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* Stanley has a ItsAllMyFault moment for failing to warn his team about Kennedy. He's so filled with guilt that he requests Luz to take his Quirk from him, believing himself to be unworthy.
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* Luz acknowledges she killed 20 kids with her own hands after stealing most of their Quirks but she can't bring herself to feel real remorse at her actions, despite recognising her actions as terrible and trying to feel something. Instead she feels NoSympathy for towards her victims and justifying her actions as PayEvilUntoEvil (Which there is truth to). [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil This realisation scares Luz that she's becoming more like Shigaraki who encourages her to not feel remorse for it]].
--> ''20 people, 20 kids were never going to see their parents thanks to her. 20 kids were never going to grow older because of her, and 20 kids would never fully realize their potential because of her. She took their powers and killed them without a single shred of remorse..''
* She's also concerned that she made The Governor's job easier, would acquitted of all of his charges, return to his job, and it would all be swept under the rug, and be played off as a rumour that never happened. This would have happened had he not been arrested.
* Not long after she wakes up from her coma, Luz has a panic attack after having flashbacks of all the horrible things she witnessed and did at the Death Camp. This occurs in front of her distressed mother as she is hurried out of her hospital by the doctors trying to sedate her. Its possible that her seeming lack of remorse for her actions was a DelayedReaction.
* When Luz wakes up and first sees her concerned mother, she admits to herself that part of her hates Camila for unwittingly dumping into that horrible situation.
* Poor Camila is told by one of the doctors what happened at the Summer Camp orchestrated by her State's AntagonisticGovernor as a case of ChildrenForcedToKill, with her daughter having the highest body count and gaining serve PTSD from the experience. She has a HeroicBSOD and believes its her fault for forcing Luz to go there.
--> ''20 people, 20 kids were never going to see their parents thanks to her. 20 kids were never going to grow older because of her, and 20 kids would never fully realize their potential because of her. She took their powers and killed them without a single shred of remorse..''
* She's also concerned that she made The Governor's job easier, would acquitted of all of his charges, return to his job, and it would all be swept under the rug, and be played off as a rumour that never happened. This would have happened had he not been arrested.
* Not long after she wakes up from her coma, Luz has a panic attack after having flashbacks of all the horrible things she witnessed and did at the Death Camp. This occurs in front of her distressed mother as she is hurried out of her hospital by the doctors trying to sedate her. Its possible that her seeming lack of remorse for her actions was a DelayedReaction.
* When Luz wakes up and first sees her concerned mother, she admits to herself that part of her hates Camila for unwittingly dumping into that horrible situation.
* Poor Camila is told by one of the doctors what happened at the Summer Camp orchestrated by her State's AntagonisticGovernor as a case of ChildrenForcedToKill, with her daughter having the highest body count and gaining serve PTSD from the experience. She has a HeroicBSOD and believes its her fault for forcing Luz to go there.
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--> ''20 people, 20 kids were never going to see their parents thanks to her. 20 kids were never going to grow older because of her, and 20 kids would never fully realize their potential because of her. She took their powers and killed them without a single shred of remorse..''
* She's also concerned that she made The Governor's job easier, would acquitted of all of his charges, return to his job, and it would all be swept under the rug, and be played off as a rumour that never happened. This would have happened had he not been arrested.
* Not long after she wakes up from her coma, Luz has a panic attack after having flashbacks of all the horrible things she witnessed and did at the Death Camp. This occurs in front of her distressed mother as she is hurried out of her hospital by the doctors trying to sedate her. Its possible that her seeming lack of remorse for her actions was a DelayedReaction.
* Poor Camila is told by one of the doctors what happened at the Summer Camp orchestrated by her State's AntagonisticGovernor as a case of ChildrenForcedToKill, with her daughter having the highest body count
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* After Luz was discharged from the hospital, [[BroughtDownToBadass she off-loaded 18 of her Quirks to bring it down to a safer 10]]. Notably, she did not keep Julia's (or any of her deceased friends') powers as a TragicKeepsake not because they where too weak but because they kept reminding her of their grim fate and triggered her PTSD she got from that nightmare camp.
* Julia's funeral was a closed casket, [[NotEnoughToBury for obvious reasons]]. In fact, it's later revealed that not all the dead kids came out of the camp in body bags, but urns because the condition of their bodies were so severe that it wouldn't have been right to show the dead children's families ''that''.
