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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Deconstructed; Chloe is quick to remind Paul on how he was an abusive jerkass to his Chimchar and points out that this entire situation is just plain ''karma'' for being a cold jerkwad in general. Saint Ash states that yes, that was mean, but is that enough justification for Paul to be tortured, broken beyond repair and never being able to go home to be with this brother again?
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Deconstructed; Chloe is quick to remind Paul on how he was an abusive jerkass to his Chimchar and points out that this entire situation is just plain ''karma'' for being a cold jerkwad in general. Saint Ash states that yes, that was mean, and yes, he should've been punished for it back then...but is that enough justification for Paul to be tortured, broken beyond repair and never being able to go home to be with this brother again?
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* IAmAMonster: Paul admits that he is a monster, but then he adds that he's not ''Walter's'' monster before freezing him.
* InternalReveal: Hazel learns the truth about herself. However Amelia adds that this doesn't change who she truly is.
* InternalReveal: Hazel learns the truth about herself. However Amelia adds that this doesn't change who she truly is.
* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Deconstructed; Chloe is quick to remind Paul on how he was an abusive jerkass to his Chimchar and points out that this entire situation is just plain ''karma'' for being a cold jerkwad in general. Saint Ash states that yes, that was mean, but is that enough justification for Paul to be tortured, broken beyond repair and never being able to go home to be with this brother again?
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* SoulJar: Alain's ''soul'' was sealed in the Honor of Kalos medal Alex was carrying on him.
* TheReveal: Why was Alex holding onto the Honor of Kalos medal? Turns out that when Alain gave it to him, Henry sealed is ''soul'' inside, which is why Alain is so completely out of it.
* RuleOfSymbolism: Amelia wipes off the Apex mark on Hazel's face, to represent that she's not like those cultists. Moreover, she's doing this with her turtle handkerchief, since turtles are an animal associated with Amelia, showcasing how she truly cares for the girl.
* SoulJar: Alain's ''soul'' was sealed in the Honor of Kalos medal Alex was carrying on him.
* RuleOfSymbolism: Amelia wipes off the Apex mark on Hazel's face, to represent that she's not like those cultists. Moreover, she's doing this with her turtle handkerchief, since turtles are an animal associated with Amelia, showcasing how she truly cares for the girl.
* SoulJar: Alain's ''soul'' was sealed in the Honor of Kalos medal Alex was carrying on him.
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* VerbalBackspace: Chloe has to stop herself from snapping that saving the Trainers is her destiny when Saint Ash comes along.
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* VerbalBackspace: Chloe has to stop herself from snapping that saving the Trainers is her destiny when Saint Ash comes along.along, especially since she could've easily become Lady Destiny if she didn't snap out of it.
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* BigStupidDooDooHead: Hop's letter to Alain kicks off by calling "Ass Kissem" a big meanie Poopyhead.
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* BigStupidDooDooHead: Hop's letter to Ash that Amelia reads to Alain to try and knock him out of his Ash-worship kicks off by calling "Ass Kissem" a big meanie Poopyhead.
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** Chloe exploits Simon's stubbornness to trick him into attempting to leave the Car, and her alone.
** Saint Ash brings Chloe's issues with the real Ash surging back to the surface, nearly causing her to become Lady Destiny in a fit of pique over having her chance at redemption ''stolen'' from her.
** Saint Ash brings Chloe's issues with the real Ash surging back to the surface, nearly causing her to become Lady Destiny in a fit of pique over having her chance at redemption ''stolen'' from her.
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** Chloe exploits Simon's stubbornness and refusal to be caged to trick him into attempting to leave the Car, and her alone.
** Walter hopes for this Saint Ash brings Chloe's issues with the real Ash surging back to the surface, nearly causing her to become Lady Destiny in a fit of pique over having her chance at redemption ''stolen'' fromher.her. Luckily, Chloe calms down before it becomes a threat.
