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-->'''Dennis/[=McKennon=]:''' Yes, Your Honour. [[StockLegalPhrases Some arrogant legal stuff]] and [[TheKillerWasLeftHanded a line about my client being right-handed]] [[ChekhovsGun that's important for the plot later.]]
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-->'''Dennis/[=McKennon=]:''' Yes, Your Honour. [[StockLegalPhrases Some arrogant legal stuff]] and [[TheKillerWasLeftHanded and a line about my client being right-handed]] [[ChekhovsGun that's important for the plot later.]]
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-->Robert/Shawcroft: Is there anything you'd like to add?
-->Dennis/[=McKennon=]: Yes, Your Honor. [[StockLegalPhrases Some arrogant legal stuff]] and [[TheKillerWasLeftHanded a line about my client being right-handed]] [[ChekhovsGun that's important for the plot later.]]
-->Dennis/[=McKennon=]: Yes, Your Honor. [[StockLegalPhrases Some arrogant legal stuff]] and [[TheKillerWasLeftHanded a line about my client being right-handed]] [[ChekhovsGun that's important for the plot later.]]
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-->Robert/Shawcroft: My God, you're good.
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-->Dennis/McKennon: Yes, Your Honor. [[StockLegalPhrases Some arrogant legal stuff]] and [[TheKillerWasLeftHanded a line about my client being right-handed]] [[ChekhovsGun that's important for the plot later.]]
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* PermanentPlaceholder: At one point, Dennis ends up mistaking a placeholder for improvised dialogue as one of his lines.
-->Robert/Shawcroft: Is there anything you'd like to add?
-->Dennis/McKennon: Yes, Your Honor. [[StockLegalPhrases Some arrogant legal stuff]] and [[TheKillerWasLeftHanded a line about my client being right-handed]] [[ChekhovsGun that's important for the plot later.]]
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-->Robert/Shawcroft: My God, you're good.
-->Robert/Shawcroft: Is there anything you'd like to add?
-->Dennis/McKennon: Yes, Your Honor. [[StockLegalPhrases Some arrogant legal stuff]] and [[TheKillerWasLeftHanded a line about my client being right-handed]] [[ChekhovsGun that's important for the plot later.]]
-->''(beat)''
-->Robert/Shawcroft: My God, you're good.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Dennis ends up saying a few of these due to misremembering his lines.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Invoked. Dennis ends up saying a few of these due to misremembering his lines.
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* AmoralAttorney: Dennis' character is a defense lawyer who only cares about winning cases and boasts about having no scruples, which is why his wife divorced him.
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** The government would not assign a prosecutor who had such a close personal relationship with the defence.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Carl starts the trial as a smug jerk who only cares about winning, but facing off with his ex-wife and his client's dishonesty cause him to make a SuddenPrincipledStand... a transition that might be more effective if it wasn't Dennis playing the part.
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--> "...''Blood!'' Pssssh...."
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* GargleBlaster: During the second flashback, a mix-up between the home set and the morgue set results in the bottle of brandy not being available for Chris and Max, forcing them to improvise with a bottle of blue cleaning fluid. The substitute is apparently strong enough to leave the two of them gasping out their next lines, not helped by Max's insistence on sticking to the script via finishing the bottle.
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* GargleBlaster: During the second flashback, a mix-up between the home set and the morgue set results in the bottle of brandy not being available for Chris and Max, forcing them to improvise with a bottle of blue cleaning fluid. The substitute is apparently strong enough to leave the two of them gasping out their next lines, not helped by Max's Chris's insistence on sticking to the script via finishing the bottle.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Jack's opening lines and actions in the flashback (standing at the open closet, seemingly saying into the mirror "Don't worry, it's going to be okay", before closing the door) along with Nigel assuming his wife, Angela, would be home when he arrives foreshadows that the third flashback reveals [[spoiler:that Jack and Angela were having an affair, with Jack's line actually being spoken to her, as she hid in the closet in hopes of keeping Nigel from finding out, with their failure to do so being the true reason for the fight that killed him.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Jack's opening lines and actions in the flashback (standing at the open closet, seemingly saying into the mirror "Don't worry, it's going to be okay", before closing the door) along with Nigel assuming his wife, Angela, would be home when he arrives foreshadows that the third flashback reveals [[spoiler:that that Jack and Angela were having an affair, with Jack's line actually being spoken to her, as she hid in the closet in hopes of keeping Nigel from finding out, with their failure to do so being the true reason for the fight that killed him.]]
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* ImplausibleDeniability: Chris ends up accidentally inducing this; the script is meant to have him simply deny the charges after the truth is revealed following the last flashback... but because Max's bloodback went off like a firehose all over him, Chris returns to the courtroom scene ''saturated with blood,'' claiming his innocence and looking even more unconvincing than originally intended.
