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When Razik and company find the pair, Kar is holding Chakotay at phaserpoint. However, Kar then states that Chakotay is not his enemy; Razik is. He shoots and kills Razik, then surrenders to Haliz, proclaiming him the new First Maje. Haliz accepts Kar's actions and gives him his Olga name: Jal Karden. Chakotay is allowed to leave, but the newly named Jal Karden tells him that he will kill him if he ever sees him again. Chakotay says he understands and beams away. Back on the ship, Chakotay performs his ritual asking for his father's spirit to watch over him and Karden.
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When Razik and company find the pair, Kar is holding Chakotay at phaserpoint. However, Kar then states that Chakotay is not his enemy; Razik is. He shoots and kills Razik, then surrenders to Haliz, proclaiming him the new First Maje. Haliz accepts Kar's actions and gives him his Olga name: Jal Karden. Chakotay is allowed to leave, but the newly named Jal Karden tells him that he will kill him if he ever sees him again. Chakotay says he understands and beams away. Back on the ship, Chakotay performs his ritual asking for his father's spirit to watch over him and Karden.
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* CurbStompBattle: Chakotay's shuttle takes multiple hits from the Kazon ship with no effect, then destroys it with one shot.
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* CurbStompBattle: Chakotay's shuttle takes multiple hits from the Kazon Kar's ship with no effect, then destroys it with one shot.
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* GetOut: After being accepted back into the Kazon-Ogla, Karden formally tells Chakotay and the other Voyager crewmembers to get the hell out of their territory. No-one argues.
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* GetOut: After being accepted back into the Kazon-Ogla, Karden formally tells Chakotay and the other Voyager crewmembers to get the hell out of their territory. No-one No one argues.
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When Razik and company find the pair, Kar is holding Chakotay at phaserpoint. However, Kar then states that Chakotay is not his enemy; Razik is. He shoots and kills Razik, then surrenders to Haliz, proclaiming him the new First Raje. Haliz accepts Kar's actions and gives him his Olga name: Jal Karden. Chakotay is allowed to leave, but the newly named Jal Karden tells him that he will kill him if he ever sees him again. Chakotay says he understands and beams away. Back on the ship, Chakotay performs his ritual asking for his father's spirit to watch over him and Karden.
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When Razik and company find the pair, Kar is holding Chakotay at phaserpoint. However, Kar then states that Chakotay is not his enemy; Razik is. He shoots and kills Razik, then surrenders to Haliz, proclaiming him the new First Raje.Maje. Haliz accepts Kar's actions and gives him his Olga name: Jal Karden. Chakotay is allowed to leave, but the newly named Jal Karden tells him that he will kill him if he ever sees him again. Chakotay says he understands and beams away. Back on the ship, Chakotay performs his ritual asking for his father's spirit to watch over him and Karden.
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* ShootYourMate: Played straight for once when Razik gives Chakotay a phaser to [[EvilCannotComprehendGood shoot Kar in exchange for his life]]. The weapon must work, because Chakotay uses it to take Razik hostage and free Kar instead.
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* ShootYourMate: Played straight for once when Razik gives Chakotay a phaser to [[EvilCannotComprehendGood shoot Kar in exchange for his life]]. The weapon must work, because Chakotay uses it to take Razik hostage and free Kar instead. Razik was trying to demonstrate that an enemy you don't kill will kill you instead, so it makes sense he'd give Chakotay a working phaser.
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* CaptainCrash: Chakotay loses his first shuttle. [[InfiniteSupplies It won't be the last.]]
* [[CaptainCrash Commander Crash]]: Chakotay loses his first shuttle. [[InfiniteSupplies It won't be the last.]]
* PlotHole: Chakotay doesn't have his medicine bundle when he beams down to the moon, yet it's shown to be intact at the end of the episode. Perhaps it was retrieved along with the wreckage of the shuttle?
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* SeriesContinuityError: Chakotay doesn't have his medicine bundle when he beams down to the moon, yet it's shown to be intact at the end of the episode. Perhaps it was retrieved along with the wreckage of the shuttle?
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* SchmuckBait: Haliz insists they go one way. Tuvok insists they go another way. Razik agrees with Tuvok, saying Haliz is trying to misdirect them. The away team proceed in a single group and all get trapped under the same forcefield. [[WhatAnIdiot Razik rightly shows his contempt.]]
