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-->'''Dawn:''' Does she want to eat?
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-->'''Dawn:''' [[AccidentalInnuendo Does she want to eat?eat?]]
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Andrew isn't impressed by the name of The First for an ultimate evil, preferring something like LexLuthor or [[HarryPotter Voldemort]].
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Andrew isn't impressed by the name of The First for an ultimate evil, preferring something like LexLuthor or [[HarryPotter [[Literature/HarryPotter Voldemort]].
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** Also, Annabelle's death (see below) is off-screen while the camera looks at her necklace falling to the ground.
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** {{Word Of God}} is that it was written as holy water, and the effects guys screwed up.
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* IDontHaveTimeToBleed
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* IDontHaveTimeToBleedIAintGotTimeToBleed: Subverted - Buffy claims to not have time to sleep and patch herself up; unsurprisingly, the Ubervamp kicks her bruised insomniac ass.
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* ShaggySearchTechnique: Giles and Buffy go looking for the underground cavern where she saw the First in "Amends". As Giles walks across a clearing he hears a great crash from behind him, and turns to see a hole where Buffy was standing.
-->'''Buffy:''' Found it!
-->'''Buffy:''' Found it!
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* ShaggySearchTechnique: Giles and Buffy go looking for the underground cavern where she saw the First in "Amends". As Giles walks across a clearing he [[FloorboardFailure hears a great crash from behind him]], and turns to see a hole where Buffy was standing.
-->'''Buffy:''' Found it!
-->'''Buffy:''' Found it!
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* SpitefulSpit: Buffy spits blood in the übervamp's face. It's [[IDoNotDrinkWine not exactly bothered by this]], but it does distract him enough for Buffy to escape.
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* SpitefulSpit: Buffy spits blood in the übervamp's face. It's [[IDoNotDrinkWine not exactly bothered by this]], but it does distract him enough for provide a distraction so Buffy to can escape.
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* SpitefulSpit: Buffy spits blood in the übervamp's face. It's not exactly bothered by this, but it does distract him enough for Buffy to escape.
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* SpitefulSpit: Buffy spits blood in the übervamp's face. It's [[IDoNotDrinkWine not exactly bothered by this, this]], but it does distract him enough for Buffy to escape.
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* EvilPlan / KillEmAll: The First has been killing off all the potential Slayers (and their Watchers) so when Faith and Buffy die there won't be anyone left to guard the Hellmouth.
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* EvilPlan / = KillEmAll: The First has been killing off all the potential Slayers (and their Watchers) so when Faith and Buffy die there won't be anyone left to guard the Hellmouth.
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-->'''First!Drusilla:''' Choose a side. Choose our side. You know that it's delicious. What do you say?
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-->'''First!Drusilla:''' Choose a side. Choose our side. [[EvilTastesGood You know that it's delicious. delicious.]] What do you say?
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* AnswerCut: Buffy declares she has the "[[MundaneSolution best plan ever]]" for finding information on the First. Cut to her looking up "evil" on the internet. When Buffy is left under a pile of rubble by the übervamp we cut to the First saying to Spike, "Do you know why you're still alive? Because I'm not finished with you yet."
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* AnswerCut: When Buffy is left under a pile of rubble by the übervamp we cut to the First saying to Spike, "Do you know why you're still alive? Because I'm not finished with you yet."
* AntiClimaxCut: Buffy declares she has the"[[MundaneSolution best "best plan ever]]" ever" for finding information on the First. Cut to her looking up "evil" on the internet. When Buffy is left under a pile of rubble by the übervamp we cut to the First saying to Spike, "Do you know why you're still alive? Because I'm not finished with you yet."
* AntiClimaxCut: Buffy declares she has the
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* DaydreamSurprise: An exhausted Buffy keeps dropping off and dreaming of her mother. Due to the First appearing as Joyce before, it appears to be happening again until Buffy wakes up -- unless of course the First is somehow infiltrating her dreams.
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* DaydreamSurprise: An exhausted Buffy keeps dropping off and dreaming of her mother. Due to the First appearing as Joyce before, it appears to be happening again until Buffy wakes up -- unless of course the First is somehow [[DreamWeaver infiltrating her dreams.dreams]] as it did in "Amends".
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* SpeakInUnison: Xander and Andrew discover they are NotSoDifferent when they share a geek moment, much to Xander's annoyance.
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* SpeakInUnison: Xander and Andrew discover they are NotSoDifferent when they share a geek moment, [[EvenNerdsHaveStandards much to Xander's annoyance.annoyance]].
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: Being possessed by the First makes Willow afraid to use her magic powers for the next few episodes, so Buffy has to defeat the übervamp [[ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption the old-fashioned way.]]
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Giles arrives with several potential Slayers. Buffy fights the ubervamp only to find herself outmatched.
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* AnkleDrag: The Ubervamp grabs Buffy as she's trying to crawl out of the hole to escape.
