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* BitchInSheepsClothing: The government examiners seem quite pleasant and friendly towards Dickie when prepping him for the examination...and proceed to murder him when he scores too highly on the exam.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: The first question on the Government examination is "Complete this sequence of numbers: 1,4,7,10". The fact that the answer to the question is 13, aka [[ThirteenIsUnlucky the unlucky number]], subtly hints that Dickie's not going to have a very lucky outco,e.
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In 1700, a Puritan teenager named Charity Payne develops cholera and grows ill. In 1985, an American teenager named Peter Wood similarly comes down with cholera and grows ill. For reasons unexplained, Peter and Charity come into telepathic contact with each other through their shared illness. Peter is excited to show Charity what his 20th century life has to offer, but when she tells her acquaintances of her visions, they begin thinking her to be a witch. To this end, Peter needs to quickly find some information to help Charity before she's put to death.
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In 1700, a Puritan teenager named Charity Payne develops cholera a bacterial infection and grows ill. In 1985, an American teenager named Peter Wood similarly comes down with cholera and grows ill.such an infection. For reasons unexplained, Peter and Charity come into telepathic contact with each other through their shared illness. Peter is excited to show Charity what his 20th century life has to offer, but when she tells her acquaintances of her visions, they begin thinking her to be a witch. To this end, Peter needs to quickly find some information to help Charity before she's put to death.
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* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Charity, a Puritan girl living in [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies Colonial Massachusetts]], and Peter, a teenage boy living in 20th century Massachusetts, gain the ability to communicate with each other and see through each other's eyes after they both contract cholera. Charity and Peter can also experience sensations from the other's perspective, as Peter introduces Charity to the unimaginable luxuries of his time such as orange juice and chocolate ice cream, and she quickly becomes drunk when Peter has a glass of wine.
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* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Charity, a Puritan girl living in the village of Annes Town in [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies Colonial Massachusetts]], and Peter, a teenage boy living in 20th century town of Anniston, Massachusetts, gain the ability to communicate with each other and see through each other's eyes after they both contract cholera. an infection from the bacteria in Harmon Brook. Charity and Peter can also experience sensations from the other's perspective, as Peter introduces Charity to the unimaginable luxuries of his time such as orange juice and chocolate ice cream, and she quickly becomes drunk tipsy when Peter has a glass of wine.
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* AttemptedRape: Jonas attempts to rape Charity, claiming that he needs check her body [[MarkOfTheBeast the Devil's mark]] after she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After attacking him, she manages to escape unharmed.
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* AttemptedRape: Jonas attempts to rape Charity, claiming that he needs to check her body [[MarkOfTheBeast the Devil's mark]] after she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After attacking him, she manages to escape unharmed.
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-> "He reached out with his mind, searching for some trace of her... but found only silence. Peter Wood, was alone. ''(...)'' A new year with new friends and a new confidence and, in time, he began to doubt whether it had ever really happened. Until, one day... ''(...)'' Harmon Brook is very different today. Its waters not quite as pure, its banks lined with tract homes and shopping centers, but Bear Rock is still there. And so is a message, a message from a girl long gone, and yet, never really gone in heart and mind. ''(...)'' A last remembrance of friendship and first love. A love that will live, only and always -- in the Twilight Zone."
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-> "He reached out with his mind, searching for some trace of her... but found only silence. Peter Wood, was alone. " ''(...)'' A "A new year with new friends and a new confidence and, in time, he began to doubt whether it had ever really happened. Until, one day... " ''(...)'' Harmon "Harmon Brook is very different today. Its waters not quite as pure, its banks lined with tract homes and shopping centers, but Bear Rock is still there. And so is a message, a message from a girl long gone, and yet, never really gone in heart and mind. " ''(...)'' A "A last remembrance of friendship and first love. A love that will live, only and always -- in the Twilight Zone."
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie's parents are named Richard, Sr. and Ruth. In the short story by Henry Slesar, their first names are not given.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie's parents are named Richard, Richard Sr. and Ruth. In the short story by Henry Slesar, their first names are not given.
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* WithFriendsLikeThese: Charity tells her best friend Ursula Miller what she has learned of the future through her telepathic contact with Peter. Ursula then brings Charity's claims to the attention of Squire Hacker, who accues Charity of being a witch.
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* WithFriendsLikeThese: Charity tells her best friend Ursula Miller what she has learned of the future through her telepathic contact with Peter. Ursula then brings Charity's claims to the attention of Squire Hacker, who accues accuses Charity of being a witch.