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* ImplausibleDeniability: Chris ends up accidentally inducing this; the script is meant to have him simply deny the charges after the truth is revealed following the last flashback... but because Max's bloodback bloodpack went off like a firehose all over him, Chris returns to the courtroom scene ''saturated with blood,'' claiming his innocence and looking even more unconvincing than originally intended.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: When the third flashback cuts to the half-gym/morgue set, Max-as-Nigel takes a kettlebell out of Chris-as-Jack's hand and drops it on his foot.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: When the third flashback cuts to the half-gym/morgue set, Max-as-Nigel Max takes a kettlebell out of Chris-as-Jack's Chris' hand and drops it on his foot.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: When the third flashback cuts to the half-gym/medical room, Max-as-Nigel takes a kettlebell out of Chris-as-Jack's hand and drops it on his foot.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: When the third flashback cuts to the half-gym/medical room, half-gym/morgue set, Max-as-Nigel takes a kettlebell out of Chris-as-Jack's hand and drops it on his foot.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which is supposed to drive the plot of this play -- except Carl is portrayed by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky is portrayed by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jack seems to be a man falsely accused of murder, but he isn’t.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jack seems to be a man falsely accused of murder, but he isn’t.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The movable two-part sets would be impressive to witness in action, but as with most of Cornley's practical effects, not enough thought has gone into how they were implemented. Consequently, even ''before'' things go horribly wrong, Max gets his leg trapped between two halves of the set simply by sitting down too hard on the couch, while set changes end up knocking props from the walls in the morgue scene. Soon after, bits and pieces of the set get mixed up, resulting in disastrous falls, absent props, and some singularly desperate attempts to improvise.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other,which and this is supposed ''supposed'' to drive the plot of this play -- except Carl is portrayed by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, lines to save his life, and Becky is portrayed by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.off-script in any way, shape, or form.
*BitchInSheepsClothing: BitchInSheepsClothing:
** Jack seems to be a man falsely accused of murder, but he isn’t.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other,
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** Jack seems to be a man falsely accused of murder, but he isn’t.
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* GargleBlaster: During the second flashback, a mix-up between the home set and the morgue set results in the bottle of brandy not being available for Chris and Max, forcing them to improvise with a bottle of blue cleaning fluid. The substitute is apparently strong enough to leave the two of them gasping out their next lines, not helped by Max's insistence on sticking to the script via finishing the bottle.
* ImplausibleDeniability: Chris ends up accidentally inducing this; the script is meant to have him simply deny the charges after the truth is revealed following the last flashback... but because Max's bloodback went off like a firehose all over him, Chris returns to the courtroom scene ''saturated with blood,'' claiming his innocence and looking even more unconvincing than originally intended.
* OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank: Max's blood pack mechanism, having failed twice in a row during the previous flashbacks, goes into overdrive in flashback number three - and projects a ''geyser'' of fake blood into Chris's face, leaving him absolutely soaked in it.
* ImplausibleDeniability: Chris ends up accidentally inducing this; the script is meant to have him simply deny the charges after the truth is revealed following the last flashback... but because Max's bloodback went off like a firehose all over him, Chris returns to the courtroom scene ''saturated with blood,'' claiming his innocence and looking even more unconvincing than originally intended.
* OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank: Max's blood pack mechanism, having failed twice in a row during the previous flashbacks, goes into overdrive in flashback number three - and projects a ''geyser'' of fake blood into Chris's face, leaving him absolutely soaked in it.
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* TheLivingDead: Max simply cannot stay still for long enough to play a corpse.
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* TheLivingDead: Max simply cannot stay still for long enough to play a corpse.corpse.
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** The defence barrister's conduct. (A defence barrister who finds evidence that their client is guilty would advise them to plead guilty and refuse to represent them further otherwise, not pass it off secretly.)
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** The defence barrister's conduct. (A defence barrister who finds evidence that their client is guilty would advise them to plead guilty and if their client didn't they'd either refuse to represent them further otherwise, not (if they're allowed to by the judge) or restrict themselves to finding holes in the witnesses testimony/evidence. [[labelnote:Explanation]]Essentially British and Commonwealth lawyers can't lie, so you can't argue that your client didn't do it if they admitted to you that they did. However, the witness can still make mistakes in their testimony, the prosecutors can still make mistakes when presenting evidence and the burden of proof is on the prosecution to prove it 'beyond a reasonable doubt'. Thus, it's a defence lawyers job to point those out to avoid a miscarriage of justice and that's all a lawyer defending a client that they know is guilty '''can''' do.[[/labelnote]] They definitely would '''not''' pass it off secretly.secretly, because they'd get disbarred if caught.)
