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'''Fluttershy:''' When Fluttershy was at summer flight camp, she was the weakest flier out of all the young pegasi there. As such, she was bullied a lot, until one day when Rainbow Dash stood up for her, challenging the bullies to a race. During the race, Fluttershy gets knocked off a cloud and plummets towards the ground below, only to be saved by a swarm of butterflies. Fluttershy, having never been near the ground before, is instantly enraptured by the creatures she sees. Suddenly, a huge explosion scares the animals into hiding. As the explosion subsides, Fluttershy coaxes the animals out of hiding, discovering her knack for communicating with them in the process. As she settles down with the woodland critters, her cutie mark appears, though we don't find out what happened with the pegasus race...
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'''Fluttershy:''' When Fluttershy was at summer flight camp, she was the weakest flier out of all the young pegasi there. As such, she was bullied a lot, until one day when Rainbow Dash stood up for her, challenging the bullies to a race. During the race, Fluttershy gets knocked off a cloud and plummets towards the ground below, only to be saved by a swarm of butterflies. Fluttershy, having never been near the ground before, is instantly enraptured by the creatures she sees. Suddenly, a huge explosion scares the animals into hiding. As the explosion subsides, Fluttershy coaxes the animals out of hiding, discovering her knack for communicating with them in the process. As she settles down with the woodland critters, her cutie mark appears, though we don't find out what happened with the pegasus Pegasus race...
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'''Scootaloo:''' Wha... huh?!
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'''Scootaloo:''' Wha... huh?!
** [[JustifiedTrope Justified in that horses/ponies can't really hug like humans AND that it's the ruler of the country doing it to one of her subjects.]]
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--->"There was no talking, there was no smiling. There were only rocks."
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--->"There was no talking, talking; there was no smiling. There were only rocks."
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* FunSize: A baby… baby dragon. Extra tiny. Extra cute.
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* FunSize: A baby… baby dragon.Newborn!Spike. Extra tiny. Extra cute.
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* FurryConfusion: There are horse cart sounds in the background in Applejack's flashback of arriving at Manehattan. The carts are never actually shown.
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* FurryConfusion: There are horse cart carriage sounds in the background in Applejack's flashback of arriving at in Manehattan. The carts carriages are never actually shown.
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* FunSize: A baby…baby dragon. Extra tiny. Extra cute.
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* FunSize: A baby…baby baby… baby dragon. Extra tiny. Extra cute.cute.
* FurryConfusion: There are horse cart sounds in the background in Applejack's flashback of arriving at Manehattan. The carts are never actually shown.
* FurryConfusion: There are horse cart sounds in the background in Applejack's flashback of arriving at Manehattan. The carts are never actually shown.
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-->'''Scootaloo''': We can start with the coolest pony in Ponyville...\\
'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSis Applejack!]]\\
'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSis Rarity!]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid of anything.\\
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Pinkie Pie?]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out of Cloudsdale.\\
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThree Fluttershy?]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSis Applejack!]]\\
'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSis Rarity!]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid of anything.\\
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Pinkie Pie?]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out of Cloudsdale.\\
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThree Fluttershy?]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
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'''Apple
'''Sweetie
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* BatmanGambit: According to [[WordOfGod Word of]] [[http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-B8qXWF1UoiQ/TvAGRk46vOI/AAAAAAAAYhw/BAKapxv7NP4/s1600/1.jpg Faust]], [[spoiler:Princess Celestia made sure Twilight was given the dragon-hatching test in hopes she would be one of the future Element bearers.]]
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* BatmanGambit: According to [[WordOfGod Word of]] {{Word of|God}} [[http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-B8qXWF1UoiQ/TvAGRk46vOI/AAAAAAAAYhw/BAKapxv7NP4/s1600/1.jpg Faust]], [[spoiler:Princess Celestia made sure suspected Twilight was given the dragon-hatching test in hopes she would be one of the future as an Element bearers.Bearer and substituted the regular entrance exam with the dragon egg test to confirm.]]
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-->'''Scootaloo:''' "Argh! These namby-pamby stories aren't getting us any closer to our cutie marks! They're all about 'finding out who you are' and boring stuff like that!"
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-->'''Scootaloo:''' "Argh! Argh! These namby-pamby stories aren't getting us any closer to our cutie marks! They're all about 'finding out who you are' and boring stuff like that!" that!