* AnswerCut: Buffy declares she has the "[[MundaneSolution best plan ever]]" for finding information on the First. Cut to her looking up "evil" on the internet. When Buffy is left under a pile of rubble by the Ubervamp we cut to the First saying to Spike, "Do you know why you're still alive? Because I'm not finished with you yet."
* AnswerCut: Buffy declares she has the "[[MundaneSolution best plan ever]]" for finding information on the First. Cut to her looking up "evil" on the internet. When Buffy is left under a pile of rubble by the Ubervamp we cut to the First saying to Spike, "Do you know why you're still alive? Because I'm not finished with you yet."
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* AnkleDrag: The Ubervamp übervamp grabs Buffy as she's trying to crawl out of the hole to escape.
* AnswerCut: Buffy declares she has the "[[MundaneSolution best plan ever]]" for finding information on the First. Cut to her looking up "evil" on the internet. When Buffy is left under a pile of rubble by theUbervamp übervamp we cut to the First saying to Spike, "Do you know why you're still alive? Because I'm not finished with you yet."
* AnswerCut: Buffy declares she has the "[[MundaneSolution best plan ever]]" for finding information on the First. Cut to her looking up "evil" on the internet. When Buffy is left under a pile of rubble by the
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* BrokenHeel: Buffy sprains an ankle fighting the Ubervamp, slowing her down when she tries to flee through the factory.
* BuffySpeak: Xander on seeing the seal of Danthazar. "Whoa. Check out the goat-heady badness." On seeing Wood in the basement with a shovel, Buffy congratulates him on some "full-service principaling".
* BuffySpeak: Xander on seeing the seal of Danthazar. "Whoa. Check out the goat-heady badness." On seeing Wood in the basement with a shovel, Buffy congratulates him on some "full-service principaling".
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* BrokenHeel: Buffy sprains an ankle fighting the Ubervamp, übervamp, slowing her down when she tries to flee through the factory.
* BuffySpeak: Xander on seeing the seal of Danthazar. "Whoa. Check out the goat-heady badness." On seeing Wood in the basement with a shovel, Buffy congratulates him onsome his "full-service principaling".
* BuffySpeak: Xander on seeing the seal of Danthazar. "Whoa. Check out the goat-heady badness." On seeing Wood in the basement with a shovel, Buffy congratulates him on
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* DeathByLookingUp: Buffy drops a load of heavy pipes on the Ubervamp's head. Turns out it's NotQuiteDead.
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* DeathByLookingUp: Buffy drops a load of heavy pipes on the Ubervamp's übervamp's head. Turns out it's NotQuiteDead.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Spike being tortured in TheTeaser. The Ubervamp blocks the camera's POV, then we hear a terrible scream from Spike before a SmashCut to the TitleSequence.
* HolyBurnsEvil: Averted; the Ubervamp grabs Annabelle around the neck -- cut to her bloody cross necklace dropping to the ground.
* HolyBurnsEvil: Averted; the Ubervamp grabs Annabelle around the neck -- cut to her bloody cross necklace dropping to the ground.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Spike being tortured in TheTeaser. The Ubervamp übervamp blocks the camera's POV, then we hear a terrible scream from Spike before a SmashCut to the TitleSequence.
* HolyBurnsEvil: Averted; theUbervamp übervamp grabs Annabelle around the neck -- cut to her bloody cross necklace dropping to the ground.
* HolyBurnsEvil: Averted; the
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* ImmuneToBullets: Buffy has an OhCrap moment when the Ubervamp yanks her stake out of his heart.
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* ImmuneToBullets: Buffy has an OhCrap moment when the Ubervamp übervamp yanks her stake out of his heart.
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* NeckLift: The Ubervamp's favourite move.
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* NeckLift: The Ubervamp's übervamp's favourite move.
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* PunchCatch: The Ubervamp catches Buffy's punch, twists her into an armlock and slams her head against a stalagmite.
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* PunchCatch: The Ubervamp übervamp catches Buffy's punch, twists her into an armlock and slams her head against a stalagmite.
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* SpitefulSpit: Buffy spits blood in the Ubervamp's face. It's not exactly bothered by this, but it does distract him enough for Buffy to escape.
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* SpitefulSpit: Buffy spits blood in the Ubervamp's übervamp's face. It's not exactly bothered by this, but it does distract him enough for Buffy to escape.
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* EvilPlan / KillEmAll: The First has been killing off all the potential Slayers (and their Watchers) so when Faith and Buffy die there won't be anyone left to guard the Hellmouth.
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->''Sorry to barge in. We have a slight apocalypse.''
