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* In the 31st chapter, Jake tries to leave before any of the bad guys come to confront him at Grace's property. Grace begs him not to go [[CueTheRain as the]] [[GrayRainOfDepression raining starts]]. Jake doesn't really want to leave Grace, but [[BreakHisHeartToSaveHim he purposefully says cruel things to make her angry so that his departure would be easier]]. She eventually [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]], telling him never to return.
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* In the 31st chapter, Jake tries to leave before any of the bad guys come to confront him at Grace's property. Grace begs him not to go [[CueTheRain as the]] [[GrayRainOfDepression raining starts]]. Jake doesn't really want to leave Grace, but [[BreakHisHeartToSaveHim he purposefully says cruel things to make her angry so that his departure would be easier]]. She eventually [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]], him, telling him never to return.
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* After Jake has [[spoiler:killed Benjamin]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her and [[GetOut throws him out]].
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* After Jake has [[spoiler:killed Benjamin]] Benjamin [[spoiler:dies a horrible, painful death courtesy of a huge overload of Jake's venom]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her well and [[GetOut throws him out]].
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* Jake was raised by his [[AlcoholicParent alcoholic father]] James who [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night. In their last night together, [[AbusiveParent James]] outright [[ForcedToWatch forced Jake to watch]] the last beating Selena got. The seriously injured Selena was shot by a deputy who never hid his [[FantasticRacism dislike]] of her. Orphaned, Jake run away. The next day, he lost his rattle when a hawk almost got him. After hearing this out, Grace can no longer find it in her to hate Jake.
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* Jake was raised by his [[AlcoholicParent alcoholic father]] James who [[DomesticAbuser [[DomesticAbuse beat]] his mother Selena every night. In their last night together, [[AbusiveParent James]] outright [[ForcedToWatch forced Jake to watch]] the last beating Selena got. The seriously injured Selena was shot by a deputy who never hid his [[FantasticRacism dislike]] of her. Orphaned, Jake run away. The next day, he lost his rattle when a hawk almost got him. After hearing this out, Grace can no longer find it in her to hate Jake.
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-->'''Beans''': Ya couldn't try and tell me the TRUTH? I've had it, Rango! I can't take no more of yer lies. I can't... I can't...
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* When Jake tries to leave in the 31st chapter, Grace begs him not to go [[CueTheRain as the]] [[GrayRainOfDepression raining starts]]. Jake doesn't really want to leave Grace, but he purposefully says cruel things to make her angry so that his departure would be easier. She eventually [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]], telling him never to return.
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* When In the 31st chapter, Jake tries to leave in before any of the 31st chapter, bad guys come to confront him at Grace's property. Grace begs him not to go [[CueTheRain as the]] [[GrayRainOfDepression raining starts]]. Jake doesn't really want to leave Grace, but [[BreakHisHeartToSaveHim he purposefully says cruel things to make her angry so that his departure would be easier.easier]]. She eventually [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]], telling him never to return.
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** The aftermath shown in the following chapter. For all the good guys involved.
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** The aftermath shown in the following chapter. For all the good guys involved.involved.
* When Jake tries to leave in the 31st chapter, Grace begs him not to go [[CueTheRain as the]] [[GrayRainOfDepression raining starts]]. Jake doesn't really want to leave Grace, but he purposefully says cruel things to make her angry so that his departure would be easier. She eventually [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]], telling him never to return.
** In the same chapter, Beans loses [[spoiler:her ranch, the only thing left of her father]] because of the Hellhounds. She's [[EtTuBrute furious with Rango]] because he lied to her by saying that Dufayel's no longer a problem just not to give her more worries. And [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone he knows he screwed up]].
-->'''Beans''': Ya couldn't try and tell me the TRUTH? I've had it, Rango! I can't take no more of yer lies. I can't... I can't...
* When Jake tries to leave in the 31st chapter, Grace begs him not to go [[CueTheRain as the]] [[GrayRainOfDepression raining starts]]. Jake doesn't really want to leave Grace, but he purposefully says cruel things to make her angry so that his departure would be easier. She eventually [[ArmorPiercingSlap slaps him]], telling him never to return.
** In the same chapter, Beans loses [[spoiler:her ranch, the only thing left of her father]] because of the Hellhounds. She's [[EtTuBrute furious with Rango]] because he lied to her by saying that Dufayel's no longer a problem just not to give her more worries. And [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone he knows he screwed up]].
-->'''Beans''': Ya couldn't try and tell me the TRUTH? I've had it, Rango! I can't take no more of yer lies. I can't... I can't...
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* Jake was raised by his [[AlcoholicParent alcoholic father]] James who [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night. In their last night together, [[AbusiveParent James]] outright [[ForcedToWatch forced Jake to watch]] the last beating Selena got. The seriously injured Selena was shot by a deputy who never hid his [[FantasticRacism dislike]] of her. Orphaned Jake run away and the next day, he lost his rattle when a hawk almost got him. After hearing this out, Grace can no longer find it in her to hate Jake.
** The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind his parents.
** The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind his parents.
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* Jake was raised by his [[AlcoholicParent alcoholic father]] James who [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night. In their last night together, [[AbusiveParent James]] outright [[ForcedToWatch forced Jake to watch]] the last beating Selena got. The seriously injured Selena was shot by a deputy who never hid his [[FantasticRacism dislike]] of her. Orphaned Orphaned, Jake run away and the away. The next day, he lost his rattle when a hawk almost got him. After hearing this out, Grace can no longer find it in her to hate Jake.
