiler:led to a brutal "WhatTheHellHero" verbal beat down to Eric by Kat and will lead to Mike, Evals, and Kat getting their freedom.]]
[[WMG: The Law Catching Up]]
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*** Jossed, jossed, and jossed. Turned out that the whole chapter was to show Eric's GoodIsNotNice side and [[spoiler:led to a brutal "WhatTheHellHero" verbal beat down to Eric by Kat and will lead to Mike, Evals, and Kat getting their freedom.]]
freedom]].
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[[WMG: General Alabaster killed Keith's Mother, out of scorned jealousy]]
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[[WMG: Bisexuality is not uncommon among Basitin]]
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* [[spoiler: {{Jossed}} see Maddie's relationship below.]]
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* [[spoiler: Confirmed see [[http://twokinds.keenspot.com/archive.php?p=821 page 821]].]]
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* [[spoiler: Confirmed see [[http://twokinds.keenspot.com/archive.php?p=821 page 821]].]]
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[[WMG: Neutral has removed the restriction on {{Half Human Hybrid}}s as a whole]]
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[[WMG: As an addendum to the above, Neutral has also made Keidran/Basitan crossbreeding viable, and/or has allowed for Human/Bastian crossbreeding]]
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[[WMG: As an addendum to the above, Neutral has also made Keidran/Basitan crossbreeding viable, and/or has allowed for Human/Bastian crossbreeding]]crossbreeding.]]
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* It's also possible that there was simply ''no need'' to apply such a restriction. For one thing, Basitans are both the least numerous of the three non-draconic species and the most isolated. Given Basitan opinion of different Basitan ethnic groups, ''let alone'' other races, [[InterspeciesRomance individuals such as Keith]] are very rare.
[[WMG: Roderick's Weapon is Meant to be Used as a Guillotine]]
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* It's also possible that there was simply ''no need'' to apply such a restriction. For one thing, Basitans are both the least numerous of the three non-draconic species and the most isolated. Given Basitan opinion of different Basitan ethnic groups, ''let alone'' other races, [[InterspeciesRomance individuals such as Keith]] are very rare.
rare in the extreme.
* Neutral is the god in charge of Keidrans, and is most likely not involved with human and Basitan issues, so whether there was ''ever'' a similar prohibition for humans and Basitans is doubtful.
[[WMG: Roderick'sWeapon weapon is Meant meant to be Used used as a Guillotine]]guillotine.]]
* Neutral is the god in charge of Keidrans, and is most likely not involved with human and Basitan issues, so whether there was ''ever'' a similar prohibition for humans and Basitans is doubtful.
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[[WMG:Raine's magic shackle is killing Natani]]
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[[WMG: The illusion Laura actually was Laura, for a short time]]
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[[WMG: The illusion magic is disrupted if the hearts desire changes mid-spell]]
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* This is hinted at several times, including page 1098.
[[WMG: Trace will do battle with his dark shadow self, aided by avatars of his friends]]
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* This The wall still being functional is hinted at several times, including page times on pages 863, 870, 899, and 1098.
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[[WMG: Keith will undergo a frightening FaceHeelTurn just like Trace did in the past]]
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[[WMG: The final Templar Master will be modeled after and ''voiced by'' '''Markiplier''']]
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[[WMG: Trace's wanted poster will be updated to "''Mostly'' Harmless"]]
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[[WMG: Natani would be willing to help Kathrin have children]]
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[[WMG: "Database Error" is a herb]]
No, I mean both ways. As he says, his name is "like the plant", and he's a [[https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Herb herb.]]
[[WMG: Templar!Trace is making a return]]
No, I mean both ways. As he says, his name is "like the plant", and he's a [[https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Herb herb.]]
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[[WMG: "Database Error" is a herb]]
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No, I mean both ways. As he says, his name is "like the plant", and he'sa an [[https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Herb herb.]]
[[WMG: Templar!Trace is making areturn]]return.]]
