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** Chapter 9 now adds [[spoiler: Bryce]] to the list of deaths.
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* ProfessionalsDoItOnDesks: A premium choice with Grant, a lawyer, allows the two of them to do it on his desk.
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* RoomFullOfCrazy: The premium choice in Chapter 7 allows Jesse and Naomi to find one of these rooms in the cabin where the kidnapper has been stalking the Sterlings even down to their genealogy charts.
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** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]] Not helping things is how, if you paid for the choice, you will actually get to see [[spoiler:the corpse in full graphic detail.]]
** Chapter 7 ends with you and Naomi discovering [[spoiler:Kate, alive but drugged and disoriented, held captive in the basement of a secluded cabin.]]
** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]] Not helping things is how, if you paid for the choice, you will actually get to see [[spoiler:the corpse in full graphic detail.]]
** Chapter 7 ends with you and Naomi discovering [[spoiler:Kate, alive but drugged and disoriented, held captive in the basement of a secluded cabin.]]
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* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.
* WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]] Not helping things is how, if you paid for the choice, you will actually get to see [[spoiler:the corpse in full graphic detail.]]
* WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]] Not helping things is how, if you paid for the choice, you will actually get to see [[spoiler:the corpse in full graphic detail.]]
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* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.
* WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]] Not helping things is how, if you paid for the choice, you will actually get to see [[spoiler:the corpse in full graphic detail.]]GoldDigger.
* WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]] Not helping things is how, if you paid for the choice, you will actually get to see [[spoiler:the corpse in full graphic detail.]]
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* NoodleIncident: In the premium scene in Chapter 1, Scarlett confesses to having one of these involving spilling red wine on Creator/EltonJohn's white suit.
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* NoodleIncident: In the premium scene in Chapter 1, Scarlett confesses to having one of these involving spilling red wine on Creator/EltonJohn's Music/EltonJohn's white suit.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim stated that there is ''atleast'' four murder. The reveal in Chapter 4 that one of them being [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not only limited to minor characters.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim stated states that there is ''atleast'' are ''at least'' four murder. murders. The reveal in Chapter 4 that one of them being [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not only limited to minor characters.characters.
** And the fact that there are "at least four" murders can be taken to mean that depending on player choices, some may live or die.
** And the fact that there are "at least four" murders can be taken to mean that depending on player choices, some may live or die.
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* EnormousEngagementRing: Kate shows off her engagement ring to Jesse and it's described as rather big.
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* EnormousEngagementRing: Kate shows off her engagement ring to Jesse and it's described as rather big. Jesse jokingly asked if it hurt Kate's hand.
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* MeetCute: In the premium scene in Chapter 1, Kate tells Jesse and the Emerson siblings that she and Tanner met when he was forced to take cover in her bakery. They spent all night bonding and eating cupcakes.
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* MeetCute: In the premium scene in Chapter 1, Kate tells Jesse and the Emerson siblings that she and Tanner met when he was forced to take cover in her bakery.bakery during a rainy night. They spent all night bonding and eating cupcakes.
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* OldFriend: Jesse and Kate have been friends since [[VisualNovel/TheFreshman Hartfeld]].
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* OldFriend: Jesse and Kate have been friends since [[VisualNovel/TheFreshman Hartfeld]]. They first met 7 years ago as college roommates, but they drifted apart after graduation.
* PoliceAreUseless: Local police chief Tommy Walsh is completely unwilling to put any effort into investigating Kate's disappearance - not even when he's presented with clear cut evidence that something is wrong. It's possible he's taking bribes from the Sterlings, which isn't implausible at all given the Sterling influence on the town. However, Naomi Silverhawk appears to actually care about investigating the case.
* PrivateDetective: Your character becomes one once its clear that the police won't be of any help in investigating this case.
* PrivateDetective: Your character becomes one once its clear that the police won't be of any help in investigating this case.
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** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]] Not helping things is how, if you paid for the choice, you will actually get to see [[spoiler:the corpse in full graphic detail.]]
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** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Jesse and Finn finding Tanner's dead body.]]
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** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Flynn (and Jesse and Finn if you paid the Premium choice) finding Tanner's dead body.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim stated that there is atleast four murder and the reveal in Chapter 4 of one them being [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not only limited to minor characters.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim stated that there is atleast ''atleast'' four murder and the murder. The reveal in Chapter 4 of that one of them being [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not only limited to minor characters.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Agent Kim stated that there is atleast four murder and the reveal in Chapter 4 of one them being [[spoiler:Tanner Sterling]] means that this is not only limited to minor characters.
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* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.
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* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.GoldDigger.
* WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Jesse and Finn finding Tanner's dead body.]]
* WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 4 ends with [[spoiler: Jesse and Finn finding Tanner's dead body.]]
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* GratuitousRussian: If you go with Naomi in a premium choice in Chapter 2, you find carvings in a wood cabin that are in Russian.
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* TrophyRoom: Chapter 3 has Jesse find their way by accident into the Sterlings' trophy room. Some of the trophies involved are lacrosse trophies for Tanner and Bryce, and an entire section is reserved for Margaret's tennis days.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: There's more to Birchport than meets the eye, including not a few skeletons in the closet.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: There's more to Birchport than meets the eye, including not a few skeletons in the closet.closet.
* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.
* UptownGirl: Kate, a dockworker's daughter, is marrying someone from one of the richest families in town. It causes some people to consider her a GoldDigger.
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! Tropes
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[[caption-width-right:310:Everyone has a secret.]]
[[caption-width-right:310:Everyone has a secret.]]
