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* TheCape: Living up to his name, Saviour has become the role model for many; young, old, normal, and those with powers. He is the most powerful hero in his respected universe, and as a result only intervenes when absolutely necessary as to not overshadow any upcoming heroes.
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* TheCape: Living up to his name, Saviour has become the role model for many; young, old, normal, and those with powers. He is the most powerful hero in his respected universe, and as a result only intervenes when absolutely necessary as to not overshadow any upcoming heroes. As the original Enhanced Human, he had a big part in creating the [[SuperheroSchool FEI (Facility for Enhanced Individuals)]] and currently acts as the facility's manager.
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was, even taking on his predecessor's responsibility of manager. ]]
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* Personality: I just said up in my introduction. See, right there?
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* Personality: I just said up in my introduction. See, right there?Myers-Briggs personality type: INFP-T (Mediator)
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* KillingIntent: Zol projects an intense aura of murderous intent with his mere presence. This is actually a secondary power that he absorbed from Jackson Rainer. (that is, the version of him in ''The Enhanced.'')
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* KillingIntent: Zol projects an intense aura of murderous intent with his mere presence. This is actually a secondary power that he absorbed from Jackson Rainer. Rainer (that is, the version of him in ''The Enhanced.'')
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* CompleteMonster: He/she/it fits this to a T. Zol has no remorse, no mercy, and no respect for anything but himself. This is because he has so many conflicting personalities absorb that they essentially cancel each other out.
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* CompleteMonster: He/she/it fits this to a T. Zol has no remorse, no mercy, and no respect for anything but himself. This is because he has so many conflicting personalities absorb absorbed that they essentially effectively cancel each other out.
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* TheAssimilator: His primary ability, he absorbs Enhanced Humans into his mass, which gives him their abilities. This does not kill the victims, and sometimes they can break free. If they do, however, their powers will be vacant for a varying length of time, and Zol will keep their abilities regardless whether they are part of his mass or not.
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* TheAssimilator: His primary ability, he absorbs Enhanced Humans into his mass, which gives him their abilities. This does not kill the victims, and sometimes they can break free. If they do, however, their powers will be vacant for a varying length of time, and Zol will keep their abilities regardless whether they are part of his mass or not.and form regardless.
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* TheAssimilator: His primary ability, he absorbs Enhanced Humans into his mass, which gives him their abilities. Sometimes This does not kill the absorbed victims, and sometimes they can break free, but free. If they do, however, their powers will be vacant for a varying length of time, and Zol will keep their abilities regardless whether they are part of his mass or not.
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* VoiceOfTheLegion: A side effect of absorbing Enhanced. He gains the ability to mimic their voice if he concentrates, and can also [[YouAreWhoYouEat shift his appearance into them.]]
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!!Zol [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast (The Consumer)]]
* TheAssimilator: His primary ability, he absorbs Enhanced Humans into his mass, which gives him their abilities. Sometimes the absorbed can break free, but their powers will be vacant for a varying length of time, and Zol will keep their abilities regardless whether they are part of his mass or not.
* CompleteMonster: He/she/it fits this to a T. Zol has no remorse, no mercy, and no respect for anything but himself. This is because he has so many conflicting personalities absorb that they essentially cancel each other out.
* KillingIntent: Zol projects an intense aura of murderous intent with his mere presence. This is actually a secondary power that he absorbed from Jackson Rainer. (that is, the version of him in ''The Enhanced.'')
* ShadowWalker: Of the creation variety. One of Zol's absorbed powers is the ability to generate shadows in a confined area. He also uses this power to cover his [[NightmareFace hideous appearance.]]
* TheAssimilator: His primary ability, he absorbs Enhanced Humans into his mass, which gives him their abilities. Sometimes the absorbed can break free, but their powers will be vacant for a varying length of time, and Zol will keep their abilities regardless whether they are part of his mass or not.
* CompleteMonster: He/she/it fits this to a T. Zol has no remorse, no mercy, and no respect for anything but himself. This is because he has so many conflicting personalities absorb that they essentially cancel each other out.
* KillingIntent: Zol projects an intense aura of murderous intent with his mere presence. This is actually a secondary power that he absorbed from Jackson Rainer. (that is, the version of him in ''The Enhanced.'')
* ShadowWalker: Of the creation variety. One of Zol's absorbed powers is the ability to generate shadows in a confined area. He also uses this power to cover his [[NightmareFace hideous appearance.]]
