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* A [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments happy]] tearjerker in chapter 1: Remus Lupin has, in the space of a few days, lost everyone he cares about. [[spoiler: Lily and James dead, because of Sirius' betrayal, Peter outright ''killed'' by Sirius, [[note]]yes, we know, but ''he'' doesn't...[[/note]] and Harry alive, but hidden away, so nobody could find him... Including Remus.]] And then...
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* [[spoiler: Graham's [[spoiler:Graham's HeroicSacrifice, right after his FirstKiss with Natalie.]]
*[[spoiler:Bitterweet [[spoiler:Bittersweet Tearjerker, when Danger sees Draco and Luna playing in the Founders' Castle.]]
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* [[spoiler:Danger being poisoned, and Remus killed by Voldemort as he tries to distract Voldemort.]]
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--> ''Green eyes? Oh God...''//
Remus was on his feet without knowing it as the young woman gently pulled down the child's hood, exposing black, tousled hair and bright green eyes in a tear-streaked face.//
''James' face. And Lily's eyes.''//
He was running toward the child, unable to stop himself, knowing he must look completely mad, and not caring at all...//
"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once more.//
''And I'll never let him go again...''
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''James' face. And Lily's eyes.''//
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"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once more.//
''And I'll never let him go again...''
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--> "Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once
--> ''And I'll never let him go again...''
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--> ''James' face. And Lily's eyes.''
--> He was running toward the child, unable to stop himself, knowing he must look completely mad, and not caring at all...
-->"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once more.
--> ''And I'll never let him go again...''
--> Remus was on his feet without knowing it as the young woman gently pulled down the child's hood, exposing black, tousled hair and bright green eyes in a tear-streaked face.
--> ''James' face. And Lily's eyes.''
--> He was running toward the child, unable to stop himself, knowing he must look completely mad, and not caring at all...
-->"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once more.
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''James' face. And Lily's eyes.''
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"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart oncemore.
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''And I'll never let him go again...''
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-->"Mooey!"
"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once
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''And I'll never let him go again...''
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* Aletha singing ''[[JosephAndTheAmazingTechnicolorDreamcoat Close Every Door]]'' in prison, to help Sirius not panic.
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* A [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming happy]] tearjerker in chapter 1: Remus Lupin has, in the space of a few days, lost everyone he cares about. [[spoiler: Lily and James dead, because of Sirius' betrayal, Peter outright ''killed'' by Sirius, [[hottip:*:yes, [[note]]yes, we know, but ''he'' doesn't...]] [[/note]] and Harry alive, but hidden away, so nobody could find him... Including Remus.]] And then...
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* Danger deciding to [[spoiler: give up, effectively, her life, so that Remus will no longer be a werewolf, and none of the Pack will be in danger]] [[hottip:*: [[note]] (no pun intended).]] [[/note]] ever again.
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** And her [[spoiler: last moments with]] Andromeda. Poor Andromeda had to watch [[spoiler: her sister dying in front of her, with absolutely nothing she could do,]] and then keep working for hours, as if nothing had happened.
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** And her [[spoiler: [[spoiler:her last moments with]] Andromeda. Poor Andromeda had to watch [[spoiler: her sister dying in front of her, with absolutely nothing she could do,]] and then keep working for hours, as if nothing had happened.
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* [[spoiler:Narcissa saying goodbye to Draco and her last moments with Andromeda.Draco.]]
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* a A [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming happy]] tearjerker in chapter 1: Remus Lupin has, in the space of a few days, lost everyone he cares about. [[spoiler: Lily and James dead, because of Sirius' betrayal, Peter outright ''killed'' by Sirius, [[hottip:*:yes, we know, but ''he'' doesn't...]] and Harry alive, but hidden away, so nobody could find him... Including Remus.]] And then...
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* a [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming happy]] tearjerker in chapter 1: Remus Lupin has, in the space of a few days, lost everyone he cares about. [[spoiler: Lily and James dead, because of Sirius' betrayal, Peter outright ''killed'' by Sirius, [[hottip:*:yes, we know, but ''he'' doesn't...]] and Harry alive, but hidden away, so nobody could find him... Including Remus.]] And then...
