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The Omnibots were the only gestalt team who could merge into an intelligent and independent gestalt form. The leader of the Omnibots was always called a Prime, though after Rhythmus the First died heroically in battle against the Destrons[[note]]see 'The Destrons' for more information[[/note]] that title fell to Rhymus, who would come to found the first law of Terra, ''"Once a mecha has died, their body can no longer be considered an extension of themselves nor belonging to that person. All rights to the body were given up by the spark upon death, and any reclaiming of that right is a violation of our most sacred and natural of laws."''
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The Omnibots were the only gestalt team who could merge into an intelligent and independent gestalt form. The leader of the Omnibots was always called a Prime, though after Rhythmus the First died heroically in battle against the Destrons[[note]]see 'The Destrons' for more information[[/note]] that title fell to Rhymus, who would come to found the first law of Terra, ''"Once a mecha has died, their body can no longer be considered an extension of themselves nor belonging to that person. any given spark. All rights to the body were given up by the mecha's spark upon death, and any reclaiming of that right to life is a violation of our most sacred and natural of laws."''
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*TookALevelInBadass: In order to fight the Destrons on equal grounds, they replicated the technology the Destrons had used, giving them the legendary powers that would cause them [[CursedWithAwesome to be resurrected for]].
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* AlmightyIdiot: Too much PowerHigh came at a price. %%[[spoiler:This would end up making him more determined and single-minded in his goal to end Rhythmus, causing him to attack Killjoy. Only with the entire Omnibot gang working together do they manage to absorb his energy enough to stop him.]]
* PowerHigh: This is the main motivator for wishing to destroy Earth was to convert into more energy that they could feast on.
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* PowerHigh: This is the main motivator for wishing todestroy Earth was to convert Earth into more energy that they could feast on.
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Their leader, Destroyah[[note]]a name that is in the works[[/note]], was a powerful adversary and nemesis to Rhythmus Prime, and Destroyah even believed that he alone could defeat Rhythmus Prime and would never allow anyone else to face Rhythmus in combat because of this mindset. When Destroyah plotted to destroy the world, he went out to face Rhythmus in single combat, but after almost losing to the Prime he summoned up his four gestalt mates to aid him. Though Rhythmus died in the fight, all four of his gestalt mates also died, both at the hands of Rhythmus and the Cataclysm that wrecked the land and buried them alive. The original Omnibots recovered Rhythmus' body shortly afterwards, and Destroyah would come to believe that Rhythmus was still alive and he determined to wait for the fabled return. He would not become active until the twenty-first century, where a team of Sector 7 agents would recover his remains from beneath a mountain.
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Their leader, Destroyah[[note]]a name that is in the works[[/note]], was a powerful adversary and nemesis to Rhythmus Prime, and Destroyah even believed believing that he alone could defeat Rhythmus Prime and and, as a result, would never allow anyone else in his gestalt team to face Rhythmus in combat because of this mindset. alone. When Destroyah plotted Destroyah's plans to destroy the world, world finally came to fruition, he went out to face Rhythmus in single combat, but after almost losing to the Prime he summoned up his four gestalt mates to aid him. Though Rhythmus died in the fight, all four of his gestalt mates also died, both at the hands of Rhythmus and the Cataclysm that wrecked the land and buried them alive. The original Omnibots recovered Rhythmus' body shortly afterwards, and afterwards and, due to the events that followed, Destroyah would come to believe that Rhythmus was still alive and he determined to wait waited for the fabled return. Prime to seek him out and end him once and for all. It is unknown what happened to him after that. %% He would not become active again until the twenty-first century, where a team of Sector 7 agents would recover his remains from beneath a mountain.
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[[folder:The Destrons]]
A gestalt team of power mad monsters that rarely, if they could at all, transform into their rootmode. They sought power above all else, and sought to wipe out life on Earth a very long time ago - succeeding in wiping out the dinosaurs but failing to survive the cataclysm themselves. Their ability to consume energy was replicated by their enemies, the original Omnibots.
Their leader, Destroyah[[note]]a name that is in the works[[/note]], was a powerful adversary and nemesis to Rhythmus Prime, and Destroyah even believed that he alone could defeat Rhythmus Prime and would never allow anyone else to face Rhythmus in combat because of this mindset. When Destroyah plotted to destroy the world, he went out to face Rhythmus in single combat, but after almost losing to the Prime he summoned up his four gestalt mates to aid him. Though Rhythmus died in the fight, all four of his gestalt mates also died, both at the hands of Rhythmus and the Cataclysm that wrecked the land and buried them alive. The original Omnibots recovered Rhythmus' body shortly afterwards, and Destroyah would come to believe that Rhythmus was still alive and he determined to wait for the fabled return. He would not become active until the twenty-first century, where a team of Sector 7 agents would recover his remains from beneath a mountain.
*PowerHigh: This is the main motivator for wishing to destroy Earth was to convert into more energy that they could feast on.
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A gestalt team of power mad monsters that rarely, if they could at all, transform into their rootmode. They sought power above all else, and sought to wipe out life on Earth a very long time ago - succeeding in wiping out the dinosaurs but failing to survive the cataclysm themselves. Their ability to consume energy was replicated by their enemies, the original Omnibots.
