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-->'''Lister:''' Oh, ''that'' Rimmer...
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'''Kryten:''' If I may, sirs, that was merely the level of sophistication required to lure the Cat. And it ''worked''. Had we not been here to stop him, he would now be on one of those asteroids, crawling around without a brain trying to write "oh, boy was I suckered!" with his own intestinal tract.
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'''Kryten:''' If I may, sirs, that was merely the level of sophistication required to lure the Cat. And it ''worked''. Had we not been here to stop him, he would now be on one of those asteroids, crawling around without a brain trying to write "oh, "Oh, boy was I suckered!" with his own intestinal tract.
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* SpotTheImposter: The fake Lister knows everything the real Lister knows because it can read Lister's mind. So the others get Lister to play the guitar, and shoot the Lister who's as good as the [[DreadfulMusician real Lister thinks he is]].
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* SpotTheImposter: The fake Lister knows everything the real Lister knows because it can read Lister's mind. So So, the others get Lister to play the guitar, guitar and shoot the Lister who's as good as the [[DreadfulMusician real Lister thinks he is]].
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** The name of the illusionary captain of the ill-fated SCS ''Pioneer'', Captain Tau, was also the name of ''Red Dwarf'''s captain from the failed American pilot.
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** The name of the illusionary captain of the ill-fated SCS ''Pioneer'', Captain Tau, was also the name of ''Red Dwarf'''s captain from ''Series/RedDwarfUSA'', the failed American pilot.
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* TimePassageBeard: Lister wakes up after 200 years in stasis with a long hair and bushy beard.
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* TimePassageBeard: Lister wakes up after 200 years in stasis with a long hair and a bushy beard.
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* {{Tulpa}}: Among the suspects Kryten lists of who could've stolen Red Dwarf, one of them is "figments of Mr. Lister's imagination made solid by some weird space ray."
* VillainousRescue: Lister has been succesfully lured into a trap by one of the psirens, only for another psiren to show up and kill the first one. Thankfully, Lister realizes that the second psiren is also a fake and kills it.
* VillainousRescue: Lister has been succesfully lured into a trap by one of the psirens, only for another psiren to show up and kill the first one. Thankfully, Lister realizes that the second psiren is also a fake and kills it.
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* {{Tulpa}}: Among the suspects Kryten lists of who could've stolen Red Dwarf, one of them is "figments of Mr. Lister's imagination made solid by some weird space ray."
* VillainousRescue: Lister has beensuccesfully successfully lured into a trap by one of the psirens, only for another psiren to show up and kill the first one. Thankfully, Lister realizes that the second psiren is also a fake and kills it.
* VillainousRescue: Lister has been
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Soon enough, the Cat's up too, and Lister is well on his way to recovery, enjoying a nice bowl of Corn Flakes (with grated raw onion) with a little tabasco sauce for extra pep, and convinced he can play the guitar. Rimmer tries to get down to business: What's happened to ''Red Dwarf'', which they've lost, for which he blames Lister forgetting where he parked it. Kryten fills him in: They didn't ''lose'' the Dwarf, it was stolen. They've been in stasis because ''Starbug'' couldn't keep up, but now it's had to make a massive detour around an asteroid field that the Bug doesn't, giving them a chance to head it off.
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Soon enough, the Cat's up too, and Lister is well on his way to recovery, enjoying a nice bowl of Corn Flakes (with grated raw onion) with a little tabasco sauce for extra pep, and convinced he can play the guitar. Rimmer tries to get down to business: What's happened to ''Red Dwarf'', which they've lost, for which he blames Lister forgetting where he parked it. Kryten fills him in: They didn't ''lose'' the Dwarf, it was stolen. They've been in stasis because ''Starbug'' couldn't keep up, but now it's ''Red Dwarf'''s had to make a massive detour around an asteroid field that field. But since the Bug doesn't, giving it gives them a chance to head it off.
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* ArtEvolution: The Starbug sets get a beef-up. The cockpit now has seats for all four crew members, the back room is larger and has a staircase going up to a second level, and an adjoining back kitchen.
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* ArtEvolution: The Starbug sets get a beef-up. The cockpit now has seats for all four crew members, the back room is larger and has a staircase going up to a second level, and an adjoining back kitchen. Justified as Kryten points out Lister has been in deep sleep for 200 years - meaning Kryten has had plenty of time to rebuild the ship according to their needs.
