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-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
-->'''Chakotay:''' Your name, my uniform. Not much difference. We both have to earn them.
-->'''Chakotay:''' Your name, my uniform. Not much difference. We both have to earn them.
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-->'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift, from my tribe. I cherish it, every day of my life! Just as I cherish the Federation uniform.
-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
CHAKOTAY: Your name, my uniform. [[NotSoDifferent Not much difference.]] We both have to earn them.
-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
CHAKOTAY: Your name, my uniform. [[NotSoDifferent Not much difference.]] We both have to earn them.
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-->'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift, from my tribe. I cherish it, every day of my life! Just as I cherish the Federation uniform.
-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
CHAKOTAY: Your name, my uniform. [[NotSoDifferent Not much difference.]] We both have to earn them.life!
-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
CHAKOTAY: Your name, my uniform. [[NotSoDifferent Not much difference.]] We both have to earn them.
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-->'''Kar:''' You're saying that my name and your uniform mean the same thing, but you're wrong.
-->'''Chakotay:''' Why? What's so different about us, aside from the fact that [[UngratefulBastard I keep saving your life and you keep threatening to kill me?]]
-->'''Kar:''' You're saying that my name and your uniform mean the same thing, but you're wrong.
-->'''Chakotay:''' Why? What's so different about us, aside from the fact that [[UngratefulBastard I keep saving your life and you keep threatening to kill me?]]
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-->'''Chakotay:''' ''Not 'Federation'! Chakotay! That's my name!''
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-->'''Chakotay:''' ''Not 'Federation'! Not 'Federation'. Chakotay! That's my name!''name!
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-->'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift gift, from my tribe. I cherish it it, every day of my life, just life! Just as I cherish the Federation uniform.
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* NotSoStoic: Chakotay has several of these, as Nog's attitude and opposing values rub against his.
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* NotSoStoic: Chakotay has loses his temper several of these, times, as Nog's Kar's attitude and opposing values rub against his.
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* NotSoStoic: Chakotay has several of these, as Nog's attitude and opposing values rub against his.
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-->'''Kar:''' You won't stop me from earning my name, Federation.
-->'''Chakotay:''' ''Not 'Federation'! Chakotay! That's my name!''
-->'''Kar:''' Did you have to ''earn'' it?
-->'''Chakotay:''' No, not exactly.
-->'''Kar:''' Then your name means nothing.
-->'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift from my tribe. I cherish it every day of my life, just as I cherish the Federation uniform.
-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
CHAKOTAY: Your name, my uniform. [[NotSoDifferent Not much difference.]] We both have to earn them.
-->'''Kar:''' You won't stop me from earning my name, Federation.
-->'''Chakotay:''' ''Not 'Federation'! Chakotay! That's my name!''
-->'''Kar:''' Did you have to ''earn'' it?
-->'''Chakotay:''' No, not exactly.
-->'''Kar:''' Then your name means nothing.
-->'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift from my tribe. I cherish it every day of my life, just as I cherish the Federation uniform.
-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
CHAKOTAY: Your name, my uniform. [[NotSoDifferent Not much difference.]] We both have to earn them.
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* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: Janeway leads the away mission.
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* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: Janeway leads and Tuvok go on the away mission.mission, leaving...Tom and Neelix in charge?
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* CutPhoneLines: The battle with Kar knocks out communications on Chakotay's shuttle, so he can't call Voyager. Chakotay has a NotSoStoic moment at this news.
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* CutPhoneLines: CutPhoneLines:
** The battle with Kar knocks out communications on Chakotay's shuttle, so he can't call Voyager. Chakotay has a NotSoStoic moment at thisnews.news.
** When Janeway and Tuvok beam down to the planet, the '[[TechnoBabble radiothermic interference]]' prevents them from contacting the ship.
** The battle with Kar knocks out communications on Chakotay's shuttle, so he can't call Voyager. Chakotay has a NotSoStoic moment at this
** When Janeway and Tuvok beam down to the planet, the '[[TechnoBabble radiothermic interference]]' prevents them from contacting the ship.
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* MovingTheGoalposts: Chakotay says that if he knew this was territory claimed by the Kazon-Ogla, he would have avoided it. Razik says their territorial claims change every day.
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* DeathCourse: The Kazon train their young warriors on planets rigged with booby traps.
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* DeathCourse: The Kazon train their young warriors on planets rigged with booby traps.{{booby trap}}s.
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* TheSpartanWay: "For the Kazon, live ammunition is a very effective teaching tool."
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Chakotay refuses to let Kar blow up with his ship, but Kar isn't grateful because he is now disgraced for being taken alive.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Chakotay refuses to let Kar blow up with his ship, but Kar isn't grateful because he is now disgraced for being taken alive. Then when it [[NoOneCouldSurviveThat appears Kar was killed in battle]], Kar complains because they were 'killed' while running away. [[NotSoStoic Even Chakotay loses his temper at this point]].