No, I mean both ways. As he says, his name is "like the plant", and he's
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[[WMG: Trace's mad-scientist machine was meant to [[spoiler:resurrect his unborn daughter]]]]
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[[WMG: Trace's mad-scientist machine was meant to [[spoiler:resurrect his unborn daughter]]]]daughter]].]]
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* It's also possible that there was simply ''no need'' to apply such a restriction, given Basitan opinion of different Basitan ethnic groups, ''let alone'' other races.
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* It's also possible that there was simply ''no need'' to apply such a restriction, given restriction. For one thing, Basitans are both the least numerous of the three non-draconic species and the most isolated. Given Basitan opinion of different Basitan ethnic groups, ''let alone'' other races.
races, [[InterspeciesRomance individuals such as Keith]] are very rare.
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* Jossed: pages 1124 through 1126 ''specifically'' mention that the ritual is meant to resurrect Saria.
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There's no law against returning to life what never lived...
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[[WMG: Templar!Trace is making a return]]
The [[http://twokinds.keenspot.com/comic/1099/ title page for chapter 21]] (the current chapter as of this theory) heavily features what appears to be a fully red-headed Trace Legacy. The only time we see him get red hair is when he reverts to his past self (as opposed to just losing control due to Black Magic, which turns his hair dark). Combined with the fact that his mansion is apparently [[spoiler:enacting old plans of his on autopilot, including kidnapping Maren in what looks like an attempt to recreate his dead wife]], and the fact that Reni looks shocked and appalled while Rose looks either resigned or determined (both suggesting she's not as surprised by what she's seeing, and she probably has more experience with the old Trace than any other member of the cast)... doesn't look good.
The [[http://twokinds.keenspot.com/comic/1099/ title page for chapter 21]] (the current chapter as of this theory) heavily features what appears to be a fully red-headed Trace Legacy. The only time we see him get red hair is when he reverts to his past self (as opposed to just losing control due to Black Magic, which turns his hair dark). Combined with the fact that his mansion is apparently [[spoiler:enacting old plans of his on autopilot, including kidnapping Maren in what looks like an attempt to recreate his dead wife]], and the fact that Reni looks shocked and appalled while Rose looks either resigned or determined (both suggesting she's not as surprised by what she's seeing, and she probably has more experience with the old Trace than any other member of the cast)... doesn't look good.
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[[WMG: Springboarding from above: Bisexuality is the Keidran norm.]]
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* It's also possible that there was simply ''no need'' to apply such a restriction, given Basitan opinion of different Basitan ethnic groups, ''let alone'' other races.
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No, I mean both ways. As he says, his name is "like the plant", and he's a [[https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Herb herb.]]
No, I mean both ways. As he says, his name is "like the plant", and he's a [[https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Herb herb.]]
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Because who ''doesn't'' want to hear YouTube celebrity / the author's ''brother'' Mark Fischbach play the role of an evil Templar Torture Master?
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Because who ''doesn't'' want to hear YouTube Website/YouTube celebrity / the author's ''brother'' Mark Fischbach play the role of an evil Templar Torture Master?
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*** Possibly supported by the dragon-like statue appearing in Comic 1048 and 1049. The hand seems to have a lot of visual emphasis, taking up part of the first frame. It does resemble Trace's hand under the glove somewhat.
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[[WMG: Natani would be willing to help Kathrin have children]]
Kathrin is infertile, and Natani is a friend of hers. I could see Natani offering his unwanted uterus in order for Kathrin to have her own children in some way. One way could be through a transplant, transferring Natani's healthy organs to Kathrin. Another could simply be Natani acting as a surrogate (especially if Natani's original gender identity comes back, as the comic might be hinting).
Kathrin is infertile, and Natani is a friend of hers. I could see Natani offering his unwanted uterus in order for Kathrin to have her own children in some way. One way could be through a transplant, transferring Natani's healthy organs to Kathrin. Another could simply be Natani acting as a surrogate (especially if Natani's original gender identity comes back, as the comic might be hinting).
