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* We get more insight into Julia's home life. When Kennedy sarcastically asks her if her parents keep her locked away in a room due to her PopCulturalOsmosisFailure, her silence is deafening to the other kids.

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* We get more insight into Julia's home life. When Kennedy sarcastically asks her if her parents keep her locked away in a room due to her PopCulturalOsmosisFailure, her silence is deafening to the other kids.kids who are shocked.
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* Hunter has arrived and, oh boy, there's the feeling that he and Luz are NOT going to have the LikeBrotherAndSister relationship they have in the show. Its likely that they're definitely gonna hate each other: Luz because Hunter is working for [[GreaterScopeVillain Belos]] and indirectly [[ArcVillain the Wittebanes]], while Hunter [[EvenEvilHasStandards wouldn't enjoy being around a teenager with a massive body count]]. Seeing everything that Luz has been through with Hunter only adding on to her hardships, its really doubtful that Luz is gonna want to be friends with the Golden Guard at all. He's just gonna be her enemy and that's that. Even if they do join the same side because of Shigaraki or by other means, [[TeethClenchedTeamwork its unlikely they'll be close to each other as in canon]].

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* Hunter has arrived and, oh boy, there's the feeling that he and Luz are NOT going to have the LikeBrotherAndSister relationship they have in the show. Its likely that they're definitely gonna hate each other: Luz because Hunter is working for [[GreaterScopeVillain Emperor Belos]] and indirectly [[ArcVillain the Wittebanes]], while Hunter [[EvenEvilHasStandards wouldn't enjoy being around a teenager with a massive body count]]. Seeing everything that Luz has been through with Hunter only adding on to her hardships, its really doubtful that Luz is gonna want to be friends with the Golden Guard at all. He's just gonna be her enemy and that's that. Even if they do join the same side because of Shigaraki or by other means, [[TeethClenchedTeamwork its unlikely they'll be close to each other as in canon]].
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* Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it as The Governor threatened the lives of Lydia and Masha: his wife and child, the latter of whom is also a Quirk user.

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* Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it as The Governor threatened the lives of Lydia and Masha: his beloveded wife and child, the latter of whom is also a Quirk user.
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* We get more insight into Julia's home life. When Kennedy sarcastically asks her if her parents keep her locked away in a room due to her PopCulturalOsmosisFailure, her silence is deafening.

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* We get more insight into Julia's home life. When Kennedy sarcastically asks her if her parents keep her locked away in a room due to her PopCulturalOsmosisFailure, her silence is deafening.deafening to the other kids.
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* In this story, a FantasticCasteSystem is in place: Witches were at the top, followed by demons, "Unique Children", Cyclopes, and finally the trolls. The trolls got the most brunt of the beatings. They were often treated less than dirt and were often victims of [[FantasticRacism hate crimes]]. Even cyclopes use their higher power over them. This likely a feature put in by Belos to KickTheDog even more and it really says something when The Underdark, a hidden UndergroundCity built by All For One's followers, has a more welcoming environment to social outcasts.

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* In this story, a FantasticCasteSystem is in place: Witches were at the top, followed by demons, "Unique Children", Cyclopes, and finally the trolls. The trolls got the most brunt of the beatings. They were often treated less than dirt and were often victims of [[FantasticRacism hate crimes]]. Even cyclopes use their higher power over them. This likely a feature put in by Emperor Belos to KickTheDog even more and it really says something when The Underdark, a hidden UndergroundCity built by All For One's followers, has a more welcoming environment to social outcasts.
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* We get more insight into Julia's home life. When Kennedy sarcastically asks her if her parents keep her locked away in a room due to her PopCulturalOsmosisFailure, her silence is deafening.
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* Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it as The Governor threatened the lives of Lydia and Masha: his wife and child.

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* Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it as The Governor threatened the lives of Lydia and Masha: his wife and child.child, the latter of whom is also a Quirk user.
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* Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it.

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* Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it.it as The Governor threatened the lives of Lydia and Masha: his wife and child.



* Rodger Maxwell, the governor of Luz's state, has her and 32 other kids with powers going to Reality Check Summer Camp kidnapped to be put in a DeadlyGame with, as far as anyone could tell, is supported by the U.S. government. They're essentially forcing these frightened kids to murder each other, on the pretences of turning the survivors into {{Super Soldier}}s, under the threat of being gunned down if they try to escape, with their families and loved ones that sent them to a normal summer camp being none the wiser.

