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* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and Giorno and Naoto had ''Creator/RomiPark'' as their voice actress at one point or another.
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* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and or Giorno and Naoto had ''Creator/RomiPark'' as their voice actress at one point or another.
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** Maybe not. Remember that Gyro was always the second main protagonist of Steel Ball Run and the story is just starting. Maybe TIM plans on introducing Gyro later, not that it'll completely save Yosuke from dying since this IS a JoJo fic.
* Yosuke is Speedwagon's alternate, due to their shared even balance of being the butt-monkey, awesome, and supporter of Jonathan/Johnny.
** He'll perhaps get a scar similar to Speedwagon's if he makes it through the fic.
** He'll perhaps get a scar similar to Speedwagon's if he makes it through the fic.
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* Maybe not? With Personas being the fill-ins for Stands, it's highly possible that neither the Ripple or Spin exist in this universe.
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* Maybe not? not. With Personas being the fill-ins for Stands, it's highly possible that neither the Ripple or Spin exist in this universe.
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* Chie is either Jean Pierre Polnareff or his sisters, Sherry Polnareff's counterpart. Think about it, they're so similar. Chie and Polnareff both represent the Chariot Arcana, they both love martial and athletic, are best friends with someone who can control fire, and are far more hotheaded than the rest of their team, and both look down on their own intelligence when they're really quite smart
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* Chie is either Jean Pierre Polnareff or his sisters, sister, Sherry Polnareff's counterpart. Think about it, they're so similar. Chie and Polnareff both represent the Chariot Arcana, they both love martial and athletic, athletic pursuits, are best friends with someone who can control fire, and are far more hotheaded than the rest of their team, and both look down on their own intelligence when they're really quite smartsmart.
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* As for the Charming Prince being Silver Chariot, all of the Shadows in the TV World are made out of mankinds repressed feelings and Igor's knowledge of Pucci's antics and Shadow Yosuke's Winds of Oblivion/Holy SAndstorm make it obvious that this is a rebooted universe, maybe some of the previous universes collective unconscious still exists affecting the TV World leading to the Charming Prince to take Silver Chariot's form?
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* As for the Charming Prince being Silver Chariot, all of the Shadows in the TV World are made out of mankinds repressed feelings and Igor's knowledge of Pucci's antics and Shadow Yosuke's Winds of Oblivion/Holy SAndstorm make it obvious that this is a rebooted universe, maybe some of the previous universes collective unconscious still exists affecting the TV World leading to the Charming Prince to take Silver Chariot's form?form?
[[WMG: A member of the Investigation Team will die before the end]]
* Because underneath all of JoJo's camp, the villains are very viscous and competent in ways Madara and Aizen wish they could be. A Vanilla Ice or HeroKiller type villain will come along near the end and kill a beloved teammate (most likely Yosuke, because he's practically a Zeppeli) in order to harden the IT's resolve to not make their death be in vain.
[[WMG: A member of the Investigation Team will die before the end]]
* Because underneath all of JoJo's camp, the villains are very viscous and competent in ways Madara and Aizen wish they could be. A Vanilla Ice or HeroKiller type villain will come along near the end and kill a beloved teammate (most likely Yosuke, because he's practically a Zeppeli) in order to harden the IT's resolve to not make their death be in vain.
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* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and Giorno and Naoto had ''Creator/RomiPark'' as their voice actress at one point or another,
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* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and Giorno and Naoto had ''Creator/RomiPark'' as their voice actress at one point or another,
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* Chie is either Jean Pierre Polnareff or his sisters, Sherry Polnareff's counterpart. Think about it, they're so similar. Chie and Polnareff both represent the Chariot Arcana, they both love martial and athletic, are best friends with someone who can control fire, and are far more hotheaded than the rest of their team, and both look down on their own intelligence when they're really quite smart
** Going off that logic, that could mean that Yukiko is Avdol! They both control giant bird monsters with fire powers, both are best friends with someone who represents the Chariot, and both are the nicest members of the team.
** Yosuke is totally a Zeppeli given him being a total bro and foil to a Joestar, most likely Caesar given that when his Shadow tried to kill him, he used the special technique of his killer for extra irony.
