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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The Rangers have a bit of a team cohesion problem in ''Rebirth'' (as handily demonstrated by how disastrously the gala goes for them if you play your cards right), which develops into a full-blown case of this in ''Retribution''. Lady Argent is barely on speaking terms with Herald after their breakup and prefers working with lower-level vigilantes to the other Rangers, Chen still doesn't fully trust Lady Argent, and you note with some confusion that it's been months since you've seen the team take on a threat as, well, a team.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The Rangers have a bit of a team cohesion problem in ''Rebirth'' (as handily demonstrated by how disastrously the gala goes for them if you play your cards right), which develops into a full-blown case of this in ''Retribution''. Lady Argent is barely on speaking terms with Herald after their breakup and prefers working with lower-level vigilantes to the other Rangers, Chen still doesn't fully trust Lady Argent, and you note with some confusion that it's been months since you've seen the team take on a threat as, well, a team. Ortega explains that they don't actually have a lot of choices about who gets to join--very few people are both qualified and able to pass the stringent security checks. So to stay at full strength, which they badly need in Los Diablos, the Rangers ''can't'' be selective based on a little thing like "works well with the rest of the team".
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* ApocalypseHow: The US suffers a Regional Class one in the 1980s: the West Coast and the Midwest get completely ravaged after a massive quake sets off a chain reaction of volanic eruptions and tsunamis. Los Diablos, the setting of the game, was founded from the remains of what used to be Los Angeles.
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* ApocalypseHow: The US suffers a Regional Class one in the 1980s: the West Coast and the Midwest get completely ravaged after a massive quake sets off a chain reaction of volanic volcanic eruptions and tsunamis. Los Diablos, the setting of the game, was founded from the remains of what used to be Los Angeles.
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: The protagonist has the opportunity to do this several times when facing Herald. If they choose not to, it's explicitly because they've invoked this trope many a time during their stint with the Rangers - getting the villan to focus on them to give their team an opening.
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* KickThemWhileTheyAreDown: The protagonist has the opportunity to do this several times when facing Herald. If they choose not to, it's explicitly because they've invoked this trope many a time during their stint with the Rangers - getting the villan villain to focus on them to give their team an opening.
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. Ortega actually recommends that you visit one, as it helped them after your death. Whether you decide to follow through with that suggestion or not is up to you.
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. Ortega actually recommends that you visit one, as it helped them after your death. Whether you decide to follow through with that suggestion or not is up to you. Dr. Finch turns out to be pretty good at her job, although she's unknowingly hamstrung by the fact you can't tell her the truth about 90% of your problems.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The Rangers have a bit of a team cohesion problem in ''Rebirth'' (as handily demonstrated by how disastrously the gala goes for them if you play your cards right), which develops into a full-blown case of this in ''Retribution''. Lady Argent is barely on speaking terms with Herald after their breakup and prefers working with lower-level vigilantes to the other Rangers, Chen still doesn't fully trust Lady Argent, and you note with some confusion that it's been months since you've seen the team take on a threat as, well, a team.
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** You can also take on [[spoiler: Anathema's]] name as your villian name.
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* FriendshipDenial:You, possibly, with Ortega and Mortum.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices, Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as one of the most notorious villains Los Diablos has encountered.]]
* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices, Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as one of the most notorious villains Los Diablos has encountered.]]
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* FriendshipDenial:You, FriendshipDenial: You, possibly, with Ortega and Mortum.
* FrameUp: If you don't pretend to have lost your telepathy, your other option to throw off suspicion for Lady Argent's possession is to "help" her "recover" some memories of running into Locus, a high-level telepath who recently went missing.
* FromNobodyToNightmare:[[spoiler:Downplayed [[spoiler: Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices, Sidestep can potentialy potentially start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as one of the most notorious villains Los Diablos has encountered.]]
* FrameUp: If you don't pretend to have lost your telepathy, your other option to throw off suspicion for Lady Argent's possession is to "help" her "recover" some memories of running into Locus, a high-level telepath who recently went missing.
* FromNobodyToNightmare:
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: As nastily demonstrated during the Heartbreak incident, [[spoiler: Anathema very much does not have these. The acid they create hurts them as much as anyone else, which suggests using it must have been a pretty delicate exercise.]]
