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-->'''Rayla''': ''"Please leave me alone. I don't want you to see me like this."''
-->'''Callum''': ''"I don't care if your crying, I'm here with you."''
-->'''Callum''': ''"I don't care if your crying, I'm here with you."''
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-->'''Callum''': ''"I
-->'''Callum:''' I don't care if your crying, I'm here with you.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: Its implied that the reason Rayla is so reluctant to admit how tormented she really is over "being ghosted" to Callum was because of her feelings for him; she didn't want someone she cares for to see her so vulnerable when she breaks down crying. Given this is [[NiceGuy Callum]] though, she needn't have worried.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: Its implied that the reason Rayla is so reluctant to admit how tormented she really is over "being ghosted" to Callum was because of her feelings for him; she didn't want someone she cares for to see her so in such a vulnerable when she breaks down crying.state. Given this is [[NiceGuy Callum]] though, she needn't have worried.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: IIts implied that the reason Rayla is so reluctant to admit how tormented she really is over "being ghosted" to Callum was because of her feelings for him; she didn't want someone she cares for to see her so vulnerable when she breaks down crying. Given this is [[NiceGuy Callum]] though, she needn't have worried.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: IIts Its implied that the reason Rayla is so reluctant to admit how tormented she really is over "being ghosted" to Callum was because of her feelings for him; she didn't want someone she cares for to see her so vulnerable when she breaks down crying. Given this is [[NiceGuy Callum]] though, she needn't have worried.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: Its implied that the reason Rayla was so reluctant to admit how tormented she really is over "being ghosted" to Callum was because of her feelings for him; she didn't want someone she cares for to see her so vulnerable. Given this is [[NiceGuy Callum]] though, she needn't have worried.
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* InsecureLoveInterest: Its IIts implied that the reason Rayla was is so reluctant to admit how tormented she really is over "being ghosted" to Callum was because of her feelings for him; she didn't want someone she cares for to see her so vulnerable.vulnerable when she breaks down crying. Given this is [[NiceGuy Callum]] though, she needn't have worried.
-->'''Rayla''': ''"Please leave me alone. I don't want you to see me like this."''
-->'''Callum''': ''"I don't care if your crying, I'm here with you."''
-->'''Rayla''': ''"Please leave me alone. I don't want you to see me like this."''
-->'''Callum''': ''"I don't care if your crying, I'm here with you."''
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*InsecureLoveInterest: Its implied that the reason Rayla was so reluctant to admit how tormented she really is over "being ghosted" to Callum was because of her feelings for him; she didn't want someone she cares for to see her so vulnerable. Given this is [[NiceGuy Callum]] though, she needn't have worried.
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*PostKissCatatonia: Rayla briefly induces this in Callum since he was not expecting such an intimate gesture from her.
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* KickTheDog:
-->'''Viren:''' I'm sorry it had to come to this.\\
'''Ezran:''' No, you're not.\\
'''Viren:''' ''({{beat}})'' [[BrutallyHonest No, I'm not.]]
-->'''Viren:''' I'm sorry it had to come to this.\\
'''Ezran:''' No, you're not.\\
'''Viren:''' ''({{beat}})'' [[BrutallyHonest No, I'm not.]]
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* ImpededMessenger: Nyx stops Ethari's message to the Dragon Queen and reads the message, allowing her to set up her gambit to steal Zym.
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* ImpededMessenger: Nyx stops intercepts Ethari's message to the Dragon Queen and reads the message, it, allowing her to set up her gambit to steal Zym.
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* ShoutOut: "Anyway, here's the [[Music/{{Oasis}} Wonderwall]]." And considering where is that wonderwall, it doubles as a StealthPun.
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* ShoutOut: "Anyway, here's the [[Music/{{Oasis}} Wonderwall]]." And considering where is that wonderwall, the "wonderwall" surrounds an oasis, it doubles as a StealthPun.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Rayla and Callum are stranded on the oasis, and Nyx has kidnapped Zym. Ezran is arrested and sent to prison after abdicating, and Viren is the new ruler.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Rayla and Callum are stranded on in the oasis, their relationship in limbo, and Nyx has kidnapped Zym. Ezran is arrested and sent to prison after abdicating, and Viren is the new ruler.