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-> ''"He reached out with his mind, searching for some trace of her... but found only silence. Peter Wood, was alone. (...) A new year with new friends and a new confidence and, in time, he began to doubt whether it had ever really happened. Until, one day... (...) Harmon Brook is very different today. Its waters not quite as pure, its banks lined with tract homes and shopping centers, but Bear Rock is still there. And so is a message, a message from a girl long gone, and yet, never really gone in heart and mind. (...) A last remembrance of friendship and first love. A love that will live, only and always -- in the Twilight Zone."''
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-> ''"He "He reached out with his mind, searching for some trace of her... but found only silence. Peter Wood, was alone. (...) ''(...)'' A new year with new friends and a new confidence and, in time, he began to doubt whether it had ever really happened. Until, one day... (...) ''(...)'' Harmon Brook is very different today. Its waters not quite as pure, its banks lined with tract homes and shopping centers, but Bear Rock is still there. And so is a message, a message from a girl long gone, and yet, never really gone in heart and mind. (...) ''(...)'' A last remembrance of friendship and first love. A love that will live, only and always -- in the Twilight Zone."''"
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* TruthSerums: Before he takes the test, Dickie is given a truth serum to ensure that he answers all of the questions as truthfully as possible.
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* TruthSerums: Before he takes the test, Dickie is given a truth serum to ensure that he answers all of the questions questions as truthfully as possible.
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In 1700, a Puritan teenager named Charity Payne develops cholera and grows ill. In 1985, an American teenager named Peter Wood similarly comes down with cholera and grows ill. For reasons unexplained, Peter and Charity come into telepathic contact with each other through their shared illness. Peter is excited to show Charity what his 20th century life has to offer, but when she tells her acquaintances of her visions, they begin thinking her to be a witch. To this end, Peter needs to quikcly find some information to help Charity before she's put to death.
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In 1700, a Puritan teenager named Charity Payne develops cholera and grows ill. In 1985, an American teenager named Peter Wood similarly comes down with cholera and grows ill. For reasons unexplained, Peter and Charity come into telepathic contact with each other through their shared illness. Peter is excited to show Charity what his 20th century life has to offer, but when she tells her acquaintances of her visions, they begin thinking her to be a witch. To this end, Peter needs to quikcly quickly find some information to help Charity before she's put to death.
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A young boy must take a government-mandated intelligence test.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie's birthday wish is to do well on the exam. He passes with flying colors, but it turns out that people who do too well are killed before they start asking too many questions about their government.
* CannotSpitItOut: Dickie's parents know what will happen if he does too well on the test, but they can't find the nerve to reveal the truth to him because he either wouldn't want to take the test, he wouldn't believe them, or there could be someone listening in on their conversations. They just keep changing the subject or try to get him to watch TV.
* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: As mentioned above, if Dickie's parents simply ''told him'' what happens if he does too well on the test, the plot could've easily been avoided. Of course, they had no real opportunity to do so, since they live in a dystopia that's bound to be surveillance-heavy, and Dickie's given a truth serum before he goes in for the test.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government Dickie and his parents live under gives mandatory tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies... who are killed before they can grow up to question them.
* DiedOnTheirBirthday: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie wishes that he will do well on his mandatory intelligence test. When he passes the test, he is killed by the government for being ''too'' intelligent.
* DownerEnding: Dickie does ''too'' well on the government test, and he's killed in accordance with the law. The last shot has his grief-stricken parents sharing a hug.
* {{Dystopia}}: Dickie lives in a totalitarian future where child prodigies like himself are killed for scoring too well on government mandated intelligence tests.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The government kills children who score too highly on their tests because they'll start learning the truth about their totalitarian practices.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie's parents are named Richard, Sr. and Ruth. In the short story by Henry Slesar, their first names are not given.
* NothingIsScarier: It's bad enough that Dickie's government kills him for being too intellgent, but the fact we never learn how its done raises all sorts of horrific questions.
* PersecutedIntellectuals: The totalitarian government exterminates anyone who scores too high on a mandatory examination at only twelve years old. Dickie is one such victim.
* TallPoppySyndrome: Dickie is a naturally inquisitive and curious child who loves to read and learn. On his twelfth birthday, he's taken in for a government-mandated intelligence
* TruthSerums: Before he takes the test, Dickie is given a truth serum to ensure that he answers all of the questions as truthfully as possible.
* WouldHurtAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies. Who they kill before they can grow up to threaten the power structure.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie Jordan wishes on his birthday to do well on the government exam. He does, and it turns out people who do too well are killed.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies -- who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
* DiedOnTheirBirthday: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be too intelligent, and he is killed by the government.
* DownerEnding: Do too well on the government test, get killed.