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* Rodger Maxwell, the governor of Luz's state, has her and 32 other kids with powers going to Reality Check Summer Camp kidnapped to be put in a DeadlyGame with, as far as anyone could tell, is supported by the U.S. government. This was after Luz witnessed his army unit murder the non-powered kids and scout masters to LeaveNoWitnesses. They're essentially forcing these frightened kids to murder each other, on the pretences of turning the survivors into {{Super Soldier}}s, under the threat of being gunned down if they try to escape, with their families and loved ones that sent them to a normal summer camp being none the wiser.
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* Luz's relationship with her mother is even more strained than in the show, thanks to her being an AlcoholicParent in this story. After the massive argument they had last night that resulted with Camila throwing a wing glass at Luz while revealing she's a ResentfulGuardian towards her. While Luz tries to tell herself her mother didn't mean due to being drunk, she remarks to herself that the one good thing about Reality Check Camp is that she can get away from her mother after that verbal abuse. She even considers running away from if Camila doesn't get her act together.

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* Luz's relationship with her mother is even more strained than in the show, thanks to her being an AlcoholicParent in this story. After the massive argument they had last night that resulted with Camila throwing a wing glass at Luz while revealing she's a ResentfulGuardian towards her. While Luz tries to tell herself her mother didn't mean due to being drunk, she remarks to herself that the one good thing about Reality Check Camp is that she can get away from her mother after that verbal abuse. She even considers running away from home if Camila doesn't get her act together.

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* Luz's relationship with her mother is even more strained than in the show, thanks to her being an AlcoholicParent in this story. After the massive argument they had last night that resulted with Camila throwing a wing glass at Luz while revealing she's a ResentfulGuardian towards her. While Luz tries to tell herself her mother didn't mean due to being drunk, she remarks to herself that the one good thing about Reality Check Camp is that she can get away from her mother after that verbal abuse. She even considers running away from if Camila doesn't get her act together.
* Julia Wittebane was just kicked out onto the streets by her parents (on her birthday no less), for having superpowers. Poor girl needed that hug.
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* In chapter 3, Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it.

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* In chapter 3, Camp Counsellor Johnson being [[ForcedIntoEvil coerced]] by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with superpowers going to his camp to turn them into {{Super Soldier}}s for the government. He ''really'' didn't want to go through with it.
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** Her school life also reveals that only is she an outcast for being a "weirdo" but out of racism for her Latina heritage and ADHD. And the one teacher that's nice to her has led to rumors at school that they're having an affair but Luz doesn't tell her mother because she doesn't want her to worry anymore than she already does.

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** Her * Luz's school life also reveals that only is she an a social outcast for being a "weirdo" but out of racism for her Latina heritage and ADHD. And the one teacher that's nice to her has led to rumors at school that they're having an affair but Luz doesn't tell her mother because she doesn't want her to worry anymore than she already does.does (who is implied to have taken up drinking).

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* Luz clearly doesn't want to go to what appears to be a [[ImaginationDestroyer soul-crushing camp]], but she's still going anyway for fear of disappointing her mother. She was even hoping that the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent giving her and other kids powers would lead to it being cancelled or least post-pone it.

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* Luz clearly doesn't want to go to what appears to be a [[ImaginationDestroyer soul-crushing camp]], but she's still going anyway for fear of disappointing her mother. mother any further after the snake incident. She was even hoping that the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent giving her and other kids powers would lead to it being cancelled or least post-pone it.it.
** Her school life also reveals that only is she an outcast for being a "weirdo" but out of racism for her Latina heritage and ADHD. And the one teacher that's nice to her has led to rumors at school that they're having an affair but Luz doesn't tell her mother because she doesn't want her to worry anymore than she already does.
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* Its revealed that Hunter's loyalties are not with [[EvilUncle Belos]] or [[CardCarryingVillain Shigaraki]]. He has realised that they're both monsters that need to be put down. Must make you wonder how and when he figured it out. He might know what what the [[FinalSolution Day Of Unity really is]], which is why he wants Luz as an ally to liberate his people. However, he's completely unaware of All For One's presence in her.