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* FunSize: A baby…baby dragon. Extra tiny. Extra cute.
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* MythologyGag: Twilight's mom is essentially the original Twilight from G1, with white fur instead of light pink fur and fewer stripes. It's especially noticeable when you look at Lauren's concept designs for the gang. It also counts as a MythologyGag to the original concept of the series, where Twilight was supposed to be the protagonist before being color-swapped into Twilight Sparkle.
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* MythologyGag: Twilight's mom is essentially the original Twilight from G1, with white fur instead of light pink fur and fewer stripes. It's especially noticeable when you look at Lauren's concept designs for the gang. It also counts as a MythologyGag to the original concept of the series, where Twilight was supposed to be the protagonist before being color-swapped into Twilight Sparkle.
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* RuleOfCute
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* RuleOfCuteRuleOfCute: Filly versions of the Mane Cast. And Spike.
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** Her aunt and uncle have Orange related Cutie Marks. Applejack learns she's best at her farm instead of in Manehattan, so it's like comparing apples and oranges.
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** Her aunt and uncle have Orange related Cutie Marks. Applejack learns she's best at her farm instead of in Manehattan, so it's like comparing apples and oranges.
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* BatmanGambit: According to [[WordOfGod Word of]] [[http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-B8qXWF1UoiQ/TvAGRk46vOI/AAAAAAAAYhw/BAKapxv7NP4/s1600/1.jpg Faust]], [[spoiler:Princess Celestia made sure Twilight was given the dragon-hatching test in hopes she would be one of the future Element bearers.]]
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** Applejack's failed attempt at blending in with the "high society" of Manehattan is a definite nod to ''[[MyFairLady My Fair Lady]]''.
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** Applejack's failed attempt at blending in with the "high society" of Manehattan is a definite nod to ''Pygmalion'' and ''[[MyFairLady My Fair Lady]]''.
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* FishOutOfWater: Applejack, realizing she was too country to live in Manehattan without changing herself into someone she isn't.
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Adrenaline Makeover is not the trope for Pinkie\'s hair. Adrenaline Makeover must involve falling in love with the hero over the course of the adventure.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: More like happiness makeover, when Pinkie Pie's mane and tail are turned from straight to poofy.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: More like happiness makeover, AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Aunt Orange tousles Applejack's hair in a condescending but affectionate way when Pinkie Pie's mane she comes to Manehattan and tail are turned from straight to poofy.says "y'all."
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* PowerIncontinence: Twilight suffering from this gave her her cutie mark. She made the entrance jury float, turned her parents into plants, and turned the baby dragon she was supposed to catch into an adult dragon on the nation's capital before being calmed down.
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* PowerIncontinence: Twilight suffering from this gave her her cutie mark. She made the entrance jury float, turned her parents [[BalefulPolymorph into plants, plants]], and turned the baby dragon she was supposed to catch into an adult dragon on the nation's capital before being calmed down.
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*** Plus she describes the reveal about the Rainboom as "uncanny."
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* FridgeBrilliance: Why does Fluttershy's younger self look so weird compared to the others? Remember her telling Pinkie she's a year older than her in "Griffon the Brush Off," and it's easy to surmise she was a gangly teenager while the others were kids.
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** Can we just say that the Mane 6 themselves were this in their flashbacks?
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*** This part also brings to mind the scene in ''TheRoadToElDorado'' in which the main duo also come before a great big rock (Rarity's complaints about it have a similar tone to Tulio's) after thinking that it led to their main goal (which in both cases, turns out to be true).
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* TheWorldIsJustAwesome: Filly Fluttershy comes to this conclusion when she ends up on the ground for the first time. She even sings a song about it.
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Scootaloo proceeds to lead the other two into two, running into the other main cast ponies along the way and learning that Rainbow Dash is likely hanging around Sugarcube Corner. Their stories are as follows...
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Scootaloo proceeds to lead the other two into two, town, running into the other main cast ponies along the way and learning that Rainbow Dash is likely hanging around Sugarcube Corner. Their stories are as follows...
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* CommercialBreakCliffhanger: One of them interrupts Fluttershy's story just as she falls from the clouds. Though since she clearly lives to tell the story it's sort of a DidYouDie situation.
