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The KSR officer isn't named Hopper.
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** Originally, Hopper's character and model was a generic male officer. Even once she'd gotten her current look, her name was "Marrow" until nearly release.
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** Originally, Hopper's The KSR Quartermaster's character and model was a generic male officer.officer named Hopper. Even once she'd gotten her current look, her name was "Marrow" until nearly release. Eventually Hopper was given to the Commonfolk leader and the KSR officer is only known by her rank.
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Changed line(s) 2 (click to see context) from:
** Originally, Hopper's model was a generic male officer. Even once she'd gotten her current look, her name was "Marrow" until nearly release.
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** Originally, Hopper's character and model was a generic male officer. Even once she'd gotten her current look, her name was "Marrow" until nearly release.
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** Originally, Hopper's model was a generic male officer. Even once she'd gotten her current look, her name was "Marrow" until nearly release.
* WorkingTitle: ''Lead to Fire''.
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** Originally, Hopper's model was a generic male officer. Even once she'd gotten her current look, her name was "Marrow" until nearly release.
* WorkingTitle: ''Lead to Fire''.
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