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[[WMG: Manna crystals are [[VideoGame/StarCraft Khaydarin crystals]] and Dark Manna is The Void, tainted by the {{Cthulhu|Mythos}} from ''The Voice In The Darkness'', making Dark Manna crystals Argus Gems.]]
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[[WMG: Manna crystals are [[VideoGame/StarCraft Khaydarin crystals]] and Dark Manna is The Void, tainted by the {{Cthulhu|Mythos}} Franchise/{{Cthulhu|Mythos}} from ''The Voice In The Darkness'', making Dark Manna crystals Argus Gems.]]
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[[WMG: The whole TwoKinds world is a [[TheMetaverse virtual reality]].]]
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[[WMG: The whole TwoKinds Webcomic/TwoKinds world is a [[TheMetaverse virtual reality]].]]
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There are a handful of Webcomic/{{Yosh}} comics where the two guest-starred. And while these comics aren't stated to be canon, neither are they stated to be non-canon. The fact that no mention of the characters visiting another world has been made in TwoKinds yet points to the visits being yet to happen in the TwoKinds series.
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There are a handful of Webcomic/{{Yosh}} comics where the two guest-starred. And while these comics aren't stated to be canon, neither are they stated to be non-canon. The fact that no mention of the characters visiting another world has been made in TwoKinds Webcomic/TwoKinds yet points to the visits being yet to happen in the TwoKinds [=TwoKinds=] series.
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* I admit that I don't read that many furry comics (really just these two), but Yosh seems to be like an UrbanFantasy version of TwoKinds. Humanoid animals walk as freely among humans as FantasticRacism will allow them to, a small handful of people can use magic, and every once in a while a fantastic creature that doesn't fit the regular races shows up, like a dragon or a troll. In the future, TheMagicGoesAway, as the Keidran and the Bastilin interbreed with the humans, they begin to look just like humans. But when TheMagicComesBack, their latent Keidran DNA resurfaces, creating the Chimera.
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* I admit that I don't read that many furry comics (really just these two), but Yosh seems to be like an UrbanFantasy version of TwoKinds.[=TwoKinds=]. Humanoid animals walk as freely among humans as FantasticRacism will allow them to, a small handful of people can use magic, and every once in a while a fantastic creature that doesn't fit the regular races shows up, like a dragon or a troll. In the future, TheMagicGoesAway, as the Keidran and the Bastilin interbreed with the humans, they begin to look just like humans. But when TheMagicComesBack, their latent Keidran DNA resurfaces, creating the Chimera.
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[[WMG: Manna crystals are [[StarCraft Khaydarin crystals]] and Dark Manna is The Void, tainted by the {{Cthulhu|Mythos}} from ''The Voice In The Darkness'', making Dark Manna crystals Argus Gems.]]
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[[WMG: Manna crystals are [[StarCraft [[VideoGame/StarCraft Khaydarin crystals]] and Dark Manna is The Void, tainted by the {{Cthulhu|Mythos}} from ''The Voice In The Darkness'', making Dark Manna crystals Argus Gems.]]
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** Lynn and Maddie dodged a bullet (after stopping Keith from getting on Eric's burning ship to find Natani) thanks to Natani and Kat reaching the surface in time before Keith could suffer another breakdown. However, with Lynn reminding him that Keith is bond by his Basitin Ambassador status, tensions between them the two have risen slightly.
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** Lynn and Maddie dodged a bullet (after stopping Keith from getting on Eric's burning ship to find Natani) thanks to Natani and Kat reaching the surface in time before Keith could suffer another breakdown. However, with Lynn reminding him that Keith is bond bound by his Basitin Ambassador status, tensions between them the two have risen slightly.
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** Lynn and Maddie dodged a bullet (after stopping Keith from getting on Eric's burning ship to find Natani) thanks to Natani and Kat reaching the surface in time before Keith could suffer another breakdown. If anything, he may only trust Lynn and Maddie a little less.