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* CommercialBreakCliffhanger: One of them interrupts Fluttershy's story just as she falls from the clouds. Though since she clearly lives to tell the story story, it's sort of a DidYouDie situation.
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* FramingDevice: The episode is esentially a series of flashbacks linked together with Cutie Mark Crusaders asking the mane six about their cutie marks.
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* FramingDevice: The episode is esentially essentially a series of flashbacks linked together with Cutie Mark Crusaders asking the mane six about their cutie marks.
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* FunSize: A baby...baby dragon. Extra tiny. Extra cute.
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* FunSize: A baby...baby baby…baby dragon. Extra tiny. Extra cute.
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** Can you really blame her? Fluttershy's not normally the one singing...
* PowerIncontinence: Twilight suffering from this gave her her cutie mark. She made the entrance jury float, turned her parents into plants, and unleashed an adult dragon on the nation's capital before being calmed down.
* PowerIncontinence: Twilight suffering from this gave her her cutie mark. She made the entrance jury float, turned her parents into plants, and unleashed an adult dragon on the nation's capital before being calmed down.
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** Can you really blame her? Fluttershy's not normally the one singing...
singing…
* PowerIncontinence: Twilight suffering from this gave her her cutie mark. She made the entrance jury float, turned her parents into plants, andunleashed turned the baby dragon she was supposed to catch into an adult dragon on the nation's capital before being calmed down.
* PowerIncontinence: Twilight suffering from this gave her her cutie mark. She made the entrance jury float, turned her parents into plants, and
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Formating and Trope rename.
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-->'''Scootaloo''': We can start with the coolest pony in Ponyville...
-->'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSis Applejack!]]
-->'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSis Rarity!]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid of anything.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': [[CompletelyMissingThePoint Pinkie Pie?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out of Cloudsdale.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThree Fluttershy?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
-->'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSis Applejack!]]
-->'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSis Rarity!]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid of anything.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': [[CompletelyMissingThePoint Pinkie Pie?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out of Cloudsdale.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThree Fluttershy?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
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-->'''Scootaloo''': We can start with the coolest pony in Ponyville...
-->'''ApplePonyville...\\
'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSisApplejack!]]
-->'''SweetieApplejack!]]\\
'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSisRarity!]]
-->'''Scootaloo''':Rarity!]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid ofanything.
-->'''Appleanything.\\
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''':[[CompletelyMissingThePoint [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Pinkie Pie?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''':Pie?]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out ofCloudsdale.
-->'''AppleCloudsdale.\\
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThreeFluttershy?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''':Fluttershy?]]\\
'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
-->'''Apple
'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSis
-->'''Sweetie
'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSis
-->'''Scootaloo''':
'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid of
-->'''Apple
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''':
-->'''Scootaloo''':
'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out of
-->'''Apple
'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThree
-->'''Scootaloo''':
'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
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The Cutie Mark Crusaders seek out Rainbow Dash in order to learn how she acquired her cutie mark, and wind up interviewing every pony in the main cast. Their stories are as follows...
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The Cutie Mark Crusaders seek fail to gain their cutie marks by zip lining, though end up covered in tree sap, [[NoodleIncident again]]. Scootaloo decides its time to go see somepony else for cutie mark advice:
-->'''Scootaloo''': We can start with the coolest pony in Ponyville...
-->'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSis Applejack!]]
-->'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSis Rarity!]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid of anything.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': [[CompletelyMissingThePoint Pinkie Pie?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out of Cloudsdale.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThree Fluttershy?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
Scootaloo proceeds to lead the other two into two, running into the other main cast ponies along the way and learning that Rainbow Dashin order to learn how she acquired her cutie mark, and wind up interviewing every pony in the main cast.is likely hanging around Sugarcube Corner. Their stories are as follows...
-->'''Scootaloo''': We can start with the coolest pony in Ponyville...
-->'''Apple Bloom''': [[CoolBigSis Applejack!]]
-->'''Sweetie Belle''': [[CoolBigSis Rarity!]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No, you guys. I said "cool". You know what I'm talking about. She's fast. She's tough. She's not afraid of anything.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': [[CompletelyMissingThePoint Pinkie Pie?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': No! The greatest flier to ever come out of Cloudsdale.
