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Magic Plastic Surgery: fixed open quote
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* MagicPlasticSurgery: [[spoiler:Fujiko, who was taught by a co-worker that the key to happiness was [[BeautyIsBest to be more beautiful]] than anyone else, so she saved up for operations to get "a new face [[StartingANewLife for a new start]].]]
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* MagicPlasticSurgery: [[spoiler:Fujiko, who was taught by a co-worker that the key to happiness was [[BeautyIsBest to be more beautiful]] than anyone else, so she saved up for operations to get "a new face [[StartingANewLife for a new start]].]]"]]
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cleaned up style
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* BerserkButton: Fujiko's is her [[spoiler:[[MagicPlasticSurgery plastic surgery]]]]. [[spoiler:Shigeko]] has one for [[spoiler:[[NeverMessWithGranny any suggestion]], however [[IWasJustJoking well-humored]] it may be, that she start a religious sect of her own]]. Coincidentally, both of them involve [[spoiler:[[UndisclosedFunds how each spends her money]] to gain favor among her peers]].
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* BerserkButton: Fujiko's is her [[spoiler:[[MagicPlasticSurgery plastic surgery]]]]. [[spoiler:Shigeko]] has one for [[spoiler:[[NeverMessWithGranny any suggestion]], however [[IWasJustJoking well-humored]] it may be, that she start a religious sect of her own]]. Coincidentally, both of them involve [[spoiler:[[UndisclosedFunds how each either spends her money]] to gain favor among her peers]].
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* MagicPlasticSurgery: [[spoiler:Fujiko, who was taught by a co-worker that the key to happiness was [[BeautyIsBest to be more beautiful]] than anyone else, so she saved up for operations to get "a new face [[StartingANewLife for "a new start]].[[StartingANewLife "]]]]
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* MagicPlasticSurgery: [[spoiler:Fujiko, who was taught by a co-worker that the key to happiness was [[BeautyIsBest to be more beautiful]] than anyone else, so she saved up for operations to get "a new face [[StartingANewLife for "a a new start]].[[StartingANewLife "]]]]]]
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** [[spoiler:Hatsuyo]] meets this end, with [[spoiler:Shigeko [[NeverSuicide forging a suicide note]] attributing to her all of their murders]].
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** [[spoiler:Hatsuyo]] meets this end, with [[spoiler:Shigeko [[spoiler:Shigeko's [[NeverSuicide forging a suicide note]] attributing to her all of their murders]].
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added + linked Never Suicide
* NeverSuicide: [[spoiler:Sakiko]] and [[spoiler:Hatsuyo]].
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** [[spoiler:Hatsuyo]] meets this end, with [[spoiler:Shigeko forging a suicide note attributing to her all of their murders]].
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** [[spoiler:Hatsuyo]] meets this end, with [[spoiler:Shigeko [[NeverSuicide forging a suicide note note]] attributing to her all of their murders]].
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added sub-entry to You Have Outlived Your Usefulness
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: This is how Fujiko has repeatedly tried to "reset" her life: by offing the deadweights in it and marching on.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: This is how Fujiko has repeatedly tried to "reset" her life: by offing the deadweights in it and marching on.on.
** [[spoiler:Hatsuyo]] meets this end, with [[spoiler:Shigeko forging a suicide note attributing to her all of their murders]].
** [[spoiler:Hatsuyo]] meets this end, with [[spoiler:Shigeko forging a suicide note attributing to her all of their murders]].
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added tense of verb in You Have Outlived Your Usefulness
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: This is how Fujiko tries to "reset" her life: by offing the deadweights in it and marching on.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: This is how Fujiko tries has repeatedly tried to "reset" her life: by offing the deadweights in it and marching on.
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* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Hatsuyo Kosaka, who killed Fujiko's parents and later [[SinsOfOurFathers received her dues]]...[[AngstWhatAngst or did she?]]]]
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* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Hatsuyo Kosaka, who killed Fujiko's parents and later [[SinsOfOurFathers received her dues]]...[[AngstWhatAngst or did she?]]]]she?]]]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: This is how Fujiko tries to "reset" her life: by offing the deadweights in it and marching on.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: This is how Fujiko tries to "reset" her life: by offing the deadweights in it and marching on.
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* RepressedMemories: Fujiko's, from previous "resets."
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Fujiko has killed Hideki [[spoiler:''and'' her first husband Yūya]]. [[spoiler:Both Michiko and Sakiko greatly fear doing the same to their own husbands in the future]].
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Fujiko has killed Hideki [[spoiler:''and'' her first husband Yūya]]. [[spoiler:Both Michiko and Sakiko greatly fear doing the same to their own husbands in the future]].future]].
* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Hatsuyo Kosaka, who killed Fujiko's parents and later [[SinsOfOurFathers received her dues]]...[[AngstWhatAngst or did she?]]]]
* TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Hatsuyo Kosaka, who killed Fujiko's parents and later [[SinsOfOurFathers received her dues]]...[[AngstWhatAngst or did she?]]]]
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* DefusingTheTykebomb: This happens gradually to Fujiko as Michiko unearths her DarkAndTroubledPast.