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** Lynn and Maddie dodged a bullet (after stopping Keith from getting on Eric's burning ship to find Natani) thanks to Natani and Kat reaching the surface in time before Keith could suffer another breakdown. If anything, he may only trust However, with Lynn and Maddie a little less.
reminding him that Keith is bond by his Basitin Ambassador status, tensions between them the two have risen slightly.
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** I have trouble imagining how a character in a web comic could have need for a Voice Actor, given the nature of the medium, but it would still be cool if there was a character modeled after Mark. It'd be a good collaboration between the Fischbach brothers.
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** I have trouble imagining how a character in a web comic could have need for a Voice Actor, given the nature of the medium, but it would still be cool if there was a character modeled after Mark. It'd be a good collaboration between the Fischbach brothers.
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Both as a BrickJoke to being dismissed "harmless" at the start and a reference to Earth's description in ''Literature/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy''.
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Both as a BrickJoke to Trace being as dismissed "harmless" at the start and a reference to Earth's description in ''Literature/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy''.
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[[WMG: Trace developing his [[EnemyWithout Evil Smoke Hallucination]] is actually a ''good'' thing]]
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[[WMG: Trace developing his [[EnemyWithout Evil Smoke Hallucination]] Hallucination is actually a ''good'' thing]]
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[[WMG: Manna crystals are [[StarCraft Khaydarin crystals]] and Dark Manna is The Void, tainted by the [[Creator/HPLovecraft Cthulhu]] from ''The Voice In The Darkness'', making Dark Manna crystals Argus Gems.]]
I mean, come on, ''concentrated magical energy?'' That happens to be electric blue? The only thing missing is a [[{{Precursors}} Xel'naga]] temple. The Great Old One sleeping in the core of the world is not fully awake, so his foul presence merely drives Void users mad, rather than [[DemonicPossession Taking them over]].
I mean, come on, ''concentrated magical energy?'' That happens to be electric blue? The only thing missing is a [[{{Precursors}} Xel'naga]] temple. The Great Old One sleeping in the core of the world is not fully awake, so his foul presence merely drives Void users mad, rather than [[DemonicPossession Taking them over]].
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[[WMG: Manna crystals are [[StarCraft Khaydarin crystals]] and Dark Manna is The Void, tainted by the [[Creator/HPLovecraft Cthulhu]] {{Cthulhu|Mythos}} from ''The Voice In The Darkness'', making Dark Manna crystals Argus Gems.]]
I mean, come on, ''concentrated magical energy?'' That happens to be electric blue? The only thing missing is a [[{{Precursors}} Xel'naga]] temple. The Great Old One sleeping in the core of the world is not fully awake, so his foul presence merely drives Void users mad, rather than[[DemonicPossession Taking them over]].
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I mean, come on, ''concentrated magical energy?'' That happens to be electric blue? The only thing missing is a [[{{Precursors}} Xel'naga]] temple. The Great Old One sleeping in the core of the world is not fully awake, so his foul presence merely drives Void users mad, rather than
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** The Masks are [[EarthAllAlong human players]] from [[RealLife Real Life]].
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** The Masks are [[EarthAllAlong human players]] from [[RealLife Real Life]].
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There are a handful of Webcomic/{{Yosh}} comics where the two guest-stared.guest-starred. And while these comics aren't stated to be canon, neither are they stated to be non-canon. The fact that no mention of the characters visiting another world has been made in TwoKinds yet points to the visits being yet to happen in the TwoKinds series.
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Dark manna ''is'' more-or-less {{necromancy}}, and TheCorruption to boot. Flesh turns black in the end stages of decomposition. We'll probably see the black parts [[BodyHorror burst and liquefy]], then turn into [[DemBones skeleton bits.]]
