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* HoldingYourShoulderMeansInjury: After Elyon's balcony gets blown up, Aldarn holds his left shoulder.
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* InternalReveal: Not only Jade finally confirms to Vathek and Tynar that she's not a creation of Phobos, but she also tells them, the other Knights and Phobos about what she knows about Nerissa's manipulations.
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* InternalReveal: Not only Jade finally confirms to Vathek and Tynar that she's not a creation of Phobos, but she also tells them, the other Knights and Phobos about what she knows about Nerissa's manipulations.
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** The Samurai Khan escorts accompanying Jade to the prison are carrying banners depicting either the symbol she used during her first time as the Queen or Tarakudo's face.
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* ThisMeansWar: Raythor deduces that the presence of a Shadowkhan troop possibly searching for Jade indicates she could be someone of great importance among her people. This makes him worry if all the Guardians and rebels' hostility towards Jade have sparked a war with another world.
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* ThisMeansWar: Raythor deduces that the presence of a Shadowkhan troop possibly searching for Jade indicates she could be someone of great importance among her people. This makes him worry if all the Guardians and rebels' hostility towards Jade have sparked a war with another world.
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* ZergRush: As Tynar puts it, two new Shadowkhan seem to fill the place of everyone taken down. This enables them to keep the castle's defenders on their toes and eventually overwhelm all of Infinite City's wardens.
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* ZergRush: As Tynar puts it, two new Shadowkhan seem to fill the place of everyone taken down. This enables them to keep the castle's defenders on their toes and eventually overwhelm all of the Infinite City's wardens.
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'''Jade''': I...do...not...work...for Phobos!
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phobos surprises everyone by acting politely and kindly towards Jade/Kage to the point of apologizing for the way his sister and her followers have treated her with ever since she first came to Meridian.
* PetTheDog: Phobos actually congratulates Raythor for having made an ally out of Jade.
* PetTheDog: Phobos actually congratulates Raythor for having made an ally out of Jade.
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* OhCrap: Phobos calling Jade a royal fills Vathek and Tynar with dread.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phobos surprises everyone by acting politely and kindly towards Jade/Kage to the point of apologizing for the way his sister and her followers have treated herwith ever since she first came to Meridian.
* PetTheDog: Though he's acting in the name of his own self-interests, Phobosactually treats Jade with unexpected civility and congratulates Raythor for having made an ally out of Jade.her.
* PragmaticVillainy: Phobos is the first one to figure out that Jade is royalty, so he takes a civil approach with her in order to get closer to reclaiming his throne.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phobos surprises everyone by acting politely and kindly towards Jade/Kage to the point of apologizing for the way his sister and her followers have treated her
* PetTheDog: Though he's acting in the name of his own self-interests, Phobos
* PragmaticVillainy: Phobos is the first one to figure out that Jade is royalty, so he takes a civil approach with her in order to get closer to reclaiming his throne.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: When Phobos assesses to Jade that she was all along more than everyone assumed, she replies that people tend to underestimate her only to regret it later.
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* CallBack: With Vathek subdued, Jade brings up the beginning of their antagonistic relationship when he had her in chains in that same place and called her a beast.
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** With Vathek subdued, Jade brings up the beginning of their antagonistic relationship when he had her in chains in that same place and called her abeast.beast.
** Jade and Phobos acknowledge that they've never properly spoken to one another before (though he mentions that while he saw her working with the Knights during their attempt to return him to power, they didn't have a chance to get properly acquainted).
** With Vathek subdued, Jade brings up the beginning of their antagonistic relationship when he had her in chains in that same place and called her a
** Jade and Phobos acknowledge that they've never properly spoken to one another before (though he mentions that while he saw her working with the Knights during their attempt to return him to power, they didn't have a chance to get properly acquainted).
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* DopeSlap: Jade slaps Vathek upside the head before telling him she's not Phobos' lackey.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: When Vathek calls Phobos Jade's master, she makes a point of correcting him slowly:
'''Jade''': I...do...not...work...for Phobos!
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* ContinuityNod: The end of Jade's BadassBoast introduction is a reference to her first canon transformation into the Shadowkhan Queen; she was floating while a wind blew then as well and told her family that she is, and shall remain, the Queen of the Shadowkhan.
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** The end of Jade's BadassBoast introduction is a reference to her first canon transformation into the Shadowkhan Queen; she was floating while a wind blew then as well and told her family that she is, and shall remain, the Queen of the Shadowkhan.
* EurekaMoment: When Elyon, Aldarn and Drake are surrounded by the Shadowkhan, she tries to think on how to repel the "shadow monsters". The word shadow gives her the idea to blast bursts of bright magic on all sides, dissipating this wave of attackers.
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** The end of Jade's BadassBoast introduction is a reference to her first canon transformation into the Shadowkhan Queen; she was floating while a wind blew then as well and told her family that she is, and shall remain, the Queen of the Shadowkhan.
* EurekaMoment: When Elyon, Aldarn and Drake are surrounded by the Shadowkhan, she tries to think on how to repel the "shadow monsters". The word shadow gives her the idea to blast bursts of bright magic on all sides, dissipating this wave of attackers.
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* SpottingTheThread: Everyone quickly figures out that Jade is responsible for the Shadowkhan attack due to their physical similarities, but Drake takes it further by questioning that if Jade really is a unique experiment of Phobos like they were told, where the others came from and why the prince never used them during his reign or even his recent escape attempt.
