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* TheOutsiderBefriendsTheBest: The PlayerCharacter is a journalist who arrives in Birchport for the first time for their friend's wedding. Among their closest friends and potential love interests is Grant Emerson from one of Birchport's richest families.

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* TheOutsiderBefriendsTheBest: The PlayerCharacter Jesse is a journalist who arrives in Birchport for the first time for their friend's Kate's wedding. Among their closest friends and potential love interests is Grant Emerson from one of Birchport's richest families.

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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim states that there are ''at least'' four murders. The reveal in Chapter 4 that one of them is [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not limited to minor characters.

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* AnyoneCanDie: AnyoneCanDie:
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Agent Kim states that there are ''at least'' four murders. The reveal in Chapter 4 that one of them is [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not limited to minor characters.



* BondOneLiner: [[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one after [[spoiler:killing Margaret Sterling]] in Chapter 14.
--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret]], the [[spoiler:evil stepmother]] ''always'' dies.

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* BondOneLiner: BondOneLiner:
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[[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one after [[spoiler:killing Margaret Sterling]] in Chapter 14.
--> ---> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret]], the [[spoiler:evil stepmother]] ''always'' dies.



--> '''Jesse:''' You [[spoiler:have the right to remain ''dead''. (if Duffy is killed)]]/[[TitleDrop End of the line]], [[spoiler:Pierce. (if Pierce is killed)]]

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--> ---> '''Jesse:''' You [[spoiler:have the right to remain ''dead''. (if Duffy is killed)]]/[[TitleDrop End of the line]], [[spoiler:Pierce. (if Pierce is killed)]]
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* TheOutsiderBefriendsTheBest: The PlayerCharacter is a journalist who arrives in Birchport for the first time for their friend's wedding. Among their closest friends and potential love interests is Grant Emerson from one of Birchport's richest families.
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Just remember: is this town, everyone has a secret.

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Just remember: is in this town, everyone has a secret.
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* DevelopersDesiredDate: The preferred love interest for Jesse is Flynn O'Malley, who is essentially their sidekick. Besides, as the brother of the DamselInDistress, he has a personal stake in the story.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: If the player collects all the available clues, there is a bonus scene at the end of the story which reveals not only the events leading up to what we saw in the story, but also shows how all the characters' lives turned out afterward. [[spoiler:Naomi becomes the new chief of police with Flynn as her deputy, Grant continues his law work and considers running for the United States Senate by taking [[VisualNovel/{{Bloodbound}} Adam Vega]]'s spot, Kate raises a happy daughter and sees her bakery business take off, Pierce (if still alive) ends up dying in prison but leaves Sterling Manor and all his money to Kate in his will, Duffy (if still alive) spends the rest of his life in prison but becomes remorseful for his crimes and is said to be a model inmate, and Jesse (depending on the player's choice) either stays in Birchport with their chosen love interest or returns to New York.]]

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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: If the player collects all the available clues, there is a bonus scene at the end of the story which reveals not only the events leading up to what we saw in the story, but also shows how all the characters' lives turned out afterward. [[spoiler:Naomi becomes the new chief of police with Flynn as her deputy, Grant continues his law work and considers running for the United States Senate by taking [[VisualNovel/{{Bloodbound}} Adam Vega]]'s spot, Kate raises a happy daughter and sees her bakery business take off, Nikolai (if still alive) will testify against the Russian Mafia and disappear into witness protection, Pierce (if still alive) ends up dying in prison but leaves Sterling Manor and all his money to Kate in his will, Duffy (if still alive) spends the rest of his life in prison but becomes remorseful for his crimes and is said to be a model inmate, and Jesse (depending on the player's choice) either stays in Birchport with their chosen love interest or returns to New York.]]

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[This description was copied in violation of our Plagiarism policy. Please replace it with original writing.]

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[This description was copied The Player, an aspiring journalist, is invited to their best friend’s wedding in violation the town of our Plagiarism policy. Please replace it with original writing.] Birchport. But when she vanishes on the big day, it’s up to you to find her.

Just remember: is this town, everyone has a secret.
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Your best friend from college has invited you to her wedding! But in the town of Birchport, everyone has a secret...