* {{Dystopia}}: {{Child prodig|ies}}y such as Dickie Jordan are killed for scoring too well on government tests.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie Jordan's parents are named Richard, Sr. and Ruth. In the short story by Henry Slesar, their first names are not given.
* PersecutedIntellectuals: The government exterminates anyone who scores too high on a mandatory examination at twelve years old. Dickie Jordan is one such victim.
* TallPoppySyndrome: Dickie Jordan is a naturally inquisitive, curious child who loves to read and learn. On his twelfth birthday, he's taken in for the government-mandated intelligence test, and hopes he'll do well. He does -- and that's a problem, as the state has made it a ''crime'' for people to be too smart. The whole point of the exam is to make sure that everyone stays the "right" level of stupid and unthinking, and -- as is the case with Dickie -- they kill any child who exceeds it.
* TruthSerums: Dickie Jordan is given a truth serum to ensure that he answers all of the questions on the government intelligence test as truthfully as possible.
* WouldHurtAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies -- who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
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[[folder:Examination Day]]
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie Jordan wishes on his birthday to do well on the government exam. He does, and it turns out people who do too well are killed.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies -- who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
* DiedOnTheirBirthday: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be too intelligent, and he is killed by the government.
* DownerEnding: Do too well on the government test, get killed.
* {{Dystopia}}: {{Child prodig|ies}}y such as Dickie Jordan are killed for scoring too well on government tests.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie Jordan's parents are named Richard, Sr. and Ruth. In the short story by Henry Slesar, their first names are not given.
* PersecutedIntellectuals: The government exterminates anyone who scores too high on a mandatory examination at twelve years old. Dickie Jordan is one such victim.
* TallPoppySyndrome: Dickie Jordan is a naturally inquisitive, curious child who loves to read and learn. On his twelfth birthday, he's taken in for the government-mandated intelligence test, and hopes he'll do well. He does -- and that's a problem, as the state has made it a ''crime'' for people to be too smart. The whole point of the exam is to make sure that everyone stays the "right" level of stupid and unthinking, and -- as is the case with Dickie -- they kill any child who exceeds it.
* TruthSerums: Dickie Jordan is given a truth serum to ensure that he answers all of the questions on the government intelligence test as truthfully as possible.
* WouldHurtAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies -- who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie Jordan wishes on
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies -- who are then killed
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* DownerEnding: Do too well on the government test, get killed.
* {{Dystopia}}: {{Child prodig|ies}}y such as Dickie Jordan are killed for scoring too well on government tests.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie Jordan's parents are named Richard, Sr. and Ruth.
* AgeLift: In the 1967 short story of the same name, Charity is 11 years old in 1700 when she begins communicating with the 16-year-old Peter in the present. In the episode, she is seemingly closer to Peter's age, though the exact number of years isn't revealed. This change was made because the episode places more emphasis on Charity and Peter being each other's first love than the original story. There is also the scene in which Squire Hacker [[AttemptedRape attempts to rape]] Charity after claiming that she needs to disrobe so he can check her for the [[MarkOfTheBeast mark of a witch]], which is toned down in the episode compared to the short story.
* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Squire Hacker tells Charity that he [[BurnTheWitch will have her burned at the stake for witchcraft]]. In reality, the most common method of execution for convicted witches in the Colonies was hanging.
* AttemptedRape: Jonas attempts to rape Charity, claiming that he needs check her body [[MarkOfTheBeast the Devil's mark]] after she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After attacking him, she manages to escape unharmed.
* BittersweetEnding: Peter and Charity have their
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* TallPoppySyndrome: Dickie Jordan is a naturally inquisitive, curious child who loves
* CanonForeigner: Peter has a younger brother named Bobby in the episode. In the short story, he's
* TheConstant: There is a rock near Harmon Brook in Annes Town/Anniston called Bear Rock, so named because it resembles a bear bending down to drink from the stream. In 1700, Charity carves a message of love for Peter, their initials in a heart, under the bear's jaw on the left side.
* DeathByChildbirth: Charity's mother died while she was giving birth to her.
* FirstFriend: Peter found it very difficult to make friends when he was a kid. When Charity breaks off their telepathic contact, he tearfully tells her that she was the first real friend he ever had. The closing narration makes it clear that they were also each other's FirstLove.
* GradeSkipper: Peter tells Charity that he skipped two grades when he was younger, which stunted his social skils.
* KarmaHoudini: Squire Hacker faces no consequences for raping at least one young lady and nearly doing the same to Charity.
* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: Peter notes that Hacker was ultimately convicted of the murder of two sailors, albeit posthumously.