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which would drive the plot of this play -- except Carl is portrayed by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky is portrayed by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which would is supposed to drive the plot of this play -- except Carl is portrayed by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky is portrayed by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which would drive the plot of this play -- if Carl wasn't played by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky wasn't played by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which would drive the plot of this play -- if except Carl wasn't played is portrayed by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky wasn't played is portrayed by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl McKennon and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which would drive the plot of this play -- if Carl wasn't played by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky wasn't played by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl McKennon [=McKennon=] and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which would drive the plot of this play -- if Carl wasn't played by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky wasn't played by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Carl McKennon and his ex-wife Becky Sandhurst still have feelings for each other, which would drive the plot of this play -- if Carl wasn't played by Dennis who cannot remember his lines, and Becky wasn't played by Vanessa who cannot cope with going off-script.
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** The judge walking in wig-and-gown through the courthouse, and the judge being willing to chat with a defendant in his chambers (although this might be explained by corruption).
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** The judge walking in wig-and-gown through the courthouse, and the judge being willing to chat with a defendant in his chambers (although this might be explained by corruption).
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* Artistic License – Law: Deliberately and delightfully invoked and played for laughs throughout this episode. Such highlights including:
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* Artistic License – Law: ArtisticLicenseLaw: Deliberately and delightfully invoked and played for laughs throughout this episode. Such highlights including:
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* Artistic License – Law: Deliberately and delightfully invoked and played for laughs throughout this episode. Such highlights including:
** The wrong coat of arms displayed on the wall in the courtroom (it should be the UK Royal Arms, not... whatever arms are there).
** Characters addressing a High Court judge as "Your Honour" instead of "Your Lordship".
** The judge using a gavel, famously never used in England and Wales.
** Calling court security a "bailiff".
** Shouting "objection" in court like Americans.
** The defence barrister's conduct. (A defence barrister who finds evidence that their client is guilty would advise them to plead guilty and refuse to represent them further otherwise, not pass it off secretly.)
** Referring to a witness 'taking the stand' (it's called a witness box in England and Wales).
** The barrister referring to the judge as 'Justice' instead of 'Mr Justice'.
** The judge walking in wig-and-gown through the courthouse, and the judge being willing to chat with a defendant in his chambers (although this might be explained by corruption).
** The wrong coat of arms displayed on the wall in the courtroom (it should be the UK Royal Arms, not... whatever arms are there).
** Characters addressing a High Court judge as "Your Honour" instead of "Your Lordship".
** The judge using a gavel, famously never used in England and Wales.
** Calling court security a "bailiff".
** Shouting "objection" in court like Americans.
** The defence barrister's conduct. (A defence barrister who finds evidence that their client is guilty would advise them to plead guilty and refuse to represent them further otherwise, not pass it off secretly.)
** Referring to a witness 'taking the stand' (it's called a witness box in England and Wales).
** The barrister referring to the judge as 'Justice' instead of 'Mr Justice'.
** The judge walking in wig-and-gown through the courthouse, and the judge being willing to chat with a defendant in his chambers (although this might be explained by corruption).
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: When the third flashback cuts to the half-gym/medical room, Max takes a kettlebell out of Chris' hand and drops it on his foot.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: When the third flashback cuts to the half-gym/medical room, Max Max-as-Nigel takes a kettlebell out of Chris' Chris-as-Jack's hand and drops it on his foot.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: When the third flashback cuts to the half-gym/medical room, Max takes a kettlebell out of Chris' hand and drops it on his foot.
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-->'''Annie:''' It started off as a night of passion and happiness… piness… piness.
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-->'''Annie:''' It started off as a night of passion and happiness… piness… piness.piness...
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* RunningGag: This time, Johnathan isn’t allowed to fit onto the cramped set (despite being the only member of the jury with lines) and his second role as the newscaster gets butchered in editing.
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* RunningGag: This time, Johnathan Jonathan isn’t allowed to fit onto the cramped set (despite being the only member of the jury with lines) and his second role as the newscaster gets butchered in editing.
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Cornley presents the first legal drama they’ve ever staged (but not [[NoodleIncident the first they’ve ever been involved in]], in which the best defence lawyer in the country is up against his ex-wife in trying to get off a police officer accused on murdering his own brother, only to discover the shocking truth.
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Cornley presents the first legal drama they’ve ever staged (but not [[NoodleIncident the first they’ve ever been involved in]], in]]), in which the best defence lawyer in the country is up against his ex-wife in trying to get off a police officer accused on murdering his own brother, only to discover the shocking truth.
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This week, [[TheDitz Dennis]] has been cast in the lead role, due to a conversation with his grandmother that turned out to be legally binding and the sets were built in centimetres rather than inches. And that’s just pre-production…
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This week, [[TheDitz Dennis]] has been cast in the lead role, role due to a conversation with his grandmother that turned out to be legally binding binding, and the sets were built in centimetres rather than inches. And that’s just pre-production…
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-->'''Dennis:''' I get off with all my clients.