*** Crap! Yosuke's a Zeppeli! He better get some life insurance filed out, ASAP!
* Chie is either Jean Pierre Polnareff or his sisters, Sherry Polnareff's counterpart. Think about it, they're so similar. Chie and Polnareff both represent the Chariot Arcana, they both love martial and athletic, are best friends with someone who can control fire, and are far more hotheaded than the rest of their team, and both look down on their own intelligence when they're really quite smart
** Going off that logic, that could mean that Yukiko is Avdol! They both control giant bird monsters with fire powers, both are best friends with someone who represents the Chariot, and both are the nicest members of the team.
** Yosuke is totally a Zeppeli given him being a total bro and foil to a Joestar, most likely Caesar given that when his Shadow tried to kill him, he used the special technique of his killer for extra irony.
*** Crap! Yosuke's a Zeppeli! He better get some life insurance filed out, ASAP!
** Or maybe she'll use a "'''CROSSFIRE HURRICANE!!!'''"...What? Shadow Yukiko looks like Magician's Red.
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* Maybe not? With Personas being the fill-ins for Stands, it's highly possible that neither the Ripple or Spin exist in this universe.
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* Maybe not? With Personas being the fill-ins for Stands, it's highly possible that neither the Ripple or Spin exist in this universe.universe.
[[WMG: Shadow Chie or Shadow Yukiko's Charming Prince will resemble Silver Chariot]]
* It makes sense, Chie's issue's have been developing differently than in canon so it makes sense for her Shadow to take a different form, and a robotic knight with super speed would be a great way to highlight her fears of being TheLoad or that she's just being Johnny's friend out of pity.
* As for the Charming Prince being Silver Chariot, all of the Shadows in the TV World are made out of mankinds repressed feelings and Igor's knowledge of Pucci's antics and Shadow Yosuke's Winds of Oblivion/Holy SAndstorm make it obvious that this is a rebooted universe, maybe some of the previous universes collective unconscious still exists affecting the TV World leading to the Charming Prince to take Silver Chariot's form?
[[WMG: Shadow Chie or Shadow Yukiko's Charming Prince will resemble Silver Chariot]]
* It makes sense, Chie's issue's have been developing differently than in canon so it makes sense for her Shadow to take a different form, and a robotic knight with super speed would be a great way to highlight her fears of being TheLoad or that she's just being Johnny's friend out of pity.
* As for the Charming Prince being Silver Chariot, all of the Shadows in the TV World are made out of mankinds repressed feelings and Igor's knowledge of Pucci's antics and Shadow Yosuke's Winds of Oblivion/Holy SAndstorm make it obvious that this is a rebooted universe, maybe some of the previous universes collective unconscious still exists affecting the TV World leading to the Charming Prince to take Silver Chariot's form?
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* Perhaps Yukiko is Lisa Lisa's alternate, thanks to her more refined personality but with a hidden danger when she actually cuts loose in battle.
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* Perhaps Yukiko is Lisa Lisa's alternate, thanks to her more refined personality but with a hidden danger that shows when she actually cuts loose in battle.battle.
* Mitsuo is the alternate of Telence T.D'Arby due to their obsession with video games.
* The Fox is Iggy's alternate, due to them both being intelligent good animals.
* Mitsuo is the alternate of Telence T.D'Arby due to their obsession with video games.
* The Fox is Iggy's alternate, due to them both being intelligent good animals.
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and like in canon johnny will assume it can help him walk again.
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* Maybe not? With Personas being the fill-ins for Stands, it's highly possible that neither the Ripple or Spin exist in this universe.
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and like in cannon johnny will assume it can help him walk again.
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and like in cannon canon johnny will assume it can help him walk again.
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[[WMG: A Ripple or spin user will appear in story]]
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[[WMG: A Ripple or spin user will appear in story]]story]]
and like in cannon johnny will assume it can help him walk again.
and like in cannon johnny will assume it can help him walk again.
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* Perhaps Yukiko is Lisa Lisa's alternate, thanks to her more refined personality but with a hidden danger when she actually cuts loose in battle.