Their leader, Destroyah[[note]]a name that is in the works[[/note]], was a powerful adversary and nemesis to Rhythmus Prime, and Destroyah even believed that he alone could defeat Rhythmus Prime and would never allow anyone else to face Rhythmus in combat because of this mindset. When Destroyah plotted to destroy the world, he went out to face Rhythmus in single combat, but after almost losing to the Prime he summoned up his four gestalt mates to aid him. Though Rhythmus died in the fight, all four of his gestalt mates also died, both at the hands of Rhythmus and the Cataclysm that wrecked the land and buried them alive. The original Omnibots recovered Rhythmus' body shortly afterwards, and Destroyah would come to believe that Rhythmus was still alive and he determined to wait for the fabled return. He would not become active until the twenty-first century, where a team of Sector 7 agents would recover his remains from beneath a mountain.
*PowerHigh: This is the main motivator for wishing to destroy Earth was to convert into more energy that they could feast on.
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[[folder:The Mentor]]
An ancient [=AI=] with strange ideas on how the world works and how it should work.
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The Hivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who is turned into a Pretender from ever moving or, in some cases, realizing they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either the Insecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].
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An ancient [=AI=] with strange ideas on how the world works and how it should work.
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The Hivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who is turned into a Pretender from ever moving or, in some cases, realizing they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either the Insecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].
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[[folder:The Mentor]]
An ancient [=AI=] with strange ideas on how the world works and how it should work.
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The Hivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who is turned into a Pretender from ever moving or, in some cases, realizing they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either the Insecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].
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An ancient [=AI=] with strange ideas on how the world works and how it should work.
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The Hivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who is turned into a Pretender from ever moving or, in some cases, realizing they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either the Insecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].
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%%Presumably created from a now dead or comatose sergeant of the Marines, who was brutally injured or killed due to an accident that kill most of those under her command, Briggs is a competent and loyal soldier who will do everything to make sure her teammates are safe, even those she doesn't like. She is otherwise friendly and compassionate, which changes after she is torn apart by [[spoiler:F.I.L.S.S.]] for trying to save [[spoiler:Alpha]] from [[spoiler:The Director]] and thus ended up as [[spoiler:Angel and Upsilon, the later which was a [[MindRape personification of all her love and devotion]]]].
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%%[[folder:Angel / Sgt. Vanessa Briggs]]
%%Presumably created from a now dead or comatose sergeant of the Marines, who was brutally injured or killed due to an accident that kill most of those under her command, Briggs is a competent and loyal soldier who will do everything to make sure her teammates are safe, even those she doesn't like. She is otherwise friendly and compassionate, which changes after she is torn apart by [[spoiler:F.I.L.S.S.]] for trying to save [[spoiler:Alpha]] from [[spoiler:The Director]] and thus ended up as [[spoiler:Angel and Upsilon, the later which was a [[MindRape personification of all her love and devotion]]]].
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%%She has nyctophilia and pyrophobia.
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* IronWoobie: {{Determinator}}.
* HarbingerOfImpendingDoom: Killjoy considers herself this [[spoiler:against anyone who would willfully hurt her homeworld]].
* IronWoobie: {{Determinator}}.
* IronWoobie: {{Determinator}}.
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They are an ancient warrior gestalt team that are [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge Keepers of the Forbidden Knowledge]], Kings or Queens of the Entire Planet, and well-respected warriors that are[[BackFromTheDead constantly resurrected to face threats]] [[CursedWithAwesome that the rest of the world doesn't know how to handle]] [[LazyBum or just isn't willing to deal with]]. The only living Omnibot currently is Killjoy.
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They are an ancient warrior gestalt team that are [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge Keepers of the Forbidden Knowledge]], Kings or Queens of the Entire Planet, and well-respected warriors that are[[BackFromTheDead are [[BackFromTheDead constantly resurrected to face threats]] [[CursedWithAwesome that the rest of the world doesn't know how to handle]] [[LazyBum or just isn't willing to deal with]]. The only living Omnibot currently is Killjoy.
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*FromNobodyToNightmare: see Omnibot entry for more info. Beware: Spoilers.
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They are an ancient warrior gestalt team that are [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge Keepers of the Forbidden Knowledge]], Kings or Queens of the Entire Planet, and well-respected and [[BackFromTheDead warriors that are[[BackFromTheDead constantly resurrected to face threats]] [[CursedWithAwesome that the rest of the world doesn't know how to handle]] [[LazyBum or just isn't willing to deal with]]. The only living Omnibot currently is Killjoy.
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*FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Often results from coming BackFromTheDead and CameBackWrong as the process forces the personality of the humans to overwrite the original, with memories of both the original and human coexisting, though one is stored in the helm and the other in the metallic spark chamber.]]
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%%[[folder:Sparkeater]]
%%Imagine a Vehicon that has no Hivemaster and only lives according to the few remaining programs inside of its mind. Such a Vehicon would, if uninterrupted, naturally become a Pretender. But someone decided that this mindless drone could be used for some other, nefarious purpose, and so its programming was altered. Except, the part of it that seeks out humans remained inbedded in its new coding, and at the first chance it got, it tried to become a Pretender. But, without all its essential programming, it became [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight something else]].
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%%Imagine a Vehicon that has no Hivemaster and only lives according to the few remaining programs inside of its mind. Such a Vehicon would, if uninterrupted, naturally become a Pretender. But someone decided that this mindless drone could be used for some other, nefarious purpose, and so its programming was altered. Except, the part of it that seeks out humans remained inbedded in its new coding, and at the first chance it got, it tried to become a Pretender. But, without all its essential programming, it became [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight something else]].
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Imagine a Vehicon that has no Hivemaster and only lives according to the few remaining programs inside of its mind. Such a Vehicon would, if uninterrupted, naturally become a Pretender. But someone decided that this mindless drone could be used for some other, nefarious purpose, and so its programming was altered. Except, the part of it that seeks out humans remained inbedded in its new coding, and at the first chance it got, it tried to become a Pretender. But, without all its essential programming, it became [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight something else]].
