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Meet Staff Sergeant Pete Hill. {{Badass}} insurgent-fighting machine of the United States Army. While doing his usual OneManArmy routine in Afghanistan, Pete gets just a little annoyed that his unit is denied backup in a firefight...because the computer is down.
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Meet Staff Sergeant Pete Hill. {{Badass}} Badass insurgent-fighting machine of the United States Army. While doing his usual OneManArmy routine in Afghanistan, Pete gets just a little annoyed that his unit is denied backup in a firefight...because the computer is down.
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* BloodKnight: Randy is a subversion, he wants to be a cold eyed, remorseless {{Badass}}, but his naturally sweet-hearted nature and general incompetence mean that he will almost certainly never see combat in his career.
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* BloodKnight: Randy is a subversion, he wants to be a cold eyed, remorseless {{Badass}}, badass, but his naturally sweet-hearted nature and general incompetence mean that he will almost certainly never see combat in his career.
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** The US Military hasn't allowed siblings to serve in the same unit since WWII, when all five of the Sullivan brothers were killed in action aboard the USS ''Juneau''. This can be excused for RuleOfFunny, though.
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** The US Military hasn't allowed has done everything possible to prevent siblings to serve from serving in the same unit since WWII, when all five of the Sullivan brothers were killed in action aboard the USS ''Juneau''. This can be excused for RuleOfFunny, though.
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*** The biggest one would have to be Pete punching out a Colonel at a time of war ''while'' in a warzone. The loss of one rank and a transfer wouldn't even be considered a slap on the wrist. In real life this would amount to prison time and a dishonorable discharge. He would have considered himself lucky if he lost all rank and was sent back to the front lines as a Private. Hell, according to UCMJ, he could be ''summarily shot'' for that.
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*** The biggest one would have to be Pete punching out a Colonel at a time of war ''while'' in a warzone. The loss of one rank and a transfer wouldn't even be considered a slap on the wrist. In real life this would amount to prison time and a dishonorable dishonourable discharge. He would have considered himself lucky if he lost all rank and was sent back to the front lines as a Private. Hell, according to UCMJ, he could be ''summarily shot'' for that.
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* {{Narcissist}}: Pete sees himself as the ultimate soldier and has a poster of himself hung in the motor pool to serve as an inspiration for his subordinates. While Derrick rolls his eyes at this, Randy happily worships his big brother, to the point of being proud at being the one allowed to hand the previously mentioned poster.
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* {{Narcissist}}: Pete sees himself as the ultimate soldier and has a poster of himself hung in the motor pool to serve as an inspiration for his subordinates. While Derrick rolls his eyes at this, Randy happily worships his big brother, to the point of being proud at being the one allowed to hand hang the previously mentioned poster.
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* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: The Hill brothers show affection by putting their hands on each other's heads, a gesture which was adopted by the platoon as a whole.
* BadassCreed: "We Are Brothers!"
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: PVT Park was born in a North Korean labor camp and was separated from her mother.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: PVT Park was born in a North Korean labor labour camp and was separated from her mother.
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* HopeCrusher: Derrick has spent his life systematically crushing first Randy's, and then the rest fo the platoon's dreams. For example, Chubbowski used to be in great shape before Derrick got him hooked on fast food.
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* HopeCrusher: Derrick has spent his life systematically crushing first Randy's, and then the rest fo of the platoon's dreams. For example, Chubbowski used to be in great shape before Derrick got him hooked on fast food.
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** In episode 2, Jill and Pete get into an informal marksmanship competition but keep posting equal scores. They keep adding more and more distractors (eyes covered, people yelling over their shoulder), but eventually they take it too far:
--> '''Pete:''' ''(to Jill)'' All right, leapfrog a Private, barrel roll, ''then'' pop up and shoot. How's that sound?\\
'''Range Officer:''' Like a ''huge'' safety violation! As range supervisor, I'm gonna need you to vacate the premesis!
--> '''Pete:''' ''(to Jill)'' All right, leapfrog a Private, barrel roll, ''then'' pop up and shoot. How's that sound?\\
'''Range Officer:''' Like a ''huge'' safety violation! As range supervisor, I'm gonna need you to vacate the premesis!