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Dark manna ''is'' more-or-less {{necromancy}}, and TheCorruption to boot. Flesh turns black in the end stages of decomposition. We'll probably see the black parts [[BodyHorror burst and liquefy]], liquefy, then turn into [[DemBones skeleton bits.]]
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** Yeah, that'll end well... How do they intend to explain to all the port authorities why a bunch of Keidrans are suddenly running the known Slave Trading Vessel? Owned by a human? Even if that wasn't a problem, [[WomanScorned Kat might sooner pitch them over the side then watch Eric get killed.]]
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** Yeah, that'll end well... How do they intend to explain to all the port authorities why a bunch of Keidrans are suddenly running the known Slave Trading Vessel? Owned by a human? Even if that wasn't a problem, [[WomanScorned Kat might sooner pitch them over the side then watch Eric get killed.]]
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[[WMG: General Alabaster killed Keith's Mother, out of [[LoveMakesYouCrazy scorned jealousy]].]]
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[[WMG: As an addendum to the above, Neutral has also made [[NonhumanHumanoidHybrid Keidran/Basitan crossbreeding viable]], and/or has allowed for Human/Basitan crossbreeding]]
If the Keidran can cross with both humans and Basitan, well, that furthers the logic behind letting humans and Keidran bear children together. And if all three races can interbreed at will, that's one way to eventually promote peace.
If the Keidran can cross with both humans and Basitan, well, that furthers the logic behind letting humans and Keidran bear children together. And if all three races can interbreed at will, that's one way to eventually promote peace.
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[[WMG: As an addendum to the above, Neutral has also made [[NonhumanHumanoidHybrid Keidran/Basitan crossbreeding viable]], viable, and/or has allowed for Human/Basitan Human/Bastian crossbreeding]]
If the Keidran can cross with both humans andBasitan, Bastian, well, that furthers the logic behind letting humans and Keidran bear children together. And if all three races can interbreed at will, that's one way to eventually promote peace.
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The magic is stated to show the target's hearts desire, and Keith's desire was to have Laura. Yet, even when told this, he doesn't even consider it, despite his usual tendencies towards being TheStraightMan of the group. His subconcious, however, does. When "Laura" stops acting like an illusion designed to kill someone, and starts acting like Laura, is the moment that Keith's heart, not his mind, changes: His desire isn't Laura, but the [[ObviousRulePatch ''real'']] Laura.
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The magic is stated to show the target's hearts heart's desire, and Keith's desire was to have Laura. Yet, even when told this, he doesn't even consider it, despite his usual tendencies towards being TheStraightMan of the group. His subconcious, subconscious, however, does. When "Laura" stops acting like an illusion designed to kill someone, and starts acting like Laura, is the moment that Keith's heart, not his mind, changes: His desire isn't Laura, but the [[ObviousRulePatch ''real'']] ''real'' Laura.
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Why, Natani of course! An interspecies rom-dram-[[WhamEpisode wham]]-com will naturally have some interspecies [[ShipTease Shipteasing]], plus it helps to explain when "Laura" looks at Natani in the way (Natani thinks) she does, despite the spell just being an illusion.
[[WMG: The titular Riftwall of the Riftwall Tavern is still functional-you just don't want to go to its [[{{Hell}} new location]].]]
The Riftwall's black coloring is due to it now leading to the source of all [[BlackMagic black mana]], ie the LighterAndSofter [[TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy Immaterium]]. Nobody's noticed, because none of Adira's customers are dumb enough to go through the black evil-looking mirror with odd reflections, or she's smart enough to wall it off.
[[WMG: The titular Riftwall of the Riftwall Tavern is still functional-you just don't want to go to its [[{{Hell}} new location]].]]
The Riftwall's black coloring is due to it now leading to the source of all [[BlackMagic black mana]], ie the LighterAndSofter [[TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy Immaterium]]. Nobody's noticed, because none of Adira's customers are dumb enough to go through the black evil-looking mirror with odd reflections, or she's smart enough to wall it off.
