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* To stop the theft of anymore of his recipes, Wonka decides to close his factory. When he's informing his workers of this, he lets out a soft and heartbroken "I'm sorry" as the gates close. Considering Grandpa Joe likely wasn't the only innocent one, it's particularly sad.
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* To stop the theft of anymore any more of his recipes, Wonka decides to close his factory. When he's informing his workers of this, he lets out a soft and heartbroken "I'm sorry" as the gates close. Considering Grandpa Joe likely wasn't the only innocent one, it's particularly sad.
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* At the end of the movie when Willy Wonka and his estranged father are reunited.
* After Violet and her mother leave the factory tries to look on the bright side pointing out how she's more flexible, which her mother shuts it down saying she's blue, and Violet actually looks saddened by this. Even if this Violet TookALevelInJerkass, her UnintentionallySympathetic qualities [[JerkassWoobie were not all erased]].
* After Violet and her mother leave the factory tries to look on the bright side pointing out how she's more flexible, which her mother shuts it down saying she's blue, and Violet actually looks saddened by this. Even if this Violet TookALevelInJerkass, her UnintentionallySympathetic qualities [[JerkassWoobie were not all erased]].
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* At the end of the movie when Willy Wonka and his estranged father are reunited.
reunited. Also Heartwarming.
* After Violet and her mother leave thefactory factory, Violet tries to look on the bright side by pointing out how she's more flexible, flexible now, to which her mother shuts it down saying she's blue, and Violet actually looks saddened by this. Even if this Violet TookALevelInJerkass, her UnintentionallySympathetic qualities [[JerkassWoobie were not all erased]].
* After Violet and her mother leave the
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* Charlie telling his family that they should sell the ticket because "we need the money more than we need the chocolate."
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* To stop the theft of anymore of his recipes, Wonka is forced to close his factory. When he's informing his workers of this, he lets out a soft and heartbroken "I'm sorry" as the gates close.
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* To stop the theft of anymore of his recipes, Wonka is forced decides to close his factory. When he's informing his workers of this, he lets out a soft and heartbroken "I'm sorry" as the gates close. Considering Grandpa Joe likely wasn’t the only innocent one, it’s particularly sad.
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* After Violet and her mother leave the factory tries to look on the bright side pointing out how she's more flexible, which her mother shuts it down saying she's blue, and Violet actually looks sadden by this. Even if this Violet TookALevelInJerkass, her UnintentionallySympathetic qualities [[JerkassWoobie were not all erased]].
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* After Violet and her mother leave the factory tries to look on the bright side pointing out how she's more flexible, which her mother shuts it down saying she's blue, and Violet actually looks sadden saddened by this. Even if this Violet TookALevelInJerkass, her UnintentionallySympathetic qualities [[JerkassWoobie were not all erased]].
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!!Meta
* There has been some tributes. Some fan arts for the tribute to the late actors David Kelly (2012; Grandpa Joe) and Christopher Lee (2015; Wilbur Wonka). As the characters mourn the loss.
* [[http://www.people.com/article/johnny-depp-mother-dies-betty-sue-palmer Betty Sue Palmer, The mother of Johnny "Willy Wonka" Depp dies at 81.]]
* The deaths of Gene Wilder in August of 2016 and Denise Nickerson in July of 2019, the actors who played Willy Wonka and Violet Beauregarde respectively in the 1971 film adaptation.
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* After Violet and her mother leave the factory tries to look on the bright side pointing out how she's more flexible, which her mother shuts it down saying she's blue, and Violet actually looks sadden by this. Even if this Violet tookalevelinJerkass, TookALevelInJerkass, her UnintentionallySympathetic qualities [[JerkassWoobie were not all erased]].
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* After Violet and her mother leave the factory tries to look on the bright side pointing out how she's more flexible, which her mother shuts it down saying she's blue, and Violet actually looks sadden by this. Even if this Violet tookalevelinJerkass, her UnintentionallySympathetic qualities [[JerkassWoobie were not all erased]].
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* Charlie turns down Willy Wonka's offer to move into the factory because he didn't want to leave his family.
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Nothing heart-wrenching about someone being caught trying to steal.
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* One of Mr. Salt's employees finds the ticket. In a heart-wrenching scene, she attempts to hide the ticket but gets caught doing so and is forced to give it up.
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* The death of Gene Wilder in August of 2016, the actor who played Willy Wonka in the 1971 film adaptation.
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* The death deaths of Gene Wilder in August of 2016, 2016 and Denise Nickerson in July of 2019, the actor actors who played Willy Wonka and Violet Beauregarde respectively in the 1971 film adaptation.
