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* Doubling as a meta example; the fact that this was the last episode of the last season due to cancellation is also a tearjerker.
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** Her blaming her parents for wanting to change when everything was perfect also ties into her desire to keep things the same, which is perfectly understandable when you remember she's only ''twelve years old''.
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** Her blaming her parents for wanting to change when everything was perfect also ties into her desire to keep things the same, which is perfectly understandable when you remember she's only ''twelve ''thirteen years old''.
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* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave MT? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through the portal and made even worse when Grace thinking that MT was ''hindering'' his progress, opened her compass. When Jesse disappears, MT starts to cry as the Reflection Police approach her from behind...
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* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave MT? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through the portal and made even worse when Grace thinking that MT was ''hindering'' his progress, opened her compass.portal. When Jesse disappears, MT starts to cry as the Reflection Police approach her from behind...
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* In order to leave the Lucky Cat Car, Jesse and Lake need a thousand points. However, Lake notices that she's getting fewer points because passengers have the urgency to leave while denizen don't. Lake bemoans how practically everyone, even ''the train itself'', sees her as lesser or not her own person.
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* In order to leave the Lucky Cat Car, Jesse and Lake MT need a thousand points. However, Lake MT notices that she's getting fewer points because passengers have the urgency to leave while denizen don't. Lake bemoans how practically everyone, even ''the train itself'', sees her as lesser or not her own person.
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* Simon telling Lake "you're no person", showing just how little the Apex thinks of denizens in general.
* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave Mirror Tulip? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through the portal and made even worse when Grace thinking that MT was ''hindering'' his progress, opened her compass. When Jesse disappears, MT starts to cry as the Reflection Police approach her from behind...
* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave Mirror Tulip? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through the portal and made even worse when Grace thinking that MT was ''hindering'' his progress, opened her compass. When Jesse disappears, MT starts to cry as the Reflection Police approach her from behind...
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* Simon telling Lake MT "you're no person", showing just how little the Apex thinks of denizens in general.
* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leaveMirror Tulip? MT? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through the portal and made even worse when Grace thinking that MT was ''hindering'' his progress, opened her compass. When Jesse disappears, MT starts to cry as the Reflection Police approach her from behind...
* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave
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* Mace [[BreakingSpeech mocking MT about wanting to leave the train.]] He laughs at how she tries to act like a passenger yet still is without a number. It only gets worse as Mace points out how Mirror Tulip helped Tulip and Jesse escape more than herself. How she may not even be living her own life and is just be another product of the train. Another reflection.
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* Mace [[BreakingSpeech mocking MT about wanting to leave the train.]] He laughs at how she tries to act like a passenger yet still is without a number. It only gets worse as Mace points out how Mirror Tulip MT helped Tulip and Jesse escape more than herself. How she may not even be living her own life and is just be another product of the train. Another reflection.
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* In order to leave the Lucky Cat Car, Jesse and Lake need a thousand points. However, Lake notices that she's getting fewer points because passengers have the urgency to leave while denizen don't. Lake bemoans how practically everyone, even ''the train itself'', sees her as lesser or her own person.
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* In order to leave the Lucky Cat Car, Jesse and Lake need a thousand points. However, Lake notices that she's getting fewer points because passengers have the urgency to leave while denizen don't. Lake bemoans how practically everyone, even ''the train itself'', sees her as lesser or not her own person.
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* This episode hits ''hard'' with the MoodWhiplash, going from Tulip's fun playtime "adventure" with Khaki Bottoms the living plush rabbit to her being menaced by the Steward, [[BreakThemByTalking guilt-tripped]] by [[KnightOfCerebus the Conductor]], and having to fight and subdue poor Atticus after he's [[BalefulPolymorph turned into a Ghom]]. The episode ends with Tulip in [[BrokenTears tears]] as One-One struggles to comfort her.
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* This episode hits ''hard'' with the MoodWhiplash, going from Tulip's fun playtime "adventure" with Khaki Bottoms the living plush rabbit to her being menaced by the Steward, [[BreakThemByTalking guilt-tripped]] by [[KnightOfCerebus the Conductor]], and having to fight and subdue poor Atticus after he's [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation turned into a Ghom]]. The episode ends with Tulip in [[BrokenTears tears]] as One-One struggles to comfort her.