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** In episode 2, Jill and Pete get into an informal marksmanship competition but keep posting equal scores. They keep adding more and more distractors (eyes covered, people yelling over their shoulder), but eventually they take it too far:
--> '''Pete:''' ''(to Jill)'' All right, leapfrog a Private, barrel roll, ''then'' pop up and shoot. How's that sound?\\
'''Range Officer:''' Like a ''huge'' safety violation! As range supervisor, I'm gonna need you to vacate the premesis!
--> '''Pete:''' ''(to Jill)'' All right, leapfrog a Private, barrel roll, ''then'' pop up and shoot. How's that sound?\\
'''Range Officer:''' Like a ''huge'' safety violation! As range supervisor, I'm gonna need you to vacate the premesis!
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* InterServiceRivalry: A recurring theme is the rivalry between the soldiers of Fort [=McGee=] and the marine detachment in town.
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* InterServiceRivalry: A recurring theme is the rivalry between the soldiers of Fort [=McGee=] and the marine Marine detachment in town.
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* CelebrityCameo: [[Series/FullHouse Laurie Loughlin]] appears for a few seconds at the end of the final episode.
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* CelebrityCameo: [[Series/FullHouse Laurie Lori Loughlin]] appears for a few seconds at the end of the final episode.
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-->"My dad was in jail, my mom wasn't home, my uncle Rico was beaten to death with a sock full of oranges. Or was it doorknobs? No it was oranges. His corpsecwas sticky..."
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-->"My dad was in jail, my mom wasn't home, my uncle Rico was beaten to death with a sock full of oranges. Or was it doorknobs? No it was oranges. His corpsecwas corpse was sticky..."
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* CallBack In the pilot, Park elbows the others during a run, screaming that she's going through a divorce. In episode 7, it's revealed that Derrick planted the seed for the divorce by making Park suspicious of her husband, and in the finale they reconcile.
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* CelebrityCameo: [[Series/FullHouse Laurie Loughlin]] appears for a few seconds at the end of the final episode.
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** In the pilot, the platoon returns a lost dog to the three sons of a deployed soldier, also a parallel to the Hills, which was lampshaded beautifully.
-->'''Randy:''' You see, those kids are like us.\\
'''Pete:''' We get it Randy.\\
'''Derrick:''' The image is very clear.
-->'''Randy:''' You see, those kids are like us.\\
'''Pete:''' We get it Randy.\\
'''Derrick:''' The image is very clear.
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* LonelyBachelorPad: Pete's trailer at the "depressing single guy trailer park near the dump".
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** Perez as well.
-->"My dad was in jail, my mom wasn't home, my uncle Rico was beaten to death with a sock full of oranges. Or was it doorknobs? No it was oranges. His corpsecwas sticky..."
-->"My dad was in jail, my mom wasn't home, my uncle Rico was beaten to death with a sock full of oranges. Or was it doorknobs? No it was oranges. His corpsecwas sticky..."
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* LonelyBachelorPad: Pete's trailer at the "depressing single guy trailer park near the dump".
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-->"Rear D. Those guys aren't even real soldiers, all they do is mow lawns and wash tanks, my brothers are in Rear D. What a second, Florida? Oh heeeell no"
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-->"Rear D. Those guys aren't even real soldiers, all they do is mow lawns and wash tanks, my brothers are in Rear D. ''(beat)'' What a second, Florida? Oh heeeell no"
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->"Rear D. Those guys aren't even real soldiers, all they do is mow lawns and wash tanks, my brothers are in Rear D. What a second, Florida? Oh heeeell no"
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* BrownNote: One of the experimental weapons Schneeberger tested on the platoon was a "poo ray" which worked by firing beams of sound at this note.
** Also, the female characters. Park (Id), Perez (Superego), Robinson (Ego).
* OhCrap: Pete's reaction when he figures out where he's being sent.