* MarkOfTheBeast: Jonas tells Charity to strip so he can search her body for the
* PleaseSelectNewCityName: The village of Annes Town was renamed to Anniston in the late 19th Century.
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Charity, a Puritan girl living in [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies Colonial Massachusetts]], and
* {{Seers}}: After she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]], Charity claims to
* SettingUpdate: Peter's native time is 1985. In the
* ThirdEye: Master Croft's ewe has a lamb with
* TruthSerums: Dickie Jordan
* WitchHunt: Charity is accused of being a witch after she tells her best friend Ursula of what she has seen through Peter's eyes, such as cars, television, airplanes, men walking on UsefulNotes/TheMoon, and UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution. The "evidence" against her is her family's well being the only body of water in Annes Town that is not tainted, and Master Croft's ewe giving birth to a lamb with a ThirdEye. While searching for references to Charity's trial in books on [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies Colonial America]], Peter finds a reference to Jonas being posthumously convicted of the murder of two sailors in 1704. During her trial, Charity claims to possess the [[{{Seers}} second sight]], and describes the root cellar in which the bodies are hidden. Jonas holds that her second sight is a gift from {{God}}, and proclaims her innocent of witchcraft. However, Charity reluctantly breaks off contact with Peter to ensure that
* WithFriendsLikeThese: Charity tells her best friend Ursula Miller what she has learned of the
* WouldHurtAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify {{child prodig|y}}ies -- who are
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* AdaptedOut: The parson of Annes Town in 1700 is only mentioned briefly and is not named. In the short story by William M. Lee, Parson John Hix is a minor supporting character.
* AgeLift: In the 1967 short story of the same name by William M. Lee, Charity Payne is 11 years old in 1700 when she begins communicating with the 16-year-old Peter Wood in the present. In the adaptation, she is several years older. Although her age is not stated, she is seemingly closer to Peter's age. This change was made because the episode places more emphasis on Charity and Peter being each other's first love than the original story. There is also the scene in which Squire Jonas Hacker [[AttemptedRape attempts to rape]] Charity after claiming that she needed to disrobe so that he could check her for the [[MarkOfTheBeast mark of a witch]], which is toned down in the episode compared to the short story. She manages to fight him off in both versions.
* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he [[BurnTheWitch will have her burned at the stake for witchcraft]]. In reality, the most common method of execution for convicted witches in UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies was hanging.
* AttemptedRape: Squire Jonas Hacker attempts to rape Charity Payne, claiming that he needs to look for [[MarkOfTheBeast the Devil's mark]], after she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After attacking Hacker, she manages to escape unharmed.
* BurnTheWitch: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he will have her burned as a witch after she manages to fight off [[AttemptedRape his attempt to rape her]].
* CanonForeigner: Peter Wood has a younger brother named Bobby. In the short story by William M. Lee, he is an only child.
* TheConstant: There is a rock near Harmon Brook in Annes Town (later Anniston) called Bear Rock, which is so named because it resembles a bear bending down to drink from the stream. In 1700, Charity Payne carves a message of love for Peter Wood, their initials in a heart, under the bear's jaw on the left side. He finds it in 1985.
* DeathByChildbirth: Charity Payne's mother died while giving birth to her.
* FirstFriend: Peter Wood skipped two grades when he was younger and therefore found it very difficult to make friends. When Charity breaks off their telepathic contact, he tearfully tells her that she was the first real friend that he ever had. The closing narration makes it clear that they were also each other's FirstLove.
* GradeSkipper: Peter Wood tells Charity Payne that he skipped two grades when he was younger.
* MarkOfTheBeast: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne to strip so that he can search her body for the Devil's mark. She immediately realizes that Hacker [[AttemptedRape intends to rape her]] as Faith Tanner was extremely upset when he subjected her to the same search the previous year.
* PleaseSelectNewCityName: The village of Annes Town was renamed Anniston in the late 19th Century.
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Charity Payne, a Puritan girl living in the [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies colonial Massachusetts]] village of Annes Town in 1700, and Peter Wood, a teenage boy living in the Massachusetts town of Anniston in 1985, gain the ability to communicate with each other across time and see through each other's eyes after they both contract cholera. Charity and Peter can also experience sensations from the other's perspective. For instance, Peter introduces Charity to the unimaginable luxuries of his time such as orange juice and chocolate ice cream and she quickly becomes drunk when Peter has a glass of wine.
* {{Seers}}: After she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]], Charity Payne claims to have second sight and obliquely reveals that she is aware of the bodies of two murdered sailors hidden in Squire Jonas Hacker's root cellar. She had in fact learned of the bodies from a history book that Peter Wood found in 1985. As a result, Hacker finds her innocent of witchcraft, saying that second sight is a gift from {{God}} which his own grandmother possessed.