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* SchmuckBait: Haliz insists they go one way. Tuvok insists they go another way. Razik agrees with Tuvok, saying Haliz is trying to misdirect them. The away team proceed in a single group and all get trapped under the same forcefield. [[WhatAnIdiot [[IdiotBall Razik rightly shows his contempt.]]
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Chakotay is taken prisoner by the Kazon, but so is Kar. The Kazon teen explains that he was supposed to kill his enemy or die trying. The leader of the Kazon, First Maje Razik, appears, and Kar tries to protest that his failure was not his fault. Razik forgives Kar, which distresses Kar even more. The execution is scheduled for that night. After Kar is taken away, Razik explains to Chakotay that he is a prisoner because anyone in uniform entering Kazon-Olga space is an enemy to them. Meanwhile, on ''Voyager'', the crew notice Chakotay's absence and begin tracking him down.
Razik brings Chakotay into a large gathering room, where he meets several Kazon children who are being indoctrinated into their warrior society. Chakotay gives them a friendly greeting, hoping to give them a positive first impression of Starfleet, but when Razik asks which of them would like to kill Chakotay, they all instantly volunteer. He then has Kar brought in and insists that Chakotay be the one to execute him. Instead, Chakotay takes Razik hostage and demands his shuttlecraft. Kar gets the drop on Razik's second in command, Haliz, and joins him. They board Chakotay's shuttlecraft and crash land on a moon, Tarok, where the Kazon usually train. They camp out on the planet, and during the night, Kar contemplates killing Chakotay but does not go through with it.
After awakening, Chakotay confronts Kar on not killing him, and Kar admits that Chakotay is no longer his enemy. He explains that the Kazon-Olga hate men in uniform so much because they only recently freed themselves from slavery to the Trabe. However, Chakotay says that he's willing to allow Kar to temporarily kill him to earn his name. ''Voyager'' gets close enough to contact him, and he tells them to be prepared to resuscitate them.
''Voyager'' catches up to Chakotay's last known location and hail Razik's ship. He claims that he killed Chakotay, but Neelix correctly deduces that the Kazon did not do so and are unwilling to attack them so close to their training moon, forcing Razik to concede and allow the crew to beam down and search for Chakotay. On the moon's surface, Razik and a group of Kazon also beam down claiming to want to help. However, they quickly trick the crew into a forcefield trap and then run off to pursue Chakotay and Kar alone.
Razik brings Chakotay into a large gathering room, where he meets several Kazon children who are being indoctrinated into their warrior society. Chakotay gives them a friendly greeting, hoping to give them a positive first impression of Starfleet, but when Razik asks which of them would like to kill Chakotay, they all instantly volunteer. He then has Kar brought in and insists that Chakotay be the one to execute him. Instead, Chakotay takes Razik hostage and demands his shuttlecraft. Kar gets the drop on Razik's second in command, Haliz, and joins him. They board Chakotay's shuttlecraft and crash land on a moon, Tarok, where the Kazon usually train. They camp out on the planet, and during the night, Kar contemplates killing Chakotay but does not go through with it.
After awakening, Chakotay confronts Kar on not killing him, and Kar admits that Chakotay is no longer his enemy. He explains that the Kazon-Olga hate men in uniform so much because they only recently freed themselves from slavery to the Trabe. However, Chakotay says that he's willing to allow Kar to temporarily kill him to earn his name. ''Voyager'' gets close enough to contact him, and he tells them to be prepared to resuscitate them.
''Voyager'' catches up to Chakotay's last known location and hail Razik's ship. He claims that he killed Chakotay, but Neelix correctly deduces that the Kazon did not do so and are unwilling to attack them so close to their training moon, forcing Razik to concede and allow the crew to beam down and search for Chakotay. On the moon's surface, Razik and a group of Kazon also beam down claiming to want to help. However, they quickly trick the crew into a forcefield trap and then run off to pursue Chakotay and Kar alone.
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Chakotay is taken prisoner by the Kazon, but so is Kar. The Kazon teen explains that he was supposed to kill his enemy or die trying. The leader of the Kazon, First Maje Razik, appears, and Kar tries to protest that his failure was not his fault. Razik forgives Kar, which distresses Kar even more. The execution more for good cause. Kar is scheduled for to be executed that night. After Kar is taken away, Razik explains to Chakotay that he is a prisoner because anyone in uniform entering Kazon-Olga space is an enemy to them. Meanwhile, on ''Voyager'', the crew notice Chakotay's absence and begin tracking him down.