* Her parents didn't even bother going to her funeral and even as far as to [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown change her last name to distance themselves from her]]. Whatever love they had for their daughter, was NOT unconditional.
* Luz remembers that her apologetic mother couldn't stop crying for a week over what happened to her at the Death Camp. Luckily, it seems her daughter has forgiven her.
* Julia's funeral was a closed casket, [[NotEnoughToBury for obvious reasons]]. In fact, it's later revealed that not all the dead kids came out of the camp in body bags, but urns because the condition of their bodies were so severe that it wouldn't have been right to show the dead children's families ''that''.
* Her parents didn't even bother going to her funeral and even as far as to [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown change her last name to distance themselves from her]]. Whatever love they had for their daughter, was NOT unconditional.
* Luz remembers that her apologetic mother couldn't stop crying for a week over what happened to her at the Death Camp. Luckily, it seems her daughter has forgiven her.
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* In Chapter 11, Stanley has a ItsAllMyFault moment for failing to warn his team about Kennedy. He's so filled with guilt that he requests Luz to take his Quirk from him, believing himself to be unworthy of a superpower.
* In Chapter 13, Luz acknowledges she killed 20 kids with her own hands after stealing most of their Quirks but she can't bring herself to feel real remorse at her actions, despite recognising her actions as terrible and trying to feel something. Instead she feels NoSympathy for towards her victims and justifying her actions as PayEvilUntoEvil (Which there is truth to). [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil This realisation scares Luz that she's becoming more like Shigaraki who encourages her to not feel remorse for it]].
--> ''20 people, 20 kids were never going to see their parents thanks to her. 20 kids were never going to grow older because of her, and 20 kids would never fully realize their potential because of her. She took their powers and killed them without a single shred of remorse..''
** She's also concerned that she made The Governor's job easier, would acquitted of all of his charges, return to his job, and it would all be swept under the rug, and be played off as a rumour that never happened. This would have happened had he not been arrested.
** Not long after she wakes up from her coma, Luz has a panic attack after having flashbacks of all the horrible things she witnessed and did at the Death Camp. This occurs in front of her distressed mother as she is hurried out of her hospital by the doctors trying to sedate her. Its possible that her seeming lack of remorse for her actions was a DelayedReaction.
** Poor Camila is told by one of the doctors what happened at the Summer Camp orchestrated by her State's AntagonisticGovernor as a case of ChildrenForcedToKill, with her daughter having the highest body count and gaining serve PTSD from the experience. She has a HeroicBSOD and believes its her fault for forcing Luz to go there.
** After Luz was discharged from the hospital, [[BroughtDownToBadass she off-loaded 18 of her Quirks to bring it down to a safer 10]]. Notably, she did not keep Julia's (or any of her deceased friends') powers as a TragicKeepsake not because they where too weak but because they kept reminding her of their grim fate and triggered her PTSD she got from that nightmare camp.
** Julia's funeral was a closed casket, [[NotEnoughToBury for obvious reasons]]. In fact, it's later revealed that not all the dead kids came out of the camp in body bags, but urns because the condition of their bodies were so severe that it wouldn't have been right to show the dead children's families ''that''.
** Her parents didn't even bother going to her funeral and even as far as to [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown change her last name to distance themselves from her]]. Whatever love they had for their daughter, was NOT unconditional.
** Luz remembers that her apologetic mother couldn't stop crying for a week over what happened to her at the Death Camp. Luckily, it seems her daughter has forgiven her.
* In Chapter 13, Luz acknowledges she killed 20 kids with her own hands after stealing most of their Quirks but she can't bring herself to feel real remorse at her actions, despite recognising her actions as terrible and trying to feel something. Instead she feels NoSympathy for towards her victims and justifying her actions as PayEvilUntoEvil (Which there is truth to). [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil This realisation scares Luz that she's becoming more like Shigaraki who encourages her to not feel remorse for it]].
--> ''20 people, 20 kids were never going to see their parents thanks to her. 20 kids were never going to grow older because of her, and 20 kids would never fully realize their potential because of her. She took their powers and killed them without a single shred of remorse..''
