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* Sent back in time to 1996, Jane and Larry figure out what year it was because they find Cliff just standing in his room. Jane mentions that 1996 was the year that Niles told Cliff that his whole family was dead, and Cliff just literally shut down until 2004.
* Sent back to the night that Niles stole the pendant of Immortus from Fuchtopia, Cliff accidentally throws Niles against a bar, paralyzing him below the waist, creating the conditions that would drive Niles to start Project Immortus and the Doom Patrol. Cliff is rightly horrified by what he's done, especially since he realizes that he's done to Niles almost exactly the same thing that he's long accused Niles of doing to him - preventing him from being with his daughter. And the worst part? Niles' memories of that night were not erased, so Cliff has to live with the knowledge that for all those years, Niles remembered what he'd done and never brought it up, never rubbed it in Cliff's face.
* Laura bungles her mission when she encounters her past self and is filled with such self-loathing that she beats her other self with the "WEAPON" stamp, completely forgetting that she's there to steal part of Niles' pendant.
* At the end of the episode, none of members managed to get part of their longevity back, so now they're all going into a final battle with Immortus and the butts only marginally better off than they were before.
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* Sent back in time to 1996, Jane and Larry figure out what year it was because they find Cliff just standing in his room. Jane mentions that 1996 was the year that Niles told Cliff that his whole family was dead, and Cliff just literally shut down until 2004.
* Sent back to the night that Niles stole the pendant of Immortus from Fuchtopia, Cliff accidentally throws Niles against a bar, paralyzing him below the waist, creating the conditions that would drive Niles to start Project Immortus and the Doom Patrol. Cliff is rightly horrified by what he's done, especially since he realizes that he's done to Niles almost exactly the same thing that he's long accused Niles of doing to him - preventing him from being with his daughter. And the worst part? Niles' memories of that night were not erased, so Cliff has to live with the knowledge that for all those years, Niles remembered what he'd done and never brought it up, never rubbed it in Cliff's face.
* Laura bungles her mission when she encounters her past self and is filled with such self-loathing that she beats her other self with the "WEAPON" stamp, completely forgetting that she's there to steal part of Niles' pendant.
* At the end of the episode, none of members managed to get part of their longevity back, so now they're all going into a final battle with Immortus and the butts only marginally better off than they were before.
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* When Rita is broken out of the illusion, she bemoans the fact that she's a monster again. Laura tries to cheer her up, saying that ''she's'' never seen Rita as a monster, to which Rita bitterly responds that that's because in their relationship, ''Laura'' was the monster.
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* This is easily the grimmest episode of the entire series, as each of the four main characters faces a ravage related to their former immortality.
** Rita is stricken with painful arthritis that's driving her to actually surrender to her blob-like state simply to relieve the pain.
** Larry's already-burned skin is breaking apart as his resistance to his own radiation degrades, causing bloody patches to appear on his bandages. On top of that, Rama has reluctantly abandoned him; unable to find a cure for his degeneration, Rama has chosen to return to Tamil Nadu, go for a swim, and then transmute himself into lead so that he'll sink far enough so that nobody will be harmed if he really does explode.
** Cliff's joints are all locking up; he can't even drive safely anymore because his foot locks up on the accelerator. With no way to get to Florida, he's facing the prospect that he may die without ever seeing his family again.
** Jane finally discovers why she's been unable to reach the Underground since losing her longevity - she has dementia and it's destroying the Underground and all the alters within; when she finally manages to access the station for a few seconds, she finds it abandoned, strewn about with the abandoned clothing of her oldest alters, like Pretty Polly and Mama Pentecost. Worse, without the Underground to control her memories, she's having vivid flashbacks to her abuse at the hands of Daddy.
* Dr. Yu had formed a somewhat happy life with Nicholas, the last intelligent butt, but then his twin Teddy went and infected her, turning her into a were-butt. While she's perfectly fine with it, as she and Nicholas can now truly be together, Nicholas is horrified, as he fears for Margaret's safety now that she's no longer completely human.
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* This is easily the grimmest episode of the entire series, as each of the four main characters faces a ravage related to their former immortality.
** Rita is stricken with painful arthritis that's driving her to actually surrender to her blob-like state simply to relieve the pain.
** Larry's already-burned skin is breaking apart as his resistance to his own radiation degrades, causing bloody patches to appear on his bandages. On top of that, Rama has reluctantly abandoned him; unable to find a cure for his degeneration, Rama has chosen to return to Tamil Nadu, go for a swim, and then transmute himself into lead so that he'll sink far enough so that nobody will be harmed if he really does explode.
** Cliff's joints are all locking up; he can't even drive safely anymore because his foot locks up on the accelerator. With no way to get to Florida, he's facing the prospect that he may die without ever seeing his family again.
** Jane finally discovers why she's been unable to reach the Underground since losing her longevity - she has dementia and it's destroying the Underground and all the alters within; when she finally manages to access the station for a few seconds, she finds it abandoned, strewn about with the abandoned clothing of her oldest alters, like Pretty Polly and Mama Pentecost. Worse, without the Underground to control her memories, she's having vivid flashbacks to her abuse at the hands of Daddy.