Razik brings Chakotay into a large gathering room, where he meets several Kazon children who are being indoctrinated into their warriorsociety.culture. Chakotay gives them a friendly greeting, hoping to give them a positive first impression of Starfleet, but when Razik asks which of them would like to kill Chakotay, they all instantly volunteer. He Razik then has Kar brought in and insists that Chakotay be the one to execute him. Instead, Chakotay takes Razik hostage and demands his shuttlecraft. Kar gets the drop on Razik's second in command, Haliz, and joins him. They board Chakotay's shuttlecraft and crash land on a moon, Tarok, where the Kazon usually train. use for training. They camp out on the planet, in some caves, and during the night, Kar contemplates killing Chakotay but does not go through with it.
After awakening, Chakotay confronts Kar on not killing him, and Kar admits that Chakotay is no longer his enemy. He explains that the Kazon-Olga hate men in uniform so much because they only recently freed themselves from slavery to the Trabe. However, Chakotay says that he's willing to allow Kar to temporarily kill him to earn hisname. name once ''Voyager'' gets close enough to contact him, shows up and he tells them to be prepared to resuscitate them.
can revive him.
''Voyager'' catches up to Chakotay's last known location andhail hails Razik's ship. He claims that he killed Chakotay, but Neelix correctly deduces that the Kazon Razik did not do so and are is unwilling to attack them so close to their the Kazon training moon, forcing Razik to concede and allow the crew to beam down and search for Chakotay. On the moon's surface, Razik and a group of Kazon also beam down arrive, claiming to want to help. However, they quickly trick the crew into a forcefield trap and then run off to pursue Chakotay and Kar alone.
Razik brings Chakotay into a large gathering room, where he meets several Kazon children who are being indoctrinated into their warrior
After awakening, Chakotay confronts Kar on not killing him, and Kar admits that Chakotay is no longer his enemy. He explains that the Kazon-Olga hate men in uniform so much because they only recently freed themselves from slavery to the Trabe. However, Chakotay says that he's willing to allow Kar to temporarily kill him to earn his
''Voyager'' catches up to Chakotay's last known location and
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* ExactWords / ItsTheOnlyWay: After a CommercialBreakCliffhanger, Chakotay and Kar wake up on the surface of the moon.
-->'''Chakotay:''' The computer said that transport wasn't recommended. It didn't say it was impossible.
-->'''Chakotay:''' The computer said that transport wasn't recommended. It didn't say it was impossible.
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* IdiotBall: Chakotay takes a shuttle far from Voyager so he can be alone for the ''pakra'' ritual. AesopAmnesia is avoided however, as the episode ends on him doing the ritual in his quarters, which he does from now on in the series.
* ItsTheOnlyWay: After a CommercialBreakCliffhanger, Chakotay and Kar wake up on the surface of the moon.
-->'''Chakotay:''' The computer said that transport wasn't recommended. It didn't say it was impossible.
-->'''Chakotay:''' The computer said that transport wasn't recommended. It didn't say it was impossible.
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* NotSoStoic: Chakotay loses his temper several times, as Kar's attitude and opposing values rub against his.
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* NotSoStoic: Chakotay loses his temper several times, times as Kar's attitude and opposing values rub against his.
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* RedShirt: Averted. Janeway, Tuvok, Kes and a nameless ensign beam down to a planet strewn with booby traps. None of them die.
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Alone in a shuttlecraft to perform a Native American ritual in memory of his father, Chakotay is attacked by a Kazon ship manned by a teenager, Kar. Chakotay disables the Kazon ship's engines, then beams Kar off just before it explodes.
To Chakotay's surprise, Kar is unhappy to be rescued. Kazon youth earn their place in the clan by killing an enemy, and he was supposed to either kill Chakotay or die in battle. Because he did neither, he'll never earn his full name and will forever be an outcast among his people.
Chakotay's shuttle is captured by a larger Kazon vessel led by Razik, the leader of Kar's clan, the Ogla. Chakotay escapes, and invites Kar to come with him, an offer that he accepts. With Razik's ship in pursuit, the two of them beam down to a moon used by the Kazon as a training course. Voyager arrives to rescue them, but Chakotay is wondering how he can undo the harm he accidentally did and make it possible for Kar to rejoin his people.