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* SpottingTheThread: Everyone quickly figures out that Jade is responsible for the Shadowkhan attack due to their physical similarities, but Drake takes it further by questioning that if Jade really is a unique experiment of Phobos like they were told, where the others came from and why the prince never used them during his reign or even his recent escape attempt.attempt.
* ZergRush: As Tynar puts it, two new Shadowkhan seem to fill the place of everyone taken down. This enables them to keep the castle's defenders on their toes and eventually overwhelm all of Infinite City's wardens.
* ZergRush: As Tynar puts it, two new Shadowkhan seem to fill the place of everyone taken down. This enables them to keep the castle's defenders on their toes and eventually overwhelm all of Infinite City's wardens.
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* AlarmSOS: Elyon is woken to the invasion by the ringing of alarm bells.
* BadassBoast: The chapter ends with Jade introducing herself in her new identity in a way that leaves everyone present stunned.
-->'''Jade''': ''[using a loud voice as her red eyes glow and a chilling wind blows]'' I am Hisuikage no oni, last member of the warrior Oni race, ''[starts floating up]'' ruler of the Shadow realm and mistress of the nine warrior tribes that inhabitant it. I am who is and always will be... The Queen of the Shadowkhan.
-->'''Jade''': ''[using a loud voice as her red eyes glow and a chilling wind blows]'' I am Hisuikage no oni, last member of the warrior Oni race, ''[starts floating up]'' ruler of the Shadow realm and mistress of the nine warrior tribes that inhabitant it. I am who is and always will be... The Queen of the Shadowkhan.
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* ContinuityNod: When Jade finished The end of Jade's BadassBoast introduction is a reference to her first canon transformation into the Shadowkhan Queen, Queen; she was floating while a wind blew then as well and told her family that "she she is, and shall remain, the Queen of the Shadowkhan". She finishes her introduction in this chapter's end by saying that "I am who is and always will be... The Queen of the Shadowkhan".
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* InTheBack: Aldarn saves Drake from a Bat Khan that's holding his neck by stabbing its back.
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* InTheBack: Aldarn saves Drake from a A Bat Khan that's holding his neck grabs Drake and starts choking him before Aldarn dissolves it by stabbing its back.
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* CallBack: With Vathek subdued, Jade brings up the beginning of their antagonistic relationship when he had her in chains in that same place and called her a beast.
* ContinuityNod: When Jade finished her first canon transformation into the Shadowkhan Queen, she told her family that "she is, and shall remain, Queen of the Shadowkhan". She finishes her introduction in this chapter's end by saying that "I am who is and always will be... The Queen of the Shadowkhan".
* ContinuityNod: When Jade finished her first canon transformation into the Shadowkhan Queen, she told her family that "she is, and shall remain, Queen of the Shadowkhan". She finishes her introduction in this chapter's end by saying that "I am who is and always will be... The Queen of the Shadowkhan".
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Jade shocks everyone as she introduces herself as the Queen of the Shadowkhan.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phobos is surprisingly polite and kind when meeting with Jade/Kage for the first time.
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* PetTheDog: Phobos actually congratulates Raythor for having made an ally out of Jade.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Elyon opts to take part in defending her castle instead of sitting back.
* SpottingTheThread: Everyone quickly figures out that Jade is responsible for the Shadowkhan attack due to their physical similarities, but Drake takes it further by questioning that if Jade really is a unique experiment of Phobos like they were told, where the others came from and why the prince never used them during his reign or even his recent escape attempt.
* PetTheDog: Phobos actually congratulates Raythor for having made an ally out of Jade.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Elyon opts to take part in defending her castle instead of sitting back.
* SpottingTheThread: Everyone quickly figures out that Jade is responsible for the Shadowkhan attack due to their physical similarities, but Drake takes it further by questioning that if Jade really is a unique experiment of Phobos like they were told, where the others came from and why the prince never used them during his reign or even his recent escape attempt.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: The castle is under the onslaught of the Samurai and Bat Khan, while the Ninja Khan subdue all the guards in the Infinite City so that Jade can sneak in to speak with Phobos and his minions unnoticed.
* CassandraTruth: Vathek still continues refusing to believe any of Jade's words about herself and Nerissa's deception.
* InternalReveal: Not only Jade finally confirms for Vathek and Tynar that she's not a creation of Phobos, but she also tells them, the other Knights and Phobos about what she knows about Nerissa's manipulations.
* InTheBack: Aldarn saves Drake from a Bat Khan that's holding his neck by stabbing its back.
* MeaningfulRename: To symbolize her SplitPersonalityMerge, Jade takes as her full name "Hisuikage no oni", which means "demon of jade shadow" in Japanese.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phobos is surprisingly polite and kind when meeting with Jade/Kage for the first time.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: The castle is under the onslaught of the Samurai and Bat Khan, while the Ninja Khan subdue all the guards in the Infinite City so that Jade can sneak in to speak with Phobos and his minions unnoticed.
* CassandraTruth: Vathek still continues refusing to believe any of Jade's words about herself and Nerissa's deception.
* InternalReveal: Not only Jade finally confirms for Vathek and Tynar that she's not a creation of Phobos, but she also tells them, the other Knights and Phobos about what she knows about Nerissa's manipulations.
* InTheBack: Aldarn saves Drake from a Bat Khan that's holding his neck by stabbing its back.
* MeaningfulRename: To symbolize her SplitPersonalityMerge, Jade takes as her full name "Hisuikage no oni", which means "demon of jade shadow" in Japanese.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Phobos is surprisingly polite and kind when meeting with Jade/Kage for the first time.
