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* [[spoiler:Lauren's attempted suicide in Vincent's hotel room. The consummate professional he walks untouched through the death and destruction of modern urban crime with studied detachment. But in Lauren he has a true innocent he can save, binding her wounds and rushing her to the hospital, declaring "Not you baby, not you, those other assholes can kill each other all day long but not you"]]
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* [[spoiler:Lauren's Lauren's attempted [[spoiler: suicide in Vincent's hotel room. The consummate professional he walks untouched through the death and destruction of modern urban crime with studied detachment. But in Lauren he has a true innocent he can save, binding her wounds and rushing her to the hospital, declaring "Not you baby, not you, those other assholes can kill each other all day long but not you"]]
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* [[spoiler:Lauren's attempted suicide in Vincent's hotel room. The consummate professional he walks untouched through the death and destruction of modern urban crime with studied detachment. But in Lauren he has a true innocent he can save, binding her wounds and rushing her to the hospital, declaring "Not you baby, not you, those other assholes can kill each other all day long but not you]]you"]]
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* [[spoiler:Lauren's attempted suicide in Vincent's hotel room.]] The consummate professional he walks untouched through the death and destruction of modern urban crime with studied detachment. But in Lauren he has a true innocent he can save, binding her wounds and rushing her to the hospital, declaring "Not you baby, not you, those other assholes can kill each other all day long but not you]]
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** It's kinda sad seeing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] getting shot in the head. It's the only way this would have ended for him, but still kinda sad...
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** It's kinda sad seeing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] getting shot in the head. It's the only way this would have ended for him, but still kinda sad... If you're not screeching in anger at him for taking a young girl hostage and USING HER AS A HUMAN SHIELD!
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"Moron" doesn't quite explain it.
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* Donald Breedan's character arc. He just got out of parole and found a job in the restaurant, only for the boss to be a complete moron. [[spoiler:Then Neil proposes him to be Trejo's replacement as the runaway driver in the bank heist and gets killed in an anticlimatic way after the heist.]] The poor man only wanted to be a good citizen but couldn't escape from his criminal roots because of a very rotten society.
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* Donald Breedan's character arc. He just got out of parole and found a job in the restaurant, only for the boss to be a complete moron.jerk who overworks him and steal his pay while threatening to report him. [[spoiler:Then Neil proposes him to be Trejo's replacement as the runaway driver in the bank heist and gets killed in an anticlimatic way after the heist.]] The poor man only wanted to be a good citizen but couldn't escape from his criminal roots because of a very rotten society.
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Would HAVE, not would of.
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** It's kinda sad seeing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] getting shot in the head. It's the only way this would of ended for him, but still kinda sad...
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** It's kinda sad seeing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] getting shot in the head. It's the only way this would of have ended for him, but still kinda sad...
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** And before that, Drucker convincing her to identify Chris if he appears or else [[AdultFear her son Dominic would be taken to adoption and have a very difficult life in later years]].
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** And before that, Drucker convincing her to identify Chris if he appears or else [[AdultFear her son Dominic would be taken to adoption and have a very difficult life in later years]].years.
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* The end scene with [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as he dies]]. Music/{{Moby}} makes the scene with his "God over the Face of Waters".
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* The end scene with [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as he dies]]. Music/{{Moby}} makes the scene with his "God over the Moving Over The Face of Of The Waters".
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** It's kinda sad seeing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] getting shot in the head. It's the only way this would of ended for him, but still kinda sad..
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** It's kinda sad seeing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] getting shot in the head. It's the only way this would of ended for him, but still kinda sad..sad...
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* Hanna is called to a murder committed by Waingro. He is already exasperated by the gruesome scene, but then the victim's distraught mother pushes her way through the cordon. Hanna restrains her, sparing her the [[OutlivingOnesOffspring sight of her daughter's battered corpse]], then hugs her as she collapses in tears. For all his RabidCop tendencies, Hanna is nevertheless a compassionate man, and he clearly feels the woman’s pain.