To Chakotay's surprise, Kar is unhappy to be rescued. Kazon youth earn their place in the clan by killing an enemy, and he was supposed to either kill Chakotay or die in battle. Because he did neither, he'll never earn his full name and will forever be an outcast among his people.
Chakotay's shuttle is captured by a larger Kazon vessel led by Razik, the leader of Kar's clan, the Ogla. Chakotay escapes, and invites Kar to come with him, an offer that he accepts. With Razik's ship in pursuit, the two of them beam down to a moon used by the Kazon as a training course. Voyager arrives to rescue them, but Chakotay is wondering how he can undo the harm he accidentally did and make it possible for Kar to rejoin his people.
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Alone in a shuttlecraft to perform a Native American ritual in memory of his father, Chakotay is attacked by a Kazon Kazon-Ogla ship manned by a teenager, Kar. Kar, who must kill an enemy to earn his Ogla name in a rite of passage. Chakotay disables manages to outfight the Kazon and hit the ship's engines, then engines. Before the ship can explode, he beams Kar off just before it explodes.
Tointo his own shuttle and subdues him. While returning to ''Voyager'', Chakotay finds a Kazon ship and hails them, letting them know he has one of their own aboard. The ship begins tractoring the shuttlecraft in, in spite of Chakotay's surprise, efforts to escape. He's surprised that Kar seems equally worried about returning to his people.
Chakotay isunhappy to be rescued. taken prisoner by the Kazon, but so is Kar. The Kazon youth earn their place in the clan by killing an enemy, and teen explains that he was supposed to either kill his enemy or die trying. The leader of the Kazon, First Maje Razik, appears, and Kar tries to protest that his failure was not his fault. Razik forgives Kar, which distresses Kar even more. The execution is scheduled for that night. After Kar is taken away, Razik explains to Chakotay or die that he is a prisoner because anyone in battle. Because he did neither, he'll never earn his full name and will forever be uniform entering Kazon-Olga space is an outcast among his people.
enemy to them. Meanwhile, on ''Voyager'', the crew notice Chakotay's shuttle is captured by a larger Kazon vessel led by Razik, the leader of Kar's clan, the Ogla. absence and begin tracking him down.
Razik brings Chakotayescapes, into a large gathering room, where he meets several Kazon children who are being indoctrinated into their warrior society. Chakotay gives them a friendly greeting, hoping to give them a positive first impression of Starfleet, but when Razik asks which of them would like to kill Chakotay, they all instantly volunteer. He then has Kar brought in and invites Kar to come with him, an offer insists that he accepts. With Chakotay be the one to execute him. Instead, Chakotay takes Razik hostage and demands his shuttlecraft. Kar gets the drop on Razik's ship second in pursuit, the two of them beam down to command, Haliz, and joins him. They board Chakotay's shuttlecraft and crash land on a moon used by moon, Tarok, where the Kazon as a training course. Voyager arrives to rescue them, usually train. They camp out on the planet, and during the night, Kar contemplates killing Chakotay but does not go through with it.
After awakening, Chakotay confronts Kar on not killing him, and Kar admits that Chakotay iswondering how he can undo no longer his enemy. He explains that the harm he accidentally did and make it possible for Kazon-Olga hate men in uniform so much because they only recently freed themselves from slavery to the Trabe. However, Chakotay says that he's willing to allow Kar to rejoin temporarily kill him to earn his people.
name. ''Voyager'' gets close enough to contact him, and he tells them to be prepared to resuscitate them.
''Voyager'' catches up to Chakotay's last known location and hail Razik's ship. He claims that he killed Chakotay, but Neelix correctly deduces that the Kazon did not do so and are unwilling to attack them so close to their training moon, forcing Razik to concede and allow the crew to beam down and search for Chakotay. On the moon's surface, Razik and a group of Kazon also beam down claiming to want to help. However, they quickly trick the crew into a forcefield trap and then run off to pursue Chakotay and Kar alone.
When Razik and company find the pair, Kar is holding Chakotay at phaserpoint. However, Kar then states that Chakotay is not his enemy; Razik is. He shoots and kills Razik, then surrenders to Haliz, proclaiming him the new First Raje. Haliz accepts Kar's actions and gives him his Olga name: Jal Karden. Chakotay is allowed to leave, but the newly named Jal Karden tells him that he will kill him if he ever sees him again. Chakotay says he understands and beams away. Back on the ship, Chakotay performs his ritual asking for his father's spirit to watch over him and Karden.
