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After wandering past a dreary cityscape, Ren eventually comes across the office of Dr. Mr. Horse, who agrees to listen to his problems. And that's when Ren goes into detail about his [[BackstoryHorror disturbing childhood]], where he describes the unspeakable pain he experienced being spanked at birth, [[DisproportionateRetribution which he took out]] [[ColdBloodedTorture on innocent animals]]. His most notable victim was a frog, who was violated, blown up, ground up by a tricycle wheel, ''and'' electrocuted. By a car battery. Upon learning that the frog [[DrivenToSuicide wanted to be put out of his misery]], Ren [[CruelMercy decided to force him to continue living instead]].
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After wandering past a dreary cityscape, Ren eventually comes across the office of Dr. Mr. Horse, who agrees to listen to his problems. And that's when Ren goes into detail about his [[BackstoryHorror disturbing childhood]], where he describes the unspeakable pain he experienced being spanked at birth, [[DisproportionateRetribution which he took out]] on [[ColdBloodedTorture on innocent animals]]. His most notable victim was a frog, who was violated, blown up, ground up by a tricycle wheel, ''and'' electrocuted. By a car battery. Upon learning that the frog [[DrivenToSuicide wanted to be put out of his misery]], Ren [[CruelMercy decided to force him to continue living instead]].
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[[caption-width-right:350: The ''real'' WesternAnimation/MickeyMouse wouldn't hurt a fly... or rather, perhaps, a frog.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: The ''real'' WesternAnimation/MickeyMouse wouldn't hurt a fly... or rather, perhaps, in this case, a frog.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Ren delivers a nasty beatdown to Mr. Horse in the climax.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Ren delivers a nasty beatdown to Mr. Horse in the climax.climax in retaliation for the one Mr. Horse just dished out to him.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: To ''WebAnimation/WeekendPussyHunt'', another psychodrama by John K. where the only joke appears to be that cartoon characters are acting out an ugly, dramatic FilmNoir story which gets uglier and uglier as it goes along.