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* StagParty: A premium choice in Chapter 1 allows Jesse, Grant and Scarlett to take Kate out to a bachelorette party.
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* StagParty: A premium choice in Chapter 1 allows Jesse, Grant and Scarlett to take Kate out to a bachelorette party.party.
* TownWithADarkSecret: There's more to Birchport than meets the eye, including not a few skeletons in the closet.
* TownWithADarkSecret: There's more to Birchport than meets the eye, including not a few skeletons in the closet.
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* DumpsterDive: More like trash can diving, but teaming up with Flynn in Chapter 2 has this happen with finding a broken phone, one that happens to be Bryce's.
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* DumpsterDive: More like trash can diving, but teaming up with Flynn or Grant in Chapter 2 has this happen with finding a broken phone, one that happens to be Bryce's.
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* DumpsterDiving: More like trash can diving, but teaming up with Flynn in Chapter 2 has this happen with finding a broken phone, one that happens to be Bryce's.
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* DumpsterDiving: DumpsterDive: More like trash can diving, but teaming up with Flynn in Chapter 2 has this happen with finding a broken phone, one that happens to be Bryce's.
* MeetCute: In the premium scene in Chapter 1, Kate tells Jesse and the Emerson siblings that she and Tanner met when he was forced to take cover in her bakery. They spent all night bonding and eating cupcakes.
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* StagParty: A premium choice in Chapter 1 allows Jesse, Gideon and Scarlett to take Kate out to a bachelorette party.
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* StagParty: A premium choice in Chapter 1 allows Jesse, Gideon Grant and Scarlett to take Kate out to a bachelorette party.
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* GratuitousRussian: If you go with Naomi in a premium choice in Chapter 2, you find carvings in a wood cabin that are in Russian.
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* DumpsterDiving: More like trash can diving, but teaming up with Flynn in Chapter 2 has this happen with finding a broken phone, one that happens to be Bryce's.
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* OldMoney: The Sterlings are definitely from a long line of old money stretching back generations.
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* OldMoney: The Sterlings are definitely from a long line of not only old money stretching back generations.money, but if you team up with Flynn in Chapter 2, he says that by the time colonists got to the New World in the 1600s, the Sterlings had built up a shipping empire as well as their fortune.
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* NoodleIncident: In the premium scene in Chapter 1, Scarlett confesses to having one of these involving spilling red wine on Creator/EltonJohn's white suit.
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* GoldDigger: Bryce feels Kate is nothing more than a gold digger.
* HelloInsertNameHere: As with all Choices games, you can name your protagonist anything, though the default name is Jesse.
* HelloInsertNameHere: As with all Choices games, you can name your protagonist anything, though the default name is Jesse.
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: The first time you meet Scarlet, Jesse has the option to go the peaceful route. Doing so shuts her down and both Tanner and Kate are surprised they managed to shut her up. They attribute it to them being from the Midwest.
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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: The first time you meet Scarlet, Jesse has the option to go the peaceful route. Doing so shuts her down and both Tanner and Kate are surprised they managed to shut her up. They attribute it to them being from the Midwest.Midwest.
* StagParty: A premium choice in Chapter 1 allows Jesse, Gideon and Scarlett to take Kate out to a bachelorette party.
* StagParty: A premium choice in Chapter 1 allows Jesse, Gideon and Scarlett to take Kate out to a bachelorette party.
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* OldMoney: The Sterlings are definitely from a long line of old money stretching back generations.
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* OldFriend: Jesse and Kate have been friends since [[VisualNovel/TheFreshman Hartfeld]].
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* OldFriend: Jesse and Kate have been friends since [[VisualNovel/TheFreshman Hartfeld]].Hartfeld]].
* PassiveAggressiveKombat: The first time you meet Scarlet, Jesse has the option to go the peaceful route. Doing so shuts her down and both Tanner and Kate are surprised they managed to shut her up. They attribute it to them being from the Midwest.
* PassiveAggressiveKombat: The first time you meet Scarlet, Jesse has the option to go the peaceful route. Doing so shuts her down and both Tanner and Kate are surprised they managed to shut her up. They attribute it to them being from the Midwest.
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Veil of Secrets is one of the many stories of Pixelberry's ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection.
Your best friend from college has invited you to her wedding! But in the town of Birchport, everyone has a secret...
* EnormousEngagementRing: Kate shows off her engagement ring to Jesse and it's described as rather big.
* HelloInsertNameHere: As with all Choices games, you can name your protagonist anything, though the default name is Jesse.
* HollywoodNewEngland: The story takes place in the town of Birchport, Massachusetts.
* HowWeGotHere: The story starts with Jesse in FBI custody with Agent Kim wanting to know what led up to four murders over the course of a month, all starting from a wedding.
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: You can make your male protagonist this if you select the Fabi-Oh hairstyle.
* OldFriend: Jesse and Kate have been friends since [[VisualNovel/TheFreshman Hartfeld]].
Your best friend from college has invited you to her wedding! But in the town of Birchport, everyone has a secret...
* EnormousEngagementRing: Kate shows off her engagement ring to Jesse and it's described as rather big.
* HelloInsertNameHere: As with all Choices games, you can name your protagonist anything, though the default name is Jesse.
* HollywoodNewEngland: The story takes place in the town of Birchport, Massachusetts.
* HowWeGotHere: The story starts with Jesse in FBI custody with Agent Kim wanting to know what led up to four murders over the course of a month, all starting from a wedding.
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: You can make your male protagonist this if you select the Fabi-Oh hairstyle.
* OldFriend: Jesse and Kate have been friends since [[VisualNovel/TheFreshman Hartfeld]].