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* Perhaps Yukiko is Lisa Lisa's alternate, thanks to her more refined personality but with a hidden danger when she actually cuts loose in battle.battle.
[[WMG: A Ripple or spin user will appear in story]]
[[WMG: A Ripple or spin user will appear in story]]
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* Dojima is Abbachio's alternate? Both are cops, although Dojima stayed clean while Abbachio was a dirty cop.
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* Dojima is Abbachio's alternate? Both are cops, although Dojima stayed clean while Abbachio was a dirty cop.cop.
* Perhaps Yukiko is Lisa Lisa's alternate, thanks to her more refined personality but with a hidden danger when she actually cuts loose in battle.
* Perhaps Yukiko is Lisa Lisa's alternate, thanks to her more refined personality but with a hidden danger when she actually cuts loose in battle.
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Because I highly doubt TIM would just follow something as obvious as the Persona characters being the alternates of whoever voice actors played as in All Star Battle.
* Perhaps Nanako is Erina's alternate? She is sweet and will most likely get close enough to Johnny in the future, much like Erina got close to Jonathan. Though like Lucy, there are no true romantic feelings between them, only now it'll be a brother-sister bond.
* Perhaps Nanako is Erina's alternate? She is sweet and will most likely get close enough to Johnny in the future, much like Erina got close to Jonathan. Though like Lucy, there are no true romantic feelings between them, only now it'll be a brother-sister bond.
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Because I highly doubt TIM would just follow something as obvious as the Persona characters being the alternates of whoever the voice actors played as in All Star Battle.
* Perhaps Nanako is Erina's alternate? She is sweet and will most likely get close enough to Johnny in the future, much like Erina got close to Jonathan. Though like Lucy, there are no true romantic feelings between them, only now it'll be a brother-sisterbond.bond.
* Naoto's the alternate of Mista or Hol Horse perhaps? They're the only two characters who wield a gun, and they both wear hats to boot. Though Naoto will obviously have a more lawful nature than either of them.
* Dojima is Abbachio's alternate? Both are cops, although Dojima stayed clean while Abbachio was a dirty cop.
* Perhaps Nanako is Erina's alternate? She is sweet and will most likely get close enough to Johnny in the future, much like Erina got close to Jonathan. Though like Lucy, there are no true romantic feelings between them, only now it'll be a brother-sister
* Naoto's the alternate of Mista or Hol Horse perhaps? They're the only two characters who wield a gun, and they both wear hats to boot. Though Naoto will obviously have a more lawful nature than either of them.
* Dojima is Abbachio's alternate? Both are cops, although Dojima stayed clean while Abbachio was a dirty cop.
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* Shadow Naoto is like Hol Horse, awesome at first but turns out to be incompetent?
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* Shadow Naoto is like Hol Horse, awesome at first but turns out to be incompetent?incompetent?
[[WMG: Perhaps the alternates the Persona characters represent aren't that obvious?]]
Because I highly doubt TIM would just follow something as obvious as the Persona characters being the alternates of whoever voice actors played as in All Star Battle.
* Perhaps Nanako is Erina's alternate? She is sweet and will most likely get close enough to Johnny in the future, much like Erina got close to Jonathan. Though like Lucy, there are no true romantic feelings between them, only now it'll be a brother-sister bond.
[[WMG: Perhaps the alternates the Persona characters represent aren't that obvious?]]
Because I highly doubt TIM would just follow something as obvious as the Persona characters being the alternates of whoever voice actors played as in All Star Battle.
* Perhaps Nanako is Erina's alternate? She is sweet and will most likely get close enough to Johnny in the future, much like Erina got close to Jonathan. Though like Lucy, there are no true romantic feelings between them, only now it'll be a brother-sister bond.
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* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and has ''Creator/RomiPark'' as her voice actress.
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* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and has Giorno and Naoto had ''Creator/RomiPark'' as her their voice actress.
actress at one point or another,
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* Elizabeth is Jolyne's counterpart since they're both voiced by ''Creator/MiyukiSawashiro''
* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and has ''Creator/RomiPark'' as her voice actress.
* Naoto is Giorno's counterpart because she could be a descendant of Diego Brando and has ''Creator/RomiPark'' as her voice actress.