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* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave Mirror Tulip? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through the portal. When Jesse disappears, MT starts to cry as the Reflection Police approach her from behind...
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* The poor ghostly denizen having all of his cubes wrecked by the Apex, with the cult saying that there's nothing of use to them. It hurts because Jesse slowly became corrupted into their thinking just by lightly tapping a cube with his foot.
* Simon telling Lake "you're no person", showing just how little the Apex thinks of denizens in general.
* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave Mirror Tulip? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through theportal.portal and made even worse when Grace thinking that MT was ''hindering'' his progress, opened her compass. When Jesse disappears, MT starts to cry as the Reflection Police approach her from behind...
* Simon telling Lake "you're no person", showing just how little the Apex thinks of denizens in general.
* Jesse finally gets his number down but where does that leave Mirror Tulip? He may be able to leave but as MT discovers, she doesn’t have a number and thus, cannot step through the
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-->'''MT:''' Look at me! I AM A PERSON! '''''I deserve a number!!!!'''''
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-->'''MT:''' ''(tearing up as she stares into one of the porter bots)'' Look at me! I AM A PERSON! PERSON! ''(crushing said porter bot in her hands)'' '''''I deserve a number!!!!'''''
-->'''Simon:''' [[IronicEcho Teamwork begins when two people trust each other]]. But you? '''You're no person'''.
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* Let's put it this way. '''''Everything'''''.
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* Let's put it To sum this way. up in one single word: '''''Everything'''''.
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** Hazel seeing that she's a train person and asks if Grace hates her. Then she panics, afraid that Simon is going to wheel her. It's at that moment Grace realizes just how horrible she's been in the past and the ramifications of how she and the Apex treated the denizens.
--->'''Hazel:''' Simon's going to kill me too! Grace, I'm afraid of the wheel!
--->'''Hazel:''' Simon's going to kill me too! Grace, I'm afraid of the wheel!
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** Hazel seeing that she's a train person and asks if Grace hates her. Then she panics, afraid that Simon is going to wheel her. It's at that moment [[HeelRealization Grace realizes realizes]] just how horrible she's been in the past and the ramifications of how she and the Apex treated the denizens.
--->'''Hazel:''' Simon's going to kill me too! Grace,I'm ''I'm afraid of the wheel!wheel!''
--->'''Hazel:''' Simon's going to kill me too! Grace,
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* Grace and Simon both came to the train as children. They are now undeniably adults. And even though Grace worked through some of her number, it is still big enough to wrap around her wrist and up her arm and she in her crusade has caused all those kids to raise their numbers as well. They'll be there for a long time, far longer than they should have. By the time they return, their families would have likely long since moved on (or worse). As for Simon, his family definitely will never hear from him again.
** Speaking of which, even when Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on the train. No amount of redemption is ever going to erase all of her sins. There's also the fact that she's not even sure if her parents are still alive or something happened to them so she ends up just as she started on her train trip: all alone and no one to guide her.
** Speaking of which, even when Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on the train. No amount of redemption is ever going to erase all of her sins. There's also the fact that she's not even sure if her parents are still alive or something happened to them so she ends up just as she started on her train trip: all alone and no one to guide her.
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* Grace and Simon both came to the train as children. They are now undeniably adults. And even though Grace worked through some of her number, it is still big enough to wrap around her wrist and up her arm and she in her crusade has caused all those kids to raise their numbers as well. They'll be there for a long time, far longer than they should have. By the time they return, their families would have likely long since moved on (or worse). As for Simon, his family definitely will never hear from him again.again and Grace will have to break the news that he's dead ''because of her''.
** Speaking of which, even when Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on thetrain.train all because she was too haught, too proud, too ''stubborn'' to ever admit that she wasn't the expert she claimed she was. No amount of redemption is ever going to erase all of her sins. There's also the fact that she's not even sure if her parents are still alive or something happened to them so she ends up just as she started on her train trip: all alone and no one to guide her.