->"Rear D. Those guys aren't even real soldiers, all they do is mow lawns and wash tanks, my brothers are in Rear D. What a second, Florida? Oh heeeell no"
->"Rear D. Those guys aren't even real soldiers, all they do is mow lawns and wash tanks, my brothers are in Rear D. What a second, Florida? Oh heeeell no"
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Shaping up between Pete and Jill.
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Shaping up between Pete and Jill.Jill.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Who was in charge of the platoon before Pete got booted stateside?
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Who was in charge of the platoon before Pete got booted stateside?
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* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: A number of characters in the pilot disappeared before episode 2.
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* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: A number of characters in the pilot disappeared before by episode 2.
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* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: A number of characters in the pilot disappeared before episode 2.
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*ArchetypalCharacter: Anyone who has been in the military for long enough will get to know someone like Pete, or Derrick, or Schneeberger, or Jill, or...
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*TruthInTelevision: The reason ''Enlisted'' exists is because life in the US military is frequently sitcom-like without any need for exaggeration.
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*** [=RangerUp.com=] ran [[http://rhinoden.rangerup.com/holiday-safety-briefing/ this thread]] on their Rhino Den blog page, challenging veterans to post the most bizarre/memorable safety briefings they ever got. Among the more colorful examples was a company commander who brought his girlfriend, pointed out that she's hot, explained his weekend plans with her, and threatened that if any of his Soldiers did anything that caused him to miss a single second with her, "''[[SuddenlyShouting I will ass-fuck your LIFE!!!]]''"
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* RecklessGunUsage: While trying to prove which is the best soldier, Jill and Pete devise a series of contests, the first of which is a high-stress firing contest, which involves running an obstacle course and leapfrogging a private. The range supervisor immediately throws them out.
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* RecklessGunUsage: While trying to prove which is the best soldier, Jill and Pete devise a series of contests, the first of which is a high-stress firing contest, which involves running an obstacle course and leapfrogging a private. [[RealityEnsues The range supervisor Range Safety Officer immediately throws them out.out]].
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** Any veteran will tell you that such bizarre safety briefings are absolutely TruthInTelevision.
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--> ''"[[YouBastard You're the architect of my obesity!"''
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--> ''"[[YouBastard You're the architect of my obesity!"''obesity!]]"''
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* HopeCrusher: Derrick has spent his life systematically crushing first Randy's, and then the rest fo the platoon's dreams.
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* HopeCrusher: Derrick has spent his life systematically crushing first Randy's, and then the rest fo the platoon's dreams. For example, Chubbowski used to be in great shape before Derrick got him hooked on fast food.
--> ''"[[YouBastard You're the architect of my obesity!"''
--> ''"[[YouBastard You're the architect of my obesity!"''
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** This one is [[TruthInTelevision commonly]] [[InterserviceRivalry used]] in real life. The Marines' reply is that "Army" stands for '''A'''in't '''R'''eady to be '''M'''arines '''Y'''et.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Park was born in a labour camp and was separated from her mother.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: PVT Park was born in a labour North Korean labor camp and was separated from her mother.
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** The pilot was so bad in terms of military details that the writers decided to make a contest out of it -- point out enough wrongdoings and a viewer could get an official ''Enlisted'' challenge coin.
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** The pilot was so bad in terms of military details that the writers decided to make a contest out of it -- point out enough wrongdoings and a viewer could get an official ''Enlisted'' challenge coin. From Episode 2 onwards, it got much better.
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*** The biggest one would have to be Pete punching out a Colonel at a time of war ''while'' in a warzone. The loss of one rank and a transfer wouldn't even be considered a slap on the wrist. In real life this would amount to prison time and a dishonorable discharge. He would have considered himself lucky if he lost all rank and was sent back to the front lines as a Private.
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*** The biggest one would have to be Pete punching out a Colonel at a time of war ''while'' in a warzone. The loss of one rank and a transfer wouldn't even be considered a slap on the wrist. In real life this would amount to prison time and a dishonorable discharge. He would have considered himself lucky if he lost all rank and was sent back to the front lines as a Private. Hell, according to UCMJ, he could be ''summarily shot'' for that.