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** As nastily demonstrated during the Heartbreak incident, [[spoiler: Anathema very much does not have these. The acid they create hurts them as much as anyone else, which suggests using it must have been a pretty delicate exercise.]]]]
** Lady Argent has super-toughness but lacks super-pain-blocking--getting thrown through a wall doesn't do her any damage, but it sure ''hurts'' like it does.
** As nastily demonstrated during the Heartbreak incident, [[spoiler: Anathema very much does not have these. The acid they create hurts them as much as anyone else, which suggests using it must have been a pretty delicate exercise.
** Lady Argent has super-toughness but lacks super-pain-blocking--getting thrown through a wall doesn't do her any damage, but it sure ''hurts'' like it does.
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The second game, ''Retribution'', is currently being written and two more games titled ''Revelations'' and ''Revolution'' are also planned.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Discussed, depending on the race you select for your puppet. As they were checked into the hospital as a John/Jane Doe and are too braindead to make a statement on the matter, you only have a broad-strokes idea of their race and ethnicity (eg, if you decide the puppet is Asian, the narration notes that they could plausibly have pretty much any East or South Asian heritage, but you don't know).
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: As nastily demonstrated during the Heartbreak incident, [[spoiler: Anathema very much does not have these. The acid they create hurts them as much as anyone else, which suggests using it must have been a pretty delicate exercise.]]
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* SuperSoldier: Thanks to the prevalence of both cybernetics and a SuperSerum, the US Government have been employing them since Vietnam. In the present day the most elite group of these are the Re-genes, a highly classified special ops group of artifical humans [[spoiler:that the protagonist was orginally part of.]]
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* SuperSoldier: Thanks to the prevalence of both cybernetics and a SuperSerum, the US Government have been employing them since Vietnam. In the present day the most elite group of these are the Re-genes, a highly classified special ops group of artifical artificial humans [[spoiler:that the protagonist was orginally originally part of.]]
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* TheDreaded: The player characters villain persona can become this towards Herald and Ortega, depending on the choices made during their debut.
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* TheDreaded: The player characters character's villain persona can become this towards Herald and Ortega, depending on the choices made during their debut.
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut, the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes according to the PC's motivations).[[spoiler:However this tends to bite them later, as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them, and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well]].
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous villainous debut, the protagonist can monolouge monologue and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The Ortega (the one directed to the latter changes according to the PC's motivations).motivations). [[spoiler:However this tends to bite them later, as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them, and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well]].
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* InterserviceRivalry: Between the Goverment appointed Rangers and the city appointed LDPD.
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* InterserviceRivalry: Between the Goverment Government appointed Rangers and the city appointed LDPD.
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices, Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as the most dangerous villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices, Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as one of the most dangerous villain notorious villains Los Diablos has encountered encountered.]]
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* PlayingWithSyringes: All Re-Genes are subjected to extensive experimentation and modification while they're in the Farm's tender clutches, [[spoiler:as the protagonist's trauma filled prove.]]
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* TheDreaded: The player characters villain persona can become this towards Herald and Ortega,depending on the choices made during their debut.
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* TheDreaded: The player characters villain persona can become this towards Herald and Ortega,depending Ortega, depending on the choices made during their debut.
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes according to the PC's motivations)[[spoiler:However this tends to bite them later,as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well]].
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the debut, the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes according to the PC's motivations)[[spoiler:However motivations).[[spoiler:However this tends to bite them later,as later, as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and them, and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well]].
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** you You can also take on [[spoiler: Anathema's]] name as your villian name.
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes accordin according to the PC's motivations)[[spoiler:However this tends to bite them later,as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well]].
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes based on the PC's motivations)[[However this tends to bite them later,as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well]].
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes based on accordin to the PC's motivations)[[However motivations)[[spoiler:However this tends to bite them later,as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well]].
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes based on the PC's motivations).[[However this tends to bite them later,as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes based on the PC's motivations).[[However motivations)[[However this tends to bite them later,as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well.]]well]].