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Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions when Prince Kasef reveals he has prepared a siege on Katolis and will attack if they do not join him in a war against Xadia.
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Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions an ultimatum when Prince Kasef reveals he has prepared a siege on Katolis and will attack if they do not join him in a war against Xadia.
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Leaving her home, Rayla and Callum are forced to trust a strange Skywing elf named Nyx to guide them through the dangerous Midnight Desert.
Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions when Prince Kesaf reveals he has a siege ready on Katolis and will attack if he doesn't join them in the war against Xadia.
Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions when Prince Kesaf reveals he has a siege ready on Katolis and will attack if he doesn't join them in the war against Xadia.
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Leaving her home, the Silvergrove, Rayla and Callum are forced to trust a strange Skywing elf named Nyx to guide them through the dangerous Midnight Desert.
Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions when PrinceKesaf Kasef reveals he has prepared a siege ready on Katolis and will attack if he doesn't they do not join them him in the a war against Xadia.
Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions when Prince
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* ShoutOut: "Anyway, here's the [[Music/{{Oasis}} Wonderwall]]."
** And considering where is that wonderwall, it doubles as a StealthPun.
** And considering where is that wonderwall, it doubles as a StealthPun.
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* ShoutOut: "Anyway, here's the [[Music/{{Oasis}} Wonderwall]]."
**" And considering where is that wonderwall, it doubles as a StealthPun.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Rayla and Callum are stranded on the oasis, and Nyx has kidnapped Zym. Ezran is arrested and sent to prison after resigning, and Viren is the new ruler.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Rayla and Callum are stranded on the oasis, and Nyx has kidnapped Zym. Ezran is arrested and sent to prison after resigning, abdicating, and Viren is the new ruler.
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* ImpededMessenger: Nyx stops Ethari's message to the Dragon Queen and reads the message, allowing her to set up her gambit to steal Zym.
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** Which also doubles as a StealthPun.
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** Which also And considering where is that wonderwall, it doubles as a StealthPun.
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* ShoutOut: "Anyway, here's the Wonderwall."
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* ShoutOut: "Anyway, here's the Wonderwall.[[Music/{{Oasis}} Wonderwall]]."
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* ShoutOut: "Anyway, here's the Wonderwall."
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* ActorAllusion: Callum finds the boomerangs on the tip of Nyx's staff to be familiar, a clear and clever reference to his voice actor's previous role as [[BattleBoomerang Sokka]] on the show's SpiritualPredecessor ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''. The end credits even have a sketch of Callum with Sokka's boomerang.
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* MythologyGag: Doubling as an ActorAllusion, Callum finds the boomerangs on the tip of Nyx's staff to be familiar, a clear and clever reference to his voice actor's previous role as [[BattleBoomerang Sokka]] on the show's SpiritualPredecessor ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''. The end credits even have a sketch of Callum with Sokka's boomerang.
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* MythologyGag: Doubling as an ActorAllusion, Callum finds the boomerangs on the tip of Nyx's staff to be familiar, a clear and clever reference to his voice actor's previous role as [[BattleBoomerang Sokka]] on the show's SpiritualPredecessor ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''.
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* MythologyGag: Doubling as an ActorAllusion, Callum finds the boomerangs on the tip of Nyx's staff to be familiar, a clear and clever reference to his voice actor's previous role as [[BattleBoomerang Sokka]] on the show's SpiritualPredecessor ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''. The end credits even have a sketch of Callum with Sokka's boomerang.
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* EyeScream: Aaravos gives Viren the power to see him as a ghost, but he does it by having the caterpillar sew silk into his eyelid.
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* EyeScream: Aaravos gives Viren the power to see him as a ghost, but he does it by having the caterpillar sew spin silk into over his eyelid.eye. This doesn't appear to ''hurt'' so much as really squick Viren out.
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* MythologyGag: Doubling as an ActorAllusion, Callum finds the boomerangs on the tip of Nxy's staff to be familiar, a clear and clever reference to his voice actor's previous role as [[BattleBoomerang Sokka]] on the show's SpiritualPredecessor ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''.