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* To stop the theft of anymore of his recipes, Wonka is forced to close his factory. When he's informing his workers of this, he lets out a soft and heartbroken "I'm sorry" as the gates close.
* After threatening to run away, Willy returns home later that day to see that his father kept his promise to not be there if the boy came back: the man and their ''entire house'' is gone, leaving a stunned Willy to stare at where the building used to be.
* After threatening to run away, Willy returns home later that day to see that his father kept his promise to not be there if the boy came back: the man and their ''entire house'' is gone, leaving a stunned Willy to stare at where the building used to be.
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!! The 2017 Musical
* Mr. Wonka opening the musical by saying he must go out into the world to find an heir. Then he hesitates because he hasn't been outside in 40 years.
* The song "If Your Father Was Here" where Mrs. Bucket tucks Charlie into bed after he despondently says he'll make his birthday candy bar last a year. She says his father was a dreamer and dances with a ghost version of him.
* Mr. Wonka opening the musical by saying he must go out into the world to find an heir. Then he hesitates because he hasn't been outside in 40 years.
* The song "If Your Father Was Here" where Mrs. Bucket tucks Charlie into bed after he despondently says he'll make his birthday candy bar last a year. She says his father was a dreamer and dances with a ghost version of him.
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* At the end of the movie when Willy Wonka and his estranged father are reunited
reunited.
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* One of Mr. Salt's employees finds the ticket. In a heart-wrenching scene, she attempts to hide the ticket but gets caught doing so and is forced to give it up.
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!!The Original Novel
* After the first four tickets are gone, Charlie's family nearly starves to death. Even when they arrive at the factory, Grandpa Joe and Charlie are described as bony and skeleton-like (especially Grandpa Joe).
!!The 2005 Film
* One of Mr. Salt's employees finds the ticket. In a heart-wrenching scene, she attempts to hide the ticket but gets caught doing so and is forced to give it up.
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!!The 2013 Musical
* After the fourth ticket is found, Charlie has a HeroicBSOD as his hopes are shattered. As he's encouraged by his dad to make a wish on a star, all he can say is "Don't waste a wish on me," showing how much he had given up hope. This leads into "If Your Mother Were Here," in which Mr. and Mrs. Bucket sing about how the other would do a better job at cheering up Charlie.
* After the fourth ticket is found, Charlie has a HeroicBSOD as his hopes are shattered. As he's encouraged by his dad to make a wish on a star, all he can say is "Don't waste a wish on me," showing how much he had given up hope. This leads into "If Your Mother Were Here," in which Mr. and Mrs. Bucket sing about how the other would do a better job at cheering up Charlie.
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* The death of Gene Wilder in August of 2016, the actor who played Willy Wonka in the 1971 film adaptation.
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* [[http://www.people.com/article/johnny-depp-mother-dies-betty-sue-palmer Betty Sue Palmer, The mother of Johnny "Willy Wonka" Depp dies at 81.]]
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* The parents reacting to their children's punishments. Yes, it's mostly their fault for spoiling them all, but still, to watch your young child be sucked up a chocolate tube or turned into a giant blueberry is incredibly horrifying.
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* One of Mr. Salt's employees finds the ticket. In a heart-wrenching scene, she attempts to hide the ticket but gets caught doing so and is forced to give it up.
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* There has been some tributes. Some fan arts for the tribute to the late actors David Kelly (Grandpa Joe) and Christopher Lee (Wilbur Wonka). As the characters mourn the loss.
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* There has been some tributes. Some fan arts for the tribute to the late actors David Kelly (Grandpa (2012; Grandpa Joe) and Christopher Lee (Wilbur (2015; Wilbur Wonka). As the characters mourn the loss.
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* Well, There may or may not be some sad moments of this film. But there has been some tributes. Some fan arts for the tribute to the late actors David Kelly (Grandpa Joe) and Christopher Lee (Wilbur Wonka). As the characters mourn the loss.
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* Well, There may or may not be some sad moments of this film. But there has been some tributes. Some fan arts for the tribute to the late actors David Kelly (Grandpa Joe) and Christopher Lee (Wilbur Wonka). As the characters mourn the loss.
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* Well, There may or may not be some sad moments of this film. But there has been some tributes. Some fan arts for the tribute to the late actors David Kelly (Grandpa Joe) and Christopher Lee (Wilbur Wonka). As the characters mourn the loss.
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* Well, There may or may not be some sad moments of this film. But there has been some tributes. Some fan arts for the tribute to actors David Kelly (Grandpa Joe) and Christopher Lee (Wilbur Wonka). As the characters mourn the loss.loss.
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