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* After the Mane 6 escape from Tartarus, they start to celebrate, but then suddenly notice the sun going down, signalling that all of Equestria's magic is about to disappear. While the viewer knows that the Young Six are confronting Cozy Glow at this moment, it is soul-crushing when considering the Mane 6's perspective. They were able to escape Tartarus against all odds, but it didn't even matter. At this point, [[DarkestHour Cozy Glow has still outsmarted them and they have no means of stopping her now]].
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* After the Mane 6 escape from Tartarus, they start to celebrate, but then suddenly notice the sun going down, signalling that all of Equestria's magic is about to disappear. While the viewer knows that the Young Six are confronting Cozy Glow at this moment, it is soul-crushing when considering the Mane 6's perspective. They were able to escape Tartarus against all odds, but it didn't even matter. At this point, [[DarkestHour [[TheBadGuyWins Cozy Glow has still outsmarted them them]] [[DarkestHour and they have no means of stopping her now]].
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** Had it not been for Sugar Belle's cart breaking, Big Mac would've, [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome in reality]], lost his chance to reconcile with her.
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** Had it not been for Sugar Belle's cart breaking, Big Mac would've, [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome in reality]], reality, lost his chance to reconcile with her.
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* When Twilight tries to warn Spike that perhaps Sludge doesn't have the young dragon's best interest at heart, Spike tells Twilight that she's only saying that because she doesn't like that Spike has a "real parent" in his life now. An x-ray shows Twilight's heart literally ''breaking'' upon hearing those words.
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* When Twilight tries to warn Spike that perhaps Sludge doesn't have the young dragon's best interest at heart, Spike tells Twilight that she's only saying that because she doesn't like that Spike has a "real parent" in his life now. An x-ray shows Twilight's heart literally ''breaking'' upon After hearing those words.words, Twilight bites her lip and tries not to cry. An x-ray then shows her heart ''shattering into several pieces''.
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* The Dragon Lord in Smolder's story did a good deed by giving a young homeless dragon shelter and food. NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished, however, and he ends up betrayed and losing everything while the [[UngratefulBastard ingrate]] is laughing at him.
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* The Dragon Lord in Smolder's story did a good deed by giving a young homeless dragon shelter and food. NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished, however, and [[TheFarmerAndTheViper he ends up betrayed and losing everything everything]] while the [[UngratefulBastard ingrate]] is laughing at him.him. Made sadder by Smolder basically saying that this is a ''happy'' story, at least to dragons because they like seeing "weakness" getting punished.