* Dr. Yu had formed a somewhat happy life with Nicholas, the last intelligent butt, but then his twin Teddy went and infected her, turning her into a were-butt. While she's perfectly fine with it, as she and Nicholas can now truly be together, Nicholas is horrified, as he fears for Margaret's safety now that she's no longer completely human.
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* The whole team starts the episode completely demoralized, as they completely failed to stop Immortus from rising and they're all too weak to stop her from lurching her way to Cloverton.
* Jane is still pissed at Cliff and refuses to talk to him.
* Casey's quest to save her father has well and truly failed and she's so desperate for a new mission that when Dorothy suggests that she try and help the other Doom Patrol members, she decides to try and help Jane clean up her room, which naturally gets her yelled at by Jane.
* After misinterpreting Dorothy's offer of Niles' old wheelchair as an insult, Cliff accidentally lets slip that he saw Niles' ghost back when Dorothy was still living at the house and never told her. He immediately realizes what a shitty thing that was to tell her, but doubles down on it out of stubbornness, telling Dorothy that he's just an asshole and she should've expected that he do something like that.
* After much prodding by Dorothy, Cliff admits that he doesn't believe that he deserves love or pity, because all he does is fuck everything up and it will be better for everyone if he just dies. Dorothy is actually livid at this, pointing out that his death would only be easy for ''him'', while everyone who loves him - his family, the Doom Patrol, and Dorothy herself - would grieve for him.
* Jane is still pissed at Cliff and refuses to talk to him.
* Casey's quest to save her father has well and truly failed and she's so desperate for a new mission that when Dorothy suggests that she try and help the other Doom Patrol members, she decides to try and help Jane clean up her room, which naturally gets her yelled at by Jane.
* After misinterpreting Dorothy's offer of Niles' old wheelchair as an insult, Cliff accidentally lets slip that he saw Niles' ghost back when Dorothy was still living at the house and never told her. He immediately realizes what a shitty thing that was to tell her, but doubles down on it out of stubbornness, telling Dorothy that he's just an asshole and she should've expected that he do something like that.
* After much prodding by Dorothy, Cliff admits that he doesn't believe that he deserves love or pity, because all he does is fuck everything up and it will be better for everyone if he just dies. Dorothy is actually livid at this, pointing out that his death would only be easy for ''him'', while everyone who loves him - his family, the Doom Patrol, and Dorothy herself - would grieve for him.
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* When Rita is broken out of the illusion, she bemoans the fact that she's a monster again. Laura tries to cheer her up, saying that ''she's'' never seen Rita as a monster, to which Rita bitterly responds that that's because in their relationship, ''Laura'' was the monster.
* While Immortimas (and the revelation that it was all a parallel dimension) was hard for everyone, Dorothy and Casey take it especially hard when it crumbles, as Immortimas was the first time Dorothy ever felt loved and appreciated and now she doesn't know if any of the others cared about her or if Immortus made them care about her. For Casey, it's just as bad, because she had feelings for Jane, but Jane's apparent reciprocation of those feelings was only part of the illusion. At the end of the episode, Dorothy and Casey both decide that they need to get away from Doom Manor for a while.
* While Immortimas (and the revelation that it was all a parallel dimension) was hard for everyone, Dorothy and Casey take it especially hard when it crumbles, as Immortimas was the first time Dorothy ever felt loved and appreciated and now she doesn't know if any of the others cared about her or if Immortus made them care about her. For Casey, it's just as bad, because she had feelings for Jane, but Jane's apparent reciprocation of those feelings was only part of the illusion. At the end of the episode, Dorothy and Casey both decide that they need to get away from Doom Manor for a while.
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* Vic and Deric find Larry moping around in Orqwith, having no desire to fight because he's afraid Keeg will leave him again.
* Jane watches helplessly as Cliff sells out to the Cult of Immortus based solely on a promise that they ''might'' be able to give him enough time to see Rory grow up. For an added kick, it's not even a particularly good future, as Rory's a little hellion and Cliff's relationship with Clara is strained because of his influence, but Cliff still wants it enough that he nearly destroys his relationship with Jane.
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* Vic and Deric find Larry moping around in Orqwith, having no desire to fight because he's afraid Keeg will leave him again.
* Jane watches helplessly as Cliff sells out to the Cult of Immortus based solely on a promise that they ''might'' be able to give him enough time to see Rory grow up. For an added kick, it's not even a particularly good future, as Rory's a little hellion and Cliff's relationship with Clara is strained because of his influence, but Cliff still wants it enough that he nearly destroys his relationship with Jane.
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* Laura finally explains to Rita why she betrayed her and the other members of the Sisterhood all those decades ago; when she first developed powers, she didn't have a loving, supportive community to help her deal with them, and was ostracized. The Bureau of Oddities was the first place where she found a home, and when it warped into the Bureau of Normalcy, she was too afraid of being shut out of the only place she knew to resist them, even as the Bureau turned against her friends and locked them up. And then, of course, she lost her place anyway because Niles got her blacklisted. She then reveals what she now looks like under the curse - a scared little girl whose clothing suggests she is from a past far beyond even Niles Caulder. Even Rita can't stay angry with her after seeing this.