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* MythologyGag: Doubling as an ActorAllusion, Callum finds the boomerangs on the tip of Nxy's Nyx's staff to be familiar, a clear and clever reference to his voice actor's previous role as [[BattleBoomerang Sokka]] on the show's SpiritualPredecessor ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Defied. The prospect of tens of thousands of deaths shock Ezran to the core.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Defied. The prospect of tens of thousands of deaths shock shocks Ezran to the core.
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* EyeScream: Aaravos gives Viren the power to see him as a ghost, but he does it by having the caterpillar sew silk in his eye.
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* EyeScream: Aaravos gives Viren the power to see him as a ghost, but he does it by having the caterpillar sew silk in into his eye.eyelid.
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* ShesNotMyGirlfriend: Nyx very clearly thinks that Callum and Rayla would share their sleeping bag, before both scream that they need two.
* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about it again.
* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about it again.
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* ShesNotMyGirlfriend: Nyx very clearly thinks that asks Callum and Rayla if they would like to share their a sleeping bag, before both scream that they need two.
* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about itagain.again when Callum is caught off-guard.
* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about it
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* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about it again.
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* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about it again.again.
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* MythologyGag: Doubling as an ActorAllusion, Callum finds the boomerangs on the tip of Nxy's staff to be familiar, a clear and clever reference to his voice actor's previous role as [[BattleBoomerang Sokka]] on the show's SpiritualPredecessor ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Defied. The prospect of tens of thousands of deaths shock Ezran to the core.
-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.
-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Rayla declares this after kissing Callum on impulse leads to an awkward moment between them.
* AMillionIsAStatistic: Defied. The prospect of tens of thousands of deaths shock Ezran to the core.
-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.
* AMillionIsAStatistic: Defied. The prospect of tens of thousands of deaths shock Ezran to the core.
-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Rayla and Callum are stranded on the oasis, and Nyx has kidnapped Zym. Ezran is arrested and sent to prison after resigning, and Viren is the new ruler.
* EyeScream: Aaravos gives Viren the power to see him as a ghost, but he does it by having the caterpillar sew silk in his eye.
* EyeScream: Aaravos gives Viren the power to see him as a ghost, but he does it by having the caterpillar sew silk in his eye.
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* ShesNotMyGirlfriend: Nyx very clearly thinks that Callum and Rayla would share their sleeping bag, before both scream that they need two.
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* ShesNotMyGirlfriend: Nyx very clearly thinks that Callum and Rayla would share their sleeping bag, before both scream that they need two.two.
* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about it again.
* ShipTease: Rayla kisses Callum after he says a litany of praises to her. Though she says they are not to speak about it again.
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-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.
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-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.Bait.
* SceneryPorn: The Midnight Desert is a beautiful landscape. A desert of black sand with large white rocks.
* ShesNotMyGirlfriend: Nyx very clearly thinks that Callum and Rayla would share their sleeping bag, before both scream that they need two.
* SceneryPorn: The Midnight Desert is a beautiful landscape. A desert of black sand with large white rocks.
* ShesNotMyGirlfriend: Nyx very clearly thinks that Callum and Rayla would share their sleeping bag, before both scream that they need two.
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->''"The night... is even worse."''
-->'''--Nyx''', about the desert
Leaving her home, Rayla and Callum are forced to trust a strange Skywing elf named Nyx to guide them through the dangerous Midnight Desert.
Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions when Prince Kesaf reveals he has a siege ready on Katolis and will attack if he doesn't join them in the war against Xadia.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Defied. The prospect of tens of thousands of deaths shock Ezran to the core.
-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.
->''"The night... is even worse."''
-->'''--Nyx''', about the desert
Leaving her home, Rayla and Callum are forced to trust a strange Skywing elf named Nyx to guide them through the dangerous Midnight Desert.
Meanwhile, Ezran is faced with hard decisions when Prince Kesaf reveals he has a siege ready on Katolis and will attack if he doesn't join them in the war against Xadia.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic: Defied. The prospect of tens of thousands of deaths shock Ezran to the core.
-->'''Ezran:''' 500 men and women. Some are moms and dads and have kids waiting for them at home. All of these are sons and daughters. Sisters, brothers, friends. They're real people, Bait.