** She's also concerned that she made The Governor's job easier, would acquitted of all of his charges, return to his job, and it would all be swept under the rug, and be played off as a rumour that never happened. This would have happened had he not been arrested.
** Not long after she wakes up from her coma, Luz has a panic attack after having flashbacks of all the horrible things she witnessed and did at the Death Camp. This occurs in front of her distressed mother as she is hurried out of her hospital by the doctors trying to sedate her. Its possible that her seeming lack of remorse for her actions was a DelayedReaction.
** Poor Camila is told by one of the doctors what happened at the Summer Camp orchestrated by her State's AntagonisticGovernor as a case of ChildrenForcedToKill, with her daughter having the highest body count and gaining serve PTSD from the experience. She has a HeroicBSOD and believes its her fault for forcing Luz to go there.
** After Luz was discharged from the hospital, [[BroughtDownToBadass she off-loaded 18 of her Quirks to bring it down to a safer 10]]. Notably, she did not keep Julia's (or any of her deceased friends') powers as a TragicKeepsake not because they where too weak but because they kept reminding her of their grim fate and triggered her PTSD she got from that nightmare camp.
** Julia's funeral was a closed casket, [[NotEnoughToBury for obvious reasons]]. In fact, it's later revealed that not all the dead kids came out of the camp in body bags, but urns because the condition of their bodies were so severe that it wouldn't have been right to show the dead children's families ''that''.
** Her parents didn't even bother going to her funeral and even as far as to [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown change her last name to distance themselves from her]]. Whatever love they had for their daughter, was NOT unconditional.
** Luz remembers that her apologetic mother couldn't stop crying for a week over what happened to her at the Death Camp. Luckily, it seems her daughter has forgiven her.
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* Julia Wittebane was just kicked out onto the streets by her parents ([[ABirthdayNotABreak on her birthday no less]]), for having superpowers. Poor girl needed that hug.
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* Julia Wittebane was just kicked out out of her house and onto the streets by her parents ([[ABirthdayNotABreak on her birthday no less]]), for having superpowers. Poor girl needed that hug.
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** When Amity hears her surname, she mentally notes its the same as All For One's. It may only be a matter of time before HistoryRepeats itself and the girl becomes a HeroWithBadPublicity if Amity tells her family and SinsOfTheFather comes into effect, ruining any they have of being an OfficialCouple.
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** When Amity hears her surname, she mentally notes its the same as All For One's. It may only be a matter of time before HistoryRepeats itself and the girl becomes a HeroWithBadPublicity in the Boiling Isles if Amity tells her family and SinsOfTheFather comes into effect, ruining any they have of being an OfficialCouple.
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* As Rikitatsu continues to praise his apprentice, he stops as he notices the girl TryingNotToCry. This genuinely catches the man off guard and flat out asks her if she's okay... only for her to hug the person she recognises as a monster and break down into tears. She's so thoroughly broken and traumatised by her experience as a superhuman in the past month that she's willing to seek comfort from All For One of all people. [[SympathyForTheHero Even some one with a black heart like him is compelled to comfort the girl]], which is probably only altruistic thing he's done in over a century.
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* As Rikitatsu continues to praise his apprentice, he stops as he notices the girl TryingNotToCry. This genuinely catches the man off guard and flat out asks her if she's okay... only for her to hug the person she recognises as a monster and break down into tears. She's so thoroughly broken and traumatised by her experience as a superhuman in the past month that she's willing to seek comfort from [[TheSociopath All For One One]] of all people. [[SympathyForTheHero Even some one someone with a black heart like him is compelled to comfort the girl]], which is probably only altruistic thing he's done in over a century.
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* The villain admits that Luz was just a means to an end to get back to his world, have her steal One For All from All Might or whoever he passed it on to, and then pull a VillainOverride on her body and with the newly evolved All For One [[CameBackStrong come back to life stronger than ever]] to restore his criminal empire bigger than ever before. And now he has a WhatIsThisFeeling moment in his heart when seeing the girl in question in emotional turmoil, instead of his just usual sadism.
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* The villain admits to himself that Luz was just a means to an end to get back to his world, have her steal One For All from All Might or whoever he passed it on to, and then pull a VillainOverride on her body and with the newly evolved All For One [[CameBackStrong come back to life stronger than ever]] to restore his criminal empire bigger than ever before. And now he has a WhatIsThisFeeling moment in his heart when seeing the girl in question in emotional turmoil, instead of his just usual sadism.
