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* OffTheShelfFX: The model of the Echo Papa 607 drone was created by Dan Curry, from a L'eggs pantyhose container and a shampoo bottle.
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* OffTheShelfFX: The model of the Echo Papa 607 drone was created by Dan Curry, from a L'eggs pantyhose container container, two plastic Easter eggs, and a shampoo bottle.
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An away team
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On the planet, the away team realizes that the next drone attack will probably be their last. In the pit, Picard discovers the computer that operates the sales hologram and learns that the attacks on his
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Reality Ensues is about characters expecting reality to behave like fiction.
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** When Logan tries to pull rank in assuming command, Geordi reminds him that since Captain Picard himself put him in command, only Picard or another commanding officer (another Captain or Admiral) can remove him from that post.
** Also, how Picard is able to overcome the weapon system on the planet which is about to be "demonstrated" to them by a particularly pushy automated salesman: agree to buy it. It immediately shuts down.
** When Logan tries to pull rank in assuming command, Geordi reminds him that since Captain Picard himself put him in command, only Picard or another commanding officer (another Captain or Admiral) can remove him from that post.
** Also, how Picard is able to overcome the weapon system on the planet which is about to be "demonstrated" to them by a particularly pushy automated salesman: agree to buy it. It immediately shuts down.
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* FrictionlessReentry: Averted. Geordi specifically has ''Enterprise'' scrape the planet's atmosphere, betting that the probe will follow and trigger an InvisibilityFlicker from the reentry.
--> '''Tsu:''' Scanners locked!\\
'''Worf:''' Weapons locked!\\
'''Geordi:''' ''Fire!''
--> '''Tsu:''' Scanners locked!\\
'''Worf:''' Weapons locked!\\
'''Geordi:''' ''Fire!''
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Capitalism doesn't really save the day.
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* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism (or at least feigning it) literally saves the day. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place. ZigZaggingTrope then?
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* BluffTheImpostor: The holographic Captain Paul Rice unquestioningly accepts Riker's answer to which ship he's serving on, [[Creator/ShirleyTemple "The Lollipop, it's a good ship,"]] which tips Riker off. Although given that Riker probably knew that there was no way Rice could have appeared out of nowhere on the planet in the first place, he was [[{{Troll}} probably just having a laugh anyway]].
* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism (or at least feigning it) literally saves the day. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place.
* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism (or at least feigning it) literally saves the day. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place.
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* BluffTheImpostor: The holographic Captain Paul Rice unquestioningly accepts Riker's answer to which ship he's serving on, [[Creator/ShirleyTemple "The Lollipop, it's a good ship,"]] which tips Riker off. Although given that Riker probably knew that already suspected there was no way something wrong with Rice could have appeared out of nowhere just showing up on the planet in the first place, his own separated from his ship and asking probing questions about Riker's ship, he was [[{{Troll}} probably just having a laugh while evading the questions anyway]].
* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism (or at least feigning it) literally saves the day. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place. ZigZaggingTrope then?
* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism (or at least feigning it) literally saves the day. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place. ZigZaggingTrope then?
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* OutOfCharacterAlert: What confirmed for Riker that Paul Rice wasn't real was that at no point did he call him [[FirstNameBasis "Will"]] despite their friendship.
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* BluffTheImpostor: The holographic Captain Paul Rice unquestioningly accepts Riker's answer to which ship he's serving on, [[Creator/ShirleyTemple "The Lollipop, it's a good ship,"]] which tips Riker off.
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* BluffTheImpostor: The holographic Captain Paul Rice unquestioningly accepts Riker's answer to which ship he's serving on, [[Creator/ShirleyTemple "The Lollipop, it's a good ship,"]] which tips Riker off. Although given that Riker probably knew that there was no way Rice could have appeared out of nowhere on the planet in the first place, he was [[{{Troll}} probably just having a laugh anyway]].
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* CuttingTheKnot: How do you stop a rogue weapon salesman program from "demonstrating" its wares on you? Tell it that you're suitably impressed and will buy it.
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* LightningBruiser: The Echo Papa 607 drones inflict deadly damage, can easily dodge enemy fire, and as they are destroyed, their newer iterations get DeflectorShields.
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* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism literally saves the day. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place.
