Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
[[WMG: Stu is James Bond in between missions.]]
to:
Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
[[WMG: Daniel was finding the right face for the voice]]
to:
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
[[WMG: The sequel would have had a LoveInterest for Daniel.]]
to:
Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
[[WMG: Mrs. Doubtfire's facial mask formula (homemade frosting) really does work]]
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Reverting unnecessary expansion of contractions.
Changed line(s) 2,3 (click to see context) from:
Very little is known about Stu within the story. It is possible James Bond gave Miranda a false name and was trying not to attract attention to himself.
to:
Very little is known about Stu within the story. It is It's possible James Bond gave Miranda a false name and was trying not to attract attention to himself.
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
** Daniel is teasing his brother about how far off the makeup is when he is doing all those voices. He already demonstrated the voice of Mrs. Doubtfire to them off-camera, and they were trying to find something that would match the voice. The Cuban woman, the old Jewish lady, and Barbra Streisand were just bad tries, and Daniel was basically having fun teasing about how the makeup was way far off from the voice he was wanting to match.
to:
** Daniel is teasing his brother about how far off the makeup is when he is he's doing all those voices. He already demonstrated the voice of Mrs. Doubtfire to them off-camera, and they were trying to find something that would match the voice. The Cuban woman, the old Jewish lady, and Barbra Streisand were just bad tries, and Daniel was basically having fun teasing about how the makeup was way far off from the voice he was wanting to match.
Changed line(s) 9,10 (click to see context) from:
Since he is still divorced and deserve some happiness.
to:
Since he is he's still divorced and deserve some happiness.
Deleted line(s) 13,14 (click to see context) :
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 2,3 (click to see context) from:
Very little is known about Stu within the story. It's possible James Bond gave Miranda a false name and was trying not to attract attention to himself.
to:
Very little is known about Stu within the story. It's It is possible James Bond gave Miranda a false name and was trying not to attract attention to himself.
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
** Daniel is teasing his brother about how far off the makeup is when he's doing all those voices. He already demonstrated the voice of Mrs. Doubtfire to them off-camera, and they were trying to find something that would match the voice. The Cuban woman, the old Jewish lady, and Barbra Streisand were just bad tries, and Daniel was basically having fun teasing about how the makeup was way far off from the voice he was wanting to match.
to:
** Daniel is teasing his brother about how far off the makeup is when he's he is doing all those voices. He already demonstrated the voice of Mrs. Doubtfire to them off-camera, and they were trying to find something that would match the voice. The Cuban woman, the old Jewish lady, and Barbra Streisand were just bad tries, and Daniel was basically having fun teasing about how the makeup was way far off from the voice he was wanting to match.
Changed line(s) 9,10 (click to see context) from:
Since he's still divorced and deserve some happiness.
to:
Since he's he is still divorced and deserve some happiness.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
to:
Since he's still divorced and deserve some happiness.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
to:
** Daniel is teasing his brother about how far off the makeup is when he's doing all those voices. He already demonstrated the voice of Mrs. Doubtfire to them off-camera, and they were trying to find something that would match the voice. The Cuban woman, the old Jewish lady, and Barbra Streisand were just bad tries, and Daniel was basically having fun teasing about how the makeup was way far off from the voice he was wanting to match.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 2 (click to see context) :
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
to:
[[WMG: Mrs. Doubtfire's facial mask formula (homemade frosting) really does work]]
Mrs. Sellner tries it and it works. She quits her job as a social worker and makes good a career out of mass-producing and selling it, with other selections that involve skin-therapy ingredients and are also edible.
Mrs. Sellner tries it and it works. She quits her job as a social worker and makes good a career out of mass-producing and selling it, with other selections that involve skin-therapy ingredients and are also edible.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) :
----
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
to:
[[WMG: The sequel would have had a LoveInterest for Daniel.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
----
[[WMG: Daniel was finding the right face for the voice]]
When Daniel tries out masks, make-up and wigs, he talks in different voices, based on the looks, despite the fact that he had already used a voice over the phone. This is seen as RuleOfFunny, but perhaps he wasn't trying to find matching voices. Perhaps he was just talking in whatever voices matched, until he found one that the voice he used went well with.
[[WMG: Daniel was finding the right face for the voice]]
When Daniel tries out masks, make-up and wigs, he talks in different voices, based on the looks, despite the fact that he had already used a voice over the phone. This is seen as RuleOfFunny, but perhaps he wasn't trying to find matching voices. Perhaps he was just talking in whatever voices matched, until he found one that the voice he used went well with.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3,4 (click to see context) from:
Very little is known about Stu within the story.
to:
Very little is known about Stu within the story.
story. It's possible James Bond gave Miranda a false name and was trying not to attract attention to himself.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
[[WMG: Stu is James Bond in between missions.]]
Very little is known about Stu within the story.
----
Very little is known about Stu within the story.
----