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* Its revealed that Hunter's loyalties are not with [[EvilUncle Emperor Belos]] or [[CardCarryingVillain Shigaraki]]. He has realised that they're both monsters that need to be put down. Must make you wonder how and when he figured it out. He might know what what the [[FinalSolution Day Of Unity really is]], which is why he wants Luz as an ally to liberate his people. However, he's completely unaware of All For One's presence in her.
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* Hunter has arrived and, oh boy, there's the feeling that he and Luz are NOT going to have the LikeBrotherAndSister relationship they have in the show. Its likely that they're definitely gonna hate each other: Luz because Hunter is working for [[GreaterScopeVillain Belos]] and indirectly [[ArcVillain the Wittebanes]], while Hunter [[EvenEvilHasStandards wouldn't enjoy being around a teenager with a massive body count]]. Seeing everything that Luz has been through with Hunter only adding on to her hardships, its really doubtful that Luz is gonna want to be friends with the Golden Guard at all. He's just gonna be her enemy and that's that. Even if they do join the same side beacuse of Shigaraki or by other means, [[TeethClenchedTeamwork its unlikely they'll be close to each other as in canon]].

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* Hunter has arrived and, oh boy, there's the feeling that he and Luz are NOT going to have the LikeBrotherAndSister relationship they have in the show. Its likely that they're definitely gonna hate each other: Luz because Hunter is working for [[GreaterScopeVillain Belos]] and indirectly [[ArcVillain the Wittebanes]], while Hunter [[EvenEvilHasStandards wouldn't enjoy being around a teenager with a massive body count]]. Seeing everything that Luz has been through with Hunter only adding on to her hardships, its really doubtful that Luz is gonna want to be friends with the Golden Guard at all. He's just gonna be her enemy and that's that. Even if they do join the same side beacuse because of Shigaraki or by other means, [[TeethClenchedTeamwork its unlikely they'll be close to each other as in canon]].
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* Then, there's the story of Dr. Jade, otherwise known as Hilbert Jade, father of Skara. He was a famous scientist who had been living down in the Underdark with his daughter for 4 years ever since he went into hiding. He had been a part of the Emperor's Science Division, [[CantGetAwayWithNuthin only to have been kicked out and arrested when he tried making an illegal potion for someone in the Emperor’s Coven]]. The scout had been caught and executed, and Hilbert had been next in line for execution after the fact and it was only because The Golden Guard had swooped in to stop said execution at the tearful request of Skara that they were saved but at the cost of being fugitives from the law and leaving their old lives behind. Now, he works for Perry to recreate the Nomu.

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* Then, there's the story of Dr. Jade, otherwise known as Hilbert Jade, father of Skara. He was a famous scientist who had been living down in the Underdark with his daughter for 4 years ever since he went into hiding. He had been a part of the Emperor's Science Division, [[CantGetAwayWithNuthin only to have been kicked out and arrested when he tried making an illegal potion for someone in the Emperor’s Coven]]. The scout had been caught and executed, and Hilbert had been next in line for execution after the fact and it was only because The Golden Guard had swooped in to stop said execution at the tearful request of Skara that they were saved but at the cost of being fugitives from the law and leaving their old lives behind. Now, he works for Perry Porter to recreate the Nomu.
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** Perry also still believes that the Blights, especially Odalia, are still on All For One's side and wants them to join the rebellion against Belos. However, he's completely unaware that the family see the supervillain as the monster he really is who's just as bad as TheEmperor.

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** Perry also still believes that the Blights, especially Odalia, are still on All For One's side and wants them to join the rebellion against Emperor Belos. However, he's completely unaware that the family see the supervillain as the monster he really is who's just as bad as TheEmperor.the tyrant ruling over them.
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* In chapter 29, in the beginning its revealed that the Shigaraki twins are the result of ChildByRape and when they found out Rikitasu and Yoichi Shigaraki tracked down their father to confront him and the older brother murdered him with a NeckSnap, to his brother's protests.

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* In chapter 29, in the beginning its revealed that the Shigaraki twins are the result of ChildByRape and when they found out Rikitasu and Yoichi Shigaraki tracked down their father to confront him and the older brother murdered him with a NeckSnap, to his brother's protests. All For One was also plotting to overthrow the Japanese government with the Meta Liberation Army and the Yakuza for his personal gain.
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* Gus wants to go to Hexside and act as TheMole for his father not just to follow All For One's doctrine and make his father proud but because he doesn't want people to think he's getting special treatment by being Perry's son. [[IJustWantToBeNormal At least at Hexside, he’d be treated the same as everyone else.]] Its likely to cause conflict with the rest of the Hexsquad.

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* Gus wants to go to Hexside and act as TheMole for his father not just to follow All For One's doctrine and make his father proud but because he doesn't want people to think he's getting special treatment by being Perry's son. [[IJustWantToBeNormal At least at Hexside, he’d be treated the same as everyone else.]] Its likely to cause conflict with the rest of the Hexsquad.Hexsquad sooner or latter.
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** Yoichi is building a connection to Amity, and will likely be horrified by what his EvilTwin has done to the Boiling Isles.

