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Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
* GreaserDelinquents: Henry is portrayed as this.
* OutOfCharacter: Henry us a cool guy.
* OutOfCharacter: Henry us a cool guy.
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* GreaserDelinquents: Henry is portrayed as this.
one.
* OutOfCharacter: Henryus as a cool guy.
* OutOfCharacter: Henry
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* WorthyOpponent: Henry gives Bull, that he's this, after beating him.
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* WorthyOpponent: Henry gives Bull, tells Bull that he's this, this after beating him.
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* ShowdownAtHighNoon: Bull and Henry get into a cowboy esque fight over which one of them is a better grandson.
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* ShowdownAtHighNoon: Bull and Henry get into a cowboy esque fight over which one of them is a better grandson.grandson.
* WorthyOpponent: Henry gives Bull, that he's this, after beating him.
* WorthyOpponent: Henry gives Bull, that he's this, after beating him.
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Bull and Henry get into a fight over who is a better grandson to their respective grandmothers.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Adam only appeared at the very end and had one line, giving the focus of this short mainly to Bull and Henry.
* ArmorPiercingResponse: Henry took Bull down, by saying he gave his grandmother a sponge bath.
* BullyingADragon: Shelley walks right up to Bull and makes fun of his sweater, telling him it's lame. Immediately, she gets body slammed against the locker, and acts as though she didn't expect him to attack her.
* GreaserDelinquents: Henry is portrayed as this.
* OutOfCharacter: Henry us a cool guy.
* ShowdownAtHighNoon: Bull and Henry get into a cowboy esque fight over which one of them is a better grandson.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Adam only appeared at the very end and had one line, giving the focus of this short mainly to Bull and Henry.
* ArmorPiercingResponse: Henry took Bull down, by saying he gave his grandmother a sponge bath.
* BullyingADragon: Shelley walks right up to Bull and makes fun of his sweater, telling him it's lame. Immediately, she gets body slammed against the locker, and acts as though she didn't expect him to attack her.
* GreaserDelinquents: Henry is portrayed as this.
* OutOfCharacter: Henry us a cool guy.
* ShowdownAtHighNoon: Bull and Henry get into a cowboy esque fight over which one of them is a better grandson.