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* Julia Wittebane was just kicked out onto the streets by her parents (on her birthday no less), for having superpowers. Poor girl needed that hug.
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* Julia Wittebane was just kicked out onto the streets by her parents (on ([[ABirthdayNotABreak on her birthday no less), less]]), for having superpowers. Poor girl needed that hug.
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* The second All For One user has come to the conclusion that Luz Noceda died along ago with her friends back at summer camp and hadn't realised it until now. She now takes the name her EvilMentor suggests offically confirming ThatManIsDead.
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* The second All For One user has come to the conclusion that Luz Noceda died along ago with her friends back at summer camp and hadn't realised it until now. She Toshiko now takes the name her EvilMentor suggests offically confirming ThatManIsDead.
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* Then, there's the story of Dr. Jade, otherwise known as Hilbert Jade, father of Skara. He was a famous scientist who had been living down in the Underdark with his daughter for 4 years ever since he went into hiding. He had been a part of the Emperor's Science Division, [[CantGetAwayWithNuthin only to have been kicked out and arrested when he tried making an illegal potion for someone in the Emperor's Coven]]. The scout had been caught and executed, and Hilbert had been next in line for execution after the fact and it was only because The Golden Guard had swooped in to stop said execution at the tearful request of Skara that they were saved but at the cost of being fugitives from the law and leaving their old lives behind. Now, he works for Perry Porter to recreate the Nomu.
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* Then, there's the story of Dr. Jade, otherwise known as Hilbert Jade, father of Skara. He was a famous scientist who had been living down in the Underdark with his daughter for 4 years ever since he went into hiding. He had been a part of the Emperor's Science Division, [[CantGetAwayWithNuthin only to have been kicked out and arrested when he tried making an illegal potion for someone in the Emperor's Coven]]. The scout had been caught and executed, and Hilbert had been next in line for execution after the fact and it was only because The Golden Guard had swooped in to stop said execution at the tearful request of Skara that they were saved but at the cost of being fugitives from the law and leaving their old lives behind. Now, he works for Perry Porter to recreate the Nomu.Nomu for him.
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* Not to mention that the real Reality Check Camp really was meant to help kids like Luz and the others like the way all For One suggested that they should. Had it not been for Maxwell, Luz could've had a good time with her new friends there.
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* Their fight ends up completely destroying Gravesfield. This is especially worse for Luz as she ended up contributing her DoomedHometown that she vowed to protect. Now its nothing more than a giant crater.
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* Their fight ends up completely destroying Gravesfield. This is especially worse for Luz as she ended up contributing her DoomedHometown that she vowed to protect. Now its nothing more than a giant crater.crater and she's going to get full blame for it.
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* Luz's relationship with her mother is even more strained than in the show, thanks to her being an AlcoholicParent in this story. After the massive argument they had last night that resulted with Camila throwing a wing glass at Luz while revealing she's a ResentfulGuardian towards her. While Luz tries to tell herself her mother didn't mean due to being drunk, she remarks to herself that the one good thing about Reality Check Camp is that she can get away from her mother after that verbal abuse. She even considers running away from home if Camila doesn't get her act together.
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* Luz's relationship with her mother is even more strained than in the show, thanks to her being an AlcoholicParent in this story. After the massive argument they had last night that resulted with Camila throwing a wing glass at Luz while revealing she's a ResentfulGuardian towards her. While Luz tries to tell herself her mother didn't mean what she said due to being drunk, she remarks to herself that the one good thing about Reality Check Camp is that she can get away from her mother after that verbal abuse. She even considers running away from home if Camila doesn't get her act together.
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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz has became her murderer in her name and is in a Cold War with her horrible father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.
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** In the Vestige Realm, Julia is horrified to find out from All For One that Luz has became her murderer in her name and is in a Cold War with her horrible father that resulted in Gravefield's destruction.Gravesfield's destruction just a few days ago.
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* As Sophia fires an EnergyBall at the cop squad, Luz intercepts it with her [[BarrierWarrior Forcefield Projection]]. Despite the Gravesfield police having been the ones to spearhead a lot of grief given to her in the past month, that doesn't stop her from trying to save as many lives as she could. If things were different, Luz could've been superhero she always wanted, instead she will be forever known as a mass murderer.