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Anok]] (Pulse)
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: An odd kind. He seems to put up a front of a humanlike nature, but anyone close to him knows that he is surprisingly cold and detached. His true personality is more akin to a hardened, old soldier than that of a young man. [[spoiler: It is justified by the fact that he is well into his hundreds, that and his alien morality system.]]
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(Pulse) [[spoiler: Real name Rine Anok]]
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the fact that [[TokenNonHuman he is an alien.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: AmbiguouslyHuman: The FEI (that is, the Facility BewareTheSillyOnes: Advice for Enhanced Individuals) were suspicious of villains: Do ''not'' be around Ryan from the start. Why? Because all Enhanced have a "mental switch" that activates their powers, allowing them when attempting to live relatively normal lives. Ryan ''has no such thing.'']]
harm innocents. That's bad enough. Attempting to harm those he considers friends is ''suicidal.''
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: An odd kind. He seems to put up a front of a humanlike nature, but anyone close to him knows that he is surprisingly cold and detached. His true personality is more akin to a hardened, old soldier than that of a young man. [[spoiler: It is justified by the fact that he is well into his hundreds, that and his alien morality system.]]
* GlowingEyesOfDoom: Whenever Ryan activates his abilities his eyes start emitting white-hot plasma. This seems to have no effect on him and his combat abilities, but it [[RuleOfCool looks damn cool.]]
* [[spoiler: AmbiguouslyHuman: The FEI (that is, the Facility for Enhanced Individuals) were suspicious of Ryan from the start. Why? Because all Enhanced have a "mental switch" that activates their powers, allowing them to live relatively normal lives. Ryan ''has no such thing.'']]
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: An odd kind. He seems to put up a front of a humanlike nature, but anyone close to him knows that he is surprisingly cold and detached. His true personality is more akin to a hardened, old soldier than that of a young man. [[spoiler: It is justified by the fact that he is well into his hundreds, that and his alien morality system.]]
* GlowingEyesOfDoom: Whenever Ryan activates his abilities his eyes start emitting white-hot plasma. This seems to have no effect on him and his combat abilities, but it [[RuleOfCool looks damn cool.]]
* [[spoiler: AmbiguouslyHuman: The FEI (that is, the Facility for Enhanced Individuals) were suspicious of Ryan from the start. Why? Because all Enhanced have a "mental switch" that activates their powers, allowing them to live relatively normal lives. Ryan ''has no such thing.'']]
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''The Enhanced'' is a superhero novel that I am currently working on.
By "working on" I mean I haven't even finished the first draft yet.
[[RidiculousProcrastinator Productivity!]]
By "working on" I mean I haven't even finished the first draft yet.
[[RidiculousProcrastinator Productivity!]]
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* BerserkButton: Do not make any "soulless ginger" jokes in my presence. I have heard them way too many times to even bother tolerating them anymore. I will hunt you down and find a way to eviscerate you[[HypocrisyNod ...wait a second.]]
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* CheshireCatGrin: I can pull one off pretty well, much to my friends... displeasure.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Er, kind of. I won't get into it here, but it was enough to develop a [[NervousWreck social anxiety disorder.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: I tend to resort to sarcasm and witty comebacks as often as I can. About ''everything.'' If I don't, I'm a very quiet person, so I'm avoiding you getting bored of me.
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* CheshireCatGrin: I can pull one off pretty well, much to my friends... displeasure.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Er, kind of. I won't get into it here, but it was enough to develop a [[NervousWreck social anxiety disorder.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: I tend to resort to sarcasm and witty comebacks as often as I can. About ''everything.'' If I don't, I'm a very quiet person, so I'm avoiding you getting bored of me.
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* StutterStop: Jackson originally suffered from a stutter, but repeated use of his Killer Mode has seemed to cure it for now.
* HeroicHost: Of the [[EldritchAbomination Galek-Modoth,]] Zol-Karthoth. Zol resides in his mind, and speaks to Jackson through his subconscious. When Jackson is under intense stress, Zol draws on eldritch power and boosts Jackson to his physical limits, and essentially doubling his strength and speed. If Jackson agrees, he can swap places with Zol so the creature can communicate directly with others.
* HeroicHost: Of the [[EldritchAbomination Galek-Modoth,]] Zol-Karthoth. Zol resides in his mind, and speaks to Jackson through his subconscious. When Jackson is under intense stress, Zol draws on eldritch power and boosts Jackson to his physical limits, and essentially doubling his strength and speed. If Jackson agrees, he can swap places with Zol so the creature can communicate directly with others.