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** Yoichi is building a connection to Amity, and will likely be horrified by what his EvilTwin has done to the Boiling Isles. Its likely he'll encourage her to fight Toshiko later down the line.
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* The [[Characters/AllForLuzLuzNoceda Luz Noceda]] who finally manages to walk away from the trauma she endured under the Death Camp is [[StartOfDarkness colder, darker, and more brutal]]. While in some might see her change to a badass AntiHero as something be praised, to others (especially her mother) Luz's radical change is something to mourned instead, hoping that she'll return to the kind GenkiGirl she once was.

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* The [[Characters/AllForLuzLuzNoceda Luz Noceda]] who finally manages to walk away from the trauma she endured under the Death Camp is [[StartOfDarkness colder, darker, and more brutal]]. While in some might see her change to a badass AntiHero as something be praised, to others (especially her mother) Luz's radical change is something to mourned instead, hoping that she'll return to the kind GenkiGirl she once was.was and EarnYourHappyEnding.
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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz became her murderer in her name and is in a Cold War with her father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.

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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz has became her murderer in her name and is in a Cold War with her horrible father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.
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** While he has a noble cause in stopping Belos from carrying out the Day of Unity, Perry's more than willing to resort to creating Nomu to make that happen as a necessary evil. He also notes that his old friend Eda will likely take exception him being All For One's follower even when he ravaged the Boiling Isles.

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** While he has a noble cause in stopping Emperor Belos from carrying out the Day of Unity, Perry's more than willing to resort to creating Nomu to make that happen happen, seeing it as a necessary evil. He also notes that his old friend Eda will likely take exception him being All For One's follower even when he ravaged the Boiling Isles.
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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz became her murderer in her name and is in a ColdWar with her father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.

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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz became her murderer in her name and is in a ColdWar Cold War with her father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.
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* In chapter 29, in the beginning its revealed that the Shigaraki twins are the result of ChildByRape and when they found out Rikitasu and Yoichi Shigaraki tracked down their father to confront him and the older brother murdered him with a NeckSnap.

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* In chapter 29, in the beginning its revealed that the Shigaraki twins are the result of ChildByRape and when they found out Rikitasu and Yoichi Shigaraki tracked down their father to confront him and the older brother murdered him with a NeckSnap.NeckSnap, to his brother's protests.


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** Its shown in the Owl House that Eda doesn't trust Toshiko, due to her possible connection to All For One. She's so afraid of the girl potentially starting another war that considers she may have to sell her out to Belos or even kill the teen herself if it comes to it.

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** Its shown in the Owl House that Eda doesn't trust Toshiko, due to her possible connection to All For One. She's so afraid of the girl potentially starting another war that considers she may have to sell her out to Emperor Belos or even kill the teen herself if it comes to it.
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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz became her murderer in her name and is a silent war with her father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.

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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz became her murderer in her name and is in a silent war ColdWar with her father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.
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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz became her murderer in her name.

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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz became her murderer in her name.name and is a silent war with her father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.
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* In chapter 29, its shown that Eda doesn't trust Toshiko, due to her possible connection to All For One. She's so afraid of the girl potentially starting another war that considers she may have to sell her out to Belos or even kill the teen herself if it comes to it.

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* In chapter 29, in the beginning its revealed that the Shigaraki twins are the result of ChildByRape and when they found out Rikitasu and Yoichi Shigaraki tracked down their father to confront him and the older brother murdered him with a NeckSnap.
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shown in the Owl House that Eda doesn't trust Toshiko, due to her possible connection to All For One. She's so afraid of the girl potentially starting another war that considers she may have to sell her out to Belos or even kill the teen herself if it comes to it.
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* It’s depressing to see Luz lose her innocence and happiness as more and more bad things happen to her over the course of ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'' due circumstances beyond her control. At first she was happy that superpowers are a thing in her worls only for it all to go through a brutal {{Deconstruction}}. Having PowerParasite superpowers and a CardCarryingVillain, All For One, in her head doesn't help her mental health at all in the slightest.

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* It’s depressing to see Luz lose her innocence and happiness as more and more bad things happen to her over the course of ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'' due circumstances beyond her control. At first she was happy that superpowers are a thing in her worls only for it all to go through a brutal {{Deconstruction}}. Having PowerParasite superpowers and a CardCarryingVillain, [[Characters/AllForLuzAllForOne All For One, One]], in her head doesn't help her mental health at all in the slightest.

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