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Old Shame now IUEO - moving to Creator Backlash and adding context to why he doesn't like the story
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* CreatorBacklash: The author has since felt bad for writing the story, as he feels his audience won't be able to stomach it.
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* OldShame: The author had since felt bad for writing the story.
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* OldShame: The author had since felt bad for writing the story.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: An early story arc in the story is about the Louds gaining [[spoiler: through Bobby]] a weekend stay at a resort in Aloha Beach, and the parents take their kids there in order to help them relax. "Suite and Sour", which premiered in January 9th, 2017, deals with almost the exact same setup, with the Louds gaining a trip to a resort.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: AccidentallyCorrectWriting: An early story arc in the story is about the Louds gaining [[spoiler: through Bobby]] a weekend stay at a resort in Aloha Beach, and the parents take their kids there in order to help them relax. "Suite and Sour", which premiered in January 9th, 2017, deals with almost the exact same setup, with the Louds gaining a trip to a resort.
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* RealitySubtext: There was a brief hiatus starting in Christmas of 2016 due to the author deciding to enjoy the festivities.
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* RealitySubtext: There was a brief hiatus starting in Christmas of 2016 due to the author deciding to enjoy the festivities.festivities.
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* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is ''[[TheSociopath Ab]][[ManipulativeBastard so]][[{{Sadist}} lu]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her own.
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* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is [[spoiler:Cristina]] ''[[TheSociopath Ab]][[ManipulativeBastard ab]][[ManipulativeBastard so]][[{{Sadist}} lu]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her their own.
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* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is ''[[TheSociopath De]][[ManipulativeBastard ni]][[{{Sadist}} ni]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her own.
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* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is ''[[TheSociopath De]][[ManipulativeBastard ni]][[{{Sadist}} ni]][[GroinAttack Ab]][[ManipulativeBastard so]][[{{Sadist}} lu]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her own.
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* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is ''[[TheSociopath De]][[Sadist fi]][[ManipulativeBastard ni]][[MoodSwinger ni]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her own.
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* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is ''[[TheSociopath De]][[Sadist fi]][[ManipulativeBastard ni]][[MoodSwinger De]][[ManipulativeBastard ni]][[{{Sadist}} ni]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her own.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: An early story arc in the story is about the Louds gaining [[spoiler: through Bobby]] a weekend stay at a resort in Aloha Beach, and the parents take their kids there in order to help them relax. "Suite and Sour", which premiered in January 9th, 2017, deals with almost the exact same setup, with the Louds gaining a trip to a resort.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: An early story arc in the story is about the Louds gaining [[spoiler: through Bobby]] a weekend stay at a resort in Aloha Beach, and the parents take their kids there in order to help them relax. "Suite and Sour", which premiered in January 9th, 2017, deals with almost the exact same setup, with the Louds gaining a trip to a resort.resort.
* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is ''[[TheSociopath De]][[Sadist fi]][[ManipulativeBastard ni]][[MoodSwinger ni]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her own.
* RealitySubtext: There was a brief hiatus starting in Christmas of 2016 due to the author deciding to enjoy the festivities.
* FollowTheLeader: Wherever this fic is the leader or simply a follower is a mystery, but this is not the first fic to use [[spoiler: Cristina]] as a main antagonist and corrupted into being an evil character. However, this Cristina is ''[[TheSociopath De]][[Sadist fi]][[ManipulativeBastard ni]][[MoodSwinger ni]][[GroinAttack te]][[LackOfEmpathy ly]]'' stands on a class of her own.
* RealitySubtext: There was a brief hiatus starting in Christmas of 2016 due to the author deciding to enjoy the festivities.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: An early story arc in the story is about the Louds gaining [[spoiler: through Bobby]] a weekend stay at a resort in Aloha Beach, and the parents take their kids there in order to help them relax. "Suite and Sour", which premiered in January 9th, 2017, deals with almost the exact same setup, with the Louds gaining a trip to a resort.