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** HilarityEnsues if Naoto hears Bruce Willis quotes from her new Persona and decides it might get annoying.
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** HilarityEnsues if Naoto hears Bruce Willis quotes from her new Persona and decides it might get annoying.annoying, especially if it starts using profanity.
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** There might be a scene where Teddie accidentally switches bags with the true culprit and wondering why he has a bag filled with chinese cabbage.
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** There might be a scene where Teddie accidentally switches bags with the true culprit and wondering why he has a bag filled with chinese Chinese cabbage.
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* Naoto getting a crush from an unwanted suitor and saying, "I got a feeling so complicated"
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* Naoto getting a crush from an unwanted suitor and saying, "I got a feeling so complicated"complicated". Her friends might try helping but only make the situation much worse.
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* Will Shadow Teddie get [[spoiler: banished into the void of the Midnight Channel and forced to stop thinking?]]
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* Will Shadow Teddie get [[spoiler: banished into the void of the Midnight Channel and forced to stop thinking?]]thinking?]]
* Shadow Naoto is like Hol Horse, awesome at first but turns out to be incompetent?
* Shadow Naoto is like Hol Horse, awesome at first but turns out to be incompetent?
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[[WMG: Yosuke, Teddie, Naoto and Adachi are Akira Ootoshi, Shigikiyo Yagyu, Koichi Hayase, and Jo2uke's SBR Counterparts]]
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[[WMG: Yosuke, Teddie, Naoto and Adachi are Akira Ootoshi, Shigikiyo Yagyu, Koichi Hayase, and Jo2uke's SBR Counterparts]]Counterparts in this fanfic.]]
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** Adachi [[spoiler: being related to the Joestar family through a technicality and using Soft and Wet instead of Magatsu Izanagi]]
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Because Shadow Yosuke channeling Wamuu through his wind attacks couldn't have been a coincidence.
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Because Shadow Yosuke channeling Wamuu through his wind attacks couldn't have been a coincidence.coincidence.
* Will Shadow Yukiko reference Eisidisi by crying a torrent and confusing Johnny and the others in the process?
* Will Shadow Teddie get [[spoiler: banished into the void of the Midnight Channel and forced to stop thinking?]]
* Will Shadow Yukiko reference Eisidisi by crying a torrent and confusing Johnny and the others in the process?
* Will Shadow Teddie get [[spoiler: banished into the void of the Midnight Channel and forced to stop thinking?]]
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[[WMG: Yosuke, Teddie, and Naoto are Akira Ootoshi, Shigikiyo and Koichi Hayase's SBR Counterparts]]
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[[WMG: Yosuke, Teddie, and Naoto and Adachi are Akira Ootoshi, Shigikiyo and Yagyu, Koichi Hayase's Hayase, and Jo2uke's SBR Counterparts]]
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** Bonus points if Teddie accidentally switches bags with the true culprit and wondering why he has a bag filled with chinese cabbage.
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** Bonus points if There might be a scene where Teddie accidentally switches bags with the true culprit and wondering why he has a bag filled with chinese cabbage.cabbage.
** Adachi [[spoiler: being related to the Joestar family through a technicality and using Soft and Wet instead of Magatsu Izanagi]]
** Adachi [[spoiler: being related to the Joestar family through a technicality and using Soft and Wet instead of Magatsu Izanagi]]
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[[WMG: Johnny Joestar is actually the grandson of this universe's Joseph Joestar.]]
Jonathan being reborn into modern-day Japan would be stretching things a bit, but as per the rules of Made in Heaven, everyone from the previous universe should be in this new universe in one way or another. So, Joseph is Johnny's grandfather who married Suzie Q. She bore two children, a pair of twins: Holly and George Joestar after Joseph's father who died in WWII. Holly went off and married a Japanese man named Yoshiteru Kira, giving birth to Yoshikage Kira who here is Johnny's very distant cousin thanks to rumors of his sociopathy. George however married to Johnny's mother and Dojima's sister, who gave birth to Johnny and Nicholas. Thus preserving the Joestar line through several counterparts in this new universe, the only exceptions being this universe's Josuke, Giorno, and Jolyne's counterparts.