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* Fearing that her days may be numbered, Jane goes and tries to throw herself at Shelley, hoping that she can at least spend her final days having some good sex. Except that she freezes up while trying to kiss Shelley, who gently tells her that while she cares for her, she's obviously not in the right frame of mind for a relationship, which Jane interprets as rejection.
* Keeg finally shows Larry what he saw in the future that made him run away: Larry got turned by one of the zombie butts and Keeg was forced to kill him to stop the transformation from irradiating everyone. Keeg wasn't scared of Larry, he was scared ''for'' him, and thought that staying away and keeping him sidelined would protect him.
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* Dorothy is not in a great place emotionally in this episode. Her quest to bring back her dad ended when she couldn't bring herself to use his magic amulet to summon him (and likely would have failed anyway, as Kipling trapped Niles' spirit in his head, which was subsequently consumed by the zombified Doom Patrol), and it's now hitting her that her father is not coming back. And she is ''angry'', because she's realized just how little he prepared her for a life without him and she has no idea what to do with herself and it's reached the point where she's even blowing up at Danny and Maura Lee. By the end, when Torminox forces her to hand over the amulet in exchange for his sparing Danny and the Candlemaker, you can hear the anger pouring out of her.
-->'''Dorothy:''' ([[SarcasmMode totally about Casey]]) She needs her dad! ''Fuck you'' for turning your back on that.
** Danny is not doing so well, either. Becoming an ambulance gave them greater mobility, but far smaller capacity, and there are so many people in need of them now that they're running out of room.
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* Cliff's imaginary friend Jesus being hurt that Cliff had abandoned him so soon after promising they'd always be friends. Cliff then admits that he never meant to hurt him and was only going through the bible camp because it was the one thing that allowed him to be close to his dad.
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* Cliff's imaginary friend Jesus being hurt that Cliff had abandoned him so soon after promising they'd always be friends. Cliff then admits that he never meant to hurt him him, but his dad came back into his life and was only going through the bible camp because it was the one thing promised that allowed him to things would be close to different this time and Cliff forgot about Jesus during his dad.time with his dad. He then confesses that it wasn't worth it; his dad fell back on old habits and he was alone again.
* Rita's reason for abandoning her imaginary friend Roxy: she had imagined Roxy with her mother's eyes, and after realizing that her mother slept with a producer in order to get her a role, she couldn't bear to look in those eyes any longer.
* Rita's reason for abandoning her imaginary friend Roxy: she had imagined Roxy with her mother's eyes, and after realizing that her mother slept with a producer in order to get her a role, she couldn't bear to look in those eyes any longer.
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* Larry's left in a bad way for most of the episode. He's been seemingly abandoned by the Negative Entity, only to find his friends dead in crates on the doorstep. By the time Dorothy finds him, he's descended into complete SanitySlippage from the sheer loneliness and despair.
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* Larry's left in a bad way for most of the episode. He's been seemingly abandoned by the Negative Entity, Spirit, only to find his friends dead in crates on the doorstep. By the time Dorothy finds him, he's descended into complete SanitySlippage from the sheer loneliness and despair.
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* If Dorothy's assessments of the Doom Patrol way back at the start of season 2 were condescending and insensitive, Dr. Harrison's assessments of the team at the start of this season are just plain cruel. She deems Rita a pathetic has-been who's only using leadership of the team to boost her own fragile ego, thinks Cliff is a complete moron, views Laura as a self-flagellating masochist, deems Larry as completely co-dependent upon the Negative Spirit, and sees Vic as just plain useless without his powers. And yet she stays with them, not out of any affection, but because she finds their flailing about to be ''fascinating''.
* The team is accidentally sent into the future and learns what has become of them from their future selves. All of whom happen to be dead and stuck as ghost because there's nobody left alive to dispose of them, except for Vic, who's now a paranoiac, and Laura, who's disappeared.
** Rita learns that the team died under her leadership.
** Dr. Harrison learns that she got Kay killed.
** Future!Larry is almost completely catatonic and tormented by an angry Keeg... who ends up merging with Present!Keeg, preventing him from returning to Present!Larry.
* At the end of the episode, Jane finds Dr. Harrison in the Underground and promises to start doing her part to help find Kay... only for Dr. Harrison to suddenly crumble to dust, replaced by an angry Kay, who tells her to stop looking for her and then banishes her back to the Surface, cutting her off from the Underground.
* The team is accidentally sent into the future and learns what has become of them from their future selves. All of whom happen to be dead and stuck as ghost because there's nobody left alive to dispose of them, except for Vic, who's now a paranoiac, and Laura, who's disappeared.