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* As Sophia fires an EnergyBall at the cop squad, Luz intercepts it with her [[BarrierWarrior Forcefield Projection]].Projector]]. Despite the Gravesfield police having been the ones to spearhead a lot of grief given to her in the past month, that doesn't stop her from trying to save as many lives as she could. If things were different, Luz could've been superhero she always wanted, instead she will be forever known as a mass murderer.
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* During Luz's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, Emilia, TheLeader of the Foxtrot team, tearfully begs for her life claiming she never killed anyone and was never on board with Kennedy's plan. Seeing the 14-year old girl saying sorry in a MadnessMantra in the All For One user's VillainousFaceHold, Luz decides YouWillBeSpared.
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* During Luz's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, Emilia, TheLeader of the Foxtrot team, tearfully begs for her life claiming she never killed anyone and was never on board with Kennedy's plan. Seeing Fortunately, seeing the 14-year old girl saying sorry in a MadnessMantra in the All For One user's VillainousFaceHold, Luz decides YouWillBeSpared.
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* At the end of the chapter, Judy and Arla are brutally KilledOffForReal by the enemy teams, Stanley is fighting for his life and Luz is left alone to fight Cody.
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* At the end of the chapter, Judy and Arla are brutally KilledOffForReal by the enemy teams, Stanley is fighting for his life against Hilbert, Amber, and Lucas and Luz is left alone to fight Cody.
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* When Luz suffers a HeroicRROD from having too many Quirks, she hears that the 3 soldiers she was just about to fight came here to rescue her and her friends, as well as have Governor Rodger Maxwell in their custody to answer for his crimes, before she loses consciousness. [[TheCavalryArrivesLate Had only they arrived 2 days earlier, perhaps all 33 lives could've been spared a grisly fate]].
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* When Luz suffers a HeroicRROD from having too many Quirks, she hears that the 3 three soldiers she was just about to fight came here to rescue her and her friends, as well as have Governor Rodger Maxwell in their custody to answer for his crimes, before she loses consciousness. [[TheCavalryArrivesLate Had only they arrived 2 days earlier, perhaps all 33 lives could've been spared a grisly fate]].
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* The chapter also explains Julia Wittebane's DarkAndTroubledPast. Her parents are practicing Christians with [[TheFundamentalist fundamental extremist beliefs]] that denied her from doing normal child activities that "went against God" in a cult-like fashion. They were not at all accepting at all of their daughter coming out as a lesbian, [[AbusiveParents so they ostracized her, verbally abused her and locked her to one specific part of the big house that she wasn't allowed to leave for a month]] with only her butlers' pity. When her superpowers appeared, [[IHaveNoSon they kicked her out of the house and onto the streets with only a few belongings]], with her church and her religious friends abandoning her. This is sadly TruthInTelevision for many LGBT youth who don't have {{Open Minded Parent}}s.
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* The chapter also explains Julia Wittebane's DarkAndTroubledPast. Her parents are practicing Christians with [[TheFundamentalist fundamental extremist beliefs]] that denied her from doing normal child activities that "went against God" in a cult-like fashion. They were not at all accepting at all of their daughter coming out as being a lesbian, lesbian after catching her kissing her girlfriend Rebecca, [[AbusiveParents so they ostracized her, verbally abused her and locked her to one specific part of the big house that she wasn't allowed to leave for a month]] with only her butlers' pity. When her superpowers appeared, [[IHaveNoSon they kicked her out of the house and onto the streets with only a few belongings]], with her church and her religious friends abandoning her.her and her girlfriend DrivenToSuicide. This is sadly TruthInTelevision for many LGBT youth who don't have {{Open Minded Parent}}s.
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* In the original works, Ronny, one of Luz's teammates, makes a joke to Luz that their parents must hate them if they sent them here to some shoddy education camp. A depressed Luz, who Shigaraki put in her head that Camila is a ResentfulGuardian, says he might be right, making the boy grimace and immediately takes it back telling her not to take him seriously.
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* In At the original works, Ronny, one end of Luz's teammates, makes a joke to the chapter, Judy and Arla are brutally KilledOffForReal by the enemy teams, Stanley is fighting for his life and Luz that their parents must hate them if they sent them here is left alone to some shoddy education camp. A depressed Luz, who Shigaraki put in her head that Camila is a ResentfulGuardian, says he might be right, making the boy grimace and immediately takes it back telling her not to take him seriously.fight Cody.