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. The protagonist can potentially [[spoiler: break Herald's knee, beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE while managing to [[BattleTrophy take a a trophy]] the second time around, all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. The protagonist can potentially [[spoiler: break Herald's knee, beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE while managing to [[BattleTrophy take a a trophy]] the second time around, all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuck: During their villanous debut,the protagonist can monolouge and deliver two of these against Herald and Ortega(The one directed to the latter changes based on the PC's motivations).[[However this tends to bite them later,as the first speech towards Herald allows Ortega to ambush them,and the latter one towards Ortega lets Argent get the jump on them as well.]]
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The second game, ''Retribution'', is currently being written and two more games titled "Revelations" and ''Revolution'' are also planned.
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The second game, ''Retribution'', is currently being written and two more games titled "Revelations" ''Revelations'' and ''Revolution'' are also planned.
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The second game, ''Retribution'', is currently being written and a third game titled ''Revolution'' is also planned.
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The second game, ''Retribution'', is currently being written and a third game two more games titled "Revelations" and ''Revolution'' is are also planned.
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* TheDreaded: The player characters villain persoana can become this towards Herald and Ortega,depending on the choices made during their debut.
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* TheDreaded: The player characters villain persoana persona can become this towards Herald and Ortega,depending on the choices made during their debut.
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* ApocalypseHow: The US suffers a Regional Class one in the 1980s: the West Coast and the Midwest get completely ravaged after a massive quake sets off a chain reaction of volanic eruptions and tsunamis. Los Diablos, the setting of the game, was founded from the remains of what used to beLos Angeles.
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* ApocalypseHow: The US suffers a Regional Class one in the 1980s: the West Coast and the Midwest get completely ravaged after a massive quake sets off a chain reaction of volanic eruptions and tsunamis. Los Diablos, the setting of the game, was founded from the remains of what used to beLos be Los Angeles.
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. As the villain persoana,[[spoiler: its possible to break Herald's knee, beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE, [[BattleTrophy and even take a trophy]], all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. As the villain persoana,[[spoiler: its possible to The protagonist can potentially [[spoiler: break Herald's knee, beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE, TWICE while managing to [[BattleTrophy and even take a trophy]], a trophy]] the second time around, all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* DeadPersonImpersonation: What happens when [[spoiler: you take on your old hero name as your villain name. Of course, Ortega and Herald are outraged with this as they want to preserve and honor your legacy as a hero]].
** [[spoiler: you can also take on Anathema's name as your villian name.]].
** [[spoiler: you can also take on Anathema's name as your villian name.]].
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**[[spoiler: you can also take on Anathema's [[spoiler: Anathema's]] name as your villian name.]].
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but,depending on your choices,Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as the most dangerous villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but,depending but, depending on your choices,Sidestep choices, Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as the most dangerous villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. As the villain persoana,[[spoiler:its possible to break Herald's knee,beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE,[[BattleTrophyand even take a trophy]],all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. As the villain persoana,[[spoiler:its possible to break Herald's knee,beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE,[[BattleTrophyand TWICE,[[BattleTrophy and even take a trophy]],all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. As their villain persoana,[[spoiler:its possible to break herald's knee,beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE,all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: The entire gala fight can be this for the Rangers. As their the villain persoana,[[spoiler:its possible to break herald's Herald's knee,beat Ortega within an inch of their life and defeat Argent in combat TWICE,all TWICE,[[BattleTrophyand even take a trophy]],all the while not even getting wounded.]]
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* FromNobodytoNightmare: FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but,depending on your choices,Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as the most dangerous villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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* FromNobodytoNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices,Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as the most dangerous villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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* FromNobodytoNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending but,depending on your choices,Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as the most dangerous villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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* FromNobodytoNightmare:[[spoiler:Downplayed FromNobodytoNightmare: [[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices,Sidestep can potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to end up as the most dangerous villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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* From Nobody to Nightmare:[[spoiler:Depending on your choices,Sidestep can go from Ortega's sidekick to Los Diablos most dangerous villain.]]
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*From Nobody to Nightmare:[[spoiler:Depending FromNobodytoNightmare:[[spoiler:Downplayed in that Sidestep was not exactly your average person but, depending on your choices,Sidestep can go from potentialy start as Ortega's sidekick only to Los Diablos end up as the most dangerous villain.villain Los Diablos has encountered ]]
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