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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Heroes due to thinking of them as a group of rogue Persona users ala Strega. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Heroes due to thinking of them as a group of rogue Persona users ala Strega.[[Characters/Persona3Antagonists Strega]]. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Heroes due to thinking of them as a group of rogue Persona users. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Heroes due to thinking of them as a group of rogue Persona users.users ala Strega. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
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*** With [[spoiler:Yaldabaoth being kicked off early]] Mementos takes the shape of multiple floating islands instead of the canonical underground subway station.
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*** With [[spoiler:Yaldabaoth being kicked off early]] Mementos in this story takes the shape of multiple floating islands instead of the canonical underground subway station.
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** In a case of CreatorBreakdown, author Vivvav mentioned that writing the story was so draining he decided to abort continuing it past Makoto's Palace. Similarly, Akira and Makoto were eventually meant to become a legitimate pairing, like [[AuthorAppeal in Vivvav's other works]], but he begrudgingly admitted that he pushed Makoto as the BigBad far too realistically to incorporate it for this story.
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** In a case of CreatorBreakdown, author Vivvav mentioned that writing the story was so draining he decided to abort continuing it past Makoto's Palace. Similarly, Akira and Makoto were eventually meant to become a legitimate pairing, like [[AuthorAppeal in Vivvav's other works]], but he begrudgingly admitted that he pushed Makoto Makoto's role as the BigBad far too realistically to incorporate it for this story.
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** In a case of CreatorBreakdown, author Vivvav mentioned that writing the story was so draining he decided to abort continuing it past Makoto's Palace. Similarly, Akira and Makoto were eventually meant to become a legitimate pairing, like [[AuthorAppeal in Vivvav's other works]], but he begrudgingly admitted that he pushed Makoto as the BigBad too far to realistically portray it.
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** In a case of CreatorBreakdown, author Vivvav mentioned that writing the story was so draining he decided to abort continuing it past Makoto's Palace. Similarly, Akira and Makoto were eventually meant to become a legitimate pairing, like [[AuthorAppeal in Vivvav's other works]], but he begrudgingly admitted that he pushed Makoto as the BigBad far too far to realistically portray it.to incorporate it for this story.
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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Heroes. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
*** The FinalBoss would have been [[InSpiteOfANail Masayoshi Shido]]. This time his Palace would take the form of a daycare and the big focus would be on Akechi struggling with his desire for vengeance against Shido [[spoiler:going so far as to reclaim Loki to kill Shido personally]].
*** The FinalBoss would have been [[InSpiteOfANail Masayoshi Shido]]. This time his Palace would take the form of a daycare and the big focus would be on Akechi struggling with his desire for vengeance against Shido [[spoiler:going so far as to reclaim Loki to kill Shido personally]].
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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Heroes.Heroes due to thinking of them as a group of rogue Persona users. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
*** The FinalBoss would have been [[InSpiteOfANail Masayoshi Shido]]. This time his Palace would take the form of a daycare and the big focus would be on Akechi struggling with his desire for vengeance against Shido [[spoiler:going so far as to reclaim Loki to kill Shidopersonally]].personally]].
*** With [[spoiler:Yaldabaoth being kicked off early]] Mementos takes the shape of multiple floating islands instead of the canonical underground subway station.
*** The FinalBoss would have been [[InSpiteOfANail Masayoshi Shido]]. This time his Palace would take the form of a daycare and the big focus would be on Akechi struggling with his desire for vengeance against Shido [[spoiler:going so far as to reclaim Loki to kill Shido
*** With [[spoiler:Yaldabaoth being kicked off early]] Mementos takes the shape of multiple floating islands instead of the canonical underground subway station.
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* InspirationForTheWork: Vivvav based Makoto's BigBad characterization on the IronLady interpretation he gave her in his early fanfic, ''FanFic/TheAmamiyaInvestigation''. Only now, [[UpToEleven Cranked Up To Eleven]].
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* InspirationForTheWork: Vivvav based Makoto's BigBad characterization on the IronLady interpretation he gave her in his early fanfic, ''FanFic/TheAmamiyaInvestigation''. Only now, [[UpToEleven Cranked Up To Eleven]].
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*** The FinalBoss would have been [[InSpiteOfANail Masayoshi Shido]]. This time his Palace would take the form of a daycare and the big focus would be on Akechi struggling with his desire for vengeance against Shido [[spoiler:going so far as to reclaim Loki to kill Shido personally]].