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After awakening, Chakotay confronts Kar on not killing him, and Kar admits that Chakotay is
''Voyager'' catches up to Chakotay's last known location and hail Razik's ship. He claims that he killed Chakotay, but Neelix correctly deduces that the Kazon did not do so and are unwilling to attack them so close to their training moon, forcing Razik to concede and allow the crew to beam down and search for Chakotay. On the moon's surface, Razik and a group of Kazon also beam down claiming to want to help. However, they quickly trick the crew into a forcefield trap and then run off to pursue Chakotay and Kar alone.
When Razik and company find the pair, Kar is holding Chakotay at phaserpoint. However, Kar then states that Chakotay is not his enemy; Razik is. He shoots and kills Razik, then surrenders to Haliz, proclaiming him the new First Raje. Haliz accepts Kar's actions and gives him his Olga name: Jal Karden. Chakotay is allowed to leave, but the newly named Jal Karden tells him that he will kill him if he ever sees him again. Chakotay says he understands and beams away. Back on the ship, Chakotay performs his ritual asking for his father's spirit to watch over him and Karden.
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* TwoDSpace: Averted (see OldSchoolDogfighting).
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Chakotay tries to reason with the Kazon, but his ThouShaltNotKill values don't sit well with their ARealManIsAKiller values.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Chakotay tries to reason with the Kazon, but his ThouShaltNotKill values don't sit well with their ARealManIsAKiller values.
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-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
-->'''Chakotay:''' Your name, my uniform. Not much difference. We both have to earn them.
-->'''Kar:''' You're saying that my name and your uniform mean the same thing, but you're wrong.
-->'''Chakotay:''' Why? What's so different about us, aside from the fact that [[UngratefulBastard I keep saving your life and you keep threatening to kill me?]]
-->'''Chakotay:''' Your name, my uniform. Not much difference. We both have to earn them.
-->'''Kar:''' You're saying that my name and your uniform mean the same thing, but you're wrong.
-->'''Chakotay:''' Why? What's so different about us, aside from the fact that [[UngratefulBastard I keep saving your life and you keep threatening to kill me?]]
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-->'''Kar:''' I should respect you because you wear that uniform?
-->'''Chakotay:'''uniform?\\
'''Chakotay:''' Your name, my uniform. Not much difference. We both have to earnthem.
-->'''Kar:'''them.\\
'''Kar:''' You're saying that my name and your uniform mean the same thing, but you'rewrong.
-->'''Chakotay:'''wrong.\\
'''Chakotay:''' Why? What's so different about us, aside from the fact that [[UngratefulBastard I keep saving your life and you keep threatening to kill me?]]
-->'''Chakotay:'''
'''Chakotay:''' Your name, my uniform. Not much difference. We both have to earn
-->'''Kar:'''
'''Kar:''' You're saying that my name and your uniform mean the same thing, but you're
-->'''Chakotay:'''
'''Chakotay:''' Why? What's so different about us, aside from the fact that [[UngratefulBastard I keep saving your life and you keep threatening to kill me?]]
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* RuleOfThrees: After Kar stops Chakotay from walking into a BoobyTrap, Chakotay says "Well, it looks like you just saved my life. Twice more and we'll be even." Kar forgoes two further opportunities to kill Chakotay.
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* RuleOfThrees: After Kar stops Chakotay from walking into a BoobyTrap, Chakotay says "Well, it looks like you just saved my life. Twice more and [[MakesUsEven we'll be even." ]]" Kar forgoes two further opportunities to kill Chakotay.
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-->'''Kar:''' You won't stop me from earning my name, Federation.
-->'''Chakotay:''' Not 'Federation'. Chakotay! That's my name!
-->'''Kar:''' Did you have to ''earn'' it?
-->'''Chakotay:''' No, not exactly.
-->'''Kar:''' Then your name means nothing.
-->'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift, from my tribe. I cherish it, every day of my life!
-->'''Chakotay:''' Not 'Federation'. Chakotay! That's my name!
-->'''Kar:''' Did you have to ''earn'' it?
-->'''Chakotay:''' No, not exactly.
-->'''Kar:''' Then your name means nothing.
-->'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift, from my tribe. I cherish it, every day of my life!
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-->'''Kar:''' You won't stop me from earning my name, Federation.
-->'''Chakotay:'''Federation.\\
'''Chakotay:''' Not 'Federation'. Chakotay! That's myname!
