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* The entire chapter titled "Crushed" is so tragic for Andi, because she's so in love with Riley that she ''begs'' him to kill her, or at least drive her mad so that she won't be forced to live without her one true love. Elinsen's poetic writing style makes this scene so much more tear-jerking, and we the readers really understand poor Andi's plight.
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* The entire chapter titled "Crushed" is so tragic for Andi, because she's so in love with Riley that she ''begs'' him to kill her, or at least drive her mad so that she won't be forced to live without her one true love. Elinsen's poetic writing style makes this scene so much more tear-jerking, and we the readers really understand poor Andi's plight. Since she litterally had nothing and was nothing before Riley came along, it hardly comes as a surprise when she ends up wishing for the world's destruction to end her sufferings : ''she cares for nothing else in the universe''.
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* Andi, tied up by the cuktists in a dark cave, feeling that everyone is mocking her. Again.
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* Andi, tied up by the cuktists cultists in a dark cave, feeling that everyone is mocking her. Again.
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** Diminished entirely by how she flirts with a teenage boy AND mocks his girlfriend's body.
** Not for those who realize how awfully Andi treats Vik. Ms Epistola made him work with her, but she was repectful of him and showed gratefulness ! Also, Andi is NOT Vik's girlfriend.
** Don't tell me you're one of those Scarlett Samosa shippers ! This relationship was borderline ''abusive'' in every respect. The MentorShip is already problematic in general, but she used MindRape on him !
** Or maybe he just ''said'' that because he wanted to get free !
** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
** I actually find that she and Andi are NotSoDifferent. Andi hoped Riley would destroy the world after he left her and Scarlett said she could become like her after time.
** This. Just This. And, you know, maybe she just pretends to be a slut because it's easier that way.
** You guys opened my eyes. Scarlett is the victim !
** Oh, god. Could someone ''please'' ''clean this page'' ? I am too busy disapproving to ''do'' anything.
** Not for those who realize how awfully Andi treats Vik. Ms Epistola made him work with her, but she was repectful of him and showed gratefulness ! Also, Andi is NOT Vik's girlfriend.
** Don't tell me you're one of those Scarlett Samosa shippers ! This relationship was borderline ''abusive'' in every respect. The MentorShip is already problematic in general, but she used MindRape on him !
** Or maybe he just ''said'' that because he wanted to get free !
** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
** I actually find that she and Andi are NotSoDifferent. Andi hoped Riley would destroy the world after he left her and Scarlett said she could become like her after time.
** This. Just This. And, you know, maybe she just pretends to be a slut because it's easier that way.
** You guys opened my eyes. Scarlett is the victim !
** Oh, god. Could someone ''please'' ''clean this page'' ? I am too busy disapproving to ''do'' anything.
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* Scarlett mocking ''PhantomOfTheOpera''.
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* Scarlett mocking ''PhantomOfTheOpera''.''Literature/ThePhantomOfTheOpera''.
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** Admit it, you were sobbing uncontrollably when Riley had to solemnly tell Andi that he couldn't take her to the pumpkin ball.
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* The realization that Bree can be a selfish ''cow'' who only cares for her fun and lets Andi get drunk when she gets away from her, instead of looking after her in a party with her weirdo ethnic hippie friends that Andi doesn't want to speak to, and then lets her be assaulted by guys... only to later tell her she was afraid... ''because Andi didn't call her back and she didn't know where Andi was and she didn't want to think it was her fault if anything happened to Andromeda''. Ugh.
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* The realization that Bree can be a selfish ''cow'' who only cares for her fun and lets Andi get drunk when she gets away from her, and speaks with her other friends instead of looking after her in a party with only her weirdo ethnic hippie college friends that Andi doesn't want to speak to, and then lets her (because she isn't here to see it or help) be assaulted by guys... only to later tell her she was afraid... ''because Andi didn't call her back and she didn't know where Andi was and she didn't want to think it was her fault if anything happened to Andromeda''. Ugh.
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* The realization that Bree can be a selfish ''cow'' who only cares for her fun and lets Andi get drunk when she gets away from her and then be assaulted by guys... only to later tell her she was afraid... ''because Andi didn't call her back she didn't want to think it was her fault if anything happened to Andromeda''. Ugh.
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* The realization that Bree can be a selfish ''cow'' who only cares for her fun and lets Andi get drunk when she gets away from her, instead of looking after her in a party with her weirdo ethnic hippie friends that Andi doesn't want to speak to, and then lets her be assaulted by guys... only to later tell her she was afraid... ''because Andi didn't call her back and she didn't know where Andi was and she didn't want to think it was her fault if anything happened to Andromeda''. Ugh.
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** Not for those who realize how awfully Andi treats Vik. Ms Epistola made him work with her, but she was repectful of him and showed gratefulness !
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** Not for those who realize how awfully Andi treats Vik. Ms Epistola made him work with her, but she was repectful of him and showed gratefulness ! Also, Andi is NOT Vik's girlfriend.
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* The realization that Bree can be a selfish ''cow'' who only cares for her fun and lets Andi get drunk when she gets away from her and then be assaulted by guys... only to later tell her she was afraid... ''because Andi didn't call her back she didn't want to think it was her fault if anything happened to Andromeda''. Ugh.