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* MessengerOfDoom: Killjoy considers herself this [[spoiler:against anyone who would willfully hurt her homeworld]].
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* ActionGirl: Becomes one after [[TookALevelInBadass taking a level in badass]].
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%%* TheBerserker: Becomes this shortly after waking up.
* BerserkButton: One of the first things she does after her transformation is slaughtering some random stranger in the woods. Sure, [[spoiler:it turns out to be a simulation]] but she doesn't know that, though [[spoiler:she had reacted because he was the simulated personification of her murderer]]. Any mention of her sister or best friends also causes this.
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%%* TheBerserker: Becomes this shortly after waking up.
* BerserkButton: One of the first things she does after her transformation is slaughtering some random stranger in the woods. Sure, [[spoiler:it turns out to be a simulation]] but she doesn't know that, though [[spoiler:she had reacted because he was the simulated personification of her murderer]]. Any mention of her sister or best friends also causes this.
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%%* TheBerserker: Becomes this shortly after waking up.
She TookALevelInBadass as well.
* BerserkButton: Possibly a [[TheBerserker berserker]]. One of the first things she does after her transformation is slaughtering some random stranger in the woods. Sure, [[spoiler:it turns out to be a simulation]] but she doesn't know that, though [[spoiler:she had reacted because he was the simulated personification of her murderer]]. Any mention of her sister or best friends also causes this.
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%%* TheBerserker: Becomes this shortly after waking up.
* BerserkButton: Possibly a [[TheBerserker berserker]]. One of the first things she does after her transformation is slaughtering some random stranger in the woods. Sure, [[spoiler:it turns out to be a simulation]] but she doesn't know that, though [[spoiler:she had reacted because he was the simulated personification of her murderer]]. Any mention of her sister or best friends also causes this.
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* DeathAmnesia: Only true for the first chapter.
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%%* FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler:Atlas Prime,]] though this is [[JustifiedTrope justified]].
%%* FollowInMyFootsteps: Played with. Her co-Creator, [[spoiler:Atlas Prime,]] wants her to follow in Rhythm's footsteps, [[spoiler:mostly because he thought she ''was'' Rhythm, except [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated she]] [[{{Main/Doppelganger}} really]] [[CameBackWrong wasn't]].]]
%%* FollowInMyFootsteps: Played with. Her co-Creator, [[spoiler:Atlas Prime,]] wants her to follow in Rhythm's footsteps, [[spoiler:mostly because he thought she ''was'' Rhythm, except [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated she]] [[{{Main/Doppelganger}} really]] [[CameBackWrong wasn't]].]]
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%%* ItsPersonal: Against Atlas, against the Hivemaster, and pretty much anyone else that presents itself as a large threat to Earth's security. [[spoiler:Oddly enough, she doesn't hold a grudge against her own murderer, but this could be because she's sorry for accidentally killing him in the simulation.]]
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%%* MessengerOfDoom: Killjoy considers herself this [[spoiler:against anyone who would willfully hurt her homeworld]].
* NomDeGuerre: Her real name is [[spoiler:Mercy Ferris]], but she insists on being called Killjoy, though others want to call her Rhythm instead.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Because the Mentor's training isn't anything other than one big [[spoiler:MindRape]], Killjoy had to learn how to defend herself on her own both on a conscious level and subconscious level[[note]] See The Berserker [[/note]].
* TranquilFury: Towards The Mentor [[spoiler: and proceeds to remain so as she picks a weapon for the impromptu 'training' and afterwards, even to the point of dismissing Atlas Prime shortly after waking up.]]
* [[spoiler:StockholmSyndrome: Due to the Mentor believing that MiseryBuildsCharacter and CreativeSterility are necessary for her to survive in the real world. It is unknown yet whether or not he succeed.]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Because the Mentor's training isn't anything other than one big [[spoiler:MindRape]], Killjoy had to learn how to defend herself on her own both on a conscious level and subconscious level[[note]] See The Berserker [[/note]].
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%%*ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Is mentioned very often whenever someone points out she looks like Rhythm, the previous guardian of Earth.
*[[spoiler:StockholmSyndrome: Due to the Mentor believing that MiseryBuildsCharacter and CreativeSterility are necessary for her to survive in the real world. It is unknown yet whether or not he succeed.]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Because the Mentor's training isn't anything other than one big [[spoiler:MindRape]], Killjoy had to learn how to defend herself on her own both on a conscious level and subconscious level[[note]] See The Berserker [[/note]].
* TranquilFury: Towards The Mentor [[spoiler: and proceeds Warning. You are getting close to remain so as she picks a weapon for the impromptu 'training' and afterwards, even to the point of dismissing Atlas Prime shortly after waking up.]][[BerserkButton pressing some buttons]].
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A peaceful knowledgeable group of Terrans who are either descendant of Pretenders gone by or Pretenders themselves. Because they trespassed on [[HolyGround sacred ground]], aka [[GreatBigLibraryOfEverything the Citadel]], they acquired knowledge that was forbidden for the world to know and used that knowledge to [[spoiler: constantly be resurrected from the [[CameBackWrong dead]].]] They live in [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis Omnibot City]] which supposedly was created by the original Omnibots themselves, but never actually was.
*[[spoiler:DeadAllAlong: Most CameBackWrong, but the truth of the matter is this, at least in the eyes of Terran Law.]]
*[[spoiler:TheUndead]]: Same reason as above.