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* InspirationForTheWork: Vivvav's Vivvav based Makoto's BigBad characterization on the IronLady interpretation he gave her in his early fanfic, ''FanFic/TheAmamiyaInvestigation''. Only now, [[UpToEleven Cranked Up To Eleven]].
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* InspirationForTheWork: Vivvav's based Makoto's BigBad characterization on the IceQueen interpretation he gave her in his early fanfic, ''FanFic/TheAmamiyaInvestigation''. Only now, [[UpToEleven Cranked Up To Eleven]].
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* InspirationForTheWork: Vivvav's based Makoto's BigBad characterization on the IceQueen IronLady interpretation he gave her in his early fanfic, ''FanFic/TheAmamiyaInvestigation''. Only now, [[UpToEleven Cranked Up To Eleven]].
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*** The second ArcVillain would have been Mitsuyo Togo. Yusuke (who in this version has already escaped Madarame thanks to Akechi) tips the heroes off to her abuse of Hifumi, who joins the Phantom Thieves as Wolf (with Madame Chiang as her Persona).
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*** The second ArcVillain would have been Mitsuyo Togo. Yusuke (who in this version has already escaped Madarame thanks to Akechi) tips the heroes off to her abuse of Hifumi, who joins the Phantom Thieves Heroes as Wolf (with Madame Chiang as her Persona).
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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Thieves. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
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*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Thieves.Heroes. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
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*** The second ArcVillain would have been Mitsuo Togo. Yusuke (who in this version has already escaped Madarame thanks to Akechi) tips the heroes off to her abuse of Hifumi, who joins the Phantom Thieves as Wolf (with Madame Chiang as her Persona).
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*** The second ArcVillain would have been Mitsuo Mitsuyo Togo. Yusuke (who in this version has already escaped Madarame thanks to Akechi) tips the heroes off to her abuse of Hifumi, who joins the Phantom Thieves as Wolf (with Madame Chiang as her Persona).
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** A bonus chapter at the end reveals several unused concepts for further story arcs.
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*** The second ArcVillain would have been Mitsuo Togo. Yusuke (who in this version has already escaped Madarame thanks to Akechi) tips the heroes off to her abuse of Hifumi, who joins the Phantom Thieves as Wolf (with Madame Chiang as her Persona).
*** The third ArcVillain would have been the SIU Director, who intends to bump off Sae after she gets too close to Kaneshiro and risks exposing his own dirty secrets. [[spoiler:Makoto and Ryuji]] would serve as {{Guest Star Party Member}}s for this arc.
*** The fourth ArcVillain would have possibly been Yuuki Mishima, who has gotten drunk on his influence as the founder of the Phan-site.
*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Thieves. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
*** The FinalBoss would have been [[InSpiteOfANail Masayoshi Shido]].
*** The second ArcVillain would have been Mitsuo Togo. Yusuke (who in this version has already escaped Madarame thanks to Akechi) tips the heroes off to her abuse of Hifumi, who joins the Phantom Thieves as Wolf (with Madame Chiang as her Persona).
*** The third ArcVillain would have been the SIU Director, who intends to bump off Sae after she gets too close to Kaneshiro and risks exposing his own dirty secrets. [[spoiler:Makoto and Ryuji]] would serve as {{Guest Star Party Member}}s for this arc.
*** The fourth ArcVillain would have possibly been Yuuki Mishima, who has gotten drunk on his influence as the founder of the Phan-site.
*** The sixth ArcVillain would have been ''[[VideoGame/Persona3 Mitsuru Kirijo]]'', consumed by the desire to arrest the Phantom Thieves. Shinjiro (who survived ''Persona 3'' in a [=FeMC=] run) would join the party.
*** The FinalBoss would have been [[InSpiteOfANail Masayoshi Shido]].
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WhatCouldHaveBeen: In a case of CreatorBreakdown, author Vivvav mentioned that writing the story was so draining he decided to abort continuing it past Makoto's palace. Similarly, Akira and Makoto were eventually meant to become a legitimate pairing, like [[AuthorAppeal in Vivvav's other works]], but he begrudgingly admitted that he pushed Makoto as the BigBad too far to realistically portray it.
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** In a case of CreatorBreakdown, author Vivvav mentioned that writing the story was so draining he decided to abort continuing it past Makoto's
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