-->'''Kar:'''name!\\
'''Kar:''' Did you have to ''earn''it?
-->'''Chakotay:'''it?\\
'''Chakotay:''' No, notexactly.
-->'''Kar:'''exactly.\\
'''Kar:''' Then your name meansnothing.
-->'''Chakotay:'''nothing.\\
'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift, from my tribe. I cherish it, every day of my life!
-->'''Chakotay:'''
'''Chakotay:''' Not 'Federation'. Chakotay! That's my
-->'''Kar:'''
'''Kar:''' Did you have to ''earn''
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'''Chakotay:''' No, not
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'''Kar:''' Then your name means
-->'''Chakotay:'''
'''Chakotay:''' My name was a gift, from my tribe. I cherish it, every day of my life!
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* CommercialBreakCliffhanger: The shuttle is ComingInHot and they're too far away from the surface for safe teleportation. [[CliffhangerCopout Chakotay and Kar teleport anyway, and survive]] thanks to a combination of ExactWords and PlotArmor.
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* CommercialBreakCliffhanger: The shuttle is ComingInHot and they're too far away from the surface for safe teleportation. transport. [[CliffhangerCopout Chakotay and Kar teleport transport anyway, and survive]] thanks to a combination of ExactWords and PlotArmor.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: The ''pakra'' ritual is entirely fictional, being more akin to Asian ancestor worship.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: The ''pakra'' ritual is entirely fictional, being more akin to Asian ancestor worship. They did get right the fact that a proper vision quest requires isolation, unlike what was shown in "The Cloud".
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Chakotay refuses to let Kar blow up with his ship, but Kar isn't grateful because he is now disgraced for being taken alive. Then when it [[NoOneCouldSurviveThat appears Kar was killed in battle]], Kar complains because they were 'killed' while running away. [[NotSoStoic Even Chakotay loses his temper at this point]].
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Chakotay refuses to let Kar blow up with his ship, but Kar isn't grateful because he is now disgraced for being taken alive. Then when it [[NoOneCouldSurviveThat [[DeathFakedForYou appears Kar was killed in battle]], Kar complains because they were 'killed' while running away. [[NotSoStoic Even Chakotay loses his temper at this point]].
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* {{Fingore}}: If Kar is captured by another clan after becoming an outcast, they cut off a finger. And there's more clans than he has fingers because their number changes every day.
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* {{Fingore}}: If Kar is captured by another clan after becoming an outcast, they cut off a finger. And there's more clans than he has fingers because [[AlwaysChaoticEvil their number changes every day.day]].
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* PhlebotinumBreakdown: Voyager can't just scan the moon and beam Chakotay up because of radiothermic interference from the concealed weaponry in the DeathCourse. Of course the transport/communication problems [[PlotDrivenBreakdown are sorted out in time to beam everyone out at the end.]]
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* PhlebotinumBreakdown: Voyager can't just scan the moon and beam Chakotay up because of radiothermic interference from the concealed weaponry in the DeathCourse. Of course the transport/communication problems [[PlotDrivenBreakdown are sorted out in time to beam everyone out up at the end.]]
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* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: After taking Razik as a HumanShield, Chakotay offers Kar a chance to come with him. Figuring he can't get any more disgraced than he is now, Kar does so.
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* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: After taking Razik as a HumanShield, Chakotay offers Kar a chance to come with him. Figuring he can't get any more disgraced than he is now, Kar does so.
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* KillMeNowOrForeverStayYourHand: After Kar kills Razik, he drops the weapon and offers his life or loyalty to Haliz. [[KlingonPromotion First Maje Haliz]] accepts his loyalty.
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* KillMeNowOrForeverStayYourHand: KillMeNowOrForeverStayYourHand:
** Kar points his weapon at Chakotay while he's asleep, but can't pull the trigger. The next day Chakotay reveals [[PlayingPossum he was awake the whole time.]]
-->'''Chakotay:''' You think I'm going to get much sleep around an Ogla warrior who's threatened to kill me? Why didn't you go through with it?
** After Kar kills Razik, he drops the weapon and offers his life or loyalty to Haliz. [[KlingonPromotion First Maje Haliz]] accepts his loyalty.
** Kar points his weapon at Chakotay while he's asleep, but can't pull the trigger. The next day Chakotay reveals [[PlayingPossum he was awake the whole time.]]