** Rita learns that the team died under her leadership.
** Dr. Harrison learns that she got Kay killed.
** Future!Larry is almost completely catatonic and tormented by an angry Keeg... who ends up merging with Present!Keeg, preventing him from returning to Present!Larry.
* At the end of the episode, Jane finds Dr. Harrison in the Underground and promises to start doing her part to help find Kay... only for Dr. Harrison to suddenly crumble to dust, replaced by an angry Kay, who tells her to stop looking for her and then banishes her back to the Surface, cutting her off from the Underground.
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* The team unanimously votes to make Rouge the new leader. After Rita spends the whole episode demanding that Larry explain why he voted against her, he tells her that his highest priority now is keeping Keeg safe, and he doesn't trust that her leadership will accomplish that. When she tries to appeal to their friendship, Larry bluntly tells her that she broke that friendship when she betrayed the team for the Eternal Flagellation, and everything she's done since - the micromanaging, the lectures, the gold stars and demerits - just reminds him that she's not the Rita he knows anymore especially he also remembers her saying that they were ''strangers'' to her.
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* The team unanimously votes to make Rouge the new leader. After Rita spends the whole episode demanding that Larry explain why he voted against her, he tells her that his highest priority now is keeping Keeg safe, and he doesn't trust that her leadership will accomplish that. When she tries to appeal to their friendship, Larry bluntly tells her that she broke that friendship when she betrayed the team for the Eternal Flagellation, and everything she's done since - the micromanaging, the lectures, the gold stars and demerits - just reminds him that she's not the Rita he knows anymore especially he anymore. He also remembers her saying that they were ''strangers'' to her.
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* When Dr. Janus attacks the Doom Patrol, Laura instinctively flees the scene, the same way she's always done. She spends the rest of the episode drinking herself into a stupor, convinced that once again, she's completely betrayed her friends.
* Vic's attempts to reconnect with his friends hit a snag when they come to the fact that he basically ghosted them for ''ten years''. While the audience knows why he disappeared - his father guilt-tripped him into becoming a superhero and dedicating all of his time to training - Derek and the others believe that he ditched them because he ''wanted'' to be a superhero, and think that he avoided reaching out to them because he thought he was too good for them, whereas the truth is he avoided them because he was self-conscious of how he looked with the implants and thought they would shun him.
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* The team unanimously votes to make Rouge the new leader. After Rita spends the whole episode demanding that Larry explain why he voted against her, he tells her that his highest priority now is keeping Keeg safe, and he doesn't trust that her leadership will accomplish that. When she tries to appeal to their friendship, Larry bluntly tells her that she broke that friendship when she betrayed the team for the Eternal Flagellation, and everything she's done since - the micromanaging, the lectures, the gold stars and demerits - just reminds him that she's not the Rita he knows anymore.
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* The team unanimously votes to make Rouge the new leader. After Rita spends the whole episode demanding that Larry explain why he voted against her, he tells her that his highest priority now is keeping Keeg safe, and he doesn't trust that her leadership will accomplish that. When she tries to appeal to their friendship, Larry bluntly tells her that she broke that friendship when she betrayed the team for the Eternal Flagellation, and everything she's done since - the micromanaging, the lectures, the gold stars and demerits - just reminds him that she's not the Rita he knows anymore.anymore especially he also remembers her saying that they were ''strangers'' to her.
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* The origin of the butts: Back in 2016, the Bureau of Normalcy created a new species of swarm monster, and tasked Dr. Margaret Yu with figuring out how to control it. Dr. Yu discovered that the creatures were not as mindless as expected, and advised the Bureau that with proper socialization, the butts could be civilized. The Bureau chose to keep them feral and banished Dr. Yu to a dead-end job.
* The team unanimously votes to make Rouge the new leader. After Rita spends the whole episode demanding that Larry explain why he voted against her, he tells her that his highest priority now is keeping Keeg safe, and he doesn't trust that her leadership will accomplish that. When she tries to appeal to their friendship, Larry bluntly tells her that she broke that friendship when she betrayed the team for the Eternal Flagellation, and everything she's done since - the micromanaging, the lectures, the gold stars and demerits - just reminds him that she's not the Rita he knows anymore.
* Rouge and Cliff track down Darren Jones, the zombie were-butt, only to discover that he's become a RetiredMonster. He knows he's a danger to everyone and has tried to isolate himself, but readily invites Cliff to kill him for the good of humanity. When Cliff hesitates, Rouge provokes Darren into attacking him, causing Cliff to instinctively slam Darren to the ground and crush his head... which he now has very mixed feelings about, because he could ''feel'' all the bone and brain matter coursing through his newly-sensitized fingers. Rouge also feels pretty terrible about it, because once again, she's turned someone into a weapon against their will.
* Jane finds the video that Kay made during her time on the Surface, and learns that contrary to what she and the other personas feared, Kay ''wasn't'' going to dismantle the Underground, she was just going to change its purpose away from protecting her. Unfortunately, between Rouge's attack on the Doom Patrol and Dr. Harrison's machinations, Kay no longer trusts the other personas.
