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* 11B Lincoln's reaction to the girls fussing over him like they would their original brother is to blatantly wonder if ''this is what it feels like to be loved''. That's right; his [[BigBrotherBully brothers' bullying]] made him feel completely unloved. Our Lincoln wasn't kidding when he said the guy needed his sisters more than he himself did.
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* 11B Lincoln's reaction to the girls fussing over him like they would their original brother is to blatantly wonder if ''this is what it feels like to be loved''. That's right; his [[BigBrotherBully brothers' bullying]] made him feel completely unloved. Our Lincoln wasn't kidding when he said the guy needed his sisters more than he himself did. Doubles as NightmareFuel.
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* Luke, the tough looking rock and roll fanatic with the mohawk....starts tearing up when he finds out that the real Linka doesn't want to come home.
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* Luke, the tough looking rock and roll fanatic with the mohawk....Mohawk....starts tearing up when he finds out that the real Linka doesn't want to come home.
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* Due to Linka’s brothers coming to Ron Andie’s house to teach him how to take care of her, and threatening to pummel him if he dares to hurt her, [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Ron Andie instead becomes afraid that he’s not ready yet to be with Linka]], and he temporarily breaks up with her.
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* Due to Linka’s Linka's brothers coming to Ron Andie’s Andy's house to teach him how to take care of her, and threatening to pummel him if he dares to hurt her, [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Ron Andie Andy instead becomes afraid that he’s not ready yet to be with Linka]], and he temporarily breaks up with her.
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* Why does Lars like the dark? One of his earliest memories is Lane holding him close in a dark room and telling his little brother everything was going to be ok.
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* Why does Lars like the dark? One of his earliest memories is Lane holding him close in a dark room and telling his little brother everything was going to be ok.OK.
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** The worst part of it though is [[spoiler: Loki coming across Bebe's ring,making him realize she's indeed gone, and making the readers realize everyone in this universe is gone as well.]]
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* The brothers brothers' reaction to [[spoiler: seeing their now destroyed universe.]]
** The worst part of it though is [[spoiler: Loki coming across Bebe'sring,making ring, making him realize she's indeed gone, and making the readers realize everyone in this universe is gone as well.]]
** The worst part of it though is [[spoiler: Loki coming across Bebe's
'''Chapter 36'''
* Lincoln returns home and is thrilled at first...until he discovers that he's going to have to say goodbye to his new-found brothers forever. He and they are devastated.
* Lincoln returns home and is thrilled at first...until he discovers that he's going to have to say goodbye to his new-found brothers forever. He and they are devastated.
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* Lincoln saying goodbye to his sisters when he decides to stay in dimension 63 for good. Lori even falls on her knees and begs him to stay.
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* Lincoln saying goodbye to his sisters when he decides to stay in dimension 63 for good. Lori even falls on her knees and begs him to stay.stay.
** And to make it sting even more, Lincoln wonders if this was the right choice.
* 11B Lincoln's reaction to the girls fussing over him like they would their original brother is to blatantly wonder if ''this is what it feels like to be loved''. That's right; his [[BigBrotherBully brothers' bullying]] made him feel completely unloved. Our Lincoln wasn't kidding when he said the guy needed his sisters more than he himself did.
** And to make it sting even more, Lincoln wonders if this was the right choice.
* 11B Lincoln's reaction to the girls fussing over him like they would their original brother is to blatantly wonder if ''this is what it feels like to be loved''. That's right; his [[BigBrotherBully brothers' bullying]] made him feel completely unloved. Our Lincoln wasn't kidding when he said the guy needed his sisters more than he himself did.
