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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret]], the [[spoiler:evil stepmother]] ''always'' dies.]]
** Jesse gives different ones depending on whether you [[spoiler:save Duffy or Pierce.]]
--> '''Jesse:''' You have the right to remain ''dead''./End of the line, [[spoiler:Pierce.]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' With all due respect, [[spoiler:Chief]]...I'd like to [[spoiler:file my notice of resignation.]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret]], the [[spoiler:evil stepmother]] ''always'' dies.]]
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--> '''Jesse:''' You have the right to remain ''dead''./End of the line, [[spoiler:Pierce.]]
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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:'''With all due respect, [[spoiler:Chief]]...I'd like to [[spoiler:file my notice of resignation.Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret, the spoiler:evil stepmother ''always dies'']].]]
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** Jesse gives different ones one depending on whether you [[spoiler:save Duffy or Pierce.]]
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--> '''Jesse:''' You have the right to remain ''dead''./End /[[TitleDrop End of the line, line]], [[spoiler:Pierce.]]
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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry,[[spoiler:Margaret, [[spoiler:Margaret]], the spoiler:evil stepmother ''always dies'']].[[spoiler:evil stepmother]] ''always'' dies.]]
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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret, the spoiler:evil stepmother ''always dies'']].]]
** Jesse gives different ones depending on whether you [[spoiler:save Duffy or Pierce.]]
--> '''Jesse:''' You have the right to remain ''dead''./End of the line, [[spoiler:Pierce.]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' With all due respect, [[spoiler:Chief...I'd like to file my notice of resignation.]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret, the spoiler:evil stepmother ''always dies'']].]]
** Jesse gives different ones depending on whether you [[spoiler:save Duffy or Pierce.]]
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: When [[spoiler:Kate reveals she's pregnant with Tanner's child]] in Chapter 15, Duffy drops the coffee cup in shock. [[spoiler:It's revealed later [[spoiler:Moments later, he shoots Walsh, Margaret and the state investigator dead and reveals that he was had a vendetta against the Sterlings kidnapped Kate and was the killer of killed Tanner and Bryce.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Most After going through hell, most of the Jesse's potential endings can have Jesse him or her choose which love interest ([[spoiler:including Kate]]) to stay with in Birchport, instead of returning to New York.
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** And the fact that there are "at least four" murders can be taken to mean that depending on player choices, some may live or die [[spoiler:as evidenced by the Premium choice to save Nikolai's life after he is shot by Duffy]].
** Chapter 14 adds [[spoiler: the State Investigator Tino Thompson, Chief Walsh and Margaret Sterling, all killed by Duffy.]]
** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames.]]
* ClickHello: Chapter 13 ends with Jesse and Flynn cornered by Margaret...and a shotgun.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The whole series is set in a town with a biased and corrupt justice system with ties to a very powerful family. They also do not shy away from showing blood on Nikolai and Tanner.
** And the fact that there are "at least four" murders can be taken to mean that depending on player choices, some may live or die [[spoiler:as evidenced by the Premium choice to save Nikolai's life after he is shot by Duffy]].
** Chapter 14 adds [[spoiler: the State Investigator Tino Thompson, Chief Walsh and Margaret Sterling, all killed by Duffy.]]
** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames.]]
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state investigator Tino Thompson]].
**And the fact The statement that there are "at least four" murders can be taken to mean that depending on player choices, some may live or die [[spoiler:as evidenced by the Premium choice to save Nikolai's life after he is shot by Duffy]].
** Chapter 14 adds [[spoiler: the State Investigator Tino Thompson, Chief Walsh and Margaret Sterling, all killed by Duffy.]]
** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. Alternately, Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die.]]
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* PoliceAreUseless: Local police chief Tommy Walsh is completely unwilling to put any effort into investigating Kate's disappearance - not even when he's presented with clear cut evidence that something is wrong. It's possible he's taking bribes from the Sterlings, which isn't implausible at all given the Sterling influence on the town. However, Naomi Silverhawk appears to The only police officer who actually care cares about investigating the case.case is Naomi Silverhawk ([[spoiler:and Walsh eventually fires her for it]]).