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* Flex Mentallo reuniting with his wife, only to have her ExplosiveLeash implanted by the Bureau of Normalcy kick in and give her a CruelAndUnusualDeath right in front of Flex's eyes.
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* Flex Mentallo reuniting with his wife, only to have her ExplosiveLeash implanted by the Bureau of Normalcy kick in and give her a CruelAndUnusualDeath right in front of Flex's eyes.
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* A week after the Candlemaker's defeat, Jane is still comatose, and Niles' body is decomposing. Rita and Larry assume that Dorothy is refusing to bury it because she's deluding herself that he'll come back, but the reality is even sadder - she understands that her father is truly dead, and has already made plans for disposing of his body, but is waiting for Jane to wake up, because after everything else that's happened between them, she doesn't want to take away Jane's last chance to say goodbye to someone who Dorothy knows was important to her. Of course, there's only so long that one can preserve a corpse with only rudimentary cryogenics, so she ends up curled against Jane's sleeping body, begging her to wake up.
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* A week after the Candlemaker's defeat, Jane is still comatose, and Niles' body is decomposing. Rita and Larry assume that Dorothy is refusing to bury it because she's deluding herself that he'll come back, but the reality is even sadder - she understands that her father is truly dead, and has already made plans for disposing of his body, but is waiting for Jane to wake up, because after everything else that's happened between them, she doesn't want to take away Jane's last chance to say goodbye to someone who Dorothy knows was important to her. Of course, there's only so long that one can preserve a corpse with only rudimentary cryogenics, so she ends up curled against at Jane's sleeping body, bedside, begging her to wake up.PleaseWakeUp.
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** While Dorothy manages to keep it together for most of the episode, episode for Larry's sake, she still arrived home from burying her father to find most of her friends dead and the only remaining adult half out of his mind. Before Rita suddenly makes contact, she's struggling not to break into tears.
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* As a consequence of her having been tempted by The Fog and allowing Kay to be "corrupted" by her, Dr. Harrison, Pretty Polly, and Hammerhead shut Jane out and lock Kay up.
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* As a consequence of her having been tempted by The Fog and allowing Kay to be "corrupted" by her, Dr. Harrison, Pretty Polly, and Hammerhead shut Jane out and lock Kay up.up, choosing to view Kay's newfound desire for independence as nothing more than a childish tantrum.
* Larry finds out why Paul ended up in The Fog; he's become so resentful of his father that he willingly joined the Bureau of Normalcy, and as it happens, was sent after the Sisterhood. Disgusted that his son would work for the people who tortured and imprisoned him, Larry finally declares that he's through with Paul, and tells him to leave.
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** Larry is sent back to the day he got married, where we learn that his parents arranged the marriage for him and badgered him into going through with it.
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* Cliff emerges from The Fog to find out that he's been sitting in Clara's garage and chatting with Ginger. With Clara standing right behind him.
* Cliff emerges from The Fog to find out that he's been sitting in Clara's garage and chatting with Ginger. With Clara standing right behind him.
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* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left breaks out wailing in agony at the realization that she's not needed anymore.
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* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she had forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing that happened to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there only to still lose it because of Madame Rouge. Once she got back to the present, she no longer felt at home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her. Larry, Jane, and Victor all look incredibly hurt about this.
* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she had forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing that happened to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there only to still lose it because of Madame Rouge. Once she got back to the present, she no longer felt at home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her. Larry, Jane, and Victor all look incredibly hurt about this.
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* Having rendered herself amnesiac again after using the time machine to return to Doom Manor and start over, Laura is horrified when she reads the notes that she left for herself, telling her that she's a terrible person. She's also utterly terrified when Rita finds her and tries to kill her in a rage, having no memory of what she did to Rita.
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* Asked what he is by Sachiko, Cliff initially says that he's a robot, then backtracks and says that he's mostly a robot, but with a human brain... which he confesses is suffering from Parkinson's disease. He admits that he spent years totally prepared for death, but now that he knows that it's coming, he's scared because he has a family now and can't bear the thought of being separated from them. Sachiko sympathizes, as the nature of her powers means that they will run out, and she fears that her powers are the only thing keeping her alive at her age.
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* By 1949, the Sisterhood of Dada has become a shell of its former self, as Lloyd and Sachiko are embittered by the fallout of World War II, and Laura has quit the Sisterhood and devoted herself to the Bureau of Normalcy's mission of weaponizing oddities.
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* By 1949, Malcolm was in the Sisterhood Battle of Dada has become a shell of its former self, as Lloyd Verdun, and Sachiko are embittered by the fallout his experiences were apparently so terrible that he traded his actual, physical heart away for a canary.
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* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she had forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing that happened to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present, she no longer felt at home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her. Larry, Jane, and Victor all look incredibly hurt about this.
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* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she had forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing that happened to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there.there only to still lose it because of Madame Rouge. Once she got back to the present, she no longer felt at home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her. Larry, Jane, and Victor all look incredibly hurt about this.
