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The forum can be found [[http://w11.zetaboards.com/Persona_Mindscapes/index/ here]]
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The forum can be found [[http://w11.zetaboards.com/Persona_Mindscapes/index/ [[https://personamindscapes2.jcink.net/ here]]
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* BlandNameProduct: Used extensively. Particularly [[Website/{{Twitter}} Beep!]] and [[Website/FourChan ChanChan]].
* BossInMookClothing[=/=]KingMook: Prime Shadows are rare upgraded versions of normal Shadows with better skills and fewer or different weaknesses. They are easily identified by distinguishing characteristics such as crowns, capes, or a BattleAura.
* CharacterBlog: Available in-universe via the Beep! threads, which are devoted to following the mock Twitter feeds of player characters. There has also been talk of making a Website/{{Facebook}} {{Expy}}.
* BossInMookClothing[=/=]KingMook: Prime Shadows are rare upgraded versions of normal Shadows with better skills and fewer or different weaknesses. They are easily identified by distinguishing characteristics such as crowns, capes, or a BattleAura.
* CharacterBlog: Available in-universe via the Beep! threads, which are devoted to following the mock Twitter feeds of player characters. There has also been talk of making a Website/{{Facebook}} {{Expy}}.
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* BossInMookClothing[=/=]KingMook: Prime Shadows are rare upgraded versions of normal Shadows with better skills and fewer or different weaknesses. They are easily identified by distinguishing characteristics such as crowns, capes, or a BattleAura.
* CharacterBlog: Available in-universe via the Beep! threads, which are devoted to following the mock Twitter feeds of player characters. There has also been talk of making a Website/{{Facebook}} {{Expy}}.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to ''Roleplay/PersonaRebirth'', at least for now: there haven't been any {{Masquerade}}-breaking mass murders or {{Yakuza}} taking over the back streets by force like in the other RP. Most of the ''Rebirth'' characters [[ReusedCharacterDesign "ported" over]] to the board are also much saner and [[AdaptationalHeroism nicer]].
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Tadashi and Yoko heal from their stab wounds remarkably quickly.
* PerplexingPlurals: Asking someone what the plural of Persona is usually results in Personas or Personae.
* ShiftingSandLand: One of the other mindscapes. The Desert Of [[YourHeartsDesire Desire]], it contains many [[AncientTomb secrets]].
* PerplexingPlurals: Asking someone what the plural of Persona is usually results in Personas or Personae.
* ShiftingSandLand: One of the other mindscapes. The Desert Of [[YourHeartsDesire Desire]], it contains many [[AncientTomb secrets]].
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* PerplexingPlurals: Asking someone what the plural of Persona is usually results in Personas or Personae.
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* ToyTime: Although it's name [[AmusementParkOfDoom suggests]] [[CircusOfFear otherwise]], The Funhouse - the first mindscape to be introduced after the Hall of Mirrors - is this. Its access point is [[PoweredByAForsakenChild an abandoned toybox behind an orphanage.]]
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* ToyTime: Although it's name [[AmusementParkOfDoom suggests]] [[CircusOfFear otherwise]], The Funhouse - the first mindscape to be introduced after the Hall of Mirrors - is this. Its access point is [[PoweredByAForsakenChild an abandoned toybox behind an orphanage.]]
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* BlandNameProduct: Used extensively. Particularly [[Website/{{Twitter}} Beep!]] and [[ImageBoards ChanChan]].
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* BlandNameProduct: Used extensively. Particularly [[Website/{{Twitter}} Beep!]] and [[ImageBoards [[Website/FourChan ChanChan]].
* ShiftingSandLand: One of the other mindscapes. The Desert Of [[YourHeartsDesire Desire]], it contains many [[AncientTomb secrets]].
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* ShiftingSandLand: One of the other mindscapes. The Desert Of [[YourHeartsDesire Desire]], it contains many [[AncientTomb secrets]].
* ToyTime: Although it's name [[AmusementParkOfDoom suggests]] [[CircusOfFear otherwise]], The Funhouse - the first mindscape to be introduced after the Hall of Mirrors - is this. Its access point is [[PoweredByAForsakenChild an abandoned toybox behind an orphanage.]]
* ToyTime: Although it's name [[AmusementParkOfDoom suggests]] [[CircusOfFear otherwise]], The Funhouse - the first mindscape to be introduced after the Hall of Mirrors - is this. Its access point is [[PoweredByAForsakenChild an abandoned toybox behind an orphanage.]]
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