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** Chapter 14 is a big one! [[spoiler: Kate is pregnant with Tanner's child. Officer Jeff Duffy is the killer and proceeds to kill the state investigator, Chief Walsh and Margaret Sterling! He's also the bastard love child of Pierce Sterling and his secretary Alanis Acosta.]]
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** And the fact that there are "at least four" murders can be taken to mean that depending on player choices, some may live or die [[spoiler:as evidenced by the Premium choice for Nikolai after he got shot by Duffy]].
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* AmateurSleuth: Your character becomes one once it's clear that the police won't be of any help in investigating the case.
* AmoralAttorney: D.A. Mac Hornby from Chapter 11 delivers false testimony about Kate being a GoldDigger during her trial, tries to discredit Jesse as a reliable eyewitness, and manipulates the testimonies of other eyewitnesses to ensure Kate's incarceration.
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* AmateurSleuth: Your character Jesse becomes one once it's clear that the police won't be of any help in investigating the case.
* AmoralAttorney: D.A. Mac Hornby from Chapter 11 delivers false testimony about Kate being a GoldDigger during her trial, tries to discredit Jesse as a reliable eyewitness, and manipulates the testimonies of other eyewitnesses to ensure Kate's incarceration. Flynn mentions that Hornby is a frequent guest at the Sterlings' parties, implying that he's under their influence (similar to Walsh).
* AmoralAttorney: D.A. Mac Hornby from Chapter 11 delivers false testimony about Kate being a GoldDigger during her trial, tries to discredit Jesse as a reliable eyewitness, and manipulates the testimonies of other eyewitnesses to ensure Kate's incarceration. Flynn mentions that Hornby is a frequent guest at the Sterlings' parties, implying that he's under their influence (similar to Walsh).
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* TownWithADarkSecret: There's more to Birchport than meets the eye, including not a few skeletons in the closet.
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* NoodleIncident: In the premium scene in Chapter 1, Scarlett confesses to having one of these involving spilling red wine on Music/EltonJohn's white suit.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim states that there are ''at least'' four murders. The reveal in Chapter 4 that one of them being [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not only limited to minor characters.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim states that there are ''at least'' four murders. The reveal in Chapter 4 that one of thembeing is [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not only limited to minor characters.
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* HollywoodNewEngland: The story takes place in the town of Birchport, Massachusetts. However, the book itself zigzag the trope in two major ways:
** The O'Malley and Tony Rez has the "hardworking dockworker" part and the Sterling filled in the "snooty aristocrat" part. However, the law inforcement characters and the Emersons avert both stereotypes.
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* HollywoodNewEngland: The story takes place in the town of Birchport, Massachusetts. However, the book itself zigzag zigzags the trope in two major ways:
** TheO'Malley O'Malleys and Tony Rez has fulfill the "hardworking "hard-working dockworker" part and part, while the Sterling filled in Sterlings satisfy the "snooty aristocrat" part. However, the law inforcement enforcement characters and the Emersons (who are wealthy attorneys but not members of the aristocracy) avert both stereotypes.
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* NouveauRiche: The Sterlings look down on the Emersons, considering them to be this.
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** All of the characters fill in the stereotypes of the trope, with the O'Malley and Tony Rez has the "hardworking dockworker" part and the Sterling filled in the "snooty aristocrat" part. However, the law inforcement characters and the Emersons avert both stereotypes.
** The geography and weather in the story completely avert the trope: Birchport alone has high mountains, long coastline and sudden weather.
** All of the characters fill in the stereotypes of the trope, with the O'Malley and Tony Rez has the "hardworking dockworker" part and the Sterling filled in the "snooty aristocrat" part. However, the law inforcement characters and the Emersons avert both stereotypes.
** The geography and weather in the story completely avert the trope: Birchport alone has high mountains, long coastline and sudden weather.