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* The origins of the Eternal Flagellation: Laura De Mille sold out the Sisterhood of Dada to the Bureau of Normalcy in order to score a promotion, and during the ensuing roundup, Malcolm was killed. For an added kick, Laura's self-serving actions ended up screwing her over, as the Bureau fired her anyway.
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* The origins of the Eternal Flagellation: Laura De Mille sold out the Sisterhood of Dada to the Bureau of Normalcy in order to score a promotion, and during the ensuing roundup, Malcolm was killed. The surviving Dadaists spent the next seventy years enslaved by the Bureau and swore vengeance against Laura, unaware that she'd gone forward in time and had lost her memories. When Laura is confronted in the present by what she'd done, she is horrified.
* The origins of the Eternal Flagellation: Laura De Mille sold out the Sisterhood of Dada to the Bureau of Normalcy in order to score a promotion, and during the ensuing roundup, Malcolm was killed. The surviving Dadaists spent the next seventy years enslaved by the Bureau and swore vengeance against Laura, unaware that she'd gone forward in time and had lost her memories. When Laura is confronted in the present by what she'd done, she is horrified.
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* In order to prevent the Underground from collapsing, Jane has no choice but to make peace with Dr. Harrison, which means having to make Dr. Harrison the new primary.
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* Each the Patrol is forced to relive some of the worst moments of their life as part of the Eternal Flagellation. Upsetting revelations quickly follow.
** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he was "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realization that she's not needed anymore.
* Each the Patrol is forced to relive some of the worst moments of their life as part of the Eternal Flagellation. Upsetting revelations quickly follow.
** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he was "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realization that she's not needed anymore.
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* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt rejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they are jealous because he can have a normal life and not them.
* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she has forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present she no longer feel home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her, the hurt looks on Larry, Jane, and Victor.
* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt rejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they are jealous because he can have a normal life and not them.
* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she has forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present she no longer feel home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her, the hurt looks on Larry, Jane, and Victor.
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* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she has forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present she no longer feel home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her, the hurt looks on Larry, Jane, and Victor.
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* Each the Patrol is forced to relive some of the worst moments of their life as part of the Eternal Flagellation. Upsetting revelations quickly follow.
** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he was "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
** Cliff's terrible memory is a day where he left Clara in the car to go do drugs and have sex with a stripper. When confronted by the others, he admits that he didn't care, that the drugs and the sex made him feel like a rock star while actual parenting made him feel like a schmuck.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realization that she's not needed anymore.
* Cliff emerges from The Fog to find out that he's been sitting in Clara's garage and chatting with Ginger. With Clara standing right behind him.
-->'''Clara:''' I dunno what's going on with you, but this ain't workin' anymore.
-->'''Cliff:''' ... I know.
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* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt rejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they are jealous because he can have a normal life and not them.
* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she had forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing that happened to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present, she no longer felt at home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her. Larry, Jane, and Victor all look incredibly hurt about this.
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* Each the Patrol is forced to relive some of the worst moments of their life as part of the Eternal Flagellation. Upsetting revelations quickly follow.
** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he was "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realization that she's not needed anymore.
* Each the Patrol is forced to relive some of the worst moments of their life as part of the Eternal Flagellation. Upsetting revelations quickly follow.
** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he was "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realization that she's not needed anymore.
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* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane
-->"It's okay, Jane. I love you. I ''want'' you to eat me."
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* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt rejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they are jealous because he can have a normal life and not them.
* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she has forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present she no longer feel home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her, the hurt looks on Larry, Jane, and Victor.
* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt rejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they are jealous because he can have a normal life and not them.
* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she has forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present she no longer feel home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her, the hurt looks on Larry, Jane, and Victor.
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* Cyborg's encounter with Frenzy and his interrogations about ''why'' he is still Cyborg despite knowing that he has
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** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he was "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realization that she's not needed anymore.
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* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt rejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they are jealous because he can have a normal life and not them.
* During the bus ride, Rita confesses that she has forgotten the Doom Patrol when she time traveled and saw the life she had in 1917 as the best thing to her. The reason she didn't bother to alter everyone's accident in the past is because she didn't want to give up and erase the life she had there. Once she got back to the present she no longer feel home at the manor and now sees the Doom Patrol as strangers to her, the hurt looks on Larry, Jane, and Victor.
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** While Dorothy manages to keep it together for most of the episode, she still arrived home from burying her father to find most of her friends dead and the only remaining adult half out of his mind. Before Rita suddenly makes contact, she's struggling not to break into tears.
* The Dead Boy Detectives have some grim backstories. Edwin was killed in 1916 and spent decades in the afterlife before suddenly being returned to the land of the living. Charles died of hypothermia after some bullies forced him to take a dip in a freezing lake and never passed on. And Crystal was possessed by a demon for a year and forced to do horrible things before Charles and Edwin saved her, and lost all memories of her parents when the demon was banished.