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Why, Natani of course! An interspecies rom-dram-[[WhamEpisode wham]]-com rom-dram-wham-com will naturally have some interspecies [[ShipTease Shipteasing]], Shipteasing, plus it helps to explain when "Laura" looks at Natani in the way (Natani thinks) she does, despite the spell just being an illusion.
[[WMG: The titular Riftwall of the Riftwall Tavern is still functional-you just don't want to go to its[[{{Hell}} new location]].location.]]
The Riftwall's black coloring is due to it now leading to the source of all[[BlackMagic black mana]], mana, ie the LighterAndSofter [[TabletopGame/WarhammerFantasy Immaterium]]. Nobody's noticed, because none of Adira's customers are dumb enough to go through the black evil-looking mirror with odd reflections, or she's smart enough to wall it off.
[[WMG: The titular Riftwall of the Riftwall Tavern is still functional-you just don't want to go to its
The Riftwall's black coloring is due to it now leading to the source of all
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Considering [[TraumaCongaLine all the suffering and despair]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast he was forced to endure since childhood]] (e.g. the [[AnyoneCanDie untimely deaths]] of [[SelfMadeOrphan his family]] and [[LoveHurts closest friends]]) as well as the stress of desperately protecting Natani (who was comatose thanks to Zen's incompetence), Keith [[FreudianExcuse may rightfully]] [[SanitySlippage go gradually]] [[MoralEventHorizon insane]].
* Things may not end well should the humans and/or Tiger Keidran of Edinmire or Prince Clovis [[TemptingFate get too close to Natani]]...
* Things may not end well should the humans and/or Tiger Keidran of Edinmire or Prince Clovis [[TemptingFate get too close to Natani]]...
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Considering [[TraumaCongaLine all the suffering and despair]] [[DarkAndTroubledPast despair he was forced to endure since childhood]] childhood (e.g. the [[AnyoneCanDie untimely deaths]] deaths of [[SelfMadeOrphan his family]] family and [[LoveHurts closest friends]]) friends) as well as the stress of desperately protecting Natani (who was comatose thanks to Zen's incompetence), Keith [[FreudianExcuse may rightfully]] [[SanitySlippage rightfully go gradually]] [[MoralEventHorizon insane]].
gradually insane.
* Things may not end well should the humans and/or Tiger Keidran of Edinmire or Prince Clovis[[TemptingFate get too close to Natani]]...Natani...
* Things may not end well should the humans and/or Tiger Keidran of Edinmire or Prince Clovis
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** And God help [[TheBusCameBack the returning]] [[AristocratsAreEvil Prince Clovis]] should he dare [[ItsPersonal threaten Natani and/or Zen again]]...
* If Kat were to get too intimate with Natani, she may find herself in ''deep water'' [[NotWhatItLooksLike should Keith ever find out]]...
* If Kat were to get too intimate with Natani, she may find herself in ''deep water'' [[NotWhatItLooksLike should Keith ever find out]]...
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** And God help [[TheBusCameBack the returning]] [[AristocratsAreEvil returning Prince Clovis]] Clovis should he dare [[ItsPersonal threaten Natani and/or Zen again]]...
again...
* If Kat were to get too intimate with Natani, she may find herself in ''deep water''[[NotWhatItLooksLike should Keith ever find out]]...out...
* If Kat were to get too intimate with Natani, she may find herself in ''deep water''
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** And he will use Mark's signature "Heellloo everybody" introduction.
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** And he will use Mark's signature "Heellloo everybody" every one" introduction.
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Both as a BrickJoke to being dismissed "harmless" at the start and a reference to Earth's description in ''Literature/TheHitchHikersGuideToTheGalaxy''.
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Both as a BrickJoke to being dismissed "harmless" at the start and a reference to Earth's description in ''Literature/TheHitchHikersGuideToTheGalaxy''.
''Literature/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy''.
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** And he will use Mark's signature "Heellloo everybody" introduction.