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* ExactWords: After a CommercialBreakCliffhanger, Chakotay and Kar wake up on the surface of the planet.
-->'''Chakotay:''' The computer said that transport wasn't recommended. It didn't say it was impossible.
-->'''Chakotay:''' The computer said that transport wasn't recommended. It didn't say it was impossible.
* LongList: Janeway interrupts Neelix when he starts listing his many roles on Voyager.
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* LongList: Janeway interrupts Neelix when he starts listing his many roles on Voyager.
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* ReactionShot: On Janeway every time she thinks Chakotay's shuttle might have been destroyed.
* SceneryPorn: The out-of-control shuttle spinning towards the moon that's orbiting a gas giant.
* SceneryPorn: The out-of-control shuttle spinning towards the moon that's orbiting a gas giant.
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* CaptainCrash: Chakotay loses a shuttle. [[InfiniteSupplies It won't be the last.]]
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* CaptainCrash: Chakotay loses a his first shuttle. [[InfiniteSupplies It won't be the last.]]
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* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: After taking Razik as a HumanShield, Chakotay offers Kar a chance to come with him. Figuring he can't get any more disgraced than he is now, Kar does so.
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* StandardFemaleGrabArea: GenderInvertedTrope when Radzik hauls the disgraced Kar around like this.
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* ProudWarriorRace: As opposed to Gangbangers InSpace
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* StandardFemaleGrabArea: GenderInvertedTrope whenRadzik Razik hauls the disgraced Kar around like this.
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* WorldBuilding: We get more insight into the Kazon.Kazon than just {{Gangbanger}}s InSpace
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* BattleTrophyAttackPatternAlpha: Evasive Pattern Theta-2.
* BattleTrophy: Adorning the walls of the Kazon vessel. Kar even proudly shows off a trophy that belonged to his dead brother.
* BattleTrophy: Adorning the walls of the Kazon vessel. Kar even proudly shows off a trophy that belonged to his dead brother.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Chakotay tries to reason with the Kazon, but his ThouShaltNotKill values don't sit well with their ARealManIsAKiller values.
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* DisappointedInYou: Kar just gasps a LittleNo when Razik says he forgives him.
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* LastMinuteWordSwap: Janeway assures Neelix that his meals are getting to be...''(eats something and reconsiders) almost certainly a highlight of every day.
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* LastMinuteWordSwap: LastSecondWordSwap: Janeway assures Neelix that his meals are getting to be...''(eats something and reconsiders) [[LethalChef reconsiders]])'' almost certainly a highlight of every day.
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* ARealManIsAKiller: Kar must kill a man to become Kazon-Ogla.
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* ARealManIsAKiller: Kar must kill a man to become Kazon-Ogla.take on a Kazon name.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Kar pleads with Chakotay to kill him, rather than face disgrace. "Because there are worse things than being killed by your enemy."
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* DontCallMeSir: Neelix has to VerbalBackspace after calling Janeway sir...ma'am...captain!
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: For the introduction of the Trabe in "Alliances".
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** For the introduction of the Trabe in"Alliances"."Alliances".
** Neelix is annoyed he wasn't given a chance to take part in Voyager's holodeck defense simulation. His desire to be in Security is a RunningGag in later seasons.
** For the introduction of the Trabe in
** Neelix is annoyed he wasn't given a chance to take part in Voyager's holodeck defense simulation. His desire to be in Security is a RunningGag in later seasons.
* LastMinuteWordSwap: Janeway assures Neelix that his meals are getting to be...''(eats something and reconsiders) almost certainly a highlight of every day.
* ProudWarriorRace: As opposed to Gangbangers InSpace
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* WouldntHurtAChild: Chakotay's explanation of why he didn't let Kar die. [[WouldHurtAChild Averted hard by Razik, who offers the other Kazon children an opportunity to kill Kar as a demonstration of the fate that lies in store for failures.]]
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* WouldntHurtAChild: Chakotay's explanation of why he didn't let 13 year-old Kar die. [[WouldHurtAChild Averted hard by Razik, who offers the other Kazon children an opportunity to kill Kar as a demonstration of the fate that lies in store for failures.]]
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* CutPhoneLines: The battle with Kar knocks out communications on Chakotay's shuttle, so he can't call Voyager. Chakotay has a NotSoStoic moment at this news.
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* CutPhoneLines: The battle with Kar knocks out communications on Chakotay's shuttle, so he can't call Voyager. Chakotay has a NotSoStoic moment at this news.
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* CutPhoneLines: The battle with Kar knocks out communications on Chakotay's shuttle, so he can't call Voyager. Chakotay has a NotSoStoic moment at this news.