*[[spoiler:DeadAllAlong: Most CameBackWrong, but the truth of the matter is this, at least in the eyes of Terran Law.]]
*[[spoiler:TheUndead]]: Same reason as above.
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* KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge: So much so, that they had nanobots everyone one the planet that could wipe the memories of all Cybertronians of any specific field of knowledge that they choosed, which would then be stored in [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis their]] [[GreatBigLibraryOfEverything Citadel]] for later.
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* KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge: So much so, that they had nanobots everyone one everywhere on the planet that could wipe the memories of all Cybertronians of in any specific field of knowledge that they choosed, choose, which would then be stored in [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis their]] [[GreatBigLibraryOfEverything Citadel]] for later.
later use.
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''The [=T0RN=] Trilogy'' is a story of a self-insert character who exists in an alternate reality where, even though the Fandom exists and the Canon Storylines exist, Transformers already exists. She's a ''huge'' fan of the show, but that knowledge doesn't mean anything because the universe she exists in is a conglomeration of every Transformer Continuity out there (with the Transformer Continuities strangely different from how she remembers them), with some new elements thrown in and other elements taken out. There are also many other fangirls and fanboys out there that are as GenreSavvy as she is, with the same problems. In any case, little of that knowledge matters and that is what she quickly comes to learn while being transformed into the perfect soldier to fight a threat only she is even aware of. [[CassandraTruth No one believes her about any of this, however,]] [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow or at least that's the reason she gives for not telling anyone about it]] [[AccentuateTheNegative believing that it wouldn't be worth her time to try to convince them]] [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge much to everyone else chagrin]].
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''The [=T0RN=] Trilogy'' is a story of a self-insert character who exists in an alternate reality where, even though the Fandom exists and the Canon Storylines exist, Transformers already exists. She's a ''huge'' fan of the show, but that knowledge doesn't mean anything because the universe she exists in is a conglomeration of every Transformer Continuity out there (with the Transformer Continuities strangely different from how she remembers them), with some new elements thrown in and other elements taken out. There are also many other fangirls and fanboys out there that are as GenreSavvy as she is, with the same problems. In any case, little of that knowledge matters and that is what she quickly comes to learn while being transformed into the perfect soldier to fight a threat only she is even aware of.
[[CassandraTruth No one believes her about any of this, however,]] [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow or at least that's the reason she gives for not telling anyone about it]] [[AccentuateTheNegative believing that it wouldn't be worth her time to try to convince them]] [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge much to everyoneelse else's chagrin]].
[[CassandraTruth No one believes her about any of this, however,]] [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow or at least that's the reason she gives for not telling anyone about it]] [[AccentuateTheNegative believing that it wouldn't be worth her time to try to convince them]] [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge much to everyone
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* ReluctantRuler: Her constant avoidance of taking on the name Rhythm is for this reason.
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[[folder:The Mentor]]
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The Hivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who is turned into a Pretender from ever moving or, in some cases, realizing they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either the Insecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The Hivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who is turned into a Pretender from ever moving or, in some cases, realizing they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either the Insecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].
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[[folder:The Mentor]]
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom:Omnibots]]
They are an ancient warrior gestalt team that are [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge Keepers of the Forbidden Knowledge]], Kings or Queens of the Entire Planet, and well-respected and [[BackFromTheDead constantly resurrected to face threats]] [[CursedWithAwesome that the rest of the world doesn't know how or isn't willing to deal with]]. TheHivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who only living Omnibot currently is turned into a Pretender Killjoy.
Not to be confused with the Omnicons.
*CursedWithAwesome: Their legendary powers, and the knowledge of how to resurrect them, constantly cause them to be brought back fromever moving or, in some cases, realizing the dead to face threats to the world. Sometimes, they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either [[CameBackWrong come back wrong]].
*KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge: So much so, that they had nanobots everyone one theInsecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].planet that could wipe the memories of all Cybertronians of any specific field of knowledge that they choosed, which would then be stored in [[AdvancedAncientAcropolis their]] [[GreatBigLibraryOfEverything Citadel]] for later.
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom:
They are an ancient warrior gestalt team that are [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge Keepers of the Forbidden Knowledge]], Kings or Queens of the Entire Planet, and well-respected and [[BackFromTheDead constantly resurrected to face threats]] [[CursedWithAwesome that the rest of the world doesn't know how or isn't willing to deal with]]. The
Not to be confused with the Omnicons.
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[[folder:The Mentor]]
* AIIsACrapshoot: Personification of.
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The Hivemaster [[spoiler:prevents anyone who is turned into a Pretender from ever moving or, in some cases, realizing they are even Cybertronian, trapping them in a simulation program and thus preventing them from escaping either the Insecticons or Sparkeaters who hunt them down to eat them]].
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''The [=T0RN=] Trilogy'' is a story of a self-insert character who exists in an alternate reality where, even though the Fandom exists and the Canon Storylines exist, Transformers already exists. She's a ''huge'' fan of the show, but that knowledge doesn't mean anything because the universe she exists in is a conglomeration of every Transformer Continuity out there (with the Transformer Continuities strangely different from how she remembers them), with some new elements thrown in and other elements taken out. There are also many other fangirls and fanboys out there that are as GenreSavvy as she is, with the same problems. In any case, little of that knowledge matters and that is what she quickly comes to learn while being transformed into the perfect soldier to fight a threat only she is even aware of. [[CassandraTruth No one believes her about any of this, however.]]