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-->'''Buffy:''' I'm beyond tired. I'm beyond scared. I'm standing on the mouth of Hell, and it's going to swallow me whole. ({{Beat}}) And it'll ''[[RegretEatingMe choke on me]].'' We're not ready? ''They're'' not ready. They think we're gonna wait for the end to come, like we always do. I'm done waiting. They want an apocalypse? Oh, we'll give 'em one. Anyone else who wants to run... do it now. Because we just became an army. We just declared war. From now on we won't just face our worst fears, we will seek them out. We will find them and cut out their hearts one by one until the First shows itself for what it really is. And I'll kill it myself. There's only one thing on this earth more powerful than evil. And that's us. Any questions?
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-->'''Buffy:''' I'm beyond tired. I'm beyond scared. I'm standing on the mouth of Hell, and it's going to swallow me whole. ({{Beat}}) And it'll ''[[RegretEatingMe choke on me]].'' We're not ready? ''They're'' not ready. They think we're gonna wait for the end to come, like we always do. I'm done waiting. They want an apocalypse? Oh, we'll give 'em one. Anyone else who wants to run... do it now. Because we just became an army. We just declared war. From now on we won't just face our worst fears, we will seek them out. We will find them and cut out their hearts one by one until the First shows itself for what it really is. And I'll kill it myself. There's only one thing on this earth Earth more powerful than evil. And that's us. Any questions?
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* BaitAndSwitchComment: Willow is searching on the internet and finds information on the First!...Bank of Deleware, sorry.
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* BaitAndSwitchComment: Willow is searching on the internet and finds information on the First!...Bank of Deleware, Delaware, sorry.
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Giles arrives with several potential Slayers. Buffy fights the ubervamp and finds only to find herself outmatched.
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Giles arrives with several potential Slayers.
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* BuffySpeak: Hellmouthy.
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* BuffySpeak: Hellmouthy.Xander on seeing the seal of Danthazar. "Whoa. Check out the goat-heady badness." On seeing Wood in the basement with a shovel, Buffy congratulates him on some "full-service principaling".
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Dawn the [[PerpSweating Interrogator]].
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Spike being tortured; the Ubervamp blocks the camera's POV, then we hear a terrible scream from Spike before a SmashCut to the TitleSequence.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Spike being tortured; the tortured in TheTeaser. The Ubervamp blocks the camera's POV, then we hear a terrible scream from Spike before a SmashCut to the TitleSequence.
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* RedHerring: [[spoiler:Buffy saying she's doing to have to go out and find the First Evil, only to open the door and find herself facing Giles.]]
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* RedHerring: [[spoiler:Buffy saying she's doing to have to go out and find the First Evil, only to open the door and find herself facing Giles. As she goes to hug him several Potentials walk through the door, blocking her off.]]
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-->'''Willow:''' Buffy, I want you to know that I'm really sorry for letting you down. You know, here before with the magic going all ''Arrgh!'' and me going all ''Eeee!'' and everything getting all ''Rrrr!''
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-->'''Willow:''' Buffy, I want you to know that I'm really sorry for letting you down. You know, here before with the magic going all ''Arrgh!'' ''Arrrrgh!'' and me going all ''Eeee!'' ''Eeeeee!'' and everything getting all ''Rrrr!''''Rrrrrr!''
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Dawn and Anya are discussing what nasty things they can do to Andrew to make him wake up, only for Buffy to walk in. They quickly sit down.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Dawn [[BewareTheNiceOnes Dawn]] and Anya are discussing what nasty things they can do to Andrew to make him wake up, only for Buffy to walk in. They quickly sit down.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted; Buffy looks like a domestic violence victim by the end, but shows she's still got a good speech in her.
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Giles arrives with several potential slayers.
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Giles arrives with several potential slayers.
Slayers.
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* SeriesContinuityError: Spike being subjected to water torture, despite the fact that vampires don't breathe. Though the psychological aspects can't be much fun either.
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* SeriesContinuityError: Spike being subjected to water torture, despite the well-established fact that vampires don't breathe. Though the psychological aspects can't be much fun either.
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain
-->'''Andrew:''' I admit I went over to TheDarkSide, but only to pick up a few things.
-->'''Andrew:''' I admit I went over to TheDarkSide, but only to pick up a few things.
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain
-->'''Andrew:''' IIneffectualSympatheticVillain: Andrew would rather everyone think of him this way.
-->"I admit I went over to TheDarkSide, but only to pick up a few things."
-->'''Andrew:''' I
-->"I admit I went over to TheDarkSide, but only to pick up a few things."
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* ColdBloodedTorture
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* ColdBloodedTortureColdBloodedTorture: Spike gets tortured by the First ForTheEvulz.
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* NeckLiftNeckLift: The Ubervamp's favourite move.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Andrew isn't impressed by the name of The First for an ultimate evil, preferring something like [[{{Superman}} Lex]] or [[HarryPotter Voldemort]].
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Andrew isn't impressed by the name of The First for an ultimate evil, preferring something like [[{{Superman}} Lex]] LexLuthor or [[HarryPotter Voldemort]].