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* TwoDSpace: Averted (see OldSchoolDogfighting).
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* TheMainCharactersDoEverything: Janeway leads the away missionmission.
* OldSchoolDogfighting: Chakotay takes out Kar's ship by looping over the top of it.
* OldSchoolDogfighting: Chakotay takes out Kar's ship by looping over the top of it.
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* ARealManIsAKiller: What the Kazon believe.
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* ARealManIsAKiller: What the Kazon believe.Kar must kill a man to become Kazon-Ogla.
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* LotusPosition: Chakotay performing the ''pakra'' ritual on the floor of the shuttle.
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* LotusPosition: Chakotay performing the ''pakra'' ritual on the floor of the shuttle. Good thing it's not a LevitatingLotusPosition, because he's hit by a ScreenShake.
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* BookEnds: Chakotay performs the pakra, at the end of the episode including Kar's name.
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* VisionQuest: Chakotay borrows a shuttle so he can perform a Native American ritual to commemorate his father that requires solitude.
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* VisionQuest: Chakotay borrows a shuttle so he can perform a Native American ritual to [[DueToTheDead commemorate his father father]] that requires solitude.
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* ARealManIsAKiller: What the Kazon believe.
* CaptainCrash: Chakotay loses a shuttle. [[InfiniteSupplies It won't be the last.]]
* CaptainCrash: Chakotay loses a shuttle. [[InfiniteSupplies It won't be the last.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: For the introduction of the Trabe in "Alliances".
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* {{Fingore}}: If Kar is captured by another clan after becoming an outcast, they cut off a finger. And there's more clans than he has fingers.
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* HeyItsThatGuy: Kar is played by Aron Eisenberg, who also plays Nog on Deep Space Nine.
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Alone in a shuttlecraft to perform a Native American ritual in memory of his father, Chakotay is attacked by a Kazon ship manned by a teenager, Kar. Chakotay disables the Kazon ship's engines, then beams Kar off just before it explodes.
To Chakotay's surprise, Kar is unhappy to be rescued. Kazon youth earn their place in the clan by killing an enemy, and he was supposed to either kill Chakotay or die in battle. Because he did neither, he'll never earn his full name and will forever be an outcast among his people.
Chakotay's shuttle is captured by a larger Kazon vessel led by Razik, the leader of Kar's clan, the Ogla. Chakotay escapes, and invites Kar to come with him, an offer that he accepts. With Razik's ship in pursuit, the two of them beam down to a moon used by the Kazon as a training course. Voyager arrives to rescue them, but Chakotay is wondering how he can undo the harm he accidentally did and make it possible for Kar to rejoin his people.
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* CurbStompBattle: Chakotay's shuttle takes multiple hits from the Kazon ship with no effect, then destroys it with one shot.
* DeathCourse: The Kazon train their young warriors on planets rigged with booby traps.
* HeyItsThatGuy: Kar is played by Aron Eisenberg, who also plays Nog on Deep Space Nine.
* KlingonPromotion: Invoked by Kar when he [[spoiler:kills Razik instead of Chakotay to gain his name and his place in the clan.]]
* UnwantedRescue: Kar is not pleased to be alive.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Chakotay's explanation of why he didn't let Kar die. [[WouldHurtAChild Averted hard by Razik, who offers the other Kazon children an opportunity to kill Kar as a demonstration of the fate that lies in store for failures.]]
To Chakotay's surprise, Kar is unhappy to be rescued. Kazon youth earn their place in the clan by killing an enemy, and he was supposed to either kill Chakotay or die in battle. Because he did neither, he'll never earn his full name and will forever be an outcast among his people.
Chakotay's shuttle is captured by a larger Kazon vessel led by Razik, the leader of Kar's clan, the Ogla. Chakotay escapes, and invites Kar to come with him, an offer that he accepts. With Razik's ship in pursuit, the two of them beam down to a moon used by the Kazon as a training course. Voyager arrives to rescue them, but Chakotay is wondering how he can undo the harm he accidentally did and make it possible for Kar to rejoin his people.
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!!This episode provides examples of:
* CurbStompBattle: Chakotay's shuttle takes multiple hits from the Kazon ship with no effect, then destroys it with one shot.
* DeathCourse: The Kazon train their young warriors on planets rigged with booby traps.
* HeyItsThatGuy: Kar is played by Aron Eisenberg, who also plays Nog on Deep Space Nine.
* KlingonPromotion: Invoked by Kar when he [[spoiler:kills Razik instead of Chakotay to gain his name and his place in the clan.]]
* UnwantedRescue: Kar is not pleased to be alive.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Chakotay's explanation of why he didn't let Kar die. [[WouldHurtAChild Averted hard by Razik, who offers the other Kazon children an opportunity to kill Kar as a demonstration of the fate that lies in store for failures.]]