** Speaking of which, even when Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on the
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* Amelia was a young woman when she boarded the Train, and she's spent so long on it that she's now elderly. Her entire adult life has been spent in rage and misery trying to bring back her lost love. Even if she somehow got her number down to zero and returned to the real world, everyone she knew and loved is almost certainly dead.
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** Speaking of which, even if Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on the train. No amount of redemption is ever going to erase all of her sins. There's also the fact that she's not even sure if her parents are still alive or something happened to them so she ends up just as she started on her train trip: all alone and no one to guide her.
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** Speaking of which, even if when Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on the train. No amount of redemption is ever going to erase all of her sins. There's also the fact that she's not even sure if her parents are still alive or something happened to them so she ends up just as she started on her train trip: all alone and no one to guide her.
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*A minor one, but Jesse immediately going silent and his sudden face change after recalling a story about Nate, seemingly from a happier time in their relationship. It's clear the poor kid feels a lot of guilt for what he did to his younger brother.
*A minor one, but Jesse immediately going silent and his sudden face change after recalling a story about Nate, seemingly from a happier time in their relationship. It's clear the poor kid feels a lot of guilt for what he did to his younger brother.
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** Hazel singing the full version of Tuba's lullaby and then learning to move on from Tuba's death, promising that Tuba was always in her heart. [[SincerityMode Really, get those tissues.]] In this, there is absolutely no background music, so we only hear Isabela Abeina (Hazel's VA) singing. Just to twist the knife further, Tuba's lullaby is about how she'll always be there.
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** Hazel singing the full version of Tuba's lullaby and then learning to move on from Tuba's death, promising that Tuba was always in her heart. [[SincerityMode Really, get those tissues.]] In this, there is absolutely no background music, BackgroundMusic, so we only hear Isabela Abeina (Hazel's VA) singing. Just to twist the knife further, Tuba's lullaby is about how she'll always be there.
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** Speaking of which, even if Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on the train. No amount of redemption is ever going to erase all of her sins.
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** Speaking of which, even if Grace gets her number to 0, she must still live with the fact that everything that happened was on her: she lost everyone she loved, she made children become separated from their families longer than they should've been, and she's killed and injured numerous denizens during her time on the train. No amount of redemption is ever going to erase all of her sins.
sins. There's also the fact that she's not even sure if her parents are still alive or something happened to them so she ends up just as she started on her train trip: all alone and no one to guide her.
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* Grace ends up saving's Simon's life and he repays her by knocking her off. He soon starts to cry, possibly realizing he killed his best friend for years before completely snapping, and starts laughing mad as his face is glowing with all those numbers. Even the Apex children are shocked that Simon would do such a thing.
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* Grace ends up saving's Simon's life and he repays her by knocking her off. He soon starts to cry, possibly realizing he killed his best friend for years before completely snapping, and starts laughing mad going LaughingMad as his face is glowing with all those numbers. Even the Apex children are shocked that Simon would do such a thing.
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* After spurning Hazel in the previous episode, Grace thinks on it and decides that she wants to protect Hazel even knowing what she is and what her mere presence does to the cars. But Hazel trust in Grace is broken, so she decides to leave Grace and Simon in order to travel with Amelia instead. Grace begs her to stay, to no avail. Making things worse is the plucky six-year-old doesn’t even wave or smile as she says goodbye.
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* After spurning Hazel in the previous episode, Grace thinks on it and decides that she wants to protect Hazel even knowing what she is and what her mere presence does to the cars. But Hazel Hazel's trust in Grace is broken, so she decides to leave Grace and Simon in order to travel with Amelia instead. Grace begs her to stay, to no avail. Making things worse is the plucky six-year-old doesn’t even wave or smile as she says goodbye.goodbye, leaving Grace without any closure or forgiveness.
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* Sieve completely ''loses it'' when he shows up again, determined to kill M.T. for her killing Mace, even though M.T. had no other option.
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* Sieve completely ''loses it'' when he shows up again, determined to kill M.T. for her killing Mace, even though M.T. had no other option. [[VillainousFriendship Villain he may be, but Sieve truly did care for Mace as a friend.]]
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