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* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism (or at least feigning it) literally saves the day. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place.
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* AdaptiveAbility: Each time the weapons are defeated, the system analyzes its defeat and produces an upgraded version capable of defending itself against what last destroyed it. The planetside weapon gains shields and gets better at dodging, while the orbiting weapon gains cloaking.
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* AdaptiveAbility: Each time the weapons are defeated, the system analyzes its defeat and produces an upgraded version capable of defending itself against what last destroyed it. The planetside weapon gains shields DeflectorShields and gets better at dodging, while the orbiting weapon gains cloaking.an InvisibilityCloak.
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* MildlyMilitary: Really, Picard is a senior officer of a de facto SpaceNavy and doesn't know first aid?
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* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism literally saves the day.
** Unless one considers the fact capitalism created the problem in the first place.
** Unless one considers the fact capitalism created the problem in the first place.
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* BrokenAesop: For all of Gene's tirades against capitalism, here capitalism literally saves the day.
** Unless one considers the fact capitalism createdday. Then again, it also caused the problem in the first place. place.
* DisastrousDemonstration: The entire plot is driven by a weapons system set on demo mode that treats everything on and orbiting the planet as targets to demonstrate its effectiveness on.
** Unless one considers the fact capitalism created
* DisastrousDemonstration: The entire plot is driven by a weapons system set on demo mode that treats everything on and orbiting the planet as targets to demonstrate its effectiveness on.
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* RealityEnsues: When Logan tries to pull rank in assuming command, Geordi reminds him that since Captain Picard himself put him in command, only Picard or another commanding officer (another Captain or Admiral) can remove him from that post.
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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
** When Logan tries to pull rank in assuming command, Geordi reminds him that since Captain Picard himself put him in command, only Picard or another commanding officer (another Captain or Admiral) can remove him from that post.
** When Logan tries to pull rank in assuming command, Geordi reminds him that since Captain Picard himself put him in command, only Picard or another commanding officer (another Captain or Admiral) can remove him from that post.
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** Unless one considers the fact capitalism created the problem in the first place.
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--->'''Picard:''' Mr. La Forge, when I left this ship, it was in one piece. I would appreciate your returning it to me in the same condition. Do you concur, Number One?\\
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--->'''Picard:''' Mr. La Forge, when I left this ship, it was in one piece. [[YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle I would appreciate your returning it to me in the same condition.condition]]. Do you concur, Number One?\\
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Trapped on the surface of an abandoned planet, an away team becomes unwitting participants in the demonstration of an advanced weapons system. In orbit, the ''Enterprise'' falls victim to the same system. Also known as the one where Geordi has his SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome moment being in command.
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Trapped on the surface of an abandoned planet, an away team becomes unwitting participants in the demonstration of an advanced weapons system. In orbit, the ''Enterprise'' falls victim to the same system. Also known as the one where Geordi has his MomentOfAwesome SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome being in command.
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* LetsSplitUpGang: Tasha suggests this as a countermeasure against the final drone, but Riker points out that it'll still get them no matter where they go.
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** According to Riker, when he was at Starfleet Academy Captain Rice took an exam that offered three choices. He rejected all of them and offered his own, ''fourth'', option. Now the same test is given with four choices.
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** According to Riker, when he was at Starfleet Academy Captain Rice took an exam that offered three choices. He rejected all of them and offered his own, ''fourth'', option. Now He got the top score and now the same test is given with four choices.
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--->'''Picard:''' Mr. La Forge, when I left this ship, it was in one piece. I would appreciate your returning it to me in the same condition. Don't you agree, Number One?\\
'''Riker:''' Yes, sir.
'''Riker:''' Yes, sir.
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--->'''Picard:''' Mr. La Forge, when I left this ship, it was in one piece. I would appreciate your returning it to me in the same condition. Don't Do you agree, concur, Number One?\\
'''Riker:'''Yes, Absolutely, sir.
'''Riker:'''
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: When Riker and Tasha are wondering how to safely get down the hole to reach Picard and Crusher when they can't climb. {{Justified}} in that Data is sturdy enough to withstand a fall that could kill a human, as he then demonstrates.