--> ''Green eyes? Oh God...''
--> Remus was on his feet without knowing it as the young woman gently pulled down the child's hood, exposing black, tousled hair and bright green eyes in a tear-streaked face.
--> ''James' face. And Lily's eyes.''
--> He was running toward the child, unable to stop himself, knowing he must look completely mad, and not caring at all...
-->"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once more.
--> ''And I'll never let him go again...''
* ''Run, my loves... Run, and don't look back.''
* The Pack-parents [[spoiler: are in prison, and they don't know where any of the kids are. Danger is unconscious, and has been for hours. Remus and Danger's mindlink isn't working, and without her there, he'll have to go through an uncontrolled transformation for the first time in nearly ten years.]]
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* [[spoiler:The miscarriage of Marcus.]]
* [[spoiler:Hagrid's death.]]
* a [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming happy]] tearjerker in chapter 1: Remus Lupin has, in the space of a few days, lost everyone he cares about. [[spoiler: Lily and James dead, because of Sirius' betrayal, Peter outright ''killed'' by Sirius, [[hottip:*:yes, we know, but ''he'' doesn't...]] and Harry alive, but hidden away, so nobody could find him... Including Remus.]] And then...
--> ''Green eyes? Oh God...''
--> Remus was on his feet without knowing it as the young woman gently pulled down the child's hood, exposing black, tousled hair and bright green eyes in a tear-streaked face.
--> ''James' face. And Lily's eyes.''
--> He was running toward the child, unable to stop himself, knowing he must look completely mad, and not caring at all...
-->"Mooey!" the little boy squealed. His face lit up, and he lifted his arms in a "pick-me-up" gesture. Remus snatched him up and held him close, reveling in the feel of trusting arms around his neck, in the scent of the boy's hair and skin, in having the last person in the world he cared for close to his heart once more.
--> ''And I'll never let him go again...''
* ''Run, my loves... Run, and don't look back.''
* The Pack-parents [[spoiler: are in prison, and they don't know where any of the kids are. Danger is unconscious, and has been for hours. Remus and Danger's mindlink isn't working, and without her there, he'll have to go through an uncontrolled transformation for the first time in nearly ten years.]]
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* [[spoiler:The miscarriage of Marcus.]]
* [[spoiler:Hagrid's death.]]
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** [[spoiler:Narcissa saying goodbye to Draco and her last moments with Andromeda.]]
** [[spoiler:The miscarriage of Marcus.]]
** [[spoiler:Hagrid's death.]]
** Arguably Harry's abuse by the Dursleys, which is portrayed quite believably, also qualifies.
** Aletha singing ''[[JosephAndTheAmazingTechnicolorDreamcoat Close Every Door]]'' in prison, to help Sirius not panic.
** [[spoiler:Narcissa saying goodbye to Draco and her last moments with Andromeda.]]
** [[spoiler:The miscarriage of Marcus.]]
** [[spoiler:Hagrid's death.]]
** Arguably Harry's abuse by the Dursleys, which is portrayed quite believably, also qualifies.
** Aletha singing ''[[JosephAndTheAmazingTechnicolorDreamcoat Close Every Door]]'' in prison, to help Sirius not panic.
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* TearJerker: Many of the deaths are these:
**deaths.
* [[spoiler:Narcissa saying goodbye to Draco and her last moments with Andromeda.]]
** * [[spoiler:The miscarriage of Marcus.]]
** * [[spoiler:Hagrid's death.]]
** * Arguably Harry's abuse by the Dursleys, which is portrayed quite believably, also qualifies.
** * Aletha singing ''[[JosephAndTheAmazingTechnicolorDreamcoat Close Every Door]]'' in prison, to help Sirius not panic.
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* [[spoiler:Narcissa saying goodbye to Draco and her last moments with Andromeda.]]