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Your best friend from college has invited you to her wedding! But [This description was copied in the town violation of Birchport, everyone has a secret...our Plagiarism policy. Please replace it with original writing.]
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* FairCop: Naomi Silverhawk is not only attractive, but she is also fair and follows the laws unlike her boss.
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* DevelopersDesiredDate: The preferred love interest for Jesse is Flynn O'Malley, who is essentially their sidekick. Besides, as the brother of the DamselInDistress, he has a personal stake in the story.
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Not holesinking the trops. Also the Duffy plot twist has to be in spoiler tag.


* [[DirtyCop Dirty Cops]]: Tommy Walsh and Jeff Duffy.

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* [[DirtyCop Dirty Cops]]: DirtyCop: Tommy Walsh and Jeff Duffy.is involved in the dirty business of the Sterling family. [[spoiler:Jeff Duffy is later revealed to be the real murderer of the Sterling clan while faking being an incompetent cop]].
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* FromNewYorkToNowhere: The story begins with Jesse arriving in Birchport, Massachusetts after leaving New York.
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* [[DirtyCop Dirty Cops]]: Tommy Walsh and Jeff Duffy.

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* AssholeVictim: Discussed in Chapter 10, after the death of [[spoiler: Bryce Sterling]]. Flynn says [[spoiler: Bryce]] deserved it, Grant points out that while he wasn't a good person, he has a lot of personal issues, and Jesse can either say that he was a jerk (but didn't deserve to ''die''), or they can agree with Flynn that [[spoiler: Bryce]] got what he deserved, FreudianExcuse [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse be damned]].
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* BigBad: The Birchport Killer, [[spoiler: AKA Jeff Duffy]].
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The way Pierce dies in the epilogue (if you choose to save him) is never explored.


** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. [[TakeAThirdOption Alternately]], Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die. Even if they save Pierce, he kills himself in prison.]]

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** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. [[TakeAThirdOption Alternately]], Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die. Even if they save Pierce, he kills himself dies in prison.]]
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** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. [[TakeAThirdOption Alternately]], Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die.]]

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** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. [[TakeAThirdOption Alternately]], Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die. Even if they save Pierce, he kills himself in prison.]]
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* BondOneLiner: [[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one before [[spoiler:killing Margaret Sterling]] in Chapter 14.

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* BondOneLiner: [[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one before after [[spoiler:killing Margaret Sterling]] in Chapter 14.
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** Jesse gives one depending on whether you [[spoiler:save Duffy or Pierce]] in Chapter 15.
--> '''Jesse:''' You have the right to remain ''dead''. [[spoiler:(if Pierce is saved)]]/[[TitleDrop End of the line]], [[spoiler:Pierce. (if Duffy is saved)]]

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** Jesse gives one depending on whether you [[spoiler:save [[spoiler:off Duffy or Pierce]] in Chapter 15.
--> '''Jesse:''' You have [[spoiler:have the right to remain ''dead''. [[spoiler:(if Pierce (if Duffy is saved)]]/[[TitleDrop killed)]]/[[TitleDrop End of the line]], [[spoiler:Pierce. (if Duffy Pierce is saved)]]killed)]]
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** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. [[TakeAThirdOptiin Alternately]], Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die.]]

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** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. [[TakeAThirdOptiin [[TakeAThirdOption Alternately]], Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die.]]
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** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. Alternately, Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die.]]

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** Chapter 15 is multiple choice. [[spoiler: Jesse has time to save either Duffy or Pierce, leaving the other to die in the flames. Alternately, [[TakeAThirdOptiin Alternately]], Jesse can choose to let them ''both'' die.]]
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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' With all due respect, [[spoiler:Chief...I'd like to file my notice of resignation.]]

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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' [[WithDueRespect With all due respect, respect]], [[spoiler:Chief...I'd like to file my notice of resignation.]]
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In the Pre-Mortem One-Liner trope, Chief Walsh was killed in Chapter 14, not 15.


* PreMortemOneLiner: [[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one before killing [[spoiler:Chief Walsh]] in Chapter 15.

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* PreMortemOneLiner: [[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one before killing [[spoiler:Chief Walsh]] in Chapter 15.14.
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--> '''Jesse:''' You have the right to remain ''dead''./[[TitleDrop End of the line]], [[spoiler:Pierce.]]
* ClickHello: Chapter 13 ends with Jesse and Flynn cornered by Margaret... and a shotgun.