--> '''Data:''' I can do it, Commander.\\
--> '''Data:''' I can do it, Commander.\\
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: StatingTheSimpleSolution:
** When Riker and Tasha are wondering how to safely get down the hole to reach Picard and Crusher when they can't climb. {{Justified}} in that Data is sturdy enough to withstand a fall that could kill a human, as he then demonstrates.
--> ---> '''Data:''' I can do it, Commander.\\
** When Riker and Tasha are wondering how to safely get down the hole to reach Picard and Crusher when they can't climb. {{Justified}} in that Data is sturdy enough to withstand a fall that could kill a human, as he then demonstrates.
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** Crusher's suggestion for stopping the Echo Papa 607: "Why don't you just shut it off?" This inspires Picard to agree to buy the system, ending the demonstration.
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** Also, how Picard is able to overcome the weapon system on the planet which is about to be "demonstrated" to them by a particularly pushy automated salesman: agree to buy it. It immediately shuts down.
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Trapped on the surface of an abandoned planet, an away team becomes unwitting participants in the demonstration of an advanced weapons system. In orbit, the ''Enterprise'' falls victim to the same system.
system. Also known as the one where Geordi has his MomentOfAwesome being in command.
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Removed the reference to Picard not having basic first aid knowledge. It was never stated that he didn't have first aid knowledge. While he did rely on some specialist medical knowledge from Crusher around the medicinal properties of certain plants, he appeared to be trying to keep her conscious when he was getting her to answer questions about her treatment not just standing around hopelessly like he had no understanding of first aid.
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* MildlyMilitary: What is a naval officer like Picard doing without ''some'' basic training in first aid? It's supposed to be an indication that Starfleet so relies on its medical technology that most of its officers are helpless without it, but comes across as rather far-fetched.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Chief Engineer Logan (in his only appearance) is more concerned with trying to pull rank on Geordi than the fact that they are under attack and out of contact with the away team, opposing Geordi's plans no matter what he does.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Chief Engineer Logan (in his only appearance) is more concerned with trying to pull rank on Geordi than the fact that they are under attack and out of contact with the away team, [[CommanderContrarian opposing Geordi's plans no matter what he does.does]].
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* AbsenteeActor: No Wesley in this one.
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* KindaBusyHere: Geordi says this when Picard calls the ''Enterprise'' to let them know that the away team is all right, as he's busy fighting the drone in orbit.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Picard trying to keep Crusher conscious.
--> "Stay awake. That's an order."
--> "Stay awake. That's an order."
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* FrictionlessReentry: Geordi plays with this in an odd way by invoking the aversion to trigger an InvisibilityFlicker in the drone.
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* FrictionlessReentry: Averted. Geordi plays with this in an odd way by invoking specifically has ''Enterprise'' scrape the aversion to planet's atmosphere, betting that the probe will follow and trigger an InvisibilityFlicker in from the drone.reentry.
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[[caption-width-right:350:'''PEW PEW PEWWW''']]
[[caption-width-right:350:'''PEW PEW PEWWW''']]
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* OffTheShelfFX: The model of the Echo Papa 607 drone was created by Dan Curry, from a L'eggs pantyhose container and a shampoo bottle.
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* RippedFromTheHeadlines: Maurice Hurley saw the plot as commentary on the sale of American Grumman F-14 Tomcats to Iran taken to the "ultimate conclusion".
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* AdaptiveAbility: Each time the weapons are defeated, the system analyzes its defeat and produces an upgraded version capable of defending itself against what last destroyed it. The planetside weapon gains shields and gets better at dodging, while the orbiting weapon gains cloaking.
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--> '''Tsu:''' Scanners locked!
--> '''Worf:''' Weapons locked!
--> '''Geordi:''' ''Fire!''
* FromBadToWorse: How the weapons are designed to work.
--> '''Worf:''' Weapons locked!
--> '''Geordi:''' ''Fire!''
* FromBadToWorse: How the weapons are designed to work.
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--> '''Tsu:''' Scanners locked!
-->locked!\\
'''Worf:''' Weaponslocked!
-->locked!\\
'''Geordi:'''''Fire!''
* FromBadToWorse: How the weapons are designed to work.''Fire!''
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'''Worf:''' Weapons
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* FromBadToWorse: How the weapons are designed to work.