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* Hanna is called to a murder committed by Waingro. He is already exasperated by the gruesome scene, but then the victim's distraught mother pushes her way through the cordon. Hanna restrains her, sparing her the [[OutlivingOnesOffspring sight of her daughter's battered corpse]], then hugs her as she collapses in tears. For all his RabidCop tendencies, Hanna is nevertheless a compassionate man, and he clearly feels the woman’s woman's pain.
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-->'''Vincent:''' Yes.
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-->'''Vincent:''' Yes.Yeah.
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* The coffee scene turns real melancholy when Vincent and Neil talk about their personal lives; Neil can't afford to have one, and Vincent's is falling apart because he's MarriedToTheJob. They even casually talk about recurring nightmares, knowing exactly what the other one is talking about.
-->'''Vincent:''' I have this reoccurring dream. I'm sitting at this big banquet table: all of the victims of [[MyGreatestFailure all the murders I've ever worked are sitting at this table and they're staring at me]], they have these black eyeballs because they have eight ball hemorrhages from their head wounds and there they are these big balloon people because I found them two weeks after they've been found under the bed. The neighbors reported the smell and there they are, just sitting there.
-->'''Neil:''' What do they say?
-->'''Vincent:''' Nothing.
-->'''Neil:''' No talk?
-->'''Vincent:''' No. They got nothing to say. We all just look at each other.
-->'''Neil:''' I have one where I'm drowning. And I gotta wake myself up and start breathing or I'll die in my sleep.
-->'''Vincent:''' You know what that's about?
-->'''Neil:''' Yeah, having enough time.
-->'''Vincent:''' I have this reoccurring dream. I'm sitting at this big banquet table: all of the victims of [[MyGreatestFailure all the murders I've ever worked are sitting at this table and they're staring at me]], they have these black eyeballs because they have eight ball hemorrhages from their head wounds and there they are these big balloon people because I found them two weeks after they've been found under the bed. The neighbors reported the smell and there they are, just sitting there.
-->'''Neil:''' What do they say?
-->'''Vincent:''' Nothing.
-->'''Neil:''' No talk?
-->'''Vincent:''' No. They got nothing to say. We all just look at each other.
-->'''Neil:''' I have one where I'm drowning. And I gotta wake myself up and start breathing or I'll die in my sleep.
-->'''Vincent:''' You know what that's about?
-->'''Neil:''' Yeah, having enough time.
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** It's kinda sad seeiing seeing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] gettng shot.getting shot in the head. It's the only way this would of ended for him, but still kinda sad..
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** It's kinda sad seeiing [[spoiler:Cheritto]] gettng shot. It's the only way this would of ended for him, but still kinda sad..
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* Hanna is called to a murder committed by Waingro. He is exasperated dealing with the reaction of the dead girl's mother.
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-->'''Neil:''' I told Told you I would I'm never come going back.
-->'''Vincent:'''I know.Yes.
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* Donald Breedan's character arc. He just got out of parole and found a job in the restaurant, only for the boss to be a complete moron. [[spoiler:Then Neil proposes him to be Trejo's replacement as the runaway driver in the bank heist. He gets killed in an anticlimatic way after the heist.]] The poor man only wanted to be a good citizen but couldn't escape from his criminal roots because of a very rotten society.
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* Donald Breedan's character arc. He just got out of parole and found a job in the restaurant, only for the boss to be a complete moron. [[spoiler:Then Neil proposes him to be Trejo's replacement as the runaway driver in the bank heist. He heist and gets killed in an anticlimatic way after the heist.]] The poor man only wanted to be a good citizen but couldn't escape from his criminal roots because of a very rotten society.
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* Det. Hanna and Justine comforting each other [[spoiler: after Lauren's suicide attempt. They manage to reconcile after their previous fight, all the while admitting that their marriage won't work]].
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* Det. Hanna and Justine comforting each other [[spoiler: after [[spoiler:after Lauren's suicide attempt. They manage to reconcile after their previous fight, all the while admitting that their marriage won't work]].
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* [[spoiler: Charlene, without a word, warning Chris to stay away, and in essence saying goodbye to him forever.]]
* Also, [[spoiler: Neil abandoning Eady when he sees Vincent coming after him.]]