[[WMG: Each of the Shadows will reference a JoJo villain in some way, shape, or form.]]
Because Shadow Yosuke channeling Wamuu through his wind attacks couldn't have been a coincidence.
Jonathan being reborn into modern-day Japan would be stretching things a bit, but as per the rules of Made in Heaven, everyone from the previous universe should be in this new universe in one way or another. So, Joseph is Johnny's grandfather who married Suzie Q. She bore two children, a pair of twins: Holly and George Joestar after Joseph's father who died in WWII. Holly went off and married a Japanese man named Yoshiteru Kira, giving birth to Yoshikage Kira who here is Johnny's very distant cousin thanks to rumors of his sociopathy. George however married to Johnny's mother and Dojima's sister, who gave birth to Johnny and Nicholas. Thus preserving the Joestar line through several counterparts in this new universe, the only exceptions being this universe's Josuke, Giorno, and Jolyne's counterparts.
[[WMG: Each of the Shadows will reference a JoJo villain in some way, shape, or form.]]
Because Shadow Yosuke channeling Wamuu through his wind attacks couldn't have been a coincidence.
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* They might get versions of Red Hot Chili Pepper, Harvest, and Echoes as their RelationshipValues with Johnny are at their maximum.
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* They might get versions of Red Hot Chili Pepper, Harvest, and Echoes as their RelationshipValues with Johnny are at reaching their maximum.
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** Bonus points if Yosuke uses a guitar to control his Persona at some point and belts out a [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ndk30TWzi7U face melter to defeat a powerful Shadow]].
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** Bonus points if Yosuke uses a guitar to control his Persona at some point and belts out a [https://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ndk30TWzi7U face melter to defeat a powerful Shadow]].
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** Bonus points if Yosuke uses a guitar to control his Persona at some point.
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** Bonus points if Yosuke uses a guitar to control his Persona at some point.point and belts out a [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ndk30TWzi7U face melter to defeat a powerful Shadow]].
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* They might get versions of Red Hot Chili Pepper, Harvest, and Echoes as their RelationshipValues with Johnny are at their maximum.
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* They might get versions of Red Hot Chili Pepper, Harvest, and Echoes as their RelationshipValues with Johnny are at their maximum.
** HilarityEnsues if Naoto hears Bruce Willis quotes from her new Persona and decides it might get annoying.
** Bonus points if Yosuke uses a guitar to control his Persona at some point.
** HilarityEnsues if Naoto hears Bruce Willis quotes from her new Persona and decides it might get annoying.
** Bonus points if Yosuke uses a guitar to control his Persona at some point.
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They share the same voice actors in ''VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureAllStarBattle''. Also, The Personas in this Universe are the SBR Counterparts to the Stands in the previous universe.
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They share the same voice actors in ''VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureAllStarBattle''. Also, The Personas in this Universe are the SBR Counterparts to the Stands in the previous universe.universe.
* They might get versions of Red Hot Chili Pepper, Harvest, and Echoes as their RelationshipValues with Johnny are at their maximum.
* They might get versions of Red Hot Chili Pepper, Harvest, and Echoes as their RelationshipValues with Johnny are at their maximum.
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They share the same voice actors in ''VideoGame/JoJosBizzareAdventureAllStarBattle''. Also, The Personas in this Universe are the SBR Counterparts to the Stands in the previous universe.
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They share the same voice actors in ''VideoGame/JoJosBizzareAdventureAllStarBattle''.''VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureAllStarBattle''. Also, The Personas in this Universe are the SBR Counterparts to the Stands in the previous universe.
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[[WMG: Yosuke, Teddie, and Naoto are Akira Ootoshi, Shigikiyo and Koichi Hayase's SBR Counterparts]]
They share the same voice actors in ''VideoGame/JoJosBizzareAdventureAllStarBattle''. Also, The Personas in this Universe are the SBR Counterparts to the Stands in the previous universe.
They share the same voice actors in ''VideoGame/JoJosBizzareAdventureAllStarBattle''. Also, The Personas in this Universe are the SBR Counterparts to the Stands in the previous universe.