** Walter hopes for this Saint Ash brings Chloe's issues with the real Ash surging back to the surface, nearly causing her to become Lady Destiny in a fit of pique over having her chance at redemption ''stolen'' from
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* GladIThoughtOfIt: Chloe remarks that tricking Simon into leaving to destroy the locks was a good idea "of Lexi". Grace is understandably miffed.
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* GladIThoughtOfIt: Chloe remarks that tricking Simon into leaving to destroy the locks was a good idea "of Lexi". Grace is understandably miffed.miffed, but doesn't make any protests.
* MoreHeroThanThou: Chloe nearly has a fit of this when Saint Ash shows up to 'steal her destiny', but manages to stop herself when she realizes how childish and selfish it sounds.
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* NoSympathy: Despite knowing that Paul was tortured into becoming Despair, Chloe initially focuses on the depths of his {{Jerkass}}ery. Seeing his memories helps change her tone, however.
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* NoSympathy: Despite knowing that Paul was tortured into becoming Despair, Chloe initially focuses on the depths of his past {{Jerkass}}ery. Seeing his memories helps change her tone, however.
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* BigStupidDooDooHead: Hop's letter to Ash kicks off by calling "Ass Kissem" a big meanie Poopyhead.
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* BigStupidDooDooHead: Hop's letter to
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* FlawExploitation: Chloe exploits Simon's stubborness to trick him into attempting to leave the Car, and her alone.
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* FlawExploitation: FlawExploitation:
** Chloe exploits Simon'sstubborness stubbornness to trick him into attempting to leave the Car, and her alone.alone.
** Saint Ash brings Chloe's issues with the real Ash surging back to the surface, nearly causing her to become Lady Destiny in a fit of pique over having her chance at redemption ''stolen'' from her.
** Chloe exploits Simon's
** Saint Ash brings Chloe's issues with the real Ash surging back to the surface, nearly causing her to become Lady Destiny in a fit of pique over having her chance at redemption ''stolen'' from her.
* MustMakeAmends: {{Deconstructed}}; Chloe's belief that saving Hop, Alain and Paul is the best way for her to atone nearly triggers her own ascension at the thought of "Saint Ash" saving the day instead.
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* NoSympathy: Yet again, Chloe proves she's not much different than Goh by failing to sympathize with Paul, despite knowing that he became Despair thanks to a horrible torture. She changes her tone when she looks into his memories, however.
* PuritySue: "Saint Ash", natch. It deeply irritates Chloe on a profound level.
* PuritySue: "Saint Ash", natch. It deeply irritates Chloe on a profound level.
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* NoSympathy: Yet again, Chloe proves she's not much different than Goh by failing to sympathize with Paul, despite Despite knowing that he became Despair thanks to a horrible torture. She changes her tone when she looks Paul was tortured into becoming Despair, Chloe initially focuses on the depths of his memories, {{Jerkass}}ery. Seeing his memories helps change her tone, however.
* PuritySue: {{Invoked}} with "Saint Ash", natch. It deeply irritates Chloe on a profoundlevel.level, as she worries he's about to become a one-man SpotlightStealingSquad.
* PuritySue: {{Invoked}} with "Saint Ash", natch. It deeply irritates Chloe on a profound
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** Amelia's reaction to the annoying locks she faces.
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** Amelia's reaction to the annoying locks she faces.faces.
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* CessationOfExistence: Since Saint Ash is just a figment of Alain's dream, as soon as he wakes up, Saint Ash stops existing.
* ChewbaccaDefense: Parodied. Hop pleads insanity defense once Amelia's done reading his letter to Alain.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Yet again, we're shown how terrible Henry and Walter are when Chloe winces at the torture she sees Paul go through when she looks through his memories.
* FlawExploitation: Chloe exploits Simon's stubborness to trick him into attempting to leave the Car, and her alone.
* ChewbaccaDefense: Parodied. Hop pleads insanity defense once Amelia's done reading his letter to Alain.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Yet again, we're shown how terrible Henry and Walter are when Chloe winces at the torture she sees Paul go through when she looks through his memories.
* FlawExploitation: Chloe exploits Simon's stubborness to trick him into attempting to leave the Car, and her alone.