** [[TroubledBackstoryFlashback The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind his parents.]]
** [[TroubledBackstoryFlashback The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind his parents.]]
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* After Jake [[spoiler:has killed Benjamin]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her and [[GetOut throws him out]].
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* After Jake [[spoiler:has killed has [[spoiler:killed Benjamin]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her and [[GetOut throws him out]].
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* Jake was [[spoiler:raised by his alcoholic father James who [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night. In their last night together, [[AbusiveParent James]] outright [[ForcedToWatch forced Jake to watch]] the last beating Selena got. The seriously injured Selena was shot by a deputy who never hid his [[FantasticRacism dislike]] of her. Orphaned Jake run away and the next day, he lost his rattle when a hawk almost got him]]. After hearing this out, Grace can no longer find it in her to hate Jake.
** The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind [[spoiler:his parents]].
** The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind [[spoiler:his parents]].
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* Jake was [[spoiler:raised raised by his [[AlcoholicParent alcoholic father father]] James who [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night. In their last night together, [[AbusiveParent James]] outright [[ForcedToWatch forced Jake to watch]] the last beating Selena got. The seriously injured Selena was shot by a deputy who never hid his [[FantasticRacism dislike]] of her. Orphaned Jake run away and the next day, he lost his rattle when a hawk almost got him]].him. After hearing this out, Grace can no longer find it in her to hate Jake.
** The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind[[spoiler:his parents]].his parents.
** The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind
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* After Jake [[spoiler:has killed Benjamin]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her and [[GetOut throws him out]].
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* After Jake [[spoiler:has killed Benjamin]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her and [[GetOut throws him out]].out]].
** The aftermath shown in the following chapter. For all the good guys involved.
** The aftermath shown in the following chapter. For all the good guys involved.
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* After [[UnstoppableRage viciously]] beating up Bad Bill's gang, [[MamaBear Grace]] confesses that [[spoiler:she killed in a similar way a group of outlaws who smashed nine of her ten eggs and can't stand outlaws for that reason]]. The last part makes Jake feel betrayed by Grace, call her a {{hypocrite}} and storm off.
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** The sight of Grace being battered by Benjamin Hares forces into Jake's mind [[spoiler:his parents]].
* After [[UnstoppableRage viciously]] beating up Bad Bill's gang, [[MamaBear Grace]] confesses that [[spoiler:she killed in a similar way a group of outlaws who smashed nine of her ten eggs and can't stand outlaws for that reason]]. The last part makes Jake feel betrayed by Grace, call her a {{hypocrite}} and stormoff.off.
* After Jake [[spoiler:has killed Benjamin]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her and [[GetOut throws him out]].
* After [[UnstoppableRage viciously]] beating up Bad Bill's gang, [[MamaBear Grace]] confesses that [[spoiler:she killed in a similar way a group of outlaws who smashed nine of her ten eggs and can't stand outlaws for that reason]]. The last part makes Jake feel betrayed by Grace, call her a {{hypocrite}} and storm
* After Jake [[spoiler:has killed Benjamin]] in front of Grace and Teddy, she's so shocked from that and the battering she gained from [[spoiler:her husband]] that she doesn't take well Jake's attempts to comfort her and [[GetOut throws him out]].
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* Jake [[spoiler:lived with having to witness how his alcoholic father [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night]].
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* Jake [[spoiler:lived with having to witness how was [[spoiler:raised by his alcoholic father James who [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night]].night. In their last night together, [[AbusiveParent James]] outright [[ForcedToWatch forced Jake to watch]] the last beating Selena got. The seriously injured Selena was shot by a deputy who never hid his [[FantasticRacism dislike]] of her. Orphaned Jake run away and the next day, he lost his rattle when a hawk almost got him]]. After hearing this out, Grace can no longer find it in her to hate Jake.
* After [[UnstoppableRage viciously]] beating up Bad Bill's gang, [[MamaBear Grace]] confesses that [[spoiler:she killed in a similar way a group of outlaws who smashed nine of her ten eggs and can't stand outlaws for that reason]]. The last part makes Jake feel betrayed by Grace, call her a {{hypocrite}} and storm off.
* After [[UnstoppableRage viciously]] beating up Bad Bill's gang, [[MamaBear Grace]] confesses that [[spoiler:she killed in a similar way a group of outlaws who smashed nine of her ten eggs and can't stand outlaws for that reason]]. The last part makes Jake feel betrayed by Grace, call her a {{hypocrite}} and storm off.
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* When Angelique hears that her [[EvilUncle uncle]] Dufayel wants to take over Mud, she decides to leave with her children before things escalate into a bloodshed and pleads Chuck to come with her. When they leave with evident guilt, Rango is left feeling loneliness that reminds him of the time he was a pet living in a glass box and isolated from the rest of the world.
* Grace reveals that her marriage to Benjamin Hares was blissful until he suddenly vanished and left her penniless and pregnant, forcing her to return to her father.
* Jake [[spoiler:lived with having to witness how his alcoholic father [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night]].
* Grace reveals that her marriage to Benjamin Hares was blissful until he suddenly vanished and left her penniless and pregnant, forcing her to return to her father.
* Jake [[spoiler:lived with having to witness how his alcoholic father [[DomesticAbuser beat]] his mother Selena every night]].