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* When Julia found out Luz could take away powers in Chapter 7, Julia begged her take them away so for a chance for her family to take her back, despite being painful. She acknowledges that this could be AllForNothing if the governor finds out and pulls a YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness or her parents wouldn't want her back just for being gay.
* In Chapter 9, Ronny, one of Luz's teammates, makes a joke to Luz that their parents must hate them if they sent them here to some shoddy education camp. A depressed Luz, who Shigaraki put in her head that Camila is a ResentfulGuardian, says he might be right, making the boy grimace and immediately takes it back telling her not to take him seriously.
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* Ronny, one of Luz's teammates, makes a joke to Luz that their parents must hate them if they sent them here to some shoddy education camp. A depressed Luz, who Shigaraki put in her head that Camila is a ResentfulGuardian, says he might be right, making the boy grimace and immediately takes it back telling her not to take him seriously.
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* In the original works, Ronny, one of Luz's teammates, makes a joke to Luz that their parents must hate them if they sent them here to some shoddy education camp. A depressed Luz, who Shigaraki put in her head that Camila is a ResentfulGuardian, says he might be right, making the boy grimace and immediately takes it back telling her not to take him seriously.
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* Chapter 10, half of Luz's new friends get slaughtered by the other 2 teams, [[EnemyMine the Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot, working together]]. The poor kids didn't stand a chance against the ambush.
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* Chapter 10, By the end of the chapter, half of Luz's new friends get slaughtered by the other 2 teams, [[EnemyMine the Heaven's Devils and Foxtrot, working together]]. The poor kids didn't stand a chance against the ambush.
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* A desperate Camila turns to Masha and her Tarot Card Quirk to help find out if Luz is okay. They foresee a BadFuture where its implied that Luz snaps and goes on a killing spree at the Death Camp. A horrified Masha then sees another where Luz and another combatant are responsible for the destruction of Gravesfield, where they then proceed to tell the mother to give up on her daughter and save herself from what's to come.
** On a side note, Masha mentions to Camila that YouCantFightFate and that she did a reading for Julia, who's destined to ''die'' soon.
** On a side note, Masha mentions to Camila that YouCantFightFate and that she did a reading for Julia, who's destined to ''die'' soon.
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* Luz is slowly becoming more cynical in her captivity and more resentful towards her mother, due to their last conversation, slowing no caring what Camila thinks of her.
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* Luz is slowly becoming more cynical in her captivity and more resentful towards her mother, due to their last conversation.
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* Luz is slowly becoming more cynical in her captivity and more resentful towards her mother, due to their last conversation.
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* If you were a witch with a Quirk, you would be a target for discrimination. There are about 200 "Unique" children that exist in Bonesborough alone, and all of them, were made social outcasts by The Emperor's Coven. [[KickTheDog Knowing Belos is likely a feature and not a bug in the social system.]] Many weren't wanted by their parents. They were haunting reminders of what Shigaraki had done to their home 14 years ago. All For One had destroyed whatever semblance of a normal life for many witch children could have had.
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* If you were a witch with a Quirk, you would be a target for discrimination. There are about 200 "Unique" children that exist in Bonesborough alone, and all of them, were made social outcasts by The Emperor's Coven. [[KickTheDog Knowing Emperor Belos is likely a feature and not a bug in the social system.]] Many weren't wanted by their parents. They were haunting reminders of what Shigaraki had done to their home 14 years ago. All For One had destroyed whatever semblance of a normal life for many witch children could have had.
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* Camila, meanwhile, is not coping well as she blames herself for Luz's disappearance. Her alcoholism has only gotten worse, not helped by the fact that her sister-in-law and mother refuse to have anything to do with her.
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* Camila, meanwhile, is not coping well as she blames herself for Luz's disappearance. Her alcoholism has only gotten worse, not helped by the fact that both her sister-in-law and her own mother refuse to have anything to do with her.
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* Camila, meanwhile, is not coping well as she blames herself for Luz's disappearance. Her alcoholism has only gotten worse, not helped by the fact that her sister-in-law and mother refuse to have anything to do with her.