* SettingUpdate: Peter Wood's native time is 1985. In the short story by William M. Lee, it is 1965.
* ThirdEye: Master Croft's ewe has a lamb with three eyes. This is used as evidence when Charity Payne is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After Squire Jonas Hacker finds her innocent, he holds that the deformed lamb was as a result of a noxious plant growing on Croft's farm.
* WitchHunt: Charity Payne is accused of being a witch after she tells her best friend Ursula Miller of the wonders of 1985 that she has seen through Peter Wood's eyes or that he has told her about such as cars, television, airplanes, men walking on UsefulNotes/TheMoon and UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution. The "evidence" against her is her family's well being the only one in Annes Town whose water is not tainted and Master Croft's ewe giving birth to a lamb with a ThirdEye. While searching for references to Charity's trial in books on [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies colonial Massachusetts]], Peter finds a reference to Squire Jonas Hacker being posthumously convicted of the murder of two sailors in 1704. During her trial, Charity claims to possess [[{{Seers}} second sight]] and describes the root cellar in which the bodies are hidden. Squire Hacker holds that her second sight is a gift from {{God}} and proclaims her innocent of witchcraft. However, Charity reluctantly breaks off contact with Peter to ensure that nothing like this ever happens again.
* WithFriendsLikeThese: Charity Payne tells her best friend Ursula Miller what she has learned of the future through her telepathic contact with Peter Wood. Ursula then brings Charity's claims to the attention of Squire Jonas Hacker and Charity is accused of being a witch.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he [[BurnTheWitch will have her burned at the stake for witchcraft]]. In reality, the most common method of execution for convicted witches in UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies was hanging.
* AttemptedRape: Squire Jonas Hacker attempts to rape Charity Payne, claiming that he needs to look for [[MarkOfTheBeast the Devil's mark]], after she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After attacking Hacker, she manages to escape unharmed.
* BurnTheWitch: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he will have her burned as a witch after she manages to fight off [[AttemptedRape
* CanonForeigner: Peter Wood has a younger brother named Bobby. In the short story by William M. Lee, he is an only child.
* TheConstant: There is a rock near Harmon Brook in Annes Town (later Anniston) called Bear Rock, which is so named because it resembles a bear bending down to drink from the stream. In 1700, Charity Payne carves a message of love for Peter Wood, their initials in a heart, under the bear's jaw on the left side. He finds it in 1985.
* DeathByChildbirth: Charity Payne's mother died while giving birth to her.
* FirstFriend: Peter Wood skipped two grades when he was younger and therefore found it very difficult to make friends. When Charity breaks off their telepathic contact, he tearfully tells her that she was the first real friend that he ever had. The closing narration makes it clear that they were also each other's FirstLove.
* GradeSkipper: Peter Wood tells Charity Payne that he skipped two grades when he was younger.
* MarkOfTheBeast: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne to strip so that he can search her body for the Devil's mark. She immediately realizes that Hacker [[AttemptedRape intends to rape her]] as Faith Tanner was extremely upset when he subjected her to the same search the previous year.
* PleaseSelectNewCityName: The village of Annes Town was renamed Anniston in the late 19th Century.
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Charity Payne, a Puritan girl living in the [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies colonial Massachusetts]] village of Annes Town in 1700, and Peter Wood, a teenage boy living in the Massachusetts town of Anniston in 1985, gain the ability to communicate with each other across time and see through each other's eyes after they both contract cholera. Charity and Peter can also experience sensations from the other's perspective. For instance, Peter introduces Charity to the unimaginable luxuries of his time such as orange juice and chocolate ice cream and she quickly becomes drunk when Peter has a glass of wine.
* {{Seers}}: After she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]], Charity Payne claims to have second sight and obliquely reveals that she is aware of the bodies of two murdered sailors hidden in Squire Jonas Hacker's root cellar. She had in fact learned of the bodies from a history book that Peter Wood found in 1985. As a result, Hacker finds her innocent of witchcraft, saying that second sight is a gift from {{God}} which his own grandmother possessed.
* SettingUpdate: Peter Wood's native time is 1985. In the short story by William M. Lee, it is 1965.
* ThirdEye: Master Croft's ewe has a lamb with three eyes. This is used as evidence when Charity Payne is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After Squire Jonas Hacker finds her innocent, he holds that the deformed lamb was as a result of a noxious plant growing on Croft's farm.