** For added angst Edwin is in love with Charles, but fears that Charles doesn't feel the same way.
* The Dead Boy Detectives have some grim backstories. Edwin was killed in 1916 and spent decades in the afterlife before suddenly being returned to the land of the living. Charles died of hypothermia after some bullies forced him to take a dip in a freezing lake and never passed on. And Crystal was possessed by a demon for a year and forced to do horrible things before Charles and Edwin saved her, and lost all memories of her parents when the demon was banished.
** For added angst Edwin is in love with Charles, but fears that Charles doesn't feel the same way.
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* Jane then tries to reason with Hammerhead that maybe the two aren't truly dead since they're just persona's.
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* Much of Cliff's resentment towards Dorothy was fueled by his belief that the same man who coldly deposited his brain inside a robot body was doting on Dorothy. Here, he gets to witness Niles' actual beliefs on fatherhood, consisting of a MotiveRant about how Dorothy is a selfish, ungrateful girl who has to be locked away for her own protection and the protection of everyone around her. And this is the exact moment that Cliff realizes that Dorothy is not the beneficiary of Caulder's experiments, but another victim.
-->'''Niles:''' What the hell was she thinking?! Does she have any idea what I've done for her? She thinks she can hide from me. I'll lock on to her coordinates. She takes ''my'' ship to get away... I BUILT THE DAMN THING! She's too dangerous to go traipsing around, pretending that her actions don't have any ''consequences!''
-->(''long pause'')
-->'''Cliff:''' ... No wonder she fuckin' ran.
-->'''Niles:''' What the hell was she thinking?! Does she have any idea what I've done for her? She thinks she can hide from me. I'll lock on to her coordinates. She takes ''my'' ship to get away... I BUILT THE DAMN THING! She's too dangerous to go traipsing around, pretending that her actions don't have any ''consequences!''
-->(''long pause'')
-->'''Cliff:''' ... No wonder she fuckin' ran.
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* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realisation that she's not needed anymore.
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* The subtext of "Dorothy Day": Niles realizes that, one way or another, this will be his and Dorothy's last day together, and wants Dorothy to have fun before it ends.
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* As a consequence of his trying to save Roni from being arrested, Cyborg has been remotely locked out of Grid, and he spends the whole episode BroughtDownToNormal and feels utterly powerless, made worse by the fact that for once, there's an actual supervillain right in front of him and he can't do anything about it.
* Rita has reverted back to being a blob, having once more descended into self-loathing after her attempt at being the Beekeeper fell apart.
* As much as she tries to deny it, Jane is feeling grief over the Chief's death, even after everything he's done.
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* As a consequence of his trying to save Roni from being arrested, Cyborg has been remotely locked out of Grid, and he spends the whole episode BroughtDownToNormal and feels utterly powerless, made worse by the fact that for once, there's an actual supervillain right in front of him and he can't do anything about it.
* Rita has reverted back to being a blob, having once more descended into self-loathing after her attempt at being the Beekeeper fell apart.
* As much as she tries to deny it, Jane is feeling grief over the Chief's death, even after everything he's done.
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* Dorothy manages to subdue the Candlemaker without violence, but emerges from his dimension to find that her dad has died.
* A week after the Candlemaker's defeat, Jane is still comatose, and Niles' body is decomposing. Rita and Larry assume that Dorothy is refusing to bury it because she's deluding herself that he'll come back, but the reality is even sadder - she understands that her father is truly dead, and has already made plans for disposing of his body, but is waiting for Jane to wake up, because after everything else that's happened between them, she doesn't want to take away Jane's last chance to say goodbye to someone who Dorothy knows was important to her. Of course, there's only so long that one can preserve a corpse with only rudimentary cryogenics, so she ends up curled against Jane's sleeping body, begging her to wake up.
* Rita's hopes of reviving her acting career go up in flames after her grief causes her to lose control of herself during a dress rehearsal, causing everyone present to find out that she's the "Blob Lady" who terrorized their town.
* The episode ends with Doom Manor mostly empty, as Dorothy finally takes her father's body away, Larry goes off to space, and Cliff and Victor both take trips - the former to meet his new grandson, the latter to try and stop Roni from blowing up the Quorum headquarters, leaving Rita and Jane as the manor's sole living occupants.
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* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt ejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they are jealous because he can have a normal life and not them.
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* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt ejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they refer to what are jealous because he used to be as can have a cyborg.normal life and not them.
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* Everyone including Victor’s father (except Kay) wasn’t happy about Victor’s post-surgery to make him look human again. Victor felt ejected and hurt that his friends don’t accept his current look and think they refer to what he used to be as a cyborg.
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-->'''Danny:''' Oh Dorothy, I ''wish'' that I could say that I was only your friend.
* Maura Lee Karupt relates to Victor how she and the other Dannyzens spent time in the normal world, and encountered nothing but hatred and contempt.
* Maura Lee Karupt relates to Victor how she and the other Dannyzens spent time in the normal world, and encountered nothing but hatred and contempt.
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* Hammerhead accurately predicts that Baby Doll and Dorothy's friendship will fall apart, because kids fight and inevitably, Niles will take Dorothy's side, and Baby Doll does not have the maturity to take that well.