-->'''Apple Bloom/Sweetie Belle''': ...[[RuleOfThree Fluttershy?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': NO! Rainbow Dash!
Scootaloo proceeds to lead the other two into two, running into the other main cast ponies along the way and learning that Rainbow Dash
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At this point, the main ponies besides Rainbow Dash realize certain similarities in their stories, and come to the conclusion that the explosion/rainbow that lead to each of their cutie marks was all thanks to her. Twilight's letter to Celestia says that she learned that you may not be as alone in this world as it feels, and that your future friends may be closer than you think.
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At this point, the main ponies besides Rainbow Dash realize certain similarities in their stories, and come to the conclusion that the explosion/rainbow that lead to each of their cutie marks was all thanks to her. While Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle are heartwarmed by the stories and the love the main cast shows each other, Scootaloo remains unimpressed until she too is dragged into a hug with her friends. Twilight's letter to Celestia says that she learned that you may not be as alone in this world as it feels, and that your future friends may be closer than you think.
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* NoodleIncident: Scootaloo mentions that a suprising number of their past Cutie Mark attempts have ended with them covered in tree sap. We of course never see any of those...or find out ''how'' they ended with them covered in tree sap.
* NoOntologicalInertia: Twilight's parents and Spike are transformed when she starts channelling uncontrolled magical energy, but turn right back when she stops doing it.
* NoOntologicalInertia: Twilight's parents and Spike are transformed when she starts channelling uncontrolled magical energy, but turn right back when she stops doing it.
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* NoodleIncident: Scootaloo mentions that a suprising surprising number of their past Cutie Mark attempts have ended with them covered in tree sap. We of course never see any of those...or find out ''how'' they ended with them covered in tree sap.
* NoOntologicalInertia: Twilight's parents and Spike are transformed when she startschannelling channeling uncontrolled magical energy, but turn right back when she stops doing it.
* NoOntologicalInertia: Twilight's parents and Spike are transformed when she starts
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--> '''Scootaloo:''' It's no use. No matter what we try, we always end up without our Cutie Marks...and [[LampshadeHanging suprisingly often]], covered in tree sap.
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--> '''Scootaloo:''' It's no use. No matter what we try, we always end up without our Cutie Marks...and [[LampshadeHanging suprisingly surprisingly often]], covered in tree sap.
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**Can you really blame her? Fluttershy's not normally the one singing...
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* FunSize: A baby...baby dragon. Extra tiny. Extra cute.
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** When Twilight accidentally unleashes the full force of her power, her eyes go solid white, similar to the [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]].
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** When Twilight accidentally unleashes the full force of her power, her eyes go solid white, similar to the [[AvatarTheLastAirbender [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Avatar State]].
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* CallBack: [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom "Sonic Rainboom"]] was about Rainbow Dash's second Sonic Rainboom, and that she only performed the first one when she was a little filly. This episode shows that very first one. The music played during the race also happens to be same music that played during "Sonic Rainboom"'s Sonic Rainboom.
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* CallBack: CallBack:
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom "Sonic Rainboom"]] was about Rainbow Dash's second Sonic Rainboom, and that sheonly performed the first one when she was a little filly. This episode shows that very first one. The music played during the race also happens to be same music that played during "Sonic Rainboom"'s Sonic Rainboom.
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom "Sonic Rainboom"]] was about Rainbow Dash's second Sonic Rainboom, and that she
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This one is a matter of background knowledge (and arrogant attitude for seeming to think it\'s somehow wrong to even know), not *grasping* a concept.
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* RichInDollarsPoorInSense: That random Manehatten pony that asks Applejack what a rooster is. Dude, seriously, you have ''no idea?''
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* ColdOpen: "Whoever heard of ponies ziplining?"
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* ColdOpen: "Whoever "I've never even heard of ponies ziplining?"a pony zip-lining before."
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* CallBack: [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom "Sonic Rainboom"]] was about Rainbow Dash's second Sonic Rainboom, and that she only performed the first one when she was a little filly. This episode shows that very first one.
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* CallBack: [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E16SonicRainboom "Sonic Rainboom"]] was about Rainbow Dash's second Sonic Rainboom, and that she only performed the first one when she was a little filly. This episode shows that very first one. The music played during the race also happens to be same music that played during "Sonic Rainboom"'s Sonic Rainboom.