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--> '''Batman''': Johnny I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
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--> '''Batman''': Johnny Johnny, I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
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--> '''Jester''': (''resigned'') It's time to get serious Lex.
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--> '''Jester''': (''resigned'') It's time to get serious serious, Lex.
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** The fact that J'onn's family died while suffering in agony sure doesn't help.
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** The fact that J'onn's family died while suffering in agony sure doesn't help.help much.
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* During Martian Manhunter and Earth-3 Rose Wilson's mind-melding sequence, we get to see the deaths of J'onn's family and Rose's mother at the hands of the White Martians and the Crime Syndicate. Ouch.
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* During Martian Manhunter and Earth-3 Rose Wilson's mind-melding sequence, we get to see the deaths of J'onn's family and Rose's mother at the hands of the White Martians and the Crime Syndicate. Ouch.
** The fact that J'onn's family died while suffering in agony sure doesn't help.
** The fact that J'onn's family died while suffering in agony sure doesn't help.
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* [[AlasPoorVillain Alas, poor Johnny Quick]]. Even Batman (who'd set him up for it) seemed devastated. Just pay attention when he tells Johnny to stop running.
--> '''Batman''': Johnny I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
** Rarely do you see Batman legitimately ''panic'' the way he does when he shouts for Johnny to stop vibrating. Batman probably guessed that, if Johnny had kept vibrating, he would have [[NightmareFuel turned into dust.]]
--> '''Batman''': Johnny I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
** Rarely do you see Batman legitimately ''panic'' the way he does when he shouts for Johnny to stop vibrating. Batman probably guessed that, if Johnny had kept vibrating, he would have [[NightmareFuel turned into dust.]]
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* [[AlasPoorVillain Alas, poor Johnny Quick]]. Even Batman (who'd set him up for it) seemed devastated. Just pay attention when he tells Johnny to stop running.
--> '''Batman''': Johnny I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
** Rarely do you see Batman legitimately ''panic'' the way he does when he shouts for Johnny to stop vibrating. Batman probably guessed that, if Johnny had kept vibrating, he would have [[NightmareFuel turned into dust.]]
--> '''Batman''': Johnny I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
** Rarely do you see Batman legitimately ''panic'' the way he does when he shouts for Johnny to stop vibrating. Batman probably guessed that, if Johnny had kept vibrating, he would have [[NightmareFuel turned into dust.]]
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Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
** Lex tells Harley the monkey Jester isn't coming back.
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** Lex tells Harley the monkey Jester isn't coming back.back.
* During Martian Manhunter and Earth-3 Rose Wilson's mind-melding sequence, we get to see the deaths of J'onn's family and Rose's mother at the hands of the White Martians and the Crime Syndicate. Ouch.
* During Martian Manhunter and Earth-3 Rose Wilson's mind-melding sequence, we get to see the deaths of J'onn's family and Rose's mother at the hands of the White Martians and the Crime Syndicate. Ouch.
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Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
** Made even sadder later when Lex reveals that he's the [[SoleSurvivor last survivor]] of his Justice League... Which means that the Jester was his last friend... It makes his insistence that they can "make it together" even HarsherInHindsight.
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** Made even sadder later when Lex reveals that he's the [[SoleSurvivor last survivor]] of his Justice League... Which means that the Jester was his last friend... It makes his insistence that they can "make it together" even HarsherInHindsight.HarsherInHindsight.
** Lex tells Harley the monkey Jester isn't coming back.
** Lex tells Harley the monkey Jester isn't coming back.
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* The Jester's death near the beginning. That and Lex begging him to not go through with it.
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* The Jester's HeroicSacrifice and death near the beginning. That and Lex begging him to not go through with it.
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** Made even sadder later when Lex reveals that he's the [[SoleSurvivor last survivor]] of his Justice League... Which means that the Jester was his last friend...
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** Made even sadder later when Lex reveals that he's the [[SoleSurvivor last survivor]] of his Justice League... Which means that the Jester was his last friend... It makes his insistence that they can "make it together" even HarsherInHindsight.
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Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
* The Jesters death near the beginning. That and Lex begging him to not go through with it.
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* The Jesters Jester's death near the beginning. That and Lex begging him to not go through with it.
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--> '''Jester''': (''smiles sadly'') Get your shiny bald head out of here, it's hurting my eyes.
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--> '''Jester''': (''smiles sadly'') Get your shiny bald head out of here, it's hurting my eyes.eyes.
** Made even sadder later when Lex reveals that he's the [[SoleSurvivor last survivor]] of his Justice League... Which means that the Jester was his last friend...
** Made even sadder later when Lex reveals that he's the [[SoleSurvivor last survivor]] of his Justice League... Which means that the Jester was his last friend...
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** Rarely do you see Batman legitimately ''panic'' the way he does when he shouts for Johnny to stop vibrating. Batman probably guessed that, if Johnny had kept vibrating, he would have [[NightmareFuel turned into dust.]]
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* Earth-3 Luthor. Talk about someone who's [[TraumaCongaLine been through a lot]].
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* [[AlasPoorVillain Alas, poor Johnny Quick]]. Even Batman (who'd set him up for it) seemed devastated. Just pay attention when he tells Johnny to stop running.
--> '''Batman''': Johnny I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
* The Jesters death near the beginning. That and Lex begging him to not go through with it.
--> '''Jester''': (''resigned'') It's time to get serious Lex.
--> '''Lex''': No! We can make it together! We can do this!
--> '''Jester''': (''smiles sadly'') Get your shiny bald head out of here, it's hurting my eyes.
--> '''Batman''': Johnny I'm back! Stop vibrating! ''Stop!''
* The Jesters death near the beginning. That and Lex begging him to not go through with it.
--> '''Jester''': (''resigned'') It's time to get serious Lex.
--> '''Lex''': No! We can make it together! We can do this!
--> '''Jester''': (''smiles sadly'') Get your shiny bald head out of here, it's hurting my eyes.