* WitchHunt: Charity Payne is accused of being a witch after she tells her best friend Ursula Miller of the wonders of 1985 that she has seen through Peter Wood's eyes or that he has told her about such as cars, television, airplanes, men walking on UsefulNotes/TheMoon and UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution. The "evidence" against her is her family's well being the only one in Annes Town whose water is not tainted and Master Croft's ewe giving birth to a lamb with a ThirdEye. While
* WithFriendsLikeThese: Charity Payne tells her best friend Ursula Miller what she has learned of
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie Jordan wishes on his birthday to do well on the government exam. He does and it turns out people who do too well are killed.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify [[ChildProdigy child prodigies]]--who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
* DiedOnTheirBirthday: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be too intelligent and he is killed by the government.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify [[ChildProdigy child prodigies]]--who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
* DiedOnTheirBirthday: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be too intelligent and he is killed by the government.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie Jordan wishes on his birthday to do well on the government exam. He does does, and it turns out people who do too well are killed.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify[[ChildProdigy child prodigies]]--who {{child prodig|y}}ies -- who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
* DiedOnTheirBirthday: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be toointelligent intelligent, and he is killed by the government.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify
* DiedOnTheirBirthday: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be too
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* TallPoppySyndrome: Dickie Jordan is a naturally inquisitive, curious child who loves to read and learn. On his twelfth birthday, he's taken in for the government-mandated intelligence test, and hopes he'll do well. He does -- and that's a problem, as the state has made it a ''crime'' for people to be too smart. The whole point of the exam is to make sure that everyone stays the "right" level of stupid and unthinking, and -- as is the case with Dickie -- they kill any child who exceeds it.
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[[folder:Examination Day]]
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie Jordan wishes on his birthday to do well on the government exam. He does and it turns out people who do too well are killed.
* ABirthdayNotABreak: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be too intelligent and he is killed by the government.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify [[ChildProdigy child prodigies]]--who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
* DownerEnding: Do too well on the government test, get killed.
* {{Dystopia}}: [ChildProdigy child prodigies]] such as Dickie Jordan are killed for scoring too well on government tests.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie Jordan's parents are named Richard, Sr. and Ruth. In the short story by Henry Slesar, their first names are not given.
* PersecutedIntellectuals: The government exterminates anyone who scores too high on a mandatory examination at twelve years old. Dickie Jordan is one such victim.
* TruthSerums: Dickie Jordan is given a truth serum to ensure that he answers all of the questions on the government intelligence test as truthfully as possible.
* WouldHurtAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify [[ChildProdigy child prodigies]]--who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
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[[folder: A Message From Charity]]
* AdaptedOut: The parson of Annes Town in 1700 is only mentioned briefly and is not named. In the short story by William M. Lee, Parson John Hix is a minor supporting character.
* AgeLift: In the 1967 short story of the same name by William M. Lee, Charity Payne is 11 years old in 1700 when she begins communicating with the 16-year-old Peter Wood in the present. In the adaptation, she is several years older. Although her age is not stated, she is seemingly closer to Peter's age. This change was made because the episode places more emphasis on Charity and Peter being each other's first love than the original story. There is also the scene in which Squire Jonas Hacker [[AttemptedRape attempts to rape]] Charity after claiming that she needed to disrobe so that he could check her for the [[MarkOfTheBeast mark of a witch]], which is toned down in the episode compared to the short story. She manages to fight him off in both versions.
* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he [[BurnTheWitch will have her burned at the stake for witchcraft]]. In reality, the most common method of execution for convicted witches in UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies was hanging.
* AttemptedRape: Squire Jonas Hacker attempts to rape Charity Payne, claiming that he needs to look for [[MarkOfTheBeast the Devil's mark]], after she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After attacking Hacker, she manages to escape unharmed.
* BurnTheWitch: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he will have her burned as a witch after she manages to fight off [[AttemptedRape his attempt to rape her]].
* CanonForeigner: Peter Wood has a younger brother named Bobby. In the short story by William M. Lee, he is an only child.
* TheConstant: There is a rock near Harmon Brook in Annes Town (later Anniston) called Bear Rock, which is so named because it resembles a bear bending down to drink from the stream. In 1700, Charity Payne carves a message of love for Peter Wood, their initials in a heart, under the bear's jaw on the left side. He finds it in 1985.
* DeathByChildbirth: Charity Payne's mother died while giving birth to her.
* FirstFriend: Peter Wood skipped two grades when he was younger and therefore found it very difficult to make friends. When Charity breaks off their telepathic contact, he tearfully tells her that she was the first real friend that he ever had. The closing narration makes it clear that they were also each other's FirstLove.
* GradeSkipper: Peter Wood tells Charity Payne that he skipped two grades when he was younger.
