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* BatterUp: The mugger's preferred tactic is to wait for his victims at the end of a tunnel that cuts through the park, and ambush them with a bat.
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* BatterUp: The mugger's preferred tactic is As stated above, a troublemaking kid takes a baseball bat to wait for his victims at the end of a tunnel that cuts through the park, and ambush them with a bat.chest.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: The elderly man that becomes a VigilanteMan enjoys playing chess in the park, even during the middle of winter. In his final scene, he's playing against one of the young miscreants that were caught while trying to find the mugger, who complains about the cold.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: The elderly man that becomes a VigilanteMan enjoys playing chess in the park, even during the middle of winter. In his final scene, he's playing against one of the young miscreants that were caught while trying to find the mugger, bike kids from earlier, who complains about the cold.
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* BatterUpBatterUp: The mugger's preferred tactic is to wait for his victims at the end of a tunnel that cuts through the park, and ambush them with a bat.
* BeneathSuspicion: The reason the mugger could predict his targets so well is because he's a mailman, and thus knows when they receive a check in the mail.
* BeneathSuspicion: The reason the mugger could predict his targets so well is because he's a mailman, and thus knows when they receive a check in the mail.
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GoThroughMe: In order to get the VigilanteMan to stand down, Frasier stands between him and the mugger, while asking if he's really on a rightful crusade or just fed up with young troublemakers taking over "his" park.
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SmartPeoplePlayChess: The elderly man that becomes a VigilanteMan enjoys playing chess in the park, even during the middle of winter. In his final scene, he's playing against one of the young miscreants that were caught while trying to find the mugger, who complains about the cold.
*VigilanteManVigilanteMan: After getting mugged, one of the old men decides to take matters into his own hands, buying a gun and cornering the mugger in the park. However, Fraser and Ray arrive before he can get revenge.
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A mugger is targeting the elderly, having an uncanny ability to find them whenever they have just cashed their checks and while they are alone. When Ray is dispatched to give a presentation on personal safety (for which he is both personally unprepared for, and officially not allowed to go off the script for) Fraser ends up inspiring the elders to start their own Neighborhood Watch. Meanwhile, one of the victims has decided to take things into his own hands...
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* AssholeVictim: The two kids on the bikes go out of their way to burn off any audience sympathy they may have before one of them catches a baseball bat to the chest. Similarly, the mugger ends up needing to be rescued by Fraser and Ray.
* BatterUp
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Ray takes a shortcut through the park, and manages to knock down a sapling on the way.
* GoThroughMe
* SmartPeoplePlayChess
* VigilanteMan
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!Tropes
* AssholeVictim: The two kids on the bikes go out of their way to burn off any audience sympathy they may have before one of them catches a baseball bat to the chest. Similarly, the mugger ends up needing to be rescued by Fraser and Ray.
* BatterUp
* DrivesLikeCrazy: Ray takes a shortcut through the park, and manages to knock down a sapling on the way.
* GoThroughMe
* SmartPeoplePlayChess
* VigilanteMan
