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* While most of the other creatures react with indignation when Neighsay treats them with hostility and they subsequently depart with their respective students, Thorax's reaction is much more resigned. It's a sobering reminder that even with the Changeling Hive's reformation, their old queen and the Wedding Invasion have still left major black marks on the species' reputation. This also indicates that just because the main heroes have forgiven them for their misdeeds, it doesn't mean that others have.
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* Some of the HiddenDepths shown for Limestone Pie is are pretty saddening. Beneath her sour and salty exterior, Limestone confesses to being [[StepfordSnarker miserable "all the time!" She's also instantly jealous upon hearing time."]] Furthermore, her jealously toward Maud getting a boyfriend shows that despite her rough edges, she still has the same emotional needs of any mare and may want a boyfriend, giving a quite dark view into her life.special somepony to be happy with.
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** Twilight never ''meant'' for the EEA guidelines to make the students bored or stressed. She just wanted to work hard to make sure the school was approved. And how is that hard work rewarded? With Chancellor Neighsay [[MovingTheGoalposts telling her that students from other races are NOT allowed at EEA schools]] and for that simple mistake, [[DisproportionateRetribution her school being unedified right on the spot without any second chances]].
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** Twilight never ''meant'' for the EEA guidelines to make the students bored or stressed. She just wanted to work hard to make sure the school was approved. And how is that hard work rewarded? With Chancellor Neighsay [[MovingTheGoalposts telling her that students from other races are NOT allowed at EEA schools]] and for that simple mistake, [[DisproportionateRetribution her school being unedified right on the spot spot, then closed down without any second chances]].
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** Twilight never ''meant'' for the EEA guidelines to make the students bored. She just wanted to work hard to make sure the school was approved. And how is that hard work rewarded? With Chancellor Neighsay [[MovingTheGoalposts telling her that students from other races are NOT allowed at EEA schools]] and for that simple mistake, [[DisproportionateRetribution her school being unedified right on the spot without any second chances]].
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** Twilight never ''meant'' for the EEA guidelines to make the students bored.bored or stressed. She just wanted to work hard to make sure the school was approved. And how is that hard work rewarded? With Chancellor Neighsay [[MovingTheGoalposts telling her that students from other races are NOT allowed at EEA schools]] and for that simple mistake, [[DisproportionateRetribution her school being unedified right on the spot without any second chances]].
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* Pinkie is shocked when she discovers that Mudbriar seems to know things about Maud that she, Muad's own sister, doesn't. When Maud confirms this to be true, Pinkie runs off crying, thinking Maud doesn't need a "Best Sister Friend Forever" anymore. Kind of [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything reminiscent]] of a parent believing that because their kids are getting older, they don't need a mom or dad anymore.
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* Pinkie is shocked when she discovers that Mudbriar seems to know things about Maud that she, Muad's Maud's own sister, doesn't. When Maud confirms this to be true, Pinkie runs off crying, thinking Maud doesn't need a "Best Sister Friend Forever" anymore. Kind of [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything reminiscent]] of a parent believing that because their kids are getting older, they don't need a mom or dad anymore.
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* Pinkie waking up the next morning and [[MoodWhiplash changing her tune from]] "Good Morning" to "Bad Morning".
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** At one point, Silverstream [[WhatIsThisFeeling asks if this is what boredom feels like]]. Seeing a [[{{Keet}} lively, optimistic character]] like her experience such unhappy feelings for the first time is pretty disheartening.
** The fight that breaks out between the New 6, indicating that working "by the book" is hurting far more than it is helping.
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* Chancellor Neighsay's definitely a bit of a flankhole, but [[WellIntentionedExtremist he still has Equestria's future in mind]] even though his way isn't always the right way. You have to wonder just what made him so jaded in the first place. And how did he harbor such resentment for the other races to begin with? Just some food for thought.
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* Chancellor Neighsay's definitely a bit of a flankhole, but [[WellIntentionedExtremist he still has Equestria's future in mind]] even though his way isn't always the right way. You have to wonder just what made him so jaded in the first place. And Ponies are usually friendly and open-hearted. So how did he harbor such resentment for the other races to begin with? Just some food for thought.thought.
** Bordering on FridgeHorror: there's the slight possibility that whatever issues he had to begin with, they were exacerbated when the Storm King had him [[JerkassWoobie enslaved alongside his fellow ponies]].
** Bordering on FridgeHorror: there's the slight possibility that whatever issues he had to begin with, they were exacerbated when the Storm King had him [[JerkassWoobie enslaved alongside his fellow ponies]].
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* While all the leaders are arguing with each other and threatening to go to war over the missing students, believing that someone is helping them hide, Thorax is the only non-pony against a war since the Changelings can't afford getting involved in one. Then Ember, one of his own friends, gets in his face and accuses him of hiding something from them.
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'''Thorax''':(sad)...But we're friends!
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* Just the sight of things go downhill after Twilight restrains everyone's curriculum. The song is brief, but you can feel the life drain from the place once all of her friends are restricted to a standard classroom format. The resulting stress on the students can probably hit home for several viewers.
* While most of the other creatures react with indignation when Neighsay treats them with hostility and they subsequently depart with their respective students, Thorax's reaction is much more resigned.
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* Twilight's breakdown after her school gets shut down. She spends much of the time hiding under a pile of pillows in a sobbing mess, and barely responds to her friends' attempts to cheer her up.
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* Just the sight of things go downhill after Twilight restrains everyone's curriculum. The song is brief, but you can feel the life drain from the place once all of her friends are restricted to a standard classroom format. The resulting stress on the students can probably hit home for several viewers.
* While most of the other creatures react with indignation when Neighsay treats them with hostility and they subsequently depart with their respective students, Thorax's reaction is much more resigned.
-->'''Thorax:''' It's fine. We know not everypony sees us the way you do. We're used to it.
* Twilight's breakdown after her school gets shut down. She spends much of the time hiding under a pile of pillows in a sobbing mess, and barely responds to her friends' attempts to cheer her up.
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