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[[folder:Tyme Patrol]]
* Secretary showing Jane the memory of Miranda's birth. Kay was being forced to "exorcise" her demons in a baptism ritual where she's shaking and calling her mother out for help but is ignored. As she's continually baptized, different personalities come out with varying reactions of anger, hurt and defeat.
--> "I'LL TEAR YOUR FACE OFF!!" "Help me." "We deserve this."
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* Secretary showing Jane the memory of Miranda's birth. Kay was being forced to "exorcise" her demons in a baptism ritual where she's shaking and calling her mother out for help but is ignored. As she's continually baptized, different personalities come out with varying reactions of anger, hurt and defeat.
--> "I'LL TEAR YOUR FACE OFF!!" "Help me." "We deserve this."
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* When Cliff tries to reconnect with his daughter, Clara, but she doesn't believe or recognize him. It makes Clara feel very uncomfortable around him and calls the police to make him leave. If Clara believes him, she doesn't want him back in her life again nor see her grandchild.
* Secretary showing Jane the memory of Miranda's birth. Kay was being forced to "exorcise" her demon's in a baptism ritual where she's shaking and calling her mother out for help but is ignored. As she's continually baptized, different personalities come out with varying reactions of anger, hurt and defeat.
--> "I'LL TEAR YOUR FACE OFF!!" "Help me." "We deserve this."
* Despite Larry's bad luck in protecting those around him, Rita had become one of the only people who remained by his side, no matter how hard he tried to push her away. As the two part ways to get some sleep, Larry pauses, walks over to Rita and gives her a hug that he likely really needed at the moment.
* Secretary showing Jane the memory of Miranda's birth. Kay was being forced to "exorcise" her demon's in a baptism ritual where she's shaking and calling her mother out for help but is ignored. As she's continually baptized, different personalities come out with varying reactions of anger, hurt and defeat.
--> "I'LL TEAR YOUR FACE OFF!!" "Help me." "We deserve this."
* Despite Larry's bad luck in protecting those around him, Rita had become one of the only people who remained by his side, no matter how hard he tried to push her away. As the two part ways to get some sleep, Larry pauses, walks over to Rita and gives her a hug that he likely really needed at the moment.
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* When Cliff tries to reconnect with his daughter, Clara, but she doesn't believe or recognize him. It makes Clara feel very uncomfortable around him and she calls the police to make him leave. If Clara believes him, she doesn't want him back in her life again nor does she want him to see her grandchild.
* Secretary showing Jane the memory of Miranda's birth. Kay was being forced to "exorcise" her demon's in a baptism ritual where she's shaking and calling her mother out for help but is ignored. As she's continually baptized, different personalities come out with varying reactions of anger, hurt and defeat.
--> "I'LL TEAR YOUR FACE OFF!!" "Help me." "We deserve this."
* Despite Larry's bad luck in protecting those around him, Rita had become one of the only people who remained by his side, no matter how hard he tried to push her away. As the two part ways to get some sleep, Larry pauses, walks over to Rita and gives her a hug that he likely really needed at the moment.
--> "I'LL TEAR YOUR FACE OFF!!" "Help me." "We deserve this."
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** Before Larry and Rita leaves, Paul tell his father is a curse of his family after his son is heavily injured.
* Despite of Baby Doll apologizing to Dorothy about Flaming Katy destroying her friend, Manny, she won't forgive her. To her, Manny was the last reminder of her mother and now she has nothing left to remember her.
* Baby Doll and Flaming Katy's death, it comes as a huge shock to everyone in the Underground and is where the episode ends.
* Despite of Baby Doll apologizing to Dorothy about Flaming Katy destroying her friend, Manny, she won't forgive her. To her, Manny was the last reminder of her mother and now she has nothing left to remember her.
* Baby Doll and Flaming Katy's death, it comes as a huge shock to everyone in the Underground and is where the episode ends.
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** Before Larry and Rita leaves, Paul tell his father that he is a curse of his family family, after his son is heavily injured.
* Despiteof Baby Doll apologizing to Dorothy about Flaming Katy destroying her friend, Manny, she won't forgive her. To her, Manny was the last reminder of her mother and now she has nothing left to remember her.
* Baby Doll and Flaming Katy'sdeath, it death. It comes as a huge shock to everyone in the Underground and is where the episode ends.
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* Baby Doll and Flaming Katy's
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** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony that she's not needed anymore.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony that she's not needed anymore.
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* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realisation that she's not needed anymore.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony at the realisation that she's not needed anymore.
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* Each the Patrol is forced to relive some of the worst moments of their life as part of the Eternal Flagellation. Upsetting revelations quickly follow.
** Vic's subconscious memory? Getting threatened with arrest as a child because he "damaging store property" by clumsily searching through the toys. Both Vic and his subconscious self mark this as the end of Vic's childhood.
* While initially supportive of Kay's independence, Jane is left emotionally ''devastated'' when Kay reveals that she ''despises'' Jane and the others and wants them dead. She left wailing in agony that she's not needed anymore.
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