* MarkOfTheBeast: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne to strip so that he can search her body for the Devil's mark. She immediately realizes that Hacker [[AttemptedRape intends to rape her]] as Faith Tanner was extremely upset when he subjected her to the same search the previous year.
* PleaseSelectNewCityName: The village of Annes Town was renamed Anniston in the late 19th Century.
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Charity Payne, a Puritan girl living in the [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies colonial Massachusetts]] village of Annes Town in 1700, and Peter Wood, a teenage boy living in the Massachusetts town of Anniston in 1985, gain the ability to communicate with each other across time and see through each other's eyes after they both contract cholera. Charity and Peter can also experience sensations from the other's perspective. For instance, Peter introduces Charity to the unimaginable luxuries of his time such as orange juice and chocolate ice cream and she quickly becomes drunk when Peter has a glass of wine.
* {{Seers}}: After she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]], Charity Payne claims to have second sight and obliquely reveals that she is aware of the bodies of two murdered sailors hidden in Squire Jonas Hacker's root cellar. She had in fact learned of the bodies from a history book that Peter Wood found in 1985. As a result, Hacker finds her innocent of witchcraft, saying that second sight is a gift from {{God}} which his own grandmother possessed.
* SettingUpdate: Peter Wood's native time is 1985. In the short story by William M. Lee, it is 1965.
* ThirdEye: Master Croft's ewe has a lamb with three eyes. This is used as evidence when Charity Payne is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After Squire Jonas Hacker finds her innocent, he holds that the deformed lamb was as a result of a noxious plant growing on Croft's farm.
* WitchHunt: Charity Payne is accused of being a witch after she tells her best friend Ursula Miller of the wonders of 1985 that she has seen through Peter Wood's eyes or that he has told her about such as cars, television, airplanes, men walking on UsefulNotes/TheMoon and UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution. The "evidence" against her is her family's well being the only one in Annes Town whose water is not tainted and Master Croft's ewe giving birth to a lamb with a ThirdEye. While searching for references to Charity's trial in books on [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies colonial Massachusetts]], Peter finds a reference to Squire Jonas Hacker being posthumously convicted of the murder of two sailors in 1704. During her trial, Charity claims to possess [[{{Seers}} second sight]] and describes the root cellar in which the bodies are hidden. Squire Hacker holds that her second sight is a gift from {{God}} and proclaims her innocent of witchcraft. However, Charity reluctantly breaks off contact with Peter to ensure that nothing like this ever happens again.
* WithFriendsLikeThese: Charity Payne tells her best friend Ursula Miller what she has learned of the future through her telepathic contact with Peter Wood. Ursula then brings Charity's claims to the attention of Squire Jonas Hacker and Charity is accused of being a witch.
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!!This episode contains the following tropes:
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[[folder:Examination Day]]
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Dickie Jordan wishes on his birthday to do well on the government exam. He does and it turns out people who do too well are killed.
* ABirthdayNotABreak: On his twelfth birthday, Dickie Jordan wishes that he will do well on the government's mandatory intelligence test. After the test is conducted, he is found to be too intelligent and he is killed by the government.
* DeathOfAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify [[ChildProdigy child prodigies]]--who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
* DownerEnding: Do too well on the government test, get killed.
* {{Dystopia}}: [ChildProdigy child prodigies]] such as Dickie Jordan are killed for scoring too well on government tests.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Dickie Jordan's parents are named Richard, Sr. and Ruth. In the short story by Henry Slesar, their first names are not given.
* PersecutedIntellectuals: The government exterminates anyone who scores too high on a mandatory examination at twelve years old. Dickie Jordan is one such victim.
* TruthSerums: Dickie Jordan is given a truth serum to ensure that he answers all of the questions on the government intelligence test as truthfully as possible.
* WouldHurtAChild: The totalitarian government gives tests that identify [[ChildProdigy child prodigies]]--who are then killed before they can grow up to question or threaten the power structure.
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[[folder: A Message From Charity]]
* AdaptedOut: The parson of Annes Town in 1700 is only mentioned briefly and is not named. In the short story by William M. Lee, Parson John Hix is a minor supporting character.
* AgeLift: In the 1967 short story of the same name by William M. Lee, Charity Payne is 11 years old in 1700 when she begins communicating with the 16-year-old Peter Wood in the present. In the adaptation, she is several years older. Although her age is not stated, she is seemingly closer to Peter's age. This change was made because the episode places more emphasis on Charity and Peter being each other's first love than the original story. There is also the scene in which Squire Jonas Hacker [[AttemptedRape attempts to rape]] Charity after claiming that she needed to disrobe so that he could check her for the [[MarkOfTheBeast mark of a witch]], which is toned down in the episode compared to the short story. She manages to fight him off in both versions.
* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he [[BurnTheWitch will have her burned at the stake for witchcraft]]. In reality, the most common method of execution for convicted witches in UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies was hanging.
* AttemptedRape: Squire Jonas Hacker attempts to rape Charity Payne, claiming that he needs to look for [[MarkOfTheBeast the Devil's mark]], after she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After attacking Hacker, she manages to escape unharmed.
* BurnTheWitch: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne that he will have her burned as a witch after she manages to fight off [[AttemptedRape his attempt to rape her]].
* CanonForeigner: Peter Wood has a younger brother named Bobby. In the short story by William M. Lee, he is an only child.
* TheConstant: There is a rock near Harmon Brook in Annes Town (later Anniston) called Bear Rock, which is so named because it resembles a bear bending down to drink from the stream. In 1700, Charity Payne carves a message of love for Peter Wood, their initials in a heart, under the bear's jaw on the left side. He finds it in 1985.
* DeathByChildbirth: Charity Payne's mother died while giving birth to her.
* FirstFriend: Peter Wood skipped two grades when he was younger and therefore found it very difficult to make friends. When Charity breaks off their telepathic contact, he tearfully tells her that she was the first real friend that he ever had. The closing narration makes it clear that they were also each other's FirstLove.
* GradeSkipper: Peter Wood tells Charity Payne that he skipped two grades when he was younger.
* MarkOfTheBeast: Squire Jonas Hacker tells Charity Payne to strip so that he can search her body for the Devil's mark. She immediately realizes that Hacker [[AttemptedRape intends to rape her]] as Faith Tanner was extremely upset when he subjected her to the same search the previous year.
* PleaseSelectNewCityName: The village of Annes Town was renamed Anniston in the late 19th Century.
* SeeingThroughAnothersEyes: Charity Payne, a Puritan girl living in the [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies colonial Massachusetts]] village of Annes Town in 1700, and Peter Wood, a teenage boy living in the Massachusetts town of Anniston in 1985, gain the ability to communicate with each other across time and see through each other's eyes after they both contract cholera. Charity and Peter can also experience sensations from the other's perspective. For instance, Peter introduces Charity to the unimaginable luxuries of his time such as orange juice and chocolate ice cream and she quickly becomes drunk when Peter has a glass of wine.
* {{Seers}}: After she is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]], Charity Payne claims to have second sight and obliquely reveals that she is aware of the bodies of two murdered sailors hidden in Squire Jonas Hacker's root cellar. She had in fact learned of the bodies from a history book that Peter Wood found in 1985. As a result, Hacker finds her innocent of witchcraft, saying that second sight is a gift from {{God}} which his own grandmother possessed.
* SettingUpdate: Peter Wood's native time is 1985. In the short story by William M. Lee, it is 1965.
* ThirdEye: Master Croft's ewe has a lamb with three eyes. This is used as evidence when Charity Payne is [[WitchHunt accused of witchcraft]]. After Squire Jonas Hacker finds her innocent, he holds that the deformed lamb was as a result of a noxious plant growing on Croft's farm.
* WitchHunt: Charity Payne is accused of being a witch after she tells her best friend Ursula Miller of the wonders of 1985 that she has seen through Peter Wood's eyes or that he has told her about such as cars, television, airplanes, men walking on UsefulNotes/TheMoon and UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution. The "evidence" against her is her family's well being the only one in Annes Town whose water is not tainted and Master Croft's ewe giving birth to a lamb with a ThirdEye. While searching for references to Charity's trial in books on [[UsefulNotes/TheThirteenAmericanColonies colonial Massachusetts]], Peter finds a reference to Squire Jonas Hacker being posthumously convicted of the murder of two sailors in 1704. During her trial, Charity claims to possess [[{{Seers}} second sight]] and describes the root cellar in which the bodies are hidden. Squire Hacker holds that her second sight is a gift from {{God}} and proclaims her innocent of witchcraft. However, Charity reluctantly breaks off contact with Peter to ensure that nothing like this ever happens again.
* WithFriendsLikeThese: Charity Payne tells her best friend Ursula Miller what she has learned of the future through her telepathic contact with Peter Wood. Ursula then brings Charity's claims to the attention of Squire Jonas Hacker and Charity is accused of being a witch.
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!! Examination Day
A young boy must take a government mandated intelligence test.
!! A Message From Charity
A teenage boy finds himself in telepathic contact with a teenage girl from 1700.
A young boy must take a government mandated intelligence test.
!! A Message From Charity
A teenage boy finds himself in telepathic contact with a teenage girl from 1700.