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-->'''Dennis:''' I get off with all my clients.clients!
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* OverlyLongGag: A failed cue to move the set for a flashback results in Chris bellowing "LIVING ROOM! ''LIVING ROOM''! '''''LIVING ROOM'''''!" for about a minute.
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* OverlyLongGag: A failed cue to move the set for a flashback results in Chris bellowing "LIVING ROOM! ''LIVING ROOM''! '''''LIVING ROOM'''''!" for about half a minute.
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* OverlyLongGag: A failed cue to move the set for a flashback results in Chris bellowing "LIVING ROOM! ''LIVING ROOM''! '''''LIVING ROOM'''''!" for about a minute.
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This week, Cornley presents the first legal drama they’ve ever staged (but not [[NoodleIncident the first they’ve ever been involved in]], in which the best defence lawyer in the country is up against his ex-wife in trying to get off a police officer accused on murdering his own brother, only to discover the shocking truth.
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!A Trial to Watch
Cornley presents the first legal drama they’ve ever staged (but not [[NoodleIncident the first they’ve ever been involved in]], in which the best defence lawyer in the country is up against his ex-wife in trying to get off a police officer accused on murdering his own brother, only to discover the shocking truth.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Jack's opening lines and actions in the flashback (standing at the open closet, seemingly saying into the mirror "Don't worry, it's going to be okay", before closing the door) along with Nigel assuming his wife, Angela, would be home when he arrives foreshadows that the third flashback reveals [[spoiler:that Jack and Angela were having an affair, with Jack's line actually being spoken to her, as she hid in the closet in hopes of keeping Nigel from finding out, with their failure to do so being the true reason for the fight that killed him.]]
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* RashomonStyle: Inadvertantly, due to the sets being misassembled, but there are still differences between the three flashbacks.
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* RashomonStyle: Inadvertantly, Inadvertently, due to the sets being misassembled, but there are still differences between the three flashbacks.
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* TheLivigDead: Max simply cannot stay still for long enough to play a corpse.
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* TheLivigDead: TheLivingDead: Max simply cannot stay still for long enough to play a corpse.
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This week, Cornley presents the first legal drama they’ve ever staged (but not [[NoodleIncident the first they’ve ever been involved in]], in which the best defence lawyer in the country is up against his ex-wife in trying to get off a police officer accused on murdering his own brother, only to discover the shocking truth.
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This week, [[TheDitz Dennis]] has been cast in the lead role, due to a conversation with his grandmother that turned out to be legally binding and the sets were built in centimetres rather than inches. And that’s just pre-production…
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!!”A Trial to Watch” contains examples of:
* AccidentalInnuendo: Dennis ends up saying a few of these due to misremembering his lines.
-->'''Dennis:''' I get off with all my clients.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jack seems to be a man falsely accused of murder, but he isn’t.
** The Judge comes off as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but Jack has evidence that he took bribes during a previous case and threatens to expose this.
* FlashbackBackBack: Three examples, with the first going off as scripted, the second coming in so late Chris has to yell and the third becomes an InnocentInnuendo.
-->'''Annie:''' It started off as a night of passion and happiness… piness… piness.
* RashomonStyle: Inadvertantly, due to the sets being misassembled, but there are still differences between the three flashbacks.
* RunningGag: This time, Johnathan isn’t allowed to fit onto the cramped set (despite being the only member of the jury with lines) and his second role as the newscaster gets butchered in editing.
* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: Max when his blood pack fails to release.
* TheLivigDead: Max simply cannot stay still for long enough to play a corpse.
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This week, [[TheDitz Dennis]] has been cast in the lead role, due to a conversation with his grandmother that turned out to be legally binding and the sets were built in centimetres rather than inches. And that’s just pre-production…
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!!”A Trial to Watch” contains examples of:
* AccidentalInnuendo: Dennis ends up saying a few of these due to misremembering his lines.
-->'''Dennis:''' I get off with all my clients.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jack seems to be a man falsely accused of murder, but he isn’t.
** The Judge comes off as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure, but Jack has evidence that he took bribes during a previous case and threatens to expose this.
* FlashbackBackBack: Three examples, with the first going off as scripted, the second coming in so late Chris has to yell and the third becomes an InnocentInnuendo.
-->'''Annie:''' It started off as a night of passion and happiness… piness… piness.
* RashomonStyle: Inadvertantly, due to the sets being misassembled, but there are still differences between the three flashbacks.
* RunningGag: This time, Johnathan isn’t allowed to fit onto the cramped set (despite being the only member of the jury with lines) and his second role as the newscaster gets butchered in editing.
* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: Max when his blood pack fails to release.
* TheLivigDead: Max simply cannot stay still for long enough to play a corpse.