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* Andi's book being thrown into the water and her fear of the pool.
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* Andi feeling that everyone is mocking her. Again.
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* Andi Andi, tied up by the cuktists in a dark cave, feeling that everyone is mocking her. Again.
* Scarlett mocking ''PhantomOfTheOpera''.
* Scarlett mocking ''PhantomOfTheOpera''.
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* Andi's realistic description of how dysfunctional her home life is, with parents who care about all sort of stuff like interior decorating, marine biology and each other... but not about their daughters's insecurities.
** They don't even ''pay'' for her broken car. Who does that ?
** They don't even ''pay'' for her broken car. Who does that ?
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** Oh, god. Could someone ''please'' ''clean this page'' ? I am too busy disapproving to ''do'' anything.
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** Oh, god. Could someone ''please'' ''clean this page'' ? I am too busy disapproving to ''do'' anything.anything.
* Andi feeling that everyone is mocking her. Again.
* Andi feeling that everyone is mocking her. Again.
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* Ms Epistola's MotiveRant. She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned and find a way to cope with it. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get followers as a way of hypercompensating.
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* Ms Epistola's MotiveRant. She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only [[BrokenBird to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned scorned]] and find a way [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds to cope with it.it]]. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get followers as a way of hypercompensating.
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** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
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** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
** I actually find that she and Andi are NotSoDifferent. Andi hoped Riley would destroy the world after he left her and Scarlett said she could become like her after time.
** This. Just This. And, you know, maybe she just pretends to be a slut because it's easier that way.
** You guys opened my eyes. Scarlett is the victim !
** Oh, god. Could someone ''please'' ''clean this page'' ? I am too busy disapproving to ''do'' anything.
** I actually find that she and Andi are NotSoDifferent. Andi hoped Riley would destroy the world after he left her and Scarlett said she could become like her after time.
** This. Just This. And, you know, maybe she just pretends to be a slut because it's easier that way.
** You guys opened my eyes. Scarlett is the victim !
** Oh, god. Could someone ''please'' ''clean this page'' ? I am too busy disapproving to ''do'' anything.
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** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
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** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
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* Ms Epistola's MotiveRant. She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned and find a way to cope with it. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get followers as a way of hypercompensating.
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* Ms Epistola's MotiveRant. She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned and find a way to cope with it. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get followers as a way of hypercompensating.
** Diminished entirely by how she flirts with a teenage boy AND mocks his girlfriend's body.
** Not for those who realize how awfully Andi treats Vik. Ms Epistola made him work with her, but she was repectful of him and showed gratefulness !
** Don't tell me you're one of those Scarlett Samosa shippers ! This relationship was borderline ''abusive'' in every respect. The MentorShip is already problematic in general, but she used MindRape on him !
** Or maybe he just ''said'' that because he wanted to get free !
** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
** Diminished entirely by how she flirts with a teenage boy AND mocks his girlfriend's body.
** Not for those who realize how awfully Andi treats Vik. Ms Epistola made him work with her, but she was repectful of him and showed gratefulness !
** Don't tell me you're one of those Scarlett Samosa shippers ! This relationship was borderline ''abusive'' in every respect. The MentorShip is already problematic in general, but she used MindRape on him !
** Or maybe he just ''said'' that because he wanted to get free !
** Oh, never mind the DracoInLeatherPants. She's just a slut.
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* She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned and find a way to cope with it. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get follower as a way of hypercompensating.
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* Ms Epistola's MotiveRant. She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned and find a way to cope with it. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get follower followers as a way of hypercompensating.
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* The entire chapter titled "Crushed" is so tragic for Andi, because she's so in love with Riley that she ''begs'' him to kill her, or at least drive her mad so that she won't be forced to live without her one true love. Elinsen's poetic writing style makes this scene so much more tear-jerking, and we the readers really understand poor Andi's plight.
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* The entire chapter titled "Crushed" is so tragic for Andi, because she's so in love with Riley that she ''begs'' him to kill her, or at least drive her mad so that she won't be forced to live without her one true love. Elinsen's poetic writing style makes this scene so much more tear-jerking, and we the readers really understand poor Andi's plight.
* She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned and find a way to cope with it. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get follower as a way of hypercompensating.
* She might be a FemmeFatale who wants to make everyone suffer with her, but it's only to finally take control of her obsession with being scorned and find a way to cope with it. Her manipulations are not so much a planned method to get follower as a way of hypercompensating.
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* “Go home, little girl,” he said. “Enjoy your mundane little life while you still can.”
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* “Go home, little girl,” he said. “Enjoy your mundane little life while you still can.””
* The entire chapter titled "Crushed" is so tragic for Andi, because she's so in love with Riley that she ''begs'' him to kill her, or at least drive her mad so that she won't be forced to live without her one true love. Elinsen's poetic writing style makes this scene so much more tear-jerking, and we the readers really understand poor Andi's plight.
* The entire chapter titled "Crushed" is so tragic for Andi, because she's so in love with Riley that she ''begs'' him to kill her, or at least drive her mad so that she won't be forced to live without her one true love. Elinsen's poetic writing style makes this scene so much more tear-jerking, and we the readers really understand poor Andi's plight.
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* “Go home, little girl,” he said. “Enjoy your mundane little life while you still can.”