* [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as he dies.]]
* Also, [[spoiler: Neil abandoning Eady when he sees Vincent coming after him.]]
* [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as he dies.]]
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* [[spoiler: Charlene, without a word, warning only a simple hand gesture, [[spoiler:warns Chris to stay away, and in essence saying goodbye to him forever.]]
** And before that, Drucker convincing her to identify Chris if he appears or else [[AdultFear her son Dominic would be taken to adoption and have a very difficult life in later years]].
*Also, [[spoiler: When Neil abandoning Eady when he sees Vincent Hanna coming after him.him [[spoiler:he abandons Eady, leaving her completely speechless and broken.]]
* The end scene with [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as hedies.]]dies]]. Music/{{Moby}} makes the scene with his "God over the Face of Waters".
-->'''Neil:''' I told you I would never come back.
-->'''Vincent:''' I know.
** And before that, Drucker convincing her to identify Chris if he appears or else [[AdultFear her son Dominic would be taken to adoption and have a very difficult life in later years]].
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* The end scene with [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as he
-->'''Neil:''' I told you I would never come back.
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* Donald Breedan's character arc. He just got out of parole and found a job in the restaurant, only for the boss to be a complete moron. [[spoiler:Then Neil proposes him to be Trejo's replacement as the runaway driver in the bank heist. He gets killed in an anticlimatic way after the heist.]] The poor man only wanted to be a good citizen but couldn't escape from his criminal roots because of a very rotten society.
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* Det. Hanna and Justine comforting each other [[spoiler: after Lauren's suicide attempt. They manage to reconcile after their previous fight, all the while admitting that their marriage won't work]].
* Many of the casualties in the [[spoiler: climactic bank heist]]. Seeing [[spoiler: Bosko]] get taken out with a bullet to the neck (one part of his body that's not protected by his Kevlar) is particularly startling.
* Det. Hanna and Justine comforting each other [[spoiler: after Lauren's suicide attempt. They manage to reconcile after their previous fight, all the while admitting that their marriage won't work]].
* Many of the casualties in the [[spoiler: climactic bank heist]]. Seeing [[spoiler: Bosko]] get taken out with a bullet to the neck (one part of his body that's not protected by his Kevlar) is particularly startling.
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* Det. Hanna and Justine comforting each other [[spoiler: after Lauren's suicide attempt. They manage to reconcile after their previous fight, all the while admitting that their marriage won'twork]].
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* Det. Hanna and Justine comforting each other [[spoiler: after Lauren's suicide attempt. They manage to reconcile after their previous fight, all the while admitting that their marriage won't
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* The poor, poor [[spoiler: armored truck operators in the beginning. Especially the one who infuriates Waingro, his terrified expression makes you feel horrible when they are murdered needlessly]].
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* Thepoor, poor [[spoiler: guards killed in the armored truck operators in the beginning. car robbery. Especially the one who infuriates Waingro, his terrified expression makes you feel horrible when they are murdered needlessly]].Waingro shoots him in the face and this forces Neil to execute the second guard, and Cheritto to kill the third guard.
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* [[spoiler: Charlene, without a word, warning Chris to stay away, and in essence saying goodbye to him forever.]]
* Also, [[spoiler: Neil abandoning Eady when he sees Vincent coming after him.]]
* [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as he dies.]]
* [[spoiler:Lauren's attempted suicide in Vincent's hotel room.]]
* Hanna is called to a murder committed by Waingro. He is exasperated dealing with the reaction of the dead girl's mother.
* [[spoiler: Neil attempting to comfort a critically wounded and emotionally distraught Trejo before giving him a mercy kill.]]
* Also, [[spoiler: Neil abandoning Eady when he sees Vincent coming after him.]]
* [[spoiler:Hanna holding Neil's hand as he dies.]]
* [[spoiler:Lauren's attempted suicide in Vincent's hotel room.]]
* Hanna is called to a murder committed by Waingro. He is exasperated dealing with the reaction of the dead girl's mother.
* [[spoiler: Neil attempting to comfort a critically wounded and emotionally distraught Trejo before giving him a mercy kill.]]