[[WMG: Trace's wanted poster will be updated to "''Mostly'' Harmless"]]
Both as a BrickJoke to being dismissed "harmless" at the start and a reference to Earth's description in ''Literature/TheHitchHikersGuideToTheGalaxy''.
[[WMG: Trace's wanted poster will be updated to "''Mostly'' Harmless"]]
Both as a BrickJoke to being dismissed "harmless" at the start and a reference to Earth's description in ''Literature/TheHitchHikersGuideToTheGalaxy''.
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** My money's on dragon or a dragon like Keidran. Trace has had a recurring association with them. He has/had a close relationship with Nora, he apparently entertained guests of "unusual size", which only includes dragons so fat, and there was that one time he accidentally ''created'' one. Plus, that dragon lady implied it was possible. In addition to ''that'', it was mentioned in the same scene that dragons are considered symbols of power, which Trace has no shortage of. More than any other human in his world, apparently.
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[[WMG: Trace developing his [[EnemyWithout Evil Smoke Hallucination]] is actually a ''good'' thing]]
Or more specifically, it is a step up. Previously Trace would have occasional out of character moments as his memories surfaced, including referring to Flora as an animal, volunteering her to pose for Eric, saying a festival should be held in his honor instead of the keidrans’, and even red thought bubbles early on. His memories were making him into a bad person. However, now he sees such thoughts as alien and evil enough to be a separate entity. Is it still going to be a problem? Of course. But now it’s an EnemyWithin that can be recognized and fought. Improvement.
Or more specifically, it is a step up. Previously Trace would have occasional out of character moments as his memories surfaced, including referring to Flora as an animal, volunteering her to pose for Eric, saying a festival should be held in his honor instead of the keidrans’, and even red thought bubbles early on. His memories were making him into a bad person. However, now he sees such thoughts as alien and evil enough to be a separate entity. Is it still going to be a problem? Of course. But now it’s an EnemyWithin that can be recognized and fought. Improvement.
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Return of Prince Clovis update
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* Things may not end well should the humans and/or Tiger Keidran of Edinmire [[TemptingFate get too close to Natani]]...
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* Things may not end well should the humans and/or Tiger Keidran of Edinmire or Prince Clovis [[TemptingFate get too close to Natani]]...
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** And God help [[TheBusCameBack the returning]] [[AristocratsAreEvil Prince Clovis]] should he dare [[ItsPersonal threaten Natani and/or Zen again]]...
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Keith Insanity Update due to Chapter 18 cliffhanger
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** When Keith and the others were cornered by the Edinmire Guard, Trace and Lynn were able to defuse the situation just in time. And now, they may have a few tricks up their sleeves for the next chapter. However, Keiren and his men may not be lucky forever...
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Update for Today's Comic (Jossing Keith Hurting Lynn and/or Maddie)
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* There's even a chance of him going insane for the wrong reason(s). For example, with Eric's ship exploding, he believes that Natani hasn't evacuated yet and was killed in the explosion. Thus, he may lash out on Lynn and Maddie for holding him back. He may regret doing so after seeing Natani is alive.
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Keith Insanity Theory Update due to New Comic Page
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* There's even a chance of him going insane for the wrong reason(s). For example, with Eric's ship exploding, he believes that Natani hasn't evacuated yet and was killed in the explosion. Thus, he may lash out on Lynn and Maddie for holding him back. He may regret doing so after seeing Natani is alive.
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Markiplier Role addition
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Because who DOESN'T want to hear Youtube celebrity / the author's ''brother'' Mark Fischbach play the role of an evil Templar Torture Master?
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Because who DOESN'T ''doesn't'' want to hear Youtube YouTube celebrity / the author's ''brother'' Mark Fischbach play the role of an evil Templar Torture Master?Master?
* If not the final Templar Master, maybe perhaps a smaller role like a minor ally or foe?
* If not the final Templar Master, maybe perhaps a smaller role like a minor ally or foe?