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* StutterStop: Jackson originally suffered from a stutter, but repeated use of it seems to have been cured after he had used his Killer Mode has seemed to cure it full power for now.
the first time.
* HeroicHost: Of the [[EldritchAbomination Galek-Modoth,]] Zol-Karthoth. Zol resides in his mind, and speaks to Jackson through his subconscious. When Jackson is under intense stress, Zol draws on eldritch power and boosts Jackson to his physical limits,and essentially doubling his strength and speed. If Jackson agrees, he can swap places with Zol so the creature can communicate directly with others.
* HeroicHost: Of the [[EldritchAbomination Galek-Modoth,]] Zol-Karthoth. Zol resides in his mind, and speaks to Jackson through his subconscious. When Jackson is under intense stress, Zol draws on eldritch power and boosts Jackson to his physical limits,
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* ShockAndAwe: His primary power is electrokinesis, although he can also manipulate electromagnetic forces to a certain extent. The limit of his power is manipulating the positive and negative charges in the atmosphere, giving him the ability to summon a lightning bolt even when indoors.while indoors. Physics be damned!
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* TheAce: Overlapping with TheRival, Cillian is among the strongest heroes in his universe. While he is nowhere near as powerful as Saviour, he has gained much attention for his [[ComboPlatterPowers large list of abilities.]] Such abilities include healing, superhuman strength, superhuman speed, and even ''shapeshifting.''
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being. [[spoiler: A fact that he is now all to aware of. [[MentorOccupationalHazard Or rather, not.]]]]
!Vertex: (Cillian Martin)
* TheAce: Overlapping with TheRival, Cillian is among the strongest heroes in his universe. While he is nowhere near as powerful as Saviour, he has gained much attention for his [[ComboPlatterPowers large list of abilities.]] Such abilities include healing, superhuman strength, and superhuman speed.
* SmugSuper: Cillian has some... [[{{Understatement}} ego issues,]] and it is the only thing holding him back from being a respected hero. [[spoiler: He eventually realises this, however, with the death of Saviour.]]
* LegacyCharacter: Cillian takes on the moniker of [[spoiler: Saviour II after his passing. With his change of personality, he is almost unrecognisable from the arrogant individual he once was.]]
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!Vertex: (Cillian Martin)
* TheAce: Overlapping with TheRival, Cillian is among the strongest heroes in his universe. While he is nowhere near as powerful as Saviour, he has gained much attention for his [[ComboPlatterPowers large list of abilities.]] Such abilities include healing, superhuman strength, and superhuman speed.
* SmugSuper: Cillian has some... [[{{Understatement}} ego issues,]] and it is the only thing holding him back from being a respected hero. [[spoiler: He eventually realises this, however, with the death of Saviour.]]
* LegacyCharacter: Cillian takes on the moniker of [[spoiler: Saviour II after his passing. With his change of personality, he is almost unrecognisable from the arrogant individual he once was.]]
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!Saviour
* TheCape: Living up to his name, Saviour has become the role model for many; young, old, normal, and those with powers. He is the most powerful hero in his respected universe, and as a result only intervenes when absolutely necessary as to not overshadow any upcoming heroes.
* BlowYouAway: His primary power. While "wind and air pressure manipulation" doesn't sound especially impressive on paper, it is the ''extent'' of his control that makes him the most powerful individual in his universe. He can create [[{{RazorWind}} winds so powerful they can cut through flesh and bone,]] tornadoes, hurricanes, and even force fields of air. Combining this with NotQuiteFlight, he is quite the terrifyingly powerful individual.
* GlassCannon: Although his air manipulation is unmatched, he has little to no defensive capabilities. If faced with an immortal or a power nullifier, he is just as vulnerable as a normal human being.
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* FragileSpeedster: Despite being able to move at supersonic speeds, Dan cannot take a hit for the life of him. However, this doesn’t mean he isn't powerful, and is perfectly capable of handling a top rank mission by himself.
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: Dan's body generates a field of golden energy that protects him and any passengers from windburn. His perception of time is also slowed, so relative to him he is always running at the speed of a normal human.
* DeadpanSnarker: Dan is not afraid to quip and wisecrack in the middle of a battle. He uses this mainly to direct attention away from any victims or endangered civilians.
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