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''The [=T0RN=] Trilogy'' is a story of a self-insert character who exists in an alternate reality where, even though the Fandom exists and the Canon Storylines exist, Transformers already exists. She's a ''huge'' fan of the show, but that knowledge doesn't mean anything because the universe she exists in is a conglomeration of every Transformer Continuity out there (with the Transformer Continuities strangely different from how she remembers them), with some new elements thrown in and other elements taken out. There are also many other fangirls and fanboys out there that are as GenreSavvy as she is, with the same problems. In any case, little of that knowledge matters and that is what she quickly comes to learn while being transformed into the perfect soldier to fight a threat only she is even aware of. [[CassandraTruth No one believes her about any of this, however.]]
however,]] [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow or at least that's the reason she gives for not telling anyone about it]] [[AccentuateTheNegative believing that it wouldn't be worth her time to try to convince them]] [[KeeperOfForbiddenKnowledge much to everyone else chagrin]].
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''The [=T0RN=] Trilogy'' is a story of a self-insert character who exists in an alternate reality where, even though the Fandom exists and the Canon Storylines exist, Transformers already exists. She's a ''huge'' fan of the show, but that knowledge doesn't mean anything because the universe she exists in is a conglomeration of every Transformer Continuity out there (with the Transformer Continuities strangely different from how she remembers them), with some new elements thrown in and other elements taken out. There are also many other fangirls and fanboys out there that are as GenrySavvy as she is, with the same problems. In any case, little of that knowledge matters and that is what she quickly comes to learn while being transformed into the perfect soldier to fight a threat only she is even aware of. [[CassandraTruth No one believes her about any of this, however.]]
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''The [=T0RN=] Trilogy'' is a story of a self-insert character who exists in an alternate reality where, even though the Fandom exists and the Canon Storylines exist, Transformers already exists. She's a ''huge'' fan of the show, but that knowledge doesn't mean anything because the universe she exists in is a conglomeration of every Transformer Continuity out there (with the Transformer Continuities strangely different from how she remembers them), with some new elements thrown in and other elements taken out. There are also many other fangirls and fanboys out there that are as GenrySavvy GenreSavvy as she is, with the same problems. In any case, little of that knowledge matters and that is what she quickly comes to learn while being transformed into the perfect soldier to fight a threat only she is even aware of. [[CassandraTruth No one believes her about any of this, however.]]
* SlidingScaleOfRealisticVersusFantastic: Keeping to the more Unsual side of things.
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* NightmareFuel: Chapter 3 and 4, especially after the ending is revealed [[spoiler:that the main character was trapped in a simulation while being slowly mind-raped by the very creature who had been posing as her Mentor and claiming to help her adjust to her new body]].[[note]]MindRape[[/note]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler:The whole story is one big one for the main character.]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler:The whole story is one big one for the main character.]]
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''The [=T0RN=] Trilogy'' is a story of a self-insert character who exists in an alternate reality where Transformers already exists. She's a huge fan of the show, but that knowledge doesn't mean anything because the universe she exists in is a conglomeration of every Transformer Continuity out there, with some new elements thrown in and other elements thrown out. Also, the show itself actually exists in universe, meaning that there are more than just one GenreSavvy character out there. In any case, little of that knowledge matters and that is what she quickly comes to learn.
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A DarkerAndEdgier DeconReconSwitch fanfiction centered around a misplaced (hopefully) [[MarySue non-Mary-Sue]] fan who finds herself in an Alternate Universe[[note]]non-PseudocanonicalFic, at least in the sense that the entire storyline is original[[/note]] where anything can happen. The main character is meant to be female BadAss and less of a DamselInDistress as most fan in fanverse themed stories like to do. This is not a WishFulfillment Fic, as it is intended to be more of a [[NightmareFuel warning]] to the audience about the hazards of universe jumping and ending up in the wrong universe. [[WordOfGod There's an infinite number of universes out there, with a very slim chance that you'll land in one that is a lot like the Transformer movies or cartoon. Half of them belong in the Shattered Glass universe, which means you have a 50/50 shot of ending up in a world where Optimus Prime is a psychopath.]]
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This is a DarkerAndEdgier DeconReconSwitch fanfiction centered around a misplaced (hopefully) [[MarySue non-Mary-Sue]] fan who finds herself in an Alternate
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I think my goal in life for fanfiction right now is coming up with a Self-Insert story that actually appeals to me. There are a lot of Self-Insert fanfics out there that require that the SI Character have special powers or some such, withlittle to no personality. There's no creativity in the story plots or any change in the canon storyline. I don't know why - maybe because they want to play it safe and just shove their characters inbetween two lines in the script. That isn't creativity, or original. Especially in regards to fan in fandom traveling to fanverse, there is no attempt at coming up with a ''reason'' for why this person exists - they just ''do''. That's the earmark of a Mary-wishfulfillment-Sue. I have grown tired of seeing stories like that. I want a SI story that has a little mystery in it, that has some new elements, and that actually gives the SI character a challenge to solve, as well as give them some personal growth. Even some of the stories I have favorited on Fanfiction.Net don't meet the standards I have set for myself, and I think its high time that I started writing them.
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheet OCs that are just inserted into the story. I mean someone from '''our''' world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be by the end of the day which is predictable, by the way. ''Well'', not in ''my'' case. In my stories, these [=OCs/SIs=] know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists, without actually changing the canon story (ESPECIALLY if that story doesn't make sense or sucks to begin with).
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheet OCs that are just inserted into the story. I mean someone from '''our''' world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be by the end of the day which is predictable, by the way. ''Well'', not in ''my'' case. In my stories, these [=OCs/SIs=] know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists, without actually changing the canon story (ESPECIALLY if that story doesn't make sense or sucks to begin with).