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* GladIThoughtOfIt: Chloe remarks that tricking Simon into leaving to destroy the locks was a good idea "of Lexi". Grace is understandably miffed.
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* NothingIsScarier: We're not shown ''all'' of Paul's memories when Chloe uses her cloak on him, and given her reaction, this might be for the better.
* NoSympathy: Yet again, Chloe proves she's not much different than Goh by failing to sympathize with Paul, despite knowing that he became Despair thanks to a horrible torture. She changes her tone when she looks into his memories, however.
* NoSympathy: Yet again, Chloe proves she's not much different than Goh by failing to sympathize with Paul, despite knowing that he became Despair thanks to a horrible torture. She changes her tone when she looks into his memories, however.
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* RedHerring: The preview made it seem like Saint Ash would be another enemy that Chloe would have to face, but he eventually turns out to be an ''ally'' who helps her get through Paul until Alain wakes up.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: All but stated by Paul, once he realizes his number ''has reached five digits''.
* TheUnfought: Destruction and Saint Ash: the former because he's tricked into attempting to leave, and the latter because he chooses to ''help'' Chloe rather than fight.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: All but stated by Paul, once he realizes his number ''has reached five digits''.
* TheUnfought: Destruction and Saint Ash: the former because he's tricked into attempting to leave, and the latter because he chooses to ''help'' Chloe rather than fight.
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* VerbalBackspace: Chloe has to stop herself from snapping that saving the Trainers is her destiny when Saint Ash comes along.
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* FreakOut: Alain starts screaming in panic when Hop places the Honor of Kalos medal on him.
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* UnreliableNarrator: When Hop questions if Alain honestly worships Ash, Amelia suggests that a good chunk of his attitude is due to the brainwashing crossing wires in his head, much like how Hop combined Ash with a run-of-the-mill jerk to create a devil.
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* SoulJar: Alain's ''soul'' was sealed in the Honor of Kalos medal Alex was carrying on him.
* UnreliableNarrator: When Hop questions if Alain honestly worships Ash, Amelia suggests that a good chunk of his attitude is due to the brainwashing crossing wires in his head, much like how Hop combined Ash with a run-of-the-mill jerk to create adevil.devil.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe:
** Chloe's reaction to seeing "Saint" Ash.
** Amelia's reaction to the annoying locks she faces.
* UnreliableNarrator: When Hop questions if Alain honestly worships Ash, Amelia suggests that a good chunk of his attitude is due to the brainwashing crossing wires in his head, much like how Hop combined Ash with a run-of-the-mill jerk to create a
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe:
** Chloe's reaction to seeing "Saint" Ash.
** Amelia's reaction to the annoying locks she faces.
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Things are grim in the Fog Car, but it's Ash Ketchum to the rescue! Or is it...
!!Tropes in this chapter include:
* BigStupidDooDooHead: Hop's letter to Ash kicks off by calling "Ass Kissem" a big meanie Poopyhead.
* MessianicArchetype: "Saint Ash" in a nutshell, being a manifestation of Alain's view of Ash.
* PuritySue: "Saint Ash", natch. It deeply irritates Chloe on a profound level.
* UnreliableNarrator: When Hop questions if Alain honestly worships Ash, Amelia suggests that a good chunk of his attitude is due to the brainwashing crossing wires in his head, much like how Hop combined Ash with a run-of-the-mill jerk to create a devil.
!!Tropes in this chapter include:
* BigStupidDooDooHead: Hop's letter to Ash kicks off by calling "Ass Kissem" a big meanie Poopyhead.
* MessianicArchetype: "Saint Ash" in a nutshell, being a manifestation of Alain's view of Ash.
* PuritySue: "Saint Ash", natch. It deeply irritates Chloe on a profound level.
* UnreliableNarrator: When Hop questions if Alain honestly worships Ash, Amelia suggests that a good chunk of his attitude is due to the brainwashing crossing wires in his head, much like how Hop combined Ash with a run-of-the-mill jerk to create a devil.