-->'''Chakotay:''' You think I'm going to get much sleep around an Ogla warrior who's threatened to kill me? Why didn't you go through with it?
** After Kar kills Razik, he drops the weapon and offers his life or loyalty to Haliz. [[KlingonPromotion First Maje Haliz]] accepts his loyalty.
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* PlayingPossum: Kar points his weapon at Chakotay while he's asleep, but can't pull the trigger. The next day Chakotay reveals he was awake the whole time.
-->"You think I'm going to get much sleep around an Ogla warrior who's threatened to kill me? Why didn't you go through with it?"
-->"You think I'm going to get much sleep around an Ogla warrior who's threatened to kill me? Why didn't you go through with it?"
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* BattleTrophy: Trophies adorn the walls of the Kazon vessel. Kar even proudly shows off a trophy that belonged to his dead brother, killed by another Kazon to earn his name.
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* BattleTrophy: Trophies adorn the walls of the Kazon vessel. Kar even [[DeliberateValuesDissonance proudly shows off a trophy that belonged to his dead brother, killed by another Kazon to earn his name.name]].
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* DeathCourse: The Kazon train their young warriors on planets rigged with {{booby trap}}s.
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* DeathCourse: DeadlyTrainingArea: The Kazon train their young warriors on planets rigged with {{booby trap}}s.
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* ProudWarriorRace: The Kazon-Ogla
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* ProudWarriorRace: The Kazon-OglaKazon-Ogla, though it's largely deconstructed. Chakotay makes no secret of the fact that the Kazons' method of raising young men disgusts him, in a way that has rarely if ever been aimed at, say, the Klingons.
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* ExactWords: After a CommercialBreakCliffhanger, Chakotay and Kar wake up on the surface of the moon.
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* ExactWords: ExactWords / ItsTheOnlyWay: After a CommercialBreakCliffhanger, Chakotay and Kar wake up on the surface of the moon.
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* GetOut: After being accepted back into the Kazon-Ogla, Karden formally tells Chakotay and the other Voyager crewmembers to get the hell out of their territory. No-one argues.
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** Chakotay shows the Kazon children he's not a threat. However when Razik offers them the opportunity to kill Chakotay, they all reach for the weapon he's offering.
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** Chakotay shows tries to show the Kazon children he's not a threat. However when Razik offers them the opportunity to kill Chakotay, they all reach for the weapon he's offering.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Just how much of that moon was covered by booby traps anyway?
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* ScienceFictionWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Just how much of that moon was covered by booby traps anyway?
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** Chakotay snaps at Kar that land isn't worth fighting for, which is an odd statement for an ex-Maquis guerrilla. [[RewatchBonus His reaction makes more sense]] after we find in "Tattoo" that his father died fighting the Cardassian attempt to seize their homeworld, and Chakotay was estranged from him at the time.
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** Chakotay snaps at Kar that land isn't worth fighting for, which is an odd statement for an ex-Maquis guerrilla. [[RewatchBonus His reaction makes more sense]] sense after we find discover in "Tattoo" "Tattoo"]] that his father died fighting the Cardassian attempt to seize their homeworld, and as a teenager Chakotay rejected his father's ideals of a spiritual connection to the land, and joined Starfleet instead. His father was estranged from him at later killed defending their land against the time.Cardassians.
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** Chakotay offers Kar a place on Voyager, which Kar rejects because he will just end up dying far from home. Cue ReactionShot from Chakotay.
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* ObliviousGuiltSlinging:ObliviousGuiltSlinging: A possible explanation for Chakotay's NotSoStoic behavior.
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** Kar calling Chakotay 'Federation', and forcing him to constantly defend their values, would also remind Chakotay of how he deserted from Starfleet over the Federation's decision not to defend the Maquis colonies.
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** Chakotay snaps at Kar that land isn't worth fighting for, which is an odd statement for an ex-Maquis guerrilla. [[RewatchBonus His reaction makes more sense]] after we find in "Tattoo" that his father died fighting the Cardassian attempt to seize their homeworld, and Chakotay was estranged from him at the time.
** Chakotay snaps at Kar that land isn't worth fighting for, which is an odd statement for an ex-Maquis guerrilla. [[RewatchBonus His reaction makes more sense]] after we find in "Tattoo" that his father died fighting the Cardassian attempt to seize their homeworld, and Chakotay was estranged from him at the time.
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* SpaceX: "He'd rather die than run like a Calogan dog with you, Federation."