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I think my goal in life for fanfiction right now is coming up with a Self-Insert story that actually appeals to me. There are a lot of Self-Insert fanfics out there that require that the SI Character have special powers or some such, withlittle to no personality. There's no creativity in the story plots or any change in the canon storyline. I don't know why - maybe because they want to play it safe and just shove their characters inbetween two lines in the script. That isn't creativity, or original. Especially in regards to fan in fandom traveling to fanverse, there is no attempt at coming up with a ''reason'' for why this person exists - they just ''do''. That's the earmark of a Mary-wishfulfillment-Sue.[[MarySue Mary]]-[[WishFulfillment Wish-Fulfillment]]-[[MarySue Sue]]. I have grown tired of seeing stories like that. I want a SI story that has a little mystery in it, that has some new elements, and that actually gives the SI character a challenge to solve, as well as give them some personal growth. Even some of the stories I have favorited on Fanfiction.Net don't meet the standards I have set for myself, and I think its high time that I started writing them.
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheetOCs [=OCs=] that are just inserted into the story. I mean someone from '''our''' world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be by the end of the day which is predictable, by the way. ''Well'', not in ''my'' case. In my stories, these [=OCs/SIs=] know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists, without actually changing the canon story (ESPECIALLY if that story doesn't make sense or sucks to begin with).
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheet
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!'''The Killjoy'''
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!'''The Killjoy / [[spoiler:Mercy Ferris / Rhythm the Left Arm]]'''
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Killjoy'''
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Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheet OCs that are just inserted into the story. I mean someone from '''our''' world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be by the end of the day which is predictable, by the way. ''Well'', not in ''my'' case. In my stories, these OCs/SIs know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists, without actually changing the canon story (ESPECIALLY if that story doesn't make sense or sucks to begin with).
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Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheet OCs that are just inserted into the story. I mean someone from '''our''' world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be by the end of the day which is predictable, by the way. ''Well'', not in ''my'' case. In my stories, these OCs/SIs [=OCs/SIs=] know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists, without actually changing the canon story (ESPECIALLY if that story doesn't make sense or sucks to begin with).
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[[folder:Transformers: The TORN Trilogy]]
A DarkerAndEdgier DeconReconSwitch fanfiction centered around a misplaced (hopefully) [[MarySue non-Mary-Sue]] fan who finds herself in an Alternate Universe[[note]]non-PseudocanonicalFic, at least in the sense that the entire storyline is original[[/note]] where anything can happen.
Kind of a result of CreatorBreakdown.
A DarkerAndEdgier DeconReconSwitch fanfiction centered around a misplaced (hopefully) [[MarySue non-Mary-Sue]] fan who finds herself in an Alternate Universe[[note]]non-PseudocanonicalFic, at least in the sense that the entire storyline is original[[/note]] where anything can happen.
Kind of a result of CreatorBreakdown.
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A DarkerAndEdgier DeconReconSwitch fanfiction centered around a misplaced (hopefully) [[MarySue non-Mary-Sue]] fan who finds herself in an Alternate Universe[[note]]non-PseudocanonicalFic, at least in the sense that the entire storyline is original[[/note]] where anything can
Kind of a result of
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%%* BuffySpeak: There are so many things that I think about and showing - ''expressing'' - it is just so hard - you know why I write, right? I write because those things that happen in the brain, the firing of synapsus, and stuff, happen so fast that my mouth parts and vocabulary just can't keep up. Putting it on paper makes my life so much easier because I can organize my thoughts on paper, not so much in the air. Out loud. Whatever. My fingers "speak" better most of the time.
%%* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: Which is partially the reason why I'm AllergicToRoutine.
%%* LetsGetDangerous: My grades are usually at the C range, but if someone decides to push my buttons enough I have a tendency to skyrocket to an all A student. This happens on a lesser level when a conversation I'm in turns from lazy and fun to deadly serious. Or it could just be me naturally being ObfuscatingInsanity, but I don't know.
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%%* BuffySpeak: There are so many things that I think about and showing - ''expressing'' - it is just so hard - you know why I write, right? I write because those things that happen in the brain, the firing of synapsus, and stuff, happen so fast that my mouth parts and vocabulary just can't keep up. Putting it on paper makes my life so much easier because I can organize my thoughts on paper, not so much in the air. Out loud. Whatever. My fingers "speak" better most of the time.
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%%* BuffySpeak: There are so many things that I think about and showing - ''expressing'' - it is just so hard - you know why I write, right? I write because those things that happen in the brain, the firing of synapsus, and stuff, happen so fast that my mouth parts and vocabulary just can't keep up. Putting it on paper makes my life so much easier because I can organize my thoughts on paper, not so much in the air. Out loud. Whatever. My fingers "speak" better most of the time.
%%* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: Which is partially the reason why I'm AllergicToRoutine.
%%* LetsGetDangerous: My grades are usually at the C range, but if someone decides to push my buttons enough I have a tendency to skyrocket to an all A student. This happens on a lesser level when a conversation I'm in turns from lazy and fun to deadly serious. Or it could just be me naturally being ObfuscatingInsanity, but I don't know.
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A DarkerAndEdgier DeconReconSwitch fanfiction centered around a misplaced (hopefully) [[MarySue non-Mary-Sue]] fan who finds herself in an Alternate Universe Universe[[note]]non-PseudocanonicalFic, at least in the sense that the entire storyline is original[[/note]] where anything can happen.