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--> '''Jesse:''' You have the right to remain ''dead''./[[TitleDrop [[spoiler:(if Pierce is saved)]]/[[TitleDrop End of the line]], [[spoiler:Pierce.]]
[[spoiler:Pierce. (if Duffy is saved)]]
* ClickHello: Chapter 13 ends with Jesse and Flynn cornered by Margaret... and armed with a shotgun.



* TheReveal / WhamEpisode:

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* TheReveal / WhamEpisode:[=/=]WhamEpisode:



* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: If the player collects all the available clues, there is a bonus scene at the end of the story which reveals not only the events leading up to what we saw in the story, but also shows how all the characters' lives turned out afterward. [[spoiler:Naomi becomes the new chief of police with Flynn as her deputy, Grant continues his law work and considers running for the United States Senate, Kate raises a happy daughter and sees her bakery business take off, Pierce (if still alive) ends up dying in prison but leaves all his money to Kate in his will, Duffy (if still alive) spends the rest of his life in prison but becomes remorseful for his crimes and is said to be a model inmate, and Jesse (depending on the player's choice) either stays in Birchport with their chosen love interest or returns to New York.]]

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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: If the player collects all the available clues, there is a bonus scene at the end of the story which reveals not only the events leading up to what we saw in the story, but also shows how all the characters' lives turned out afterward. [[spoiler:Naomi becomes the new chief of police with Flynn as her deputy, Grant continues his law work and considers running for the United States Senate, Senate by taking [[VisualNovel/{{Bloodbound}} Adam Vega]]'s spot, Kate raises a happy daughter and sees her bakery business take off, Pierce (if still alive) ends up dying in prison but leaves Sterling Manor and all his money to Kate in his will, Duffy (if still alive) spends the rest of his life in prison but becomes remorseful for his crimes and is said to be a model inmate, and Jesse (depending on the player's choice) either stays in Birchport with their chosen love interest or returns to New York.]]
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* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.

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* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.GoldDigger.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: If the player collects all the available clues, there is a bonus scene at the end of the story which reveals not only the events leading up to what we saw in the story, but also shows how all the characters' lives turned out afterward. [[spoiler:Naomi becomes the new chief of police with Flynn as her deputy, Grant continues his law work and considers running for the United States Senate, Kate raises a happy daughter and sees her bakery business take off, Pierce (if still alive) ends up dying in prison but leaves all his money to Kate in his will, Duffy (if still alive) spends the rest of his life in prison but becomes remorseful for his crimes and is said to be a model inmate, and Jesse (depending on the player's choice) either stays in Birchport with their chosen love interest or returns to New York.]]
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** Chapter 14 is a big one! [[spoiler: Kate is pregnant with Tanner's child. Officer Jeff Duffy is the killer and proceeds to kill the state investigator, Chief Walsh and Margaret Sterling! He's also the bastard love child of Pierce Sterling and his secretary Alanis Acosta.]]

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** Chapter 14 is a big one! [[spoiler: Kate is pregnant with Tanner's child. Officer Deputy Jeff Duffy is the killer and proceeds to kill the state investigator, Chief Walsh and Margaret Sterling! He's also the bastard love child of Pierce Sterling and his secretary Alanis Acosta.]]
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* PreMortermOneLiner: [[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one before killing [[spoiler:Chief Walsh]] in Chapter 15.

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* PreMortermOneLiner: PreMortemOneLiner: [[spoiler:Duffy]] gives one before killing [[spoiler:Chief Walsh]] in Chapter 15.

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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret]], the [[spoiler:evil stepmother]] ''always dies''.

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--> '''[[spoiler:Duffy]]:''' Sorry, [[spoiler:Margaret]], the [[spoiler:evil stepmother]] ''always dies''.''always'' dies.



* FiveSecondForeshadowing: When [[spoiler:Kate reveals she's pregnant with Tanner's child]] in Chapter 15, Duffy drops the coffee cup in shock. [[spoiler:Moments later, he shoots Walsh, Margaret and the state investigator dead and reveals that he kidnapped Kate and killed Tanner and Bryce.]]

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