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%%* BuffySpeak: There are so many things that I think about and showing - ''expressing'' - it is just so hard - you know why I write, right? I write because those things that happen in the brain, the firing of synapsus, and stuff, happen so fast that my mouth parts and vocabulary just can't keep up. Putting it on paper makes my life so much easier because I can organize my thoughts on paper, not so much in the air. Out loud. Whatever. My fingers "speak" better most of the time.
%%* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: Which is partially the reason why I'm AllergicToRoutine.
%%* LetsGetDangerous: My grades are usually at the C range, but if someone decides to push my buttons enough I have a tendency to skyrocket to an all A student. This happens on a lesser level when a conversation I'm in turns from lazy and fun to deadly serious. Or it could just be me naturally being ObfuscatingInsanity, but I don't know.
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%%* BuffySpeak: There are so many things that I think about and showing - ''expressing'' - it is just so hard - you know why I write, right? I write because those things that happen in the brain, the firing of synapsus, and stuff, happen so fast that my mouth parts and vocabulary just can't keep up. Putting it on paper makes my life so much easier because I can organize my thoughts on paper, not so much in the air. Out loud. Whatever. My fingers "speak" better most of the time.
%%* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: Which is partially the reason why I'm AllergicToRoutine.
%%* LetsGetDangerous: My grades are usually at the C range, but if someone decides to push my buttons enough I have a tendency to skyrocket to an all A student. This happens on a lesser level when a conversation I'm in turns from lazy and fun to deadly serious. Or it could just be me naturally being ObfuscatingInsanity, but I don't know.
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A DarkerAndEdgier DeconReconSwitch fanfiction centered around a misplaced fan who finds herself in an Alternate Universe where anything can happen.
Kind of a result of CreatorBreakdown.
!!!'''Genesis'''
* AIIsACrapshoot: One of the main antagonists is this.
* {{Be Careful What You Wish For}}/{{Wish Fulfillment}}: The entire fanfic is a combination of both of these for Killjoy.
!!!'''Revelation'''
* OurMonstersAreDifferent: Because this is an AU, many of the canon variants of Transformers, like Brainmasters, Headmasters, Targetmasters, etc., are turned into [[spoiler:the deviations of a race which is the literal personification of the Sparkeater]].
* ScavengerWorld: For the Pretenders and Insecticons, at least, the entire planet Earth Underground is basically this, [[spoiler:unless you're a part of Omnibot City or an Outpost run by an ex-Decepticon or some such]].
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A DarkerAndEdgier self-insert fanfic that [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructs]] and then [[{{Reconstruction}} reconstructs]] the general idea of a self-insert fic.
Kind of a result of CreatorBreakdown.
!!!'''Genesis'''
* AIIsACrapshoot: One of the main antagonists is this.
* {{Be Careful What You Wish For}}/{{Wish Fulfillment}}: The entire fanfic is a combination of both of these for Killjoy.
!!!'''Revelation'''
* OurMonstersAreDifferent: Because this is an AU, many of the canon variants of Transformers, like Brainmasters, Headmasters, Targetmasters, etc., are turned into [[spoiler:the deviations of a race which is the literal personification of the Sparkeater]].
* ScavengerWorld: For the Pretenders and Insecticons, at least, the entire planet Earth Underground is basically this, [[spoiler:unless you're a part of Omnibot City or an Outpost run by an ex-Decepticon or some such]].
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I think my goal in life for fanfiction right now is coming up with a Self-Insert story that actually appeals to me. There are a lot of Self-Insert fanfics out there that require that the SI Character have special powers or some such, and little to no personality, in order to actually exist. There is no attempt at coming up with a ''reason'' for why this person exists - they just ''do''. I have grown tired of seeing stories like that. I want a SI story that has a little mystery in it, that has some new elements, and that actually gives the SI character a challenge to solve, as well as give them some personal growth. Even some of the stories I have favorited on Fanfiction.Net don't meet the standards I have set for myself, and I think its high time that I started writing them.
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I mean someone from our world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be. Well, not in my case. They know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists.
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I mean someone from our world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be. Well, not in my case. They know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists.
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I think my goal in life for fanfiction right now is coming up with a Self-Insert story that actually appeals to me. There are a lot of Self-Insert fanfics out there that require that the SI Character have special powers or some such, and little withlittle to no personality, personality. There's no creativity in order the story plots or any change in the canon storyline. I don't know why - maybe because they want to actually exist. There play it safe and just shove their characters inbetween two lines in the script. That isn't creativity, or original. Especially in regards to fan in fandom traveling to fanverse, there is no attempt at coming up with a ''reason'' for why this person exists - they just ''do''.''do''. That's the earmark of a Mary-wishfulfillment-Sue. I have grown tired of seeing stories like that. I want a SI story that has a little mystery in it, that has some new elements, and that actually gives the SI character a challenge to solve, as well as give them some personal growth. Even some of the stories I have favorited on Fanfiction.Net don't meet the standards I have set for myself, and I think its high time that I started writing them.
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheet OCs that are just inserted into the story. I mean someone fromour '''our''' world who is a fan of a show or continuity ending up in a universe with striking similarities to the show they fell in love with. I don't necessarily mean the author actually being inserted into the story, though that's basically what most of them are intended to be. Well, be by the end of the day which is predictable, by the way. ''Well'', not in my ''my'' case. They In my stories, these OCs/SIs know of the shows, fell in love with the shows, but when they finally end up in them, the harsh slap of reality causes them to realize that nothing is as they thought it would be. I think that makes a better story then 'Fix-It-Sue/Slash Me' succeeds at everything, or becomes the sole focus of the antagonists.
antagonists, without actually changing the canon story (ESPECIALLY if that story doesn't make sense or sucks to begin with).
Note when I say 'self-insert' character, I don't mean those blank sheet OCs that are just inserted into the story. I mean someone from
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%%''The Long Ranger'' is a Justice League/Young Justice crossover which uses the story of all the Animated Cartoons, including Teen Titans and Green Lanterns, to recreate the story of Young Justice. This is an actually attempt to fix some of the truly terrible plot lines in the show, focusing instead more on drama rather than adventure (which is what the show failed to do because of its startlingly rapid pace). It never made sense for me that villains would work swimmingly together, as the Light obviously does, when the head honchos have different ideas of how the end result should effect the world. In all truth, I think the Light was really just Vandal Savage played spectacularly poorly, considering that his goals were never established (probably because they were trying to avoid the whole "evil monologue") and that his prior incarnations and the prior incarnations of the other Light heads had very different Agenda's and goals that never feasibly could mesh well. I use my [=OC=] here as a tool to investigate and explore the problem on a deeper level, both involving how all the cartoons play into it and how drastically different the result of the changes are from the original show, as well as what remained the same (and very few stuff does remain the same).
%%''The Long Ranger'' is a Justice League/Young Justice crossover which uses the story of all the Animated Cartoons, including Teen Titans and Green Lanterns, to recreate the story of Young Justice. This is an actually attempt to fix some of the truly terrible plot lines in the show, focusing instead more on drama rather than adventure (which is what the show failed to do because of its startlingly rapid pace). It never made sense for me that villains would work swimmingly together, as the Light obviously does, when the head honchos have different ideas of how the end result should effect the world. In all truth, I think the Light was really just Vandal Savage played spectacularly poorly, considering that his goals were never established (probably because they were trying to avoid the whole "evil monologue") and that his prior incarnations and the prior incarnations of the other Light heads had very different Agenda's and goals that never feasibly could mesh well. I use my [=OC=] here as a tool to investigate and explore the problem on a deeper level, both involving how all the cartoons play into it and how drastically different the result of the changes are from the original show, as well as what remained the same (and very few stuff does remain the same).
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%%* {{Determinator}}: One of the things that keeps her going.
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I think my goal in life for fanfiction right now is coming up with a Self-Insert story that ''actually'' appeals to me. There are a lot of Self-Insert fanfics out there that require that the SI Character have special powers or some such, and little to no personality, in order to actually exist. There is no attempt at coming up with a ''reason'' for why this person exists - they just ''do''. I have grown tired of seeing stories like that. I want a SI story that has a little mystery in it, that has some new elements, and that actually gives the SI character a challenge to solve, as well as give them some personal growth. Even some of the stories I have favorited on Fanfiction.Net don't meet the standards I have set for myself, and I think its high time that I started writing them.
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I think my goal in life for fanfiction right now is coming up with a Self-Insert story that ''actually'' actually appeals to me. There are a lot of Self-Insert fanfics out there that require that the SI Character have special powers or some such, and little to no personality, in order to actually exist. There is no attempt at coming up with a ''reason'' for why this person exists - they just ''do''. I have grown tired of seeing stories like that. I want a SI story that has a little mystery in it, that has some new elements, and that actually gives the SI character a challenge to solve, as well as give them some personal growth. Even some of the stories I have favorited on Fanfiction.Net don't meet the standards I have set for myself, and I think its high time that I started writing them.
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* GenreSavvy: SubvertedTrope.
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* GenreSavvy: SubvertedTrope.Zigzagged. In the beginning, she knows and understands that she's in a fanfic, but at the same time the rules of normal SI fanfics don't apply to her situation as she's dealing with [='OC's'=], and one background character, instead of canon characters. %%[[Spoiler:She later runs into the real Transformers from the canon universe, but discovers that the cartoon she grew up with is not how she remembers it. Memories of the fandom, cartoon, and character names have all been edited, and the real cartoon is based off the story of Nemesis Prime and Sentinal Prime, which happened before the times of her memories as Rhythm.]]
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%%* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Is mentioned very often whenever someone points out she looks like Rhythm, the previous guardian of Earth.
*[[spoiler:ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated]][[spoiler:StockholmSyndrome: Due to the Mentor believing that MiseryBuildsCharacter and CreativeSterility are necessary for her to survive in the real world. It is unknown yet whether or not he succeed.]]
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: The [[spoiler:Mentor's]] main focus during the [[spoiler:simulation]] had been to turn Killjoy into this. However, this failed due to the fact that [[spoiler:she was already conditioned for horror after being forced to live with the fact that her sister had watched her die]].
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* [[spoiler:DeathAmnesia]]DeathAmnesia: Only true for the first chapter.
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%%* FireForgedFriends: First with the Freelancers against The Director, [[spoiler:then the Reds and Blues against the Meta,]] [[spoiler:and finally Private Jackson against Corporal Lance]].
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%%* FireForgedFriends: First with the Freelancers against The Director, [[spoiler:then the Reds and Blues against the Meta,]] [[spoiler:and finally Private Jackson against Corporal Lance]].Hawkins]].
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%%* ItsPersonalWithTheDragon: [[spoiler:When it comes to Corporal Lance, everything is personal. Part of a CycleOfRevenge.]]
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%%* ItsPersonalWithTheDragon: [[spoiler:When it comes to Corporal Lance, Hawkins, everything is personal. Part of a CycleOfRevenge.]]
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%%* ThisMeansWar: Literally, in the case of Corporal Lance.
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%%* ThisMeansWar: Literally, in the case of